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The new kid by Ghostkiller Rated: R starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Matt is your average 16 year old boy. Athletic, smart and nervous around girls.Only one problem....he's one inch tall! Matt has lived in a research facility most of his life but now he must go to school. How will his school life play out?
Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 573 Read Count: 3716
[Report This] Published: August 07 2014 Updated: August 07 2014
Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstar
Date: August 07 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked this. Nothing special, or extraordinary, but it was formatted correctly, no spelling errors for the most part. Punctuation could be worked on, as well as dialogue. Nobody in high school says 'females'. Girls is used in place.

 

The story does not appear at first like it will have a huge plot, so I am guessing it will have no more than 16 chapters maximum.

So, other than a little out of date dialogue and a period being needed at the end of everything, I enjoyed it to what was to be expected. I hope to see more from an author with promise, welcome and good luck.



Author's Response: Thanks!

Summary:

Kim has been stalking Victoria, and has finally worked up the courage and psychosis to break into her house. She's taken every precaution not to get caught, up to and including shrinking herself. 

 

Doesn't look like a smart idea even on paper, but it wouldn't be fun if it were. 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7008 Read Count: 63951
[Report This] Published: August 28 2014 Updated: November 17 2014
Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: September 17 2014 Title: Chapter 1: 1- Always Read the Warning Label

I do like the set up. Sort of, actually pretty creepy and at the same time funny with her obsession of this woman. 

I get my ideas from watching literally anything where a plot is used well. So i find the idea stemminh from a spray can, to be deja vu in a way.

Good start.

Summary:

Alvin Summers, seventeen going on eighteen has enough on his plate. Bullies at home and in school, a social life as alive as a fossil and under immense pressure to get to a good college, these don't even come close to the biggest one of all.

 Maybe things will get better, maybe he'll rise up. If it does, the path ahead is fraught with danger and he'll need to be at his best to fend off whatever threats may come his way. 

A story set in the Interiszables Universe created by vgiv. 


Categories: Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, New World Order, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: Intersizable Universe
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86192 Read Count: 243116
[Report This] Published: September 11 2014 Updated: March 04 2016
Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: September 13 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Early Morning

I never mentioned this during editing, but I found Wendy's dialogue to be hilarious, because it is exactly what I would say to my parents if I came downstairs like that.



Author's Response:

I tend to dress that way too, just threw it in for a bit of fun. 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Early Morning

Looking at it, I can see the clear differences in our writing style. Some things I read, I was thinking, "that doesn't seem like something Nostory would, oh yeah, I wrote that..."

Weird comparing the two.



Author's Response:

 Haha, it certainly does. Not really see it but I can feel a change, a significant shift in the style of writing. 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: September 16 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Early Morning

@tinyguy. It's Katharine, with an 'a'. When I wrote her character, she gets pissed when you say it wrong.

I really do like how the description of high school is so realistic. Most stories I read on the site, involving the school setting are highly unrealistic. You knocked it out of the park here.  



Author's Response:

I still remember what you said when I misspelled her name but I don't get it wrong now.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Early Morning

I just realized how much work I'll need to do.... I can easily imagine this happening at my high school. Once a kid got chased by seniors into the boys locker room, and then tied him to the urinal, which happened to be overflowing. 

The tight hallways, lockers, people stopping to chat in the middle of the hallways while I'm struggling to get past them, all accurate.

And yes, I have plans for Katharine. But won't reveal anything as of yet....



Author's Response:

Yikes, I hope that kid got out fine. 

I am glad I got the details right, this world you made deserves to be described to the fullest. 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: September 21 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Early Morning

Nostory wrote the plotline and chapters. I just had the idea for the whole series. We check and edit each others work. I write a few scenes. A decent part of the second chapter was done by me, due to a world building issue. Other than a few I do, Nostory does all of the work for this story. I only step in if something is wrong with how something is explained in the world.

So technically, we are we are not doing the stories together, in the sense we wrote chapters together, but we do in the sense that it is a collaboration for the series. So yes and no, if that makes any sense. How would you explain it, Nostory?



Author's Response:

You more or less summed it up.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: September 26 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Dolls

I'd like to point out that Cassie probably would not have been so harsh if she had not been called a ho earlier.



Author's Response:

 She's had a bad day, we'll give her that one. Good news is that at least Cassie knows Alvin is innocent. 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: September 30 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Pasta and Meteors

Aaahhh.... young love.



Author's Response:

A bit soon for that although if this were a fairy tale I wouldn't hesitate to try it out. 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: December 09 2014 Title: Chapter 8: In the Company of Titans

Nicely done. I like the relationship between everybody. Flowing naturally.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I place a lot of emphasis on character development in my stories these days, trying not to make the mistake of Aftermath. 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: March 31 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

Fifty Shades is not at all the same kind of stuff that goes on this site. It was actually originally a fanfiction the author wrote about Twilight, then changed the names. It is a dreadful movie...



Author's Response:

Haven't seen the movie and I don't plan on seeing it but I agree. 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: July 20 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

I like how Alvin turns around in the middle of his sprint. Like there is no chance of tripping then getting owned by the concrete.

Wendy is proving to be more of smartmouth yet loving older sister, rather than a younger one which she is. I suppose it is the Amazon blood.



Author's Response:

  Oh that would have been painful to watch. Yeah its the Amazon side of her , her size can make Alvin look like her younger brother. 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 20 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Run Like The Wind!

I don't know why, but I imagined Alvin falling during his run, or at least tripping slightly. Was than in a previous draft or am I just a pessimist?

What does snafu mean by the way? Jamila and Cassie keep saying it and I have no idea what it means... congrats on 170 reviews by the way. I was the hundreth reviewer on the Aftermath, so I'll go for being 200th reviewer on this.



Author's Response:

An earlier draft involved Alvin tripping, spraining his ankle and then costing him team the final but changes to the final plot made this point irrelevant. 

 

Snafu means: to throw into disorder; muddle.

I might be using it wrongly here but screwing up stuff can be referred to as a snafu. 

Thanks, honestly didn't expect this many reviews but I'll take it :) 

I look forward to your reviews. Also, did you get my Uptown Girl email? 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: July 21 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

@Barrowman to be fair, Wendy never seemed to be completley malevolent to Alvin, not exactly cruel or sadistic, as they did have a civilised conversation in Alvin's car in Chapter 1 I think, Wendy only got cruel in the prescence of her friends, and admittedly, we all do act harsher or differently when around friends. Either to impress them, stand out, or because we are human we feel more comfortable and lax around others naturally, so your sense of decorum and judgement are impaired.

@Nostory I will check my inbox but for some reason my notifactions don't work anymore. So I don't know when I have been emailed.



Author's Response:

I've had that before.Perhaps you could try checking your inbox at the start of the day and once more at the end, bound to have stuff. This does explain why you didn't respond to the last two emails at all. By the way, are you  fluent in any language besides English? I could use a translator for some of my stories. I'll explain it in an email when you reply to mine. 

We've all been guilty of behaving like that at some point, caving in to peer pressure and I am sure Wendy plays it up when she has to, for fear of being questioned by her friends on why she hasn't been doing that. Its still her fault since she started the whole thing but its a trap many people fall in to. At home she at the very least ignores him unless he has done something to warrant a beating. In school her friends admitted to following her when going after Alvin, they'd have done nothing if she had stopped so its all peer pressure and not wanting to be the odd one out. 

You got 27 reviews to go in your quest, I'll be sure to congratulate you if you become the 200th reviewer. Should it happen. 

 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 21 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

@Barrowman true enough on the first part, I did miss that as I have not read the first chapter in a while, but when you consider that Wendy and Alvin did have a rather happy relationship before she began harrassing him, as Nostory at one point mentioned that when she hugged him after they made up it was the first real hug she had given him in a while, meaning that they cared for each other. I may be an only child, but I know that a brother and sister bond, or any bond among siblings is something hard to forget.

If Alvin does leave the house, good for him, he'll never know his sister again. Leaving both Wendy and Patricia is the equivalent of hatred. By all means, Wendy has a few good reasons to love Alvin dearly. Her miserable life growing up without Daniel and Alvin changed for the better when he showed up.

Speaking of which, another possible explanation for Wendy's behavior was that she was bullied as a kid, for being un-Amazonian, and people who are bullied often become bullies themsleves. Wendy began bullying Alvin after a joke he made about her appearence, so Wendy bullied Alvin, the way an the son of a abusive father bullies his peers. While it is still cruelty, it is not because Wendy has a sadistic heart, as you imply, it is because she is also a victim. She at least deserves a chance from Alvin.

@Nostory I only speak English, sorry, but I know a few people who speak German, and some that speak Spanish.



Author's Response:

Could those people help with Spanish translations? Not keen to use Google translate with its too literal translations. 

Plus have you read the email I sent? Sorry but I really need a reply on it, I'll also explain the scenes that require Spanish.

 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: August 06 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

Since I love video game references...

I used to live with you... then I took a bitchy mom to the knee.

Eh needs work. My jokes not the chapter. Speaking of which, to avoid lenghty waits between updates, if I don't respond to any of your emails within a day, 24 hours, just post the chapter without my reply from now on. Besides, if there is anything series breaking, lore shattering or huge errors of some sort, I am positive a simple edit or a reviewer will let you know before I could. You know the series well enough to not make mistakes casually.

By the way, why is there a big gap at the end of the chapter?



Author's Response:

I kind of already made it my back up plan in the event you didn't respond. 

I have no idea though, let me fix it. 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: August 10 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Peas and Pods

You can kind of imagine Patricia at home, holding some pots and saying: How do I use these? Usually I just call Alvin and poof, food. *looks up* I've made a terrible mistake.

 



Author's Response:

Haha, I imagine she'd resort to eating taking out after several failed attempts at cooking before realising that. 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: August 10 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

I think a paragraph cuts. When Wendy is upset and the couple with the Chihuahua is frightened the paragraph just abruptly ends with 'and' with no period. No idea if the copy paste failed, or the script just malfunctioned.

 



Author's Response:

I forgot to add something there, thanks for pointing it out. Was supposed to have a couple of words at the end. 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 22 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Feels Trip

What the hell as Patricia been buying?! 50k on LUXURY items? It's not like Luxom has some revolutionary kind of dress or something that would cost...

I bankrupt Patricia... huh. I'm awesome. ;)

But in all serious that is atrocious. And now you go ahead and try to access you're sons money. After you kick him out of the house.

I bankrupt a bad person... i did my part.

Btw, i will be the 200th reviewer, called it!



Author's Response:

Luxom does have some expensive stuff but its more than that, there's food and all sorts of therapy!

Patricia is a horrible person and you did your part.

Can't guarentee you'll be 200th, we're getting mighty close! Good luck with that. 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 05 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

Cassie not watching where she's going? Someone at TETS felt a disturbance.

Not the 200th reviewer, sadly. Eh, I'll shoot for 300th. 



Author's Response:

300 may take a very long time but maybe 250?

 

A Titan can't always look out , but nothing happened but if Patricia got squished most people would probably keep her shoe as a memento, put it up on a pedestel or something.