Love the new chapter, and I love your consequence story lines. I hope to see more of corey in consequences, as his relationship is just so beautiful, but any additions to the story is more then welcomed.

You write so quickly, it makes my heart beat with excitement everytime I see a new chapter of this story coming out. I'm glad to see you fallowed through on your promise to release a new chapter before you left on vacation, because I adore this story, and I care for the characters. It's quickly becoming one of my favorite stories, please continue writing it until there's a satisfying ending. Always know that there are those of us on the sight who lurk and enjoy more often then review and contribute. Have a fantastic vacation, good luck with the storry.

I actually like jenna, she is flirting, but more in a domineering way, and she's gonna get Kai whether he likes it or not. It reminds me of a yandere obsession in japanese manga. You're already laying down the setting, and the beginnings of it, if Kai was into that kind of thing like I am, he'd enjoy his situation a little more.

I too get a bad feeling from Kendra. It's probably gonna go downhill quite quickly. Just my intuition. But on the other hand, this is a PG story, with no tags outside of humiliation, so maybe Kendra won't be a careless violent cunt like I predict.

I'm afraid that Laurens' family is going to break laws, and end up in confinement. I've already grown to love the beta, omega relationship, and I can't say I can very well stomache beta voilence as much anymore. The family already seem to be mostly prejudiced, hatefilled, voilent, people who are willing to "do anything" to stop a beta from being apart of the family. I don't have much hope for Ian & laurens relationship lasting to much longer, and I am getting this feeling lauren will do something on accident, and that the omega involvement will be too late; I have a sinking feeling I'm being to optomistic for your writing style.

I think choice A is the more interesting choice, seeing as it's the least written about.

Ugh, necessary whiney Bitch mode for story drama and progression enabled :I

You don't usually hear your skin ripping, often times it's felt. Uh, also, I felt his acceptance of her/his pity was too fast and forthcoming, seeing as his village was destroyed, likely family killed too, by giants.

I really enjoy your world building chapters, even more then the sexual ones. I say a mixture of Alex, followed by Elise, and maybe a little from the third girl for a change in pov.

My hibernation has ended. Many chapters have been added, and each one seems to be building on the struggles the separated couple will face. Elise and her desperate sexual urges, resulting in a lack of work ethic, yet leading to more aggressive behaviour. Alex and his forced servitude, the possible erosion of his humanity, and definite destruction of his self-control. What if one day he is taken off the drug, yet its effects have permanently addled his mind. Or perhaps Elise joins the Matriarch to find Alex, and becomes warped by their practices. The desperate tragedy of their story has so many different spirals. That your ray of light, your happy ending, seems like sunlight trying to shine at the seafloor.

Tl;dr

Nice updates, cool tragedy so far, can't wait for the happy bit.