This is a great story, but i  wish you would add to it! 

I have to say that this is amazing!  I love ever part of it.  Keep up the good work. 

I hate to be this guy, but are you planning to continue this story? Its one of my favorites on the site, and i would hate for it to come to an end.

Defiantly a big improvement! Its still a bit rough around the edges, but practice will smooth that right out. I’m not sure if you re-read your writings after you finish them. If you don’t, I highly recommend it. You get a much better sense of how a story is flowing.

And for ideas, I always like it if the shrunken people manage to get trapped inside the giant’s shoes for a little bit. That’s always fun.

This was not what I was expecting. When I read the summery I thought it was just going to be another gore fest with a giant in boots. Nothing special.

In reality, this was actually a pretty deep piece of writing. I wasn’t expecting an actual story, and a well done one at that. Seriously, great job.

I’ve been seeing this on the Most Recent page a lot these days, (its hard to miss with a title that long) but from the description, it didn’t seem like something I would like. Then I looked at the comments, and all the pure hatred that is raining down on this story, and decided to give it a try.

For some reason, and even I’m not sure why, I love this writing. Its wonky, the wording could use some work, you barely describe anything in detail, I still have no idea who any of the characters are, and most of the time I have no idea what happening, but damn is it a fun read. Most of the time I have an idea of what is going on, and the story so far, all be it completely insane and unrealistic, is pretty enthralling.

One of the biggest up sides to the story is that it is funny. Like, really funny. I don’t realy know if that’s intentional or not, and I’m not trying to be mean when I say it, but its how I feel. For example, “She almost stepped on me, but luckily instead she stepped right over me. “Huh I guess that's why they call them your step mother,” So lame its awesome! And the name, Amanda McEvil. That is just pure gold.

Just one more thing, then I will shut up. If you could get away from the The Lego Movie rip offs, that would just be super. For me, when you take an entire scene straight from the film, it just takes you out of the story.  

Damn, wish I could have read abc’s review before it was deleted. Seems like a fun one. So I write this review with only a partial understanding of the situation. If I am wrong about anything, I apologize.

That being said, I hate it when people bash stories because of their content. Just because it has male giants shouldn’t be a reason for people to throw around pissed off reviews. If you are not into that sort of thing, that is perfectly fine. Just don’t read stories that are labeled as such. Really, I don’t know why you read this story at all if you didn’t like the idea.   

As for the story itself, I thought it was very well written, both in the characters and the actual events that took place. The grammar could use a little bit of work, but hey, everyone’s could. All together, a great story if you are into that sort of thing.

Love this so far! Can't wait to read more of it.

Hope to see more interactions with that kitten too :)

Alright, where do I began?

So, interesting concept, good actual story, but the execution was… lacking? Is that a strong enough word? What I’m trying to say, and I mean this nicely, is that you need to work on your writing style a lot.

Now to some specifics. I realize this is your first writing (or at least the first on this site), so it is expected for your writing style to be less refined. Just practice a lot more. Focus on your timing. Everything happened so quickly! What you have in your first 500 words, most authors would write out over a few chapters. Add details! Add descriptions! Add dialog and character development! You mentioned how his fart smelled bad. Don’t just say it smelled bad, tell me exactly what it smelled like! Rotting garbage? Decaying corpses left out in the sun for too long? Something else that isn’t so comical? I want to know damn it!

So there you go, my review. Great story idea, would love to read more of it, but work on your writing style.

Oh, well thank you. That is very kind, but really, you don't have to add my name as a co-aurthor. This is your storry, not mine.