Penname: ravenshead123 [Contact] Real name: Jesus DeLaCruz
Member Since: April 22 2007
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Shrink ray adventures by christiawi9 Rated: R Round robin starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary:

With a super secret and powerful weapon stolen from a government base the weapon quickly falls into the hands of stacy, a cruel and evil 13 year old. Overcome with power she decides to use the gun to get her way and to punish everyone who has ever "wronged" her.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Butt, Crush, Feet, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25365 Read Count: 173356
[Report This] Published: November 10 2013 Updated: June 20 2014
Reviewer: ravenshead123 Signed
Date: November 10 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Stacy + shrink ray =

Awesome start, man! I hope ther will be some unaware scenerios involving other unaware people crushing, in-shoe stuff!



Author's Response:

of course there'll be unaware, i LOVE unaware ... most of the time. yeah, i'm thinking of doing some unaware with the mother as her daughter uses her to get rid of people. anyway, thanks for the compliments and i hope you continue to enjoy =)

Reviewer: ravenshead123 Signed
Date: November 26 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Stacy + shrink ray =

First off, I don't really have a problem with Stacy. Most girls her age wouldn't really care much since they are in the beginnings of the "rebellious stage." I'm really interested to see where you take this story, it was a good setup chapter. Hopefully she finds more victims.



Author's Response:

thanks =) don't worry, she might be in a small town but there are definitely more victims for her

Atoning For Sins by Brosus Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Tim is the neighborhood punk, torturing his family and neighbors every chance he gets. But a new 'Scared Straight' campaign by supernatural forces is going to make him atone... By putting him in very unpleasant circumstances, transforming and shrinking him as they see fit.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Unaware, Butt, Entrapment, Incest, Odor, Scat
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4311 Read Count: 71555
[Report This] Published: August 22 2014 Updated: September 04 2014
Reviewer: ravenshead123 Signed
Date: August 23 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to a Special Kind of Hell!

Wow, I'm honestly surprised...in a good way! This is the first time in a while I have seen a creative story on here. Looking forward to seeing what you come up with, hopefully some awesome unaware/foot TF action. Also, hope you update consistently and actually (cause many don't) finish the story. Good luck, I'll be waiting with anticipation.



Author's Response:

Wow, really? Thanks, haha. I know my writing's kind off kilter, but if you liked this, you'll love it when I get back into the swing of things and get to the fun bits. It'll basically all be unaware, really. Can't wait to get to feet, maybe I'll do them second... I'm already working on the second chapter now, and I'll keep them pretty regular except for midterms and finals. So stay tuned, it won't be long! :D

Reviewer: ravenshead123 Signed
Date: September 04 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to a Special Kind of Hell!

Still waiting for those foot chapters, Brosus! lol



Author's Response:

Don't worry, that's the next stop! If you want something specific, message me. I was thinking a foot or shoe TF would be good... ;)

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