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I love giantess stories, especially with a giantess and a tiny man. Giantesses with authority are my interest. Teachers, doctor, moms, policewoman, etc. I tend to write longer than average reviews. It's just my style. Also, I love a long response to my review. It tells me that you care about my review want to address every part of it. Female domination and bondage are my favorite subjects in these stories. So if a giantess dominating a man who is taped to her body will always get my attention. I believe a good balance of sexy action and dialogue is key for a good story. Some stories are just filled with thoughts of a character while others are just many types of action without savoring each moment with words. Favorite author is Duggernaut. All of his stories are worth reading, and have enough action and drama to keep you engaged until the sexy stuff can occur. The writing is brilliant, and if it was a movie, I would pay to see it. 2nd favorite author is ThomThumb. He has perhaps the best 2 stories on the site in my opinion. Long stories filled with sexy stuff, drama, torture, and lots of creativity.
The story of Bob's shrunken experience continues. His adventure has taken a strange twist. He is about to see his life for what it really is...
Now that's what I'm talking about! Not only you took my suggestion, but you also included a few twists that were unpredictable until I read it.
Thanks you!
Also, @Riczar, I still think Diane is a caring person, she want to keep Rob safe and her panties were a great hiding spot and it is appropiate for this website. Diane did those things because she felt Rob tickling her. She was not trying to use him, but rather Rob unknowingly instigated it. It is atleast gentler than what Jim is going through since Sandra is actually trying to get revenge on him. Well, thats how I saw this chapter. Excellent work, like Rob, I had no idea he was in her panties until Rob described what he felt. This was great writing to see the perspectives of both characters in the situation. Glad you used my suggestion.
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom! Well, It was a GREAT suggestion! Diane is still a beautiful giantess, and Bobby just might realize that he's really got it made NOW!
Oops, I meant Bob. Rob was from a different story I read recently. My mistake.
That was intense! This chapter had so much detail and so many descriptions compared to mine. As I'm writing my next chapter I guess I will slow it down a bit. This is a great example of what I believe you want to see in my writing.
Great chapter. Cant wait for the one.
Author's Response:
Yeah, some might call it 'over-kill', but,... I like to take the reader right into the heat of it all! That's what I 'try' to do, anyway... there's always room for improvement!
Interesting. I think this is the first story where I have seen a tiny person actually commit suicide without a sexy ending.
Also, since Bob is swaddled up and left alone, perhaps, we can have an "accidental" butt crush where Bob cant escape as he watches the gigantic mass of flesh form a shadow as it slowly descends on his trapped, helpless body. (Just s suggestion). :)
In addition, I noticed that you mixed up Diane and Sandra's names at the second to last line of this chapter. I bet that happens often when you write a lot.
Anyway, another great chapter as always and now Bob gets all the attention. Cant wait!
Author's Response:
It's been corrected, Thanks Tom! As far as Bob getting all the attention... remember, Chloe still has yet to use her 'dose', and Jenn has about ten doses left to use, and... do you think that Sandra's done yet?
Its very inspiring to see you post almost a new chapter everyday. Also, it seems like the story is just getting started and I wonder what kind of giantess would Chloe be like.
Thank you,
Tom.
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom! I'm also expectantly awaiting chapter four of, 'Life with a Giantess Teacher", tiny Ben's in quite the 'little' predicament, being taken prisoner by his gigantic teacher! ;)
Bruce though that he had found the girl of his dreams, but after he is shrunk she soon becomes his nightmare.
Excellent transitions from boobs to insertion to ass. Very smooth writing and entertaining.
You also have great cliff hangers.
Mina was the greatest boss Joe had ever had, who knew she had secrets...
Excellent. I love it when the writer gets on with the action and to skip dinner was a bonus to me. I cant wait for the next chapter!
Fantastic setup! I cant wait for the action.
Adam is desperate to fufill his dreams, not taking into account the consequences of his actions.
Disclaimer: Any character's aliases are purely made by coincidence. These stories are not representative of anybody in particular. They are purely characters which have been formed through my imagination.
Fantastic Story!
I just read leverage and this story, and this story is by far better in my opinion.
Im glad you made that comment on your chapter end notes that there will be more than Sandy and Abby. Unlike most writers, Im a fan of MILF, and I prefer the MILF to be non-blood related to the protagonist.
So in this case, While everyone is hoping for Abby, Im want to see Abby's mom.
Also, as a side note: It would be helpful to rename your chapters. It will be eaiser to remember what part of the story happens in which chapter.
Your setting of the scene was interesting. A guy living with his hot, young mother, and notices a hot girl move in next door. Then when Sandy uses the syringes to shrink Adam was a good scene. Personally, i just wished it wasnt his mother but another MILF.
In addition, if Sandy was a rude mom, or if Adam was an annoying kid, then Sandy never had to feel sorry for sexually dominating him. Just thought I would point that put.
With the lack of reviews,I believe its the lack of Abby, which most reviewers here are wiating for. Perhaps you could involve a tease for the audience where Abby rings the doorbell, and gives Sandy a gift while Adam is watching from Sandy's bra. or something similar.
I like the change of body parts. Feet, boobs, ass, I like it. But not as much as your creativity. Your creativity was great. I love the themes of bondage, and when a tiny is trapped awaiting thier giantess. The scenes of Adam stuck on the bed, stuck on the chair, were a thriller to me. Another good scene was when Adam held onto Sandy's panties; good unaware moment.
As for suggestions, my direction of the story would be Sandy greeting the new neighbors while hiding Adam with her. Then Sandy meets Abby's mom and decides to trap Adam with Abby's mom. Sandy could ask to go to the restroom, but she actually sneaks into Abby's mom's room, and ties Adam to her bed, her panties, her bra, her heels, or all of the above,you name it! As for your other reviewers, you could later have Adam escape Abby's mom and Adam gets trapped by Abby. But the main part of my suggestion is to get to Abby's mom.
Forgive me for the long review, I just had a lot to talk about since I read all 5 chapters at once.
I cant wait to read the next one!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I didn't want to rush straight into Abby which I know a lot of readers are waiting for rather build it up instead. I have read novels where I have been yearning for a particular character and they haven't appeared so I can understand the frustration. However, with regard to your thorough review, I have thought of utilising many of the ideas you have suggested so don't worry. In spite of that, as a note to everyone reading this story, be patient; exciting times are just around the corner.
You need to write more MILF stories! I know some people dont like MILF stories but you are good at it. The only problem is that it his own mother.
In this chapter, it felt weird reading about Adam's acceptance of being his mom's tiny man. I can understand his own mom's desire, but not Adam's desire.
I know its your story, but thats a lot of chapters with just Sandy and Adam alone. Im glad you are changing things up a bit. If you still want Sandy to have fun, then I suggest Sandy can place Adam on the seat of Abby's chair, or even better, Abby's mom!
By the way, it will be helpful to rename your chapters. :)
I cant wait for the multiple MILF party! The next chapter has so many outcomes!
Author's Response:
Haha I'm glad you like it. I will be including plenty of MILFs don't you worry! Thanks for the review.
In addition, if you are interested in creating another story alongside this one, I suggest starting a story with a random guy who somehow gets shrunk and is seeking help. He wanders into a house with a girl and a mom. Then you could add all these sexy MILF and teen girl scenes without having any incest.
Or, if you are just focusing on this story, then you can make Abby and her mother as the main giantesses. I can think of Abby's mom as a hot mom, but Adam's hot mom just feels awkward.
Anyway, its just a suggestion. I cant wait for what might be my favorite character and that is Abby's mom!
Chloe finally gets to use the serum, and along with Jennifer's help, two more unsupecting victims fall into the ultimate experience.
Sorry for the long review. I will make it more concise next time.
Wow, that young waitress has mastered the art of female domination! I wonder where she learned that from...hmmmm.
To be honest, I expected this sexual behavior from Diane and the waitress to be gentle.
Diane was the authoritive force in her house, so I assumed she would control Bob like the waitress did here.
The waitress on the other hand, is this innocent girl, nervous if Bob was even real. I thought she would take care of him like a little girl and her doll.
Some interesting personalities you have for your characters. Quite the surprise. However, I enjoy surprises like this chapter. Keep it up!
You are such a tease! Mallory tells Jill that "I think he wants to get into your panties" and I thought things were about to get real again!
Then Mallory talks about Bob massaging feet? I mean really? That was so random that I thought you wrote that just to bug me or something. haha.
Is it me or is it getting hot in here?!! Because that was by far one of the best chapters you have ever wrote in my opinion and is probably "Bob's Ultimate Experience".
I appreciated how you responded to my review with a new chapter. Fantastic! Hopefully this is just the beginning of these sexy scenes! :)
I thought it was great, the jumping back to these relaxing events. We understand what Diane was doing and we get to enjoy this action as we read about what happens to Mark and Tony.
I would love to see Diane sneak in and kidnap Bob back. Perhaps the wiatress will bring Bobby back to the resturant and Diane is waiting and she knocks the waitress out and finds Bobby.
Ah. i know. Diane will rent Bobby and then keep him. Or some random hot woman rents Bobby, but then Diane pays the hot woman a lot of money to give Bob to Diane and to not speak of this.
Diane finds the shrinking formula and shrinks Bobby's captors. Then she retrieves Bobby.
Diane drives to Chloe's house and finds Jen and Chloe with tinies. Diane demands to know how they shrunk, and Chloe gives Diane the shrinking stuff. Diane uses it to rescue Bobby.
MaybeDiane goes back into the resturant and notices the waitress with something fragile, so Diane drops her plate and as the wiatress cleans it up, Diane looks down at the waitreess, see Bobby, amd takes him.
Perhaps, something random can happen, like Jennifer is driving home and crashes into the waitress. Jennifer sees a tiny human and thinks it is Mark/Tony. She distracts the waitress and steals the human but realizes that it is Bobby. Jennifer goes to Diane and Carly's house and Diane is first at the door. Diane sees the news and takes Bobby promising to give it to Carly. But she lies, amd Diane keeps Bob for herself.
Anyway, nice work!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom! Wow, ya got a lotta great suggestions there! Ha! You did hit on one of my ideas, (having Diane 'Rent' Bobby so that she could get him out of there) but, I haven't definitely decided yet on that...
Once again, beautiful writing!
"her stomach formed a wide beach of living softness".
Usually I cant picture your writing, but this was one of the many great examples that I was easily able to imagine.
Author's Response:
Thanks a Lot, Tom! That's really what I strive to do in my writing. I'm focusing more on the discriptions than the story itself. I'd like to think that you can visualize everything thats happening as you read it, and that's really what I'm trying to get better at...
Thanks again, your comments do alot to give me the drive to keep going and I always look forward to your reviews! :)
Tony the Tiger eating bread crumbs for breakfast?!! What happened to Frosted Flakes?! Haha!
Author's Response:
Tony the Tiger? Tony the Toy! Dude... Where do you come up with these? LOL ;`)
Hot! Enough said.
Author's Response:
Steaming.... Hot.
I did not see that coming. Where did Sandra come from? Haha.
With Sandra involved, maybe we could see Sandra sexually abuse Bobby more.
Maybe Diane walks to Sandra's house and before Diane knocks on the door, Diane heres some strange noises and witnesses Sandra smothering Bobby, and Diane feels a little concerned, but also aroused at seeing this mature woman handle Bobby.
Hopefully Sandra bargains with Diane. This would be fun.
