Penname: Asterisk [Contact] Real name: SizefaggotryMastah420SteponMe
Member Since: December 23 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Just a casual GTS Writer. Pretty lazy but I do enjoy writing and reading about Growth and Shrinking. If you like my stuff feel free to let me know. Criticisms and feedback is always welcome. I always enjoy a good GTS-based discussion.


I do write some journalism stuff from time to time too, I suppose that's worth noting.


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Reviews by Asterisk
Summary:

A young workingman lacking confidence and an easy mind has his mundane life transformed after an uncharacteristically reckless night. Literally.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35813 Read Count: 102406
[Report This] Published: June 04 2013 Updated: May 03 2014
Reviewer: Asterisk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a really pleasant read. Love what you did with all this. Can't wait to see more from you man.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Asterisk!  I appreciate you taking the time to read through it.

Summary:

A rivalry between co-workers produces a bet.

A bet begets a baseball game and stakes.

The game and stakes proclaims a winner and a loser.

Said stakes are honored, albeit forcibly.

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11486 Read Count: 9993
[Report This] Published: January 03 2014 Updated: July 06 2014
Reviewer: Asterisk Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Bottom of the 10th

Alrighty, did a quick read through of the story so here's some feedback.

 

First off you have a decent thing going here. I wouldn't call this story bad at all and it's actuall a little impressive considering it's your first story. I'm interested to see where this goes.

Now for some negative things. Grammar and sentence structure is off in a decent number of places. Some lines read like their overly complicated and there's a couple typos and at least one space issue. That's not too bad though. I think what could really help your story out is more detail. I know what happened but what runs through his head at the time? How do other people react? How about some world building? What lead to this game? Who agreed to the bet? They aren't fully needed but details like that can really sell the world and immerse the reader.

 

But like I said, it isn't bad at all. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with this!

Summary:

A Hispanic California college student named Maria acquires an entire shrunken prison complete with all the inmates and guards. 

 

This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events and incidents are either the products of the author’s imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Insertion, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28212 Read Count: 52013
[Report This] Published: January 04 2014 Updated: March 01 2015
Reviewer: Asterisk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13 2014 Title: Chapter 6: The Brutal Art of Blackmail Pt. 1

An interesting chapter. I find myself wondering what the camera wound up playing but I'm guessing that's gonna come in later. That aside the chapter was nicely paced and kept my attention til the end. I didn't notice any problems aside from maybe a couple minor grammar things.

 

Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Well, looks like I'm doing a good job. Thanks for stopping by Asterisk

[Report This] Published: April 08 2014 Updated: March 09 2015
Reviewer: Asterisk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 16 2014 Title: Chapter 2: A Smelly, Crushing ride, but not the type your thinking of

You have my attention.

Now keep it.



Author's Response:

I dont think I can. this story is about to take a huge turn, a complete 180 from what i've been writng so far. I know the type of giantess stuff your into and this is not it. this is only the beginning and it only gets worse from here on out. but thanks for reviewing this far!

Summary: A short little catgirl releases some pent up frustrations on a bunch of little victims, and it's all recorded for an audience.
Categories: Vore, Butt, Crush, Feet, Insertion, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7802 Read Count: 5588
[Report This] Published: April 15 2014 Updated: April 15 2014
Reviewer: Asterisk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 22 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story, I'm a huge sucker for evil stories centered around crushing and torture and this idea is unique enough that it puts a nice spin on it. It's hard for me to find an issue to actually critique. It was a good read start to finish.

Summary:

This is growth story that takes place in the world of the anime Kill La Kill. Read as Satsuki terrorizes a city to show the world why they should consider her their new goddess. (May contain spoilers from the Kill La Kill series)

 

(Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.)

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Crush, Feet, Growing Woman, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4733 Read Count: 19457
[Report This] Published: May 19 2014 Updated: May 24 2014
Reviewer: Asterisk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - It feels good to crush you all.

(Yo it's Lulu. Glad to see you writing again)

 

This is pretty great. I love how quickly you get to the action and just have fun with it. Definitely loving all the Satsuki feet stuff too. Though I do wish we spent a bit more time detailing stuff, granted that might mess with the pacing a bit. Regardless, definitely an instant favorite. Here's me looking forward to more and fingers crossed on a giant Ryuko at some point.



Author's Response:

(Thanks didn't even know you were on this site, I have to be sure to check your work out.)

Thanks, If you know my past stories, then you know I am more of a writer of shrink stories and this is a different approach for me. I will be sure to learn more about how to handle growth stories and flesh out the details even more in the future and as for Ryuko, she will most likely be in another story I wite in the future, but I do plan on making her very, very huge in the future so look out for that one.

Summary:

An honest employee of the Techilogic Corporation sets out to investigate the new widespread use of the shrink ray, only to uncover darker revelations about the business he’ll soon wish had stayed buried.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Oversight
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45082 Read Count: 50935
[Report This] Published: May 27 2014 Updated: July 10 2014
Reviewer: Asterisk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Report 1: Preliminary Findings

Got to admit I'm really enjoying this one. The interview format reminds me a lot of the Summer Job in a good way plus it's nice to see this sort of subject approached from a more inquisitive, distant point of view. Can't wait to see more.

Aside from that I do find it a little dialogue heavy but there's no helping that with the way it's structured. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I realize this one won't be for everyone since it is almost entirely dialogue, but it was important to me to keep up the style of the thing.

Reviewer: Asterisk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Report 4: The Williams Family, Interview 1: Lillian Williams

I'm a big fan of this dialogue. There's a lot of subtlety here. I can clearly envision what the situations are like for each of the shrunken characters without anyone spelling it out and people trying to be nonchalant and even cryptic about it makes them feel much more real than say, boasting about it. You're getting a lot done here with next to no descriptions.



Author's Response: Thanks! I know my usual stuff has a lot more description, but I was really interested in trying out something that got across the same feeling but with casual conversation about something so bizarre.

Warming Up by Emma Gear Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: After a nice workout session a girl suddenly finds herself in a place she doesn't recognize. There's a camera though, and a box full of miniature people she's been ordered to get rid of.


Categories: Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9567 Read Count: 3837
[Report This] Published: February 19 2017 Updated: February 25 2017
Reviewer: Asterisk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 25 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Some fun stuff, and whoever voted it down was a serious ass. Keep it on up Emma

Summary:

After a woman unknowingly swallows her shrinking son on a birthday cake, a second size-changing accident occurs and threatens to bring down her family and half the neighborhood.

A sequel to Birthday Surprise, done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Mature (40-49), Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Maternal, Slow Size Change, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10912 Read Count: 23717
[Report This] Published: August 16 2017 Updated: August 24 2017
Reviewer: Asterisk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's always a delight to see some familial size, particularly the microscopic variety like this. I wasn't familiar with the original until a couple days ago but this is a pretty enjoyable story so far. I look forward to see where you go with it.



Author's Response:

Thanks much. The tone/events of this story will feel pretty separate from that first one, since it's focused more on the giant characters than the small ones, but hopefully it's still enjoyable.