Penname: Cloud [Contact] Real name: None
Member Since: September 21 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Just a fan, not an author.


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Summary:

Until recently, a small town had seen some of the newer advances in the world pass it by.  Now with a direct route to the large land ripe for development, there are some big-time neighbors moving in.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Render's related to the story can be found here: https://www.deviantart.com/braden19/gallery/77542036/small-town-takeover


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Gentle, Growing Woman, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: GH-X2 Universe & Spin-Offs
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47913 Read Count: 74727
[Report This] Published: February 21 2021 Updated: April 13 2021
Reviewer: Cloud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 05 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Weekend Recharge

I really enjoyed this chapter it felt cathartic for Ben to get some form of justice. At the same time, this is exactly the kind of story I enjoy the most. The connection, the love, the romance. It's been hitting all the notes for me. I'm curious where the conflict with Melinda will lead the story. 

I'll hedge my guess on Ben being a point of contention and perceived weakness for Claire by other Alphas. I suspect that if Melinda remains an antagonist that we'll see her use him. Otherwise, I'm excited for the environmental conflict that Ben will face in a world bigger and not yet accessible as well as Claire's new colleagues and friends who will not be as accepting of Ben. For Claire's responsibility to work with and endear Alphas to her new invention, how that will change her views as she mingles with others her size more often. Will she be at ostracized for her Beta partner, or will she develop empathy in Alphas for Betas.



Author's Response:

First off, I appreciate the feedback.  Ben was due, and this chapter was incredibly satisfying to write.

Summary:

A story of life and love and a bunch of things actually. The sequel to MAJOR/minor and probably Rembrandt Logan too honestly or whatever who really gives a shit right? 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41089 Read Count: 184619
[Report This] Published: February 22 2021 Updated: May 01 2022
Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: February 23 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: One Night Stand.

I was actually just yesterday re-reading your Major/minor work and part of Rembrandt, lamenting at how you didn't have any other work related to the Major/minor series. I also wish Kurogane had expanded on his lore about minor hive-minds that you kinda went into in the minor classroom; about how more minors working together give the bond a more physical feeling. I hope this story explores that concept more or we see more strong minors dominating the bond. 

I had been lamenting that we never saw an Izzy x Linda spinoff or one-shot. It was pretty hot imo and I was sad that it never occurred in Izzy's main tale.



Author's Response:

Izzy x Linda! That would be a fun story maybe for an slightly alternate univers spin off. Fun! Sorry for your lament though. Hopefully you'll enjoy this story. 

Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: February 25 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Morning Afterglow

Sirk Please,

I beg you to write more, it's an incredible pleasure to read your work as always. From your lovely story Tales, to your Major/minor writings, and even your especially brutal but delightful futa work with Rembrandt. I really enjoy your stories, they always have such wonderful characters and great dynamics between them. The interactions feel geniune, the world building feels fleshed out, and many times I feel myself swooning at the romantic intrigue and dynamics you bring to your characters.

I'm estatic to read this chapter, it was both an intro and a conclusion I didn't see coming. I'll reread your works for years to come because of how gooey they make me feel.



Author's Response:

No need to beg. I'm not that big a deal or that competent a writer to be worthy of begging! I'm writing again. I hope you enjoy this story as much as you appear to have enjoyed my others! 

Reviewer: Cloud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 25 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: One Night Stand.

I always forget to add a rating, it slips my mind every time.



Author's Response:

Ratings don't matter bro! Don't rate, give me a 1 star. Who cares! I just appreciate that you are reading! Thank you! 

Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: March 12 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Second Try

You're welcome, thanks for writing 

Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: December 06 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Developing Tension

See you when we see you, thanks for the chapter.

Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: December 09 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Fleeting Connections

I'm so invested in this latest development. 

Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: January 29 2022 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Mother's Duty

Wow, a Cyclopean mother, I didn't expect that Rileys' relationship with Elliot was caused because he had a domineering mother. 



Author's Response:

One could say Riley was handpicked to be Elliot's friend. Whether that is accurate or not is up for debate, but one could say it!

Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: January 31 2022 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: SIZE/disparity

It's comforting to see the vulnerabilities in Rose's monologue. Without it I fear I'd likely be afraid of her in the context of how she'd alter Elliots life with a stony demeanor. I enjoy the 'walking on eggshells' type of dialogue from Rose and Charles. 

I'm excited for the meeting between Hilda and Elliots family, as well as what sounds like a property? Perhaps for Rose and Charles to be closer to their son, or perhaps for their son himself? Either way, I'm happy to see another chapter.

The interaction between Moonie and the Major children is entertaining and sad. They really are behaving like demons, and without the bond I'd get them kicked out. If they're like this to Moonie, how are they to their minor mother?

Again, thanks for writing this NotSirk.

Deliverance by Kardo Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 216]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A young man at a bar assaulted for his diminutive stature is saved by a good samaritan who holds a dark secret. 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Muscle, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 68 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 324818 Read Count: 357089
[Report This] Published: February 24 2021 Updated: October 09 2022
Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: January 25 2022 Title: Chapter 34: Renewal

This is my least favorite chapter. That Erin is so easily manipulated, and that he's willing to try and turn Jisoo against the corporation who controls the world is insanity. He's no more powerful than Jisoo is to stop them, and yet this delusion fuels them both to try, even if it means becoming fugitives against a corporation that has unlimited resources and the control of every force in the world. 



Author's Response: Im sorry you didn’t like the chapter!

Summary:

Ben volunteers to be a test subject for his mother's shrinking formula, and is shrunk down to ever-smaller sizes over a couple of weeks.


Categories: Mature (40-49), Adventure, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Maternal, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 43081 Read Count: 98227
[Report This] Published: March 07 2021 Updated: June 14 2021
Reviewer: Cloud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 07 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can we get a link to your Deviant art page? 

It's nice to have you back writing another gentle story. One of my long time favorite gentle writers. Excited to experience a new family dynamic.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I hope you'll like the story. There's a link to my DA page in my author page here.

Summary:

An ongoing adventure in a world of the formula. Inspired by Imagin8 and his GH-X2 story.

https://www.deviantart.com/gentlegiant1970


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: GH-X2 Universe & Spin-Offs
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71193 Read Count: 80324
[Report This] Published: March 10 2021 Updated: August 31 2021
Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: March 11 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Standin up for what is right.

Who's Greg and why is he mentioned?



Author's Response:

My apologies. That was an error on my part. Any thoughts on the story itself?

Summary:

Living in a New World

https://www.deviantart.com/gentlegiant1970


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: GH-X2 Universe & Spin-Offs
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 82549 Read Count: 112726
[Report This] Published: March 15 2021 Updated: June 22 2022
Reviewer: Cloud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03 2021 Title: The Chronicles of James Adams

Just a few extra chapters added today huh?

Extra Chapters

Summary:

Three Astronauts encounter a mysterious space cloud on a routine mission.


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52717 Read Count: 66393
[Report This] Published: April 29 2021 Updated: October 18 2022
Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: July 18 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The three Astronauts get rescued

Houston, we have a problem. The word count on this story says it's 33k words long. This story is nowhere near that length.



Author's Response:

I write all my stories on my phone, because I have it on me at all times. Lately, I have been encountering a glitch where I post a single chapter, and 6-10 copies of that chapter are also posted. I don't realize until I go back and look, and delete the duplicates. But GW doesn't update the word count information.

Summary:

This is the story of Nick, a 25 year old man that was trying to improve for his girlfriend Maddy, but he may end up being the man she desires when her wish gets fulfilled.


Categories: Adult 30-39, Gentle, Giantess, Couples, Maternal, Slow Size Change, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 186126 Read Count: 269658
[Report This] Published: August 22 2021 Updated: April 27 2024
Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: October 23 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That's weird, I feel like I've already read this chapter. It's like you reposted chapter 7 or something because I swear I've already read it before...



Author's Response:

Well...it´s a new one haha, I think there´s some similarities with it and other chapters. But it´s definitely a new chapter, I always double check on that ;)

Summary:

 

Three years have passed since Maya found her little lover Six after the carnage she brought upon Saint Minervas hospital. Since then the worlds changed considerably, and only continues to do so as new key players in these changes make themselves known. With a new lover by Mayas side, along with her beloved Six, the world is ready for yet another change. How that change will affect them remains to be seen.


Reviews and critiques are greatly appreciated, not just by myself but by all writers.


If you wanna see where the series began you can check out my first story on the site!
https://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10793


Disclaimer: Story has chapters that contain cruel content among other things. Also has sweet chapters as well. Any likeness to real-life individuals is pure coincidence.  

-Chapter 58 is now up-


Notice: No longer on hiatus!



 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Alpha-Beta
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 291472 Read Count: 118890
[Report This] Published: August 25 2021 Updated: April 30 2024
Reviewer: Cloud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 04 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1: Chapter 1: Relationship Goals?

0.5 for the site not working? Damn shame he can't read this masterpiece. I'm enjoying it a whole lot.

Summary:

A shipping vessel is attacked at sea by a gigantic mermaid, and the chaos is remembered by an engineer, the sole survivor of the chaos that has been picked out as the creature's pet. A pledge reward for a patron.

If you enjoy my writing, consider pledging to my Patreon~ patreon.com/cursecrazy For just $2/month, get early + exclusive access to stories like this and more!

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I have a Discord now! Come and discuss size enthusiast topics and stay up to date on my projects~ discord.gg/KYmzAFK8


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Furry
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13738 Read Count: 8694
[Report This] Published: August 27 2021 Updated: December 06 2021
Reviewer: Cloud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 29 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

I enjoyed this story, and I hope to hear more about Eliza and Clo

BGGB by dzlkidd Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary:

Theo took the scholarship no questions asked... but he didn't read the fine print when it came to roommates.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Gentle, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32964 Read Count: 87031
[Report This] Published: January 11 2022 Updated: June 07 2022
Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: May 16 2022 Title: Chapter 12: Bee Gee Gee Bee

This chapter felt sloppier than the others. The dialogue and actions of the characters were harder to follow.

Such as the part where it says Gen grabs his hand and pulls him closer, then pushes him with her hands on his back. In my head, I can't wrap my head around how they're positioned on couches in order to make this movement.

Otherwise, the dialogue doesn't flow like there are people talking. Scenes like, "That got a big “Ha!” out of her." the usual phrasing is "the waitress let out an exagerrated sigh" and it doesn't need revisions. 

I think the main thing that bothers me is the spacing, it all looks very bunched and clumped together. It's probably an error from porting the writing over to the website.



Author's Response:

A sardonic, single “Ha!” is in no way similar to an exaggerated sigh. One signifies you’ve touched on something they can’t wait to tell you about those people, the other is “whatever, I don’t care” and you get a two word answer.

Summary:

Brian has an incurable disease, unless he's willing to try a cutting-edge treatment. Too bad it relies on his parents doing a lot of things right...


Categories: Insertion, Couples, Butt, Incest
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8376 Read Count: 8502
[Report This] Published: April 28 2022 Updated: April 28 2022
Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: April 30 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Brian's Treatment

That's tragic as hell. A vindictive part of me wants to see the doctors reaction and the reaction of the parents when they hear how they've killed their dying son. 

Summary:

Ever since Finn’s high school bully turned giant, he’s dreaded the inevitable day she corners him yet again. However, she’s decided that it’s time to make amends, form a friendship with her former target…and maybe something more. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Butt, Couples, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53922 Read Count: 89385
[Report This] Published: May 26 2022 Updated: January 23 2023
Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: January 07 2023 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Facing the Music

This latest chapter makes Finn feel like a total jackass.