I hope this is not the only anime you choose to do. 

Short story, but certainly good.

So far, I do like the premise of a medieval story, which so far, has proven to be leagues and bounds ahead of any other story set in medieval times. I won't nitpick as to how the hell a peasent has FIFTY gold coins, when the average salary at that time for a blacksmith was two silver coins everh two daysdepending on fief, or anything else like that due to the magical naturs of the story. Once I got past the first four paragraphs , i became hooked.

I do hope you can keep this up at a good pace. This is certainly a story I can finally look forward to, as there are very few I am reading nowadays.

I did like the way Jessica and Tucker interacted. Very interesting and stimulating. The way the armor came together was certainly easy to visualize.

One criticism is actually a bit of a nitpick. When Tucker and the Armor were dueling, you did not mention how hard it would be for Tucker to block a strike. If the armor is over six feet tall, probably would feel like a battering ram with every blow. Even in the most experienced hands it would be painful. 

Other than that, I am very much looking forward to the next chapter. Nicely done.

I liked it. Descriptive, well written. Clear and easy to understand, and nice story.

"So bear with me." Haaaaaaa.... 

I enjoyed it. Good stuff.

@pixl8ed

Replace 'smurf' with 'tasteless, impatient coprophiliac' and you'd be right on the money.

@Duggernaut

You put dedication, time, thought, and research into your work. Of course it will receive a wide reception. 

You mentioned that Anna's father carved chunks out of her flesh, correct? But it was also mentioned he used a scalpel to make a kind of Glasgow tattoo, scar, mark symbol. I'm confused, is the flesh gouged out to make the marks or is it simply cutting with the scalpel? 

Love the concept for the story. I actually do love the bang effect the first chapter had, reminiscent of psychological thrillers where it begins with a murder, then cuts to four days ago or something similar. The very fast updates help. 

Perhaps something in particular makes Anna so violent? But I get a feeling it has something to do with the goddess awakening. Perhaps a direct possession over Anna? Or maybe it simply strengthens her? 

Either or totally different I am hooked.

youre my slaves review reminds me of something. In chapter 1, Anna seemed to forget Caleb's name, and seemed to have no remorse, neither take pleasure in hurting him. So possession, I assume. Anna is no longer in control at all, as it is this Goddess who is in full control. The real question is if Anna consented to it. Or if her father has to do with any of it.

Are the scars still on her back? You mentioned they healed but could that explain why she did not receive grafting, if they still are on her, I assume they are fragments of what they once were.

@TomSpeedy

Well, the goddess can shrink people... and is a female... and is attractive...

Well, we are officially under servitude of Inanna. All hail the goddess. Blasphemers shall be like Caleb.

Sorry, inner macrophile speaking. :)

The fact that Adam did not panic upon capture to badly, implies he prepared and anticipated all this years in advance. He accepted shame and hate instead of love and honor, all to save someone when nobody would understand. He loves Anna more than she can possibly know.

So, Anna is a Goddess now. I wonder what she intends after she wreaks revenge?