Penname: Kurogane335 [Contact] Real name: Thomas
Member Since: March 24 2014
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Summary:

The MAJOR/minor crossover special done to it's completion.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, BBW, Mature (40-49), Gentle, Giant, Muscle, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FM/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36645 Read Count: 40581
[Report This] Published: December 19 2017 Updated: February 11 2019
Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 26 2018 Title: Chapter 6: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: Breakfast Banter

Damn it ! Another stellar chapter ! Now, I'll have to considerably change the current one I'm writing so it won't come out this week... but not incorporating some of this material would just be too damn moronic from me. Alligator Lindsey-dee it will be !

Thanks a lot for putting your writing here, even if you're still not back to full health. I hope you'll be well soon thought ! I want to read more from you Mr. NotSirk !

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19 2018 Title: Chapter 4: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: Arrival and Rival

Another great chapter !

In my mind, Alejandro's house wasn't that big, but then again, I guess that Shannon wouldn't really let her lover live in a average house, I guess. Also, she was the one teaching 'Rando how to swim in Dance with Fire... but I guess it can also be that she taught him anew, because he didn't swam more than one or two times at fourteen :p !

Also, great quips between Lindsey and Sabrina! And is it me or Lisa is somehow interested in the Little Lind? At least, i got the impression that she was... or she just wanted to protect her bestie from the unwanted attention of the MAJORS around. 

Izzy and Alejandro... so much sexual tension in the air! What will happen? How will Mei react? When will Alejandro drop his prosthesis at home! COme on man, you're better without it, plus you look more vulnerable and cute.

Finally, Shannon. Stop hijacking peoples' plans to have an appartement or a hotel, come on! I know you want to hook up the two main minors together, if only to prove to Alejandro that you're a better fit (or perhaps that he fit better in you, eh?) than Izzellah, but come on! Plus, the excuse was really lousy, you should have done better! Plus you're still making Izzy really afraid, work on that will you ?



Author's Response:

Oh! Shannon did teach him how to swim! Well I can fix that in a few lines. Makes Lindsey a slightly bigger liar but it's fine! Does Alejandro lose his prosthesis at home? When does he feel comfortable without it? I mean  I tried to imply he was out with Shannon buying up Izzy's reservation. All Shannon's idea by the way! Then they snuck in when they realized everyone was swimming to change into swimsuits.

Lisa's not really crushing on Lindsey because she's more into guys, she's just being spoiled again by taking the nicest room and maybe she senses the rivalry between of two teen rivals! But I leave Lisa open to anything! Lindsey definitely noticed Lisa but is still crushing pretty hard on Izzy!

Oh Izzy and Al! Will it ever work for them!? That would break Lindsey's heart. Oh so much drama! Where is Shannon on all this?! Is she threatened by Izzy? Excited? She is a MAJOR big enough for two, but Izzy's terrified of her!! Also two minors Shannon? That's selfish!

Well Izzy has time to work things out with Shannon. That is if she can even move or speak when Ms. Matthewson's around. It's your fault. You made her grow even bigger! The shock of that alone is making Izzy question this whole thing.

But you'll have to wait. I'm actually leaving today and it will be awhile before I'm up to writing again. I will go correct that swimming part a bit. Thanks for the review. Looking forward to what you do with the characters!

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed
Date: February 10 2018 Title: Chapter 3: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: minor girl/BIG EASY

I just want to add that I really like the fact that Sabrina has gone from not admitting her feelings to this horned young woman who'se so engrossed in Izzy. I can't wait to read the progression she had in the main story, and how long Izzy will resist before giving in to Saby's assets (which should totally be used by Alejandro to by snarky at Lindsey, if you ever write it!)

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 09 2018 Title: Chapter 3: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: minor girl/BIG EASY

As always, an excellent chapter ! I'm with you on the computer problem, mine is still broke after almost a month... thankfully, I could use my girlfriend's and my (former) work's ones (I like to live dangerously, yadda yadda). Anyway... I nposted the second chapter of New Lives just in times apparently, haha ! So much to incorporate in this project now, I'm really glad !



Author's Response:

Eh. I actually feel it's full of a lot of exposition. Future chapters I won't be writing right now will be more viceral. I guess it is pretty good timing though. Looking forwatd to more "New Lives".

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19 2017 Title: Chapter 2: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: I'm Not Your Babe

An excellent conclusion for the crossover! I'm glad you've written it, because I know I wouldn't be able to write Sabrina and Izzy a quarter of a half as well as you do! I really like the relation between Alejandro and SHannon, how the minor can, sometimes, be protective of the gigantic MAJOR. The way Izzy feels about being from a poor family compared to Alejandro's also great. Honestly, if she voiced those feelings, our one-armed minor would probably pester Shannon until she made the changes necessary for Izzelah to become one of her most important ambassadors, haha !

Overall, most excellent!



Author's Response:

I'm sure you'd do well enough. I'm more worried if I fumbled with your characters. Thanks for the commnt.

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 10 2018 Title: Chapter 5: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: One Little Moment

Damn it, it's harder to write down a comment worthy of your work than a random short story ! It's a testament of how good this chapter was in my eyes.

First, because I really liked how you highlighted the differences between MAJORS and minors. But also because how you expanded on the Ferrand's daily life in a way I hadn't even thought about. Of course Lindsey goes running very early, so as to not bother her brother who needs more sleep and never had much reason to be a morning person. Simple but effective world-building !

Then, I really like how the two L and I are playing each other. I still don't think that Lindsey would be a fitting partner for Izzy, she is too young and bruning hot to be able to keep a committed relationship going (thought Izzy could probably makes it works, or any Minor with some will for it to last). Somehow, I even think that Lisa would be a greater helper for Little Lind to discover her sexuality and all. The sexy Yodamiene to the dashing Lindsey Ferwalker, I guess. 

Finally, I really liked that you gave Lindsey such a gift after all the rough treatment she has gotten in New Lives. Spoiler, but the next chapters will deal with it, and most of her problems will at least start to be dealt with in the upcoming chapters. But my mean streak makes me wait with glee the moment Sabrina will learn about the whole thing, gnyhéhéhé !

Ps: I can't wait to be writing the corssover chapters, so many great characters to toy with that you created, I'm like a child in a toy factory right now.

Summary:

Takashi, a tiny boy, is going to his friend's house to do some homework. But circumstances leave him alone with his friend's mother...


Categories: Mouth Play, Giantess, Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5342 Read Count: 21604
[Report This] Published: December 21 2017 Updated: December 21 2017
Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 22 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent story, I hope you'll continue it, if only because I want to learn more about your world and the giants and tinies inside it ! Keep going, please !

Summary:

What would you do if you woke up  to find that your best friend is a giant and is using your city, your world as her personal plaything? Every single day. Your friend seems to have the power to alter the world around her, but is it real or an illusion?

 

This is the story of a boy being pulled into the games his best friend plays by changing the size of herself and others. All for her pleasure. 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Nose, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19482 Read Count: 124286
[Report This] Published: January 06 2018 Updated: March 07 2024
Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Morning Routine

Just wanting to say... I love your characters and their interactions so far ! Keep going at it I want to read MOAR !



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I intend to keep going for a bit with it. The characters are a lot of fun to write. 

Caretaker by NotSirk Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Thomas Waldo's life changes forever as he is thrown into circumstances he can't control, but is forced to overcome. 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Animal, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Gentle, Giant
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28461 Read Count: 43910
[Report This] Published: January 23 2018 Updated: December 02 2018
Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed
Date: January 24 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Death of Thomas Waldo

Very intersting first chapter. I feel really bad for poor Thomas, I hope things won't go downhill for him from now on (then again, I guess that it's kind of hard to go more downhill than dying like that, but still). I wonder if we'll see Jenna react to this death, I think she would feel bad about it.

By the way, now that I know you're deviantart name... be prepared to be pestered by me when I'll write ly newt Major/minor spin-off ^^



Author's Response:

Well there are worse things than dying. Thomas will soon discover those things and more. How will Jenna take his sudden death? Probably pretty hard, but lucky for her she has a strong, young, military stud to console her! 

Your characters are actually on a short "I need to draw them" list. Hopefully I'll get to that and do them justice.

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Ones Above us All

Excellent chapter ! I like the characterisation of the Goddess so far, I find it really fitting for immortal and extremely powerful creatures. I'll leave a better review after I'll have deal with my insomnia, but overall, keep the great works !

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed
Date: January 31 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Death of Thomas Waldo

So, now that I've more time (and a little bit of sleep) I'll make a deeper review.

First thing first, Thomas's first "interaction" with a divinity is really incredible. Princesse Mermaid Thingy truly is titanic. her being a child and yet having such an impact on everyone, as implied by the anchor news guy is great. What's terrifying however, is the kind of callous disregard that everyone have to loss of lives in this world. I mean, The Princess clearly couldn't be bothered to even register the hundreds, if not thousands of deaths her crab caused, and she added quite a lot to thise losses with her sheer size and tsunami-like arrival.

Then there is Thomas's interaction with Vivian. I really like where it's going. The spider still is an asshole, clearly, but we are seeing new facters of her personality and that's great. I think that she'll grow more respectful of the human boy. I also really like that Thomas isn't losing sight of his objective. He wants to get back home, and not even the terrible Winrey can make him change his mind. That's actually awesome, how he basically tell her that he wants to return as he left, in a sense, and not "upgraded" without even a second thought.

Speaking of Winrey... I think she had the best sentences to sum up how Gods feels about mortals : "Now if only his mother would hurry up and die. Jordan. That woman smoked at least two packs a day and still hadn’t kicked the bucket! Life was dreadfully boring without her. Plus she actually knew how to bake."

I think it speaks for itself. The value of Thomas's mother isn't in the life she lives but the speed at which she will die so she can become Winrey pet/slave/cook/lover (pick an option and discard the others). There is incredible callousness here, the kind of which really is chilling. The way she treated Vivian was terrible, but at least here, it felt as if she was genuine. With Thomas, it almost comes as fake sympathy, the kind of which you extend to a pet or something to entice it to you. I highly doubt that Winrey actually care for who Jordan is. She clearly seems to care about how Jordan makes her feel, and that's a whole other thing.Her callous disregard for Thomas' fate should he fail to find Luna is also quite telling when it comes to what matters and what doesn't for her.

Now to Rayna. Well, she is clearly a bombshell (I mean, she is a Sun Goddess, and the Sun is basically an enormous nuclear reaction so I guess it's logical), which makes me think that Luna will be a lot lither and leaner than her sister. Rayna also seems to be rather a giant bitch, kind of like her mother in even less diplomatic. She really looks like what you would expect a young goddess born into this life to be... thought I wonder why she wants to mess with Vivian so badly. I suspect that the spider insulted her numerous times, but still. I also find quite telling the fact that Winrey can wisk her own daughter away like that, it really shows how powerful she is.

I suspect that Rayna will be a hindrance in Thomas and Vivian's search for Luna, but as stated by the spiderkin, she isn't the real culprit. Thought I believe that Rayna was either used or duped by the one responsible for Luna's death. It would surprise me if the Sun Goddess became kind of a recurring "enemy" trying to steal Thomas for herself. She seems rather fond of stealing her sister's toys anyway, and clearly, Luna was the most important of the two, so I guess she doesn't want her sister to be found...

Overall, an extremely great chapter. If I may, i would hoever advise you to separate your chapter in two, because while I enjoy reading such long pieces, I'm not sure that it's the case for everybody and it may be daunting to face very long chapters for some. I really want this story to be read, because of the world building, awesome characterisation of your characters and all. But that's just my opinion, you're the sole captain of this ship ! XD

As for a drawing commission, I think i would really like your take on Brenda or Rebecca, or Alejandro, or Shannon or Rayna, or Winrey, haha ^^



Author's Response:

Well thank you for the long review. *clears throat* ....okay. 

First I'll the comment on long chapters. Is this chapter too long?! I had no idea! It was just so fun to write! I was cinsidering a chapter break before when they got to the castle but I felt it ruined the spirit of the chapter which was introducing Thomas to gods or well goddesses. He'll meet a male god eventually too! I'll actually take this feedback into serious consideration. The chapter was even longer at one point, but I cut out scenes of people dying and buildings crumbling when Princess Coral arrived. That was much longer but it made Coral seem to cruel in my mind. She's more an innocent force of nature and not malevolent destroyer. But she'll come back later. Maybe I'll add those parts back in and split this chapter up. I don't know yet. 

Thomas and Vivian....honestly they're the foundation of this story. Both their arcs and perspectives are the main driving force. I hope I'm conveying the subtle changes in character between both of them. They are the most important characters. Luna's basically a maguffin right now! 

You make some great points about Winrey I hadn't considered to much but I feel show her character all the more with that context. It does really speak to her callousness as a god and her selfishness. To me she's a middle ground. An all powerful being that revels in her streingth and attitude, but also knows it's a detriment to herself and wants to change. Not that she will or won't, but it makes her feel better to say she's trying and that's what really matters. She might also be manipulating Thomas. I don't know. He's human it seems like a thing she'd do, but she also loves her daughter and screwing Thomas over would piss her off! Hmmmmmm...? 

Rayna is a more like her mother than even Winrey wanted her to be. More accurately a reflection of Winrey when she was younger. Loud, arrogant, impulsive even (what do you even want Thomas for bitch?). She is the sun after all. Well one of them. If people are wondering what Luna's like then just imagine the exact opposite of Rayna and you'll have a close enough outline. That being said I really like Rayna. She likes humans. She probably wouldn't go terrorizing a district just ot get her pet crab back, but then again she's older and more mature than a centuries old titan class, Princess mermaid who didn't even consider coming by in a more manageable size and shrinking her crab down with her god level powers until after she'd already left. Oops! All I'll say is she'll return, but the stories not about her, to her complete disdain! Did Vivian insult her? She is prone to that, and Rayna is very self absorbed and arrogant, the kind of person where one wrong comment can set her off! A very dangerous combination of personalities. I'd even wager this has probably happened before. Why was Vivian suddenly so scared to come. It couldn't be Winrey. Vivian got off easy with her! Hrrmmmmmmmm.......?

I do sometimes worry if people are reading my stories. I mean they must be right? My read count goes up. Not many comment though and it makes me wonder if my stories (this one in particular, but it's a worry I have with all my stories.) don't have enough impact. Does it not provoke a reaction? I'm sure this is a common worry for authors. Oh well. I just shrug it off and keep writing. Good or bad this is a story I want to tell flaws and all, because it's one I wish I could read! So you gotta keep trucking and trying to improve! Plus this story specifically is helping me fine tune comic ideas. 

Thank you for the comment and the drawing suggestion! I actually think I'll take a swing at drawing Rebecca soon. I don't normally draw more seductive body types and it will be good practice! 

 

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed
Date: January 31 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Death of Thomas Waldo

Yeah, hoping for more reviews is a constant for me too. I can't help but wonder if peoples like what I write or not (thought, considering the Random Factory and Aunt Suzie's read count, they do, as for why, I have no fucking clue...). Don't worry, you're having an impact (I would have begun to write here if not for you man !)

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 13 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Back on Earth

Mysteriousness mysteries gathering... and Jenna seems to be quite... unhinged, in fact. Now, I'm a little afraid for Thomas, if Jenna finds her way in the Realm he is right now. Something tell me that if she does, she won't just be your usual human spirit thingy... I want to read moar !



Author's Response:

.....I just realized I misspelled "weak" as in lack of strength as "week" as in a measure of time....I deserve zero stars for that mistake alone!

 There's clearly more to Jenna than meets the eye! Transformers!!!....I mean uhh???? Well Markus and her clearly have history. You might bo onto something though. I wonder how Jenna would appear in Outworld? Hmmmmmm????...She'll do.

Alex After by NotSirk Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

A one shot spinoff of a story from Kurogane335's Random Stories Factory I wrote like three months ago.


Categories: Giant, Teenager (13-19), Middle Age (50+), Giantess, Futanari, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3361 Read Count: 11665
[Report This] Published: August 27 2018 Updated: August 27 2018
Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed
Date: August 28 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Birthday Boy

Well, this story is canon for me. As much as Johanna's and family are canon, they are more fetish sketches. 

I must confess that I were in Alex' shoes, I would have kicked the kids long ago out of the house. Then again, I guess demi-gods can't exactly be grounded or kicked out. Plus they could tag team her if they felt desperate, I suppose.

But now I really want to learn more about this crazy family, what Tim and Johanna are up to... Who knows ? I may even write some of it, someday !

 

 

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Birthday Boy

I'm typing it from my phone so sorry for the typos and all that...

You did it again NorSirk-sempai ! You took random chapters of pure fetish work and made it an awesome one-shot ! I really hadn't foreseen a seventy or so years flash forward but it works perfectly !

Ren and Ken truly are their dad's children. Family reunion must be crazy. Then again, at that point anyone younger than sixty is basically Tim's child or descendant. Johanna's powers must be crazier than ever !

I'm a little sad that it's a one-shot, but it'll allow more M/m Special to follow, perhaps, so I can live with it ! I may poach on it some day in the RSF, but so far it's not the plan. Remember that YOU can ask for anything in the RSF by the way. Ask and it shall be written (with a twist?)

Once more, awesome work and I hope to be treated to more of your wonderful writing in the future !

 

 



Author's Response:

Hey! Thanks!  I didn't really expect  a comment on this. Glad you liked it. I was a little nervous about this because I completely forgot I wrote it so I wasn't sure on the quality. Johanna must be a planetary level being by now! It might not matter much since she's shown she can change size. I just used what was in the chapter minus the most recent ones. Maybe Alex is doing a little better in canon? Who knows?

Taking Over by NotSirk Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Not your typical vore story. 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), BBW, Body Exploration, Fantasy, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20396 Read Count: 23194
[Report This] Published: August 31 2018 Updated: September 07 2018
Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Swallowed Whole

I'm usually not too sold on vore stories, even if I may dable in it from time to time... But I must say that I really like what you're doing here. 

Delilah comes out as both fragile and to be pitied, and twisted and unlikeable, and Elixsana is really a kind and yet terribly naive character, both powerful but utterly unable to understand what Delilah was feeling, thus demonstrating a lack of empathy. 

And as chapter 2 explains the title of the story, it really add some kind of cosmic karma to Delilah's actions, but also hint -to me- at some darker undertone from Elixsana part. Once she'll be a giantess among her kind (if it isn't Delilah who will shrink to the elf's size, of course), who says she won't end being a tyrant or something of the like.

Once more, great story and I can't wait to read more !



Author's Response:

Well without playing my hand more than I already have I will say you're very astute in your analysis so far. Is that the right word? "astute"? Let me check......*googling*.......yes astute! Especially your breakdown of Delilah and the princess. It's hard to make Delilah seem smpathetic here considering what she's done while also making Elixsana nice but also an antagonist. I think it's moderately successful, maybe it needs a little more nuance? 

I'm not gonna say much about what's happening. This is a short story so it should be even more clear soon, but like....stop being so smart. Okay? We cool on that?...Okay. 

Thanks for the comment!

Summary:

Where a best friend is eaten, but then... something happens.  The unthinkable.  She survives. 

 

Commissioned by a valued reader!

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Insertion, Lesbians, Scat, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5916 Read Count: 10652
[Report This] Published: October 30 2018 Updated: November 13 2018
Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 13 2018 Title: Chapter 1: The Twist

Excellent first two chapters. 

I really like your writings but in the main Tales of Miss Hyde, I was really turned against Valerie as a character when she ate her best friend without remorse. Here she did the same sure, but the fact that Crystal survived make it all better to me.

I think I would like to see Val publically start a trend of peoples keeping shrinkees as lover, only to hunt down and kill other shrinkees, while being extremely protective of Crystal, to exacerbate the "Hyde" and "Jekyll" aspect of her.

Summary:

Two students get more than they bargained for in a game of love, control, and domination. 


Categories: New World Order, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Futanari, Gentle, Violent, Slave, Muscle
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FM/m, M/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37120 Read Count: 72481
[Report This] Published: December 29 2018 Updated: February 16 2019
Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Cat and the Mouse

A NotSIrk unleashed and I hadn't even noticed it! Shame on me! 

You should have PMed me on DeviantArt man ! 

I really like the relationship between the protagonist (Remmy), the obstacle (Jericho), the antagonist (Crystal) and the antogonister (it's a word now ! - Rachielle). 

I hope than when Crystal and Remmy's former "owner" fill meet, someone will pop in to utter a "Let them fight" as Remmy goes all worried !



Author's Response:

Hah! My bad! I'll be sure to message you next time! 

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Reunion

Another awesome chapter. Rembrandt's mother is totally crazy, but I like it. I also like how she's literally a bitch to Crystal and yet love her son enough for her to be okay with biker-girl and him being together.

Concernign Rachielle, I wonder who is taller and stronger between her and Crystal. Clearly, Rachielle come from a lot of money, so I would suspect her to be smaller than Crystal and less brutal.

But on the other hand, she terrify Rembrandt more than anything else, so either she's small but incredibly volatile, or she's actually as tall (or taller) and big (or bigger) below the waist than Crystal, so Rembrandt fear would be all the more logical then. 

I can't wait for the two futa to meet, really !



Author's Response:

Rembrandt's mom is a little unhinged. I wonder what role she has to play in this?

 I guess I haven't answered who's taller and bigger yet. Hopefully you can at least figure out why Rembrandt is so scared of Rachielle by this point.

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 27 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Lingering Feelings

I wasn't sure before, but now I know !

This story takes place in the Dark Multiverse, only it was Izzellah who peered at the dark and ended created this world of nightmares for Minors. There is no escape from the Cockpocalypse !

More seriously, poor Rembrandt can't see to catch a break. He's either the street urchin bad girl or the welthy and corrupt heiress pining for his ass, litteraly, and not one friend to help him.

Will he manage to preserve his anal virginity through the end, or will he be wooed by Crystal's impressive skills in Dick Fencing ? 



Author's Response:

Very interesting theory even if explained a little ridiculously! "Cockocalpyse" "Dick Fencing"! Yeah that's how this is gonna end! With dick fencing! 

Actually I'm pretty sure Jericho has the key to Rembrandt's heart and places beyond!