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Life is funny that way by JT07 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 214]
Summary:

in the year 2020, the government has undergone a project where the giantess that they created from a small piece of the female population and regular sized individuals live together in a newly built community. Can the two coexist, while they try to continue on with their daily lives?


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Couples , Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132390 Read Count: 284275
[Report This] Published: April 24 2014 Updated: August 30 2014
Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 26 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This does not completely mean Alex is out of my bad side. 

I really like this story, keep it up!

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: May 02 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

NBA, really? You know what, I love video games. No full fledged review when an game series that has been milked by EA since the start of the Madden series, and those clowns resized they could make a quick buck by releasing a hand assed game annually is on the story.

Ubisoft does the same, but they work harder on quality.

Love the chapter. Play Far Cry, ALL ASSASSIN'S CREED's, and Splinter Cell.

There is a massive amount of realism in this story. Ads to the affect of being in the text.



Author's Response:

Lol I know but when I have yet to see a girl play sports games. Which is why I chose it. If a girl can beat you at sports, then she can beat you in just about anything in my opinion.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: May 26 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

You know, if they had not been taking they're sweet time in mayham, that probably would have turnd out better.

Lord Ryan? Is the President of the country in this story so naive that he is allowing practical insurrection from Ryan? This cou- wait, memorial day, cannot critique U.S.

Like the chapter, I just wish they were longer, so more deatail and more steps in the story could go on without the wait.



Author's Response:

I want to do a long chapter, but I run out of ideas being that this is my first time writing something like this. Maybe if I just do a segment at a time and add them all in they'd be longer....something I'll definitely try next time. Also, you have to remember their not cold blood killers, which is why they gave so many chances for people to escape. Like in real life they have a conscious, yes they killed a few but they didn't want a full on slaughter fest. But the story still has some ways to go, so I'll try to do better in detail and chapter length next chapter...maybe that'll speed things up 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: June 15 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just realized the New World Order tag. If this story ends how I think it does...

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 01 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Nicely done, I just hope that you don't have them go easy on Ryan. I wonder how Tasha dispatched two others GTS but had trouble with one earlier....

There was a quote from Assassin's Creed 4 in there....

Trust by Nigma Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

When shrunk to only an inch in height, Madison has to place her life in her friend's hands to avoid the gruesome death that awaits most 'Shrinkys'.


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3534 Read Count: 11297
[Report This] Published: April 26 2014 Updated: April 26 2014
Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: April 26 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nicely done. Gets you feeling like you are in the story.



Author's Response:

THank you for your feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

 

I have also written 'Final Exam' and 'Social Circles' which you may like as they are written directly from the reader's point of view.

 

NM

Shrinking Day by shrinkchicken Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Phil Connnors was a teenage boy who has already become weary of life.  That changes on a fateful day.  On Feburary 2nd, 2014, Phil shrinks down and never grows back up.


Categories: Butt, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Adult 30-39, Incest, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Challenges: Shrinking Day
Challenges: Shrinking Day
Challenges: Shrinking Day
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1954 Read Count: 25698
[Report This] Published: April 30 2014 Updated: May 05 2014
Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: May 01 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Groundhog Day

I like that twist at the end! Like the story.

Micro Inc. by Senital2011 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

When shrinking tenchology revolutionizes the world... Lives are forever changed to fufill the desires of others. Follow the tales of Keyla Renolds as she's rented out to random people.


Categories: Unaware, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Feet, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22702 Read Count: 71499
[Report This] Published: April 30 2014 Updated: January 24 2017
Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: May 01 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good concept. I wonder if Keyla enjoys pain. Try to space out the paragraphs.

Saturn Seven by squashed123 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 169]
Summary:

Two students are stranded on a different planet where everything seems quite earthly, except it is totally small. This is a classic crush and vore story in a dark-fantasy setting with an overarching storyline.

With some 900 pages by now, I think we might as well call this one a book.

All characters appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Insertion, Mouth Play, Adventure, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 988803 Read Count: 557923
[Report This] Published: May 12 2014 Updated: July 09 2023
Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: May 29 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Put some spacing between paragraphs where POV changes, and space dialogue when it switches from person to person. It makes it easier to read.



Author's Response:

What is space dialogue?

Grow La Kill - Terror of Giantess Satsuki by Haloichigo Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

This is growth story that takes place in the world of the anime Kill La Kill. Read as Satsuki terrorizes a city to show the world why they should consider her their new goddess. (May contain spoilers from the Kill La Kill series)

 

(Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.)

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Crush, Feet, Growing Woman, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4733 Read Count: 39997
[Report This] Published: May 19 2014 Updated: May 24 2014
Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 19 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Kneel before my power.

Also, i do hope this is continued.

The Gift of Fifty-Percent by jailerman0 Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 44]
Summary:

ALL NEW CHAPTER 35!

A love story about two NYC Detectives are get paired up and just don't get along. Things change however when, what they think is a curse, ends up being a gift. This is a long story that has a few plots.


Categories: Adult 30-39, Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 117526 Read Count: 242043
[Report This] Published: May 26 2014 Updated: June 11 2018
Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: May 26 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 – An Angry Man

While I do like the plot, I had a hard time deciphering what anybody looked like, what they're rank was, and the chapter was very long, so at the end I was sorta forcing myself to read. I do however like if not love the interaction and conversation. You are able to mix physical interaction with vocal action very easily, better than what I could do early in my time on the site.

You show promise, welcome to the site! I do hope this story, which is already interesting, will be continued.

P.S, this seems a bit to good for a first time writer, is this you're first time writing? It does not seem so.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback. I started this story about 2 years ago. It is my first time writing, so your points are welcome. I have a little over 125,000 words written in 2 parts. I will break up the chapters to a bit smaller chunks.

BFG: Limbo by Nostory Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Jessica Snape finds herself in a world after mysteriously disappearing from Home whilst on a picnic with her good friend Tucker Martel.

 Where is she? Is she alone? Will she get out? Read on to find out more.


Categories: Sci Fi / Fantasy, Giantess, Adventure, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Big Friendly Giantess
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15519 Read Count: 37351
[Report This] Published: May 29 2014 Updated: July 01 2014
Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: May 29 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Bios Page

While I was interested, the dialogue could use a lot of work. Still has that... sort of generic, emotionless and wooden feel to it, which The Escape suffered from early on, and the confrontations with Jessica and Zoltan in The Aftermath. The time period was also confusing, so was where they were... I probably need background information.

Not going to lie and say it is five star, but not going to lie and say it is a low three...

I am not really a fan of the BFG, series, I found it juvenile and boring often, but I admit it was well written. I am VERY interested in how you change it though.



Author's Response:

Hmm wooden? Maybe I could use more adjectives? Do tell me how I can change it since I do want to improve. As for where and when she is, it will be explained.

 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: May 29 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Bios Page

Okay, I read through some of your other work, I think I may have a solution to the dialogue. One, more adjectives before and after the quotations. 

But what could help is putting yourself in your characters shoes. Imagine what you would say if YOU were Snape, would you say only the bare minimum of what is neeeded to get your point across? Try imagining your story as a movie, and imagine how fluent it is when you read it over, how natural it is. And by imagining it as a movie, do not try and jot down movie cliches as words like in certain parts of The Escape. Every word must be on a perfect sync and harmony with the next.

Write as you think, imagine the conversation happening, and write it down without stopping. Just a little advice.

 

P.S Email me your idea whenever you feel like it. Preferably before next Tuesday though, cuz i have stuff planned, but no rush. Also, I will send you a bios or a first chapter of... the story plotline i sent you which nobody can know about.



Author's Response:

Ah I see, I shall try to work all of this into the next chapter, be it Aftermath or BFG. Also, sure, send over your bios page of the super secret story. I can be more descriptive but this is how I naturally write so I will see how it fits into my style. 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: June 18 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Explanations Part 2

I never liked Big Friendly Giantess, just could not get into it. I get the feeling that in order to understand this story, I need to read it. I did not understand ANYTHING. There is a general lack of simplicity in BFG, so early immersion is difficult. I'll try reading it, review again when I am done.



Author's Response:

It's a good story, one of the stories I would say influenced my style of writing. 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: July 01 2014 Title: Chapter 5: A New Future?

Private moment... ha.



Author's Response:

Too private for words. 

A Love Story of Another Kind by Samius Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 96]
Summary:

Sam, a 17 year old cocky student, finds himself shrunk down in school one day through a bizzare turn of events. He soon finds himself at the mercy of his friends and schoolmates, and has to make difficult decisions for his every crucial move as old friendships rekindle and new adversities unfold.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Butt, Adventure, Body Exploration, Couples , Feet, Gentle, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67964 Read Count: 339048
[Report This] Published: June 09 2014 Updated: March 30 2018
Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: June 09 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Bad Day, huh?

Continue, please. I like the character, and am interested in seeing his development.



Author's Response:

Will do. thank you very much for the review!

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: June 21 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Things We Do for Love

I would be a fan of Sam if not for him being effing racist. You know, India, unlike so many other nations do not allow their faith to impede politics?! FU to hell Sam.

But in all seriousness I liked the chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm glad I managed to depict Sam as the asshole he is then :D

ThX

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: June 15 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Close Encounter of the 3rd Kind

I do love the interaction between the two. I only wish the stigma of a break up was not hanging over their thoughts and choices.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 15 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Homecoming

I missed this chapter, not to much occured that could not have been spread through the previous chapter and the next.



Author's Response:

true, it links the 2 chapters

Night at the Museum by MadJack Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A newly recruited night security guard at the Museum of Natural History discovers that an ancient curse causes the animals and exhibits on display to come to life and wreak havoc.

...Wait, no. That's a family movie starring Ben Stiller. This is the second Marcella story, which is not at all appropriate for kids.

Sorry. I get them confused sometimes.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3471 Read Count: 5051
[Report This] Published: June 09 2014 Updated: June 09 2014
Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 09 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very well written and gripping.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.