Penname: shywri [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: September 24 2013
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Can't access my shywry account, so created this one to continue with my stories.


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YouPet by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

In a world where shrunken clones called YouPets are sold as servants and toys, a young woman takes the phrase “identity crisis” to the extreme by purchasing a copy of the one person whose desires and fears she knows more deeply than anyone else: herself.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8027 Read Count: 49253
[Report This] Published: March 21 2014 Updated: April 01 2014
Reviewer: shywri Signed
Date: April 01 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans

Typically when I read your stories, my expectations are higher than when I read other people's... And yet, you always exceed them. Wonderful story, well done.

I would be interested in follow ups, definitely. Maybe give Jennifer some characteristics that make it awkward to interact with herself (the youpets interacting with eachother, I mean), like needing to be the center of attention, being a compulsive liar, etc. Perhaps even some more characters... I can think of one popular character from your stories that would be quite interesting. ;)
Look at me, rambling away. Great work! 



Author's Response:

Thanks very much! I want to explore the idea of several YouPets getting together because I think it would make for an interesting mix of them trying to attack each other for all the shit Jennifer's planned while also having to work together to survive. I appreciate your review.

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