Reviewer: Asterisk Signed
May 21 2014
Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - It feels good to crush you all.
(Yo it's Lulu. Glad to see you writing again)
This is pretty great. I love how quickly you get to the action and just have fun with it. Definitely loving all the Satsuki feet stuff too. Though I do wish we spent a bit more time detailing stuff, granted that might mess with the pacing a bit. Regardless, definitely an instant favorite. Here's me looking forward to more and fingers crossed on a giant Ryuko at some point.Author's Response:
(Thanks didn't even know you were on this site, I have to be sure to check your work out.)
Thanks, If you know my past stories, then you know I am more of a writer of shrink stories and this is a different approach for me. I will be sure to learn more about how to handle growth stories and flesh out the details even more in the future and as for Ryuko, she will most likely be in another story I wite in the future, but I do plan on making her very, very huge in the future so look out for that one.