Penname: vgiv [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: March 13 2014
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I am a writer with really strict guidelines for what I write. I make sure my stories are at least semi-realistic, so no really weird and unusual stuff from me.


I am sort of a macrophile, I will read and enjoy it, but would not want to experience it. Probably. I am a bit younger than what you might expect, judging by the level that I write at as I am in high school, but if kids in this country can shoot guns and watch porn, I can write literature. ;)


I don't do e-mailing, vore stories often, unaware stories, purley violent stories, or stories that may make you want to puke. Not my style. I personally will review most stories I read, but only if I am interested in that story. I love reviews, it is what I look for when I write cuz I know people like my work.


Hope you like what I do and thanks to those on this site that support me.


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The Greatest Harem by Lem Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A sultan who has the world in the palm of hands ends up on the other end of things, when his greed gets the best of him. The sultan after being tricked turns into a toy for his harem girls. Now his only chance is to make it back to his chamber where he can get changed back, however we find out saying and doing are two different things.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12144 Read Count: 124593
[Report This] Published: January 25 2009 Updated: August 12 2013
Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

How this story doesn't have more reviews is a travesty.

Summary: Past Featured Story

A Young girl fancies herself a super-villain, but first she needs to take care of her caped nemisis, Supergirl.

 ***Please note that this was not originally my idea for a story, the concept was borrowed from a single chapter unfinished (i think) story i found here a couple of years ago, i have simply made it my own and finished it ***

This is not my usual style of story telling, but i think it might apeal to a fair amount of people. A total of 10,797 words of smut, porn and fearsome amounts of sadistic torture (okay, that last part IS my usual style ^_^ )


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11126 Read Count: 74854
[Report This] Published: May 20 2009 Updated: May 25 2009
Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 15 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Tables Turn

I always read this every time I watch a terrible superhero movie inwhich the hero is dressed badly and unoriginally. This read is the most satisfying of most stories on this site, that is my opinion.

Great job.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much :)  Glad i can brighten even the worst superhero movie moments for you :P

Summary:

Zach's 8'11" cousin comes to stay with him and offers to return the favor any way he pleases. (original story concept by Chelgi)


Categories: Breasts, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Amazon Cousin
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10622 Read Count: 48983
[Report This] Published: March 26 2010 Updated: May 12 2010
Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 18 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Introductions

So hot you forget it is technically incest.



Author's Response:

In the story we find out that Zach has no blood relation to his "cousin".

Summary:

A shrunken brother has been the property of his sister Carly for the past 5 years, but finally discovers what might ultimately save him from the cruel enslavement of his giant sibling.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96870 Read Count: 379323
[Report This] Published: August 24 2011 Updated: March 31 2012
Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: March 19 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Carly's Last Game

This chapter makes me womder a few things. Please answer.

1. How did everyone besides Carly who tortured Jack react when he was rescued? People like Jenny? Were they also punished?

2. How the **** did the courts react to Jack's story? If he turned to the legal system at all.

 



Author's Response:

I'm hesitant to say much, since some of this will get answered in the 5th story eventually, but basically:

1. Jenny is the only other one besides Carly (and one blackout drunk friend) who actually consciously tortured Jack. Unlike Carly, she managed to get off the hook due to a lack of evidence that she was involved.

2. I won't spoil this part yet, but I will say that in the next story, a lot more people are going to know about the five-year "incident" with Jack and Carly.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 15 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Jenny

You know what they say! Complete sadistic b*****s befriend each other!



Author's Response:

Heck yes they do!

Unwanted Admiration by UHF Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: A man confronts a thief. But is he ready for the consequences?
Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2736 Read Count: 6088
[Report This] Published: March 17 2012 Updated: March 17 2012
Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 09 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Do not want to write to my best potential now... gonna dumb down my writings... D:

Summary:

A college women's gymnastics team and the coach are hit hard by the desires arising from the Rebalancing of Sexes. It's made worse when their boyfriends and husband are kidnapped by a rival team, forcing them to grab the last male on campus to meet their needs.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: Rebalancing the Sexes
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41351 Read Count: 131976
[Report This] Published: October 23 2012 Updated: August 12 2015
Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: August 26 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thought this story was dead. I liked the first few chapters, but got turned off by nothing more than sex every chapter. Only character I honestly liked was Carmen, and she gets very little time on screen. But, I do love this at the same time, a light hearted story is needed once in a while.



Author's Response:

I know it's not everybody's taste. But I like a lot of sex and intimacy in the Rebalancing of Sexes universe. Part of what I like about the stories is how men and women find their way back to sexuality after such a tumultuous event. Carmen is a great character and she unashamedly enjoys the power that comes from being so much taller than men (and a few women), and being able to literally enclose them in her underwear and her sex. Both powerful and playful, as well as lustful, she just seems born to be a giantess. She may figure in another plotline in the story later on. 

GH-X2 by imagin8 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 235]
Summary:

Jack, a 'regular'-sized 17-year-old in a world now populated predominantly by humans twice that height, struggles to cope with life in a school and society built for people far larger than he will ever be.


Categories: Breasts, Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Adventure, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Muscle, New World Order, Unaware, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89849 Read Count: 273724
[Report This] Published: September 12 2013 Updated: May 09 2017
Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 23 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Observation

The plot thickens.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 10 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

These noobs at torture. Never let the victim feel comfort by taking off something damp and uncomfortable. Like soiled pants. Almost as bad as tying them up unpainfully. Rookie moves.

Pffft, amateurs.



Author's Response:

It's actually more of an excuse to strip him naked to humiliate him in front of the girls - this section of the story isn't supposed to be a handy guide to torture a small man, and it's not designed to follow a blueprint for maximum discomfort, just reflect the kind of helplessness he has and the kind of flippant, do-the-first-thing-that-pops-into-your-head attitude the girls have.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: August 10 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

I disagree with gadgetmawombo however. 

Calling the police would simply worsen Jack. For one, Caitlin is rich, with a well connected father. The police would see the claim as being an attempt to blackmail her, or be a result of a kid with no friends trying to get attention. Plus Alex, Hannah, Caitlin, her rich family, and Amber would all refute Jack. Compared to Jack who has no one. Delon even thought it might be a sick joke, and he was one of Jack's only friends.

Things similar this happen in the real world, but with normal sized people, there is a reason you never hear about it.



Author's Response:

This is the sort of thing I'm going for.

In theory, calling the police could easily sort this problem out in a very deus ex machina sorta way - they'd come round to check, find a Beta boy being humiliated by at least one Alpha girl, get him safe and charges might be made if Jack wants to (he might not just so as not to take on the Reids and risk a legal battle). This means that a lot of people get involved, which leaves the story very little breathing room and makes it very complicated to continue without everyone being aware of what's going on - his parents will keep him at home and everyone will know what's happened to him, it'll become all about the aftermath of the event and not about pushing the story on.

In practice, as pointed out in the review, justice is rarely simple even when it should be, and I've chosen to take a more guarded view on the situation to reflect the kind of loaded deck stacked against Jack even if he is 100% honest about what's happened. I've tried to paint the picture that this sort of thing has happened before, and the Reids have managed to evade prosecution and even set up the precedent of people blackmailing them. The police therefore have reason to be cautious in steaming over to the Reid household and gaining entry, and who's to say that they've not been warned or incentivised not to follow through with this kind of claim by a higher authority who has had his wallet filled by Caitlin's father to keep this stuff at bay?

Summary:

Four boys head too deep into the forest, and end up very far from home.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Mature (40-49), Gentle, Lesbians, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30948 Read Count: 54846
[Report This] Published: September 15 2013 Updated: January 20 2014
Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 13 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Will you be continuing this? I really like it!

Summary:

A woman plans a birthday party for her stepbrother. Once the party favors arrive and are prepared, all that remains is for the birthday boy to show up and enjoy his gifts. But that's not all she has planned for him. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Gentle, Giant
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18180 Read Count: 65383
[Report This] Published: September 15 2013 Updated: May 08 2014
Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: May 08 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Little Lori pt I

Much less awkward than I had thought. Short, but gets your point across just fine. Pretty well too. Most of my stories transition chapters are pretty short as well. 

I just read a few of your shouts, after reading 'Control', it's hard to imagine somebody as jovial as you would even consider violent stories. I did like Control however.



Author's Response:

Awww, thank you so much vgiv! I try to be jovial and have fun. And I hope that comes out in my stories. But every once in a while I have to let Dark Bi out ;)

I have new stories in the works, most like this, but one where I get to be evil to a man who thinks he is above every other woman. he soon finds out he isn't. Right Guy? <3

 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: May 07 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A Happy Little Party

This was original, interesting, and powerfully entertaining. I reviewed your other story control, it was good.

Again, i cannot dress the description of what is going on, it is very easy to imagine this happening in my mind. 

Love your work.

By the way, I would like your opinion on one of my stories...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much vgiv! I will reciprocate!

Summary: Several generations of the Phillips family become obsessed with retrieving a certain cursed relic.
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Entrapment, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: M.A.C.H.O. Tales, Female Self-Gigantism Through The Ages, The Knights of Melion
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25368 Read Count: 54139
[Report This] Published: September 17 2013 Updated: December 17 2014
Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: April 12 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

My tablet won't load this story for some reason. I really want to read it and this thing keeps saying that the URL won't load because: blank. WHY!? 



Author's Response: Beats me. My home pc crashed for good this past weekend! So, for the foreseeable future, I'm posting via public library internets.

Summary: I came up with the idea for this story awhile ago and decided to give it a shot. I'm not too sure about it though, so I thought I'd put up the first chapter and see what you guys think.

Shaun was an average college student, until he bought a bottle that held a lot more than he bargained for.
Categories: Giantess, Feet, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Growing Woman, Slave, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40859 Read Count: 86334
[Report This] Published: September 26 2013 Updated: May 15 2014
Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: April 26 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

What got me confused was the transition. One moment, Shaun isin't a bathroom, in deep shit, Zarelda frequently assaults him. Then, in the next moment in another chapter, he is rescued. After that, a bunch of characters get introduced, and while I'm trying to get clarity on their rules and positions and even remember their names, the story begins to limit Zarelda, a strong character actually being in the story, conversing with other characters. And while all this is happening, I begin to forget why and what exactly the protagonists are doing to stop her.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: April 26 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I feel like as this story has progressed, it has become more convoluted. Nice, but makes me think: "What the hell? Who the fuck is this? What happened to, eh, nevermind. Maybe it'll get clearer, or not."

I feel like the original, older chapters were much more immersive. I still like the story, but got so confused with the plot I got out of reading it.



Author's Response: Wow. I'm sorry that my story has confused you so much. This is the first complaint I have received saying this. I have to ask, what specifically has confused or not made sense? Your input would be greatly appreciated.

Pax Romana by redfiredog Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 44]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary:

A drug known as the Red Spice lets Rome's wealthiest and most powerful women grow to enormous heights. Wealthy Roman aristocrats use and abuse their male slaves and servants, as the ultimate status symbol. The beautiful, busty God-Empress Cybele stands over a hundred feet tall, and has no qualms about crushing any man who dares to stand in her way. She rules Rome with an iron fist, indulging in every sort of pleasure her power affords her.

 

Cybele's two nineteen-year old daughters, Livia and Julia, are about to be made goddesses themselves. Livia is good-natured and gentle, while Julia is cruel to her male slaves. Soon they'll try the spice. Soon they'll grow to enormous heights. No expense has been spared for their coronation ceremony, and all of Rome is watching.

 

Meanwhile, one of Livia's slaves is carrying on a secret affair with the Princess. But love can be dangerous, especially when your girlfriend is thirty feet tall...

 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Breast Enlargement, Couples , Crush, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave, Slow Size Change, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 67742 Read Count: 243066
[Report This] Published: November 02 2013 Updated: June 27 2016
Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: May 18 2014 Title: Chapter 23: The Coronation Part 2

Space out the lines. I could barely read it. I am seeing a very drastic change in Livia, the character evolution skipped most steps. I am not seeing how Livia misses her boyfriend, who is yet to make a return. 

Eh chapter.



Author's Response:

"Space out the lines." 

Fixed!

 

"I am not seeing how Livia misses her boyfriend, who is yet to make a return. "

 

This is a fair criticism, but in my defense there's a deleted chapter that shows her worrying about her boyfriend and trying to get him back. I initially held off on publishing it because I wasn't happy with the chapter, and I've since held up on publishing it because it's now literally a deleted chapter. As in I lost the damn thing. Hopefully it's still around somewhere, but if so, it's hiding on my old hard drive. Or one of my old flash drives. Or on google docs. Or... somewhere. You get the idea. Hopefully It'll turn up sooner or later. Also, it introduces Livia's pet tiger. Because of course she has a pet tiger.

 

As for the change in Livia, I've been trying to strike a balance with her character changing, and I feel like I struck it here, but I don't have enough distance yet to really say objectively.

 

Thanks for the feedback, I'll take it into consideration.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: May 15 2014 Title: Chapter 21: The Coronation Prelude

Sadly short. After such a wait, I was hopinh for... eh, you can't rush greatness. All I can say is, please update faster.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: May 31 2014 Title: Chapter 26: The Red Spice

Next chapter is the one we're all waiting for...the suspense is killing me. 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed
Date: June 02 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Down

I like how you add "involves sex, viewer discretion is advised", after all of the other chapters of gore, cannibalism, rape and more.



Author's Response:

LOL, fair enough. I copied the warning (along with the text) from DeviantArt, where it's more likely for people to stumble upon a later chapter not knowing what to expect. But hey, if you're okay with violence, rape and cannibalism, but consensual cunnilingus freaks you out, I figure you deserve a warning.