Penname: midnightwriter85 [Contact] Real name: Jay
Member Since: September 14 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

  Like so many that come here to escape, I enjoy reading these tales too.  I'm trying to write some of my own, but I'm finding that it's a lot harder than it appears...


  Hopefully, some of this amazing talent will rub off on me!  I am trying to get better at fantasy writing, and I really appreciate getting reviews from everyone who reads.


 


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Nick by Duggernaut Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 117]
Summary:

Joining a new school mid semester is hard enough, but for Nick, when his parent's divorce is finalized he is forced to move across the country to live with his dad who just so happens to have a new lady in his life and a daughter Nick's age who is one of the school's 'it' girls. When an accident leaves Nick and two other boys shrunken, he may be forced to turn to his step sister and her friends for assistance...


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38506 Read Count: 252020
[Report This] Published: June 24 2016 Updated: October 05 2016
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 26 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Subjective Evaluator Bias

Yeh, I have to agree with TomSpeedy.   I too, found this episode  to be, 'extremely' comical!  I think it's the fact that  little Scott is such a tool, and now that he's just a fraction of his former size, which completely erases any valuable  strength that he could possibly have, ...and on the other hand, Hester, ...has become this powerful, giant!  And, aside from her intellectual prowess, her new advantage in sheer size alone, could definitely bring things up that had obviously never occurred to her...until Now!

   ...and, he is about to find out, just how Big she actually IS!  ;`)  Great Stuff, Man!

 

Summary:

Ben Cutler is in pursuit of his dream career and he is presented with an opportunity to work with one of the best lawyers in the field. However, her mentorship ends up being more than he was expecting and he finds himself wondering if it was such a great opportuity after all. 


Categories: Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43476 Read Count: 120063
[Report This] Published: July 08 2016 Updated: October 26 2022
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Made an Example

Woah, this is really getting good now!  I like the way that you kept him in the dark about (how and why) he mysteriously keeps on shrinking.  Kay didn't seem to know, and she wasn't even concerned about it either, ...made her seem even more dominant.  Nice change of perspective with Molly and Kay.  I like how Molly is petite and likes the idea of becoming a giantess!

  Great stuff Man!  Can't wait to see what Molly does to him!  



Author's Response: I appreciate your kind words and I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Adapt and Survive

Molly is so Hot!  Love the way she uses her little captive, so forceful and yet, so sensuous as she abuses him.  Can't wait to see what happens to Ben at the Party!

 

Kimberly by Happy Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 126]
Summary:

A happily married man catches the shrinking disease, and falls for the feminine wiles of his daughter's best friend.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Gentle, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93154 Read Count: 468116
[Report This] Published: August 16 2016 Updated: November 09 2016
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation

O.M.G!  I just discovered this amazing story!  I have to say that I did, (regretfully) jump ahead a bit, ...and, go directly to the 'one-foot' chapter; then, I backed up and started reading the first chapter.  I read the first five and I just had to stop and review!

  Simply intoxicating.  I'll have to bookmark this one and return later, but, ...this is most definitely the best written shrinking tale that I've ever read...

 I will read this entire story, very slowly, and savor it.  Thank you so much for posting it!

 Your writing is excellent.  Your descriptions perfect.  Your imagination, amazing!

  Great Stuff Man!  I love the slow shrinking aspect, and this is just what I've been waiting to read, ...I love it!

  I hope it's not nearing the end just yet, ...I'd like to catch up before you finish...

 



Author's Response:

I think 4 or 5 more posts ought to do it for this story. Early on I was posting quite frequently, but it will probably take me at least 3 weeks to finish this. Plenty of time for you to catch up.

Thank you very much for the praise. I don't really deserve it. I owe a lot to other stories, like "The Adam's Affliction," "A second Chance," and "Big Little Sister." I think "Micronauts" and "Stepdaughter in Charge" and "Property of Omega Pi" have way more going for them than this story. If you like "Kimberly," you should check those out.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation

...all caught up!  *Whew!*  So compelling the way that you portrayed Andy's upstanding character and his Fatherly composure while dealing with these slowly growing females!   I found it to be so amazing, ...as they became so much bigger, he continued to shrink...

So tastefully done.  Even, when Debbie's little sister Alice had him trapped inside her bedroom, very tastefully done!  The fear of becoming her toy was completely terrifying and erotic at the same time!

If Pauls past, has anything to do with what's about to happen to him, ...he;s really in for it!  Ha ha ...I can't wait!  

 I found the sudden death of his wife to be most devastating, I've been there myself, and I could really feel what he was experiencing; Kim stepping in really saving his life!  And, since she already had a childhood crush, ...it was so natural for her to do

  Great Stuff man  I really enjoyed this,... can't wait to see what happens to Mr. Paul! 

 



Author's Response:

Glad you like it!

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 24 2016 Title: Chapter 27: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 1)

 wWoo! - Mr. Paul could be in a very dangerous situation here!  Kinda stupid to have himself personally 'hand-delivered' to the Party at his new (three-inch) size? Lol!  But, then again, this IS Paul were talking about...

 Ms. Brookie might take advantage of this poor little guy, (So deserving) she could accidentally hurt him, ...or squash him with her 'inexperience' and uncaring nature...

  ...we can only hope!  ;`)  I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter!

 



Author's Response:

Haha, you'll really dig these last few entries, then. Paul is in for a world of hurt... and pleasure.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 26 2016 Title: Chapter 28: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 2)

Oh, poor, poor, ...little Paul, he was such a good little man.  "R.I.P."

Brookie's gonna have some fun now!  Can't Wait!!!  ;`)

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31 2016 Title: Chapter 29: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 3)

Only, Half the size, of one of her plugs?  And, he's going to sneak into her bedroom...

 Poor, poor  Paul!  

 -  Savored your eloquent descriptions; as he climbed onto her bed, slowly continuing his journey up onto her magnificent chest. The letters across her butt, disappearing one by one, ...I loved that part -made it easy to imagine- her rolling onto her back.

 ...all that weight, just missing him as he steps out of the way...

 Great storytelling!  ;`) 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback. Brooke is definitely way more woman than Paul can handle, and she's going to show him that before this 5-part chapter is over.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed
Date: November 03 2016 Title: Chapter 30: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 4)

Your descriptions weren't too clear as she turned around on her bed, ...I wasn't able to figure out what she was doing as she brought her feet up...

  Although, I just kept on reading and figured that she must have been kneeling over him?

  _I hope she keeps him as her little secret!  Takes him with her to school, and he stays shrunk - Permanently!  ;`)

 ...Brookie's little toy!  He could just stay small and never start growing, (or get any smaller)  just get stuck at that size, and become Brookie's little pet.

 



Author's Response:

Her back was to him, and her legs were under her. She was sitting on her heels, and he was between her feet, being dominate by her beautiful ass.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07 2016 Title: Chapter 31: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 5)

Oh, no, ...I was right!  (Careful what you wish for, ...)  Mr. Pauly is going back to school!

Only, not like he had originally planned...  his life has just completely changed; now, if he suddenly realizes, after a few days, that his size hasn't changed at all, ...and, he seems to be 'stuck' at three inches tall, my expectations will be correct!  ;`)

    I'd like to see Brookie force him to put lotion all over her naked body, make him sweat it out as she casually lays out in the sunlight, (Maybe on a rooftop or inside of a fenced in swimming pool area.

   Maybe, he'll get lucky, and end up becoming the sorority mascot and get to be the entire colleges favorite!

  I love where this is going, Great Stuff Man! 

BTW, I re-read that last chapter, and I must have been half asleep when I read it the first time, ...but, your descriptions were just fine, sorry bout that, dude!

 



Author's Response:

As all of that sounds pretty cool, this is not a "college girls play with shrunken man" story. Duggernaut seems to be writing that story. Although the last chapter does intimate what Paul is in for, the story itself is winding down.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue: Daughter's Wedding

Aw Man, ...I hate to see this one end.  I really enjoyed this story.  I think that you did a great job of creating the characters and  keeping them real, too.  Paul ending up with a BBW - Dominatrix, ...hilarious Dude! ;`)

  I especially enjoyed the way that you used Paul, to contrast against Andy, making his 'Deeds' appear so much better; even when he slightly lusted after his own daughter, - compared to Paul, he was a Saint!  Nice work.  

  I'll be looking forward to the Sequel, or anything else that you decide to write, I added you to my 'favorite authors' after reading, chapter three, ...I think, anyway, can't wait to see what other tales you can dream up, this one was just great!

 

Summary:

After being cut off by her parents and forced to get by on her own, the childish and irreverent Alice puts out an advert for a roommate to help cover the bills. Although initially annoyed at the prospect of having to share her apartment, and despite clashing with the bookish and aloof Louise who answers her ad, Alice begins to enjoy the company of her new friend.

But there's more to Louise than meets the eye, and Alice soon finds herself both fascinated and terrified by the strange ability this odd student from the nearby university has...


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37726 Read Count: 56803
[Report This] Published: September 08 2016 Updated: September 27 2016
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Nice!  So casually written;you make it 'feel 'so simple.

  I like the way, that - they didn't even catch his name, and simply just, 'Gave him a random one', so powerful...

  I hope that Lou allows her roommate to eventually have a little pet, can't wait to see what she expects to do with one, ...whether it be male or female, doesn't matter, I don't expect they'll last very long!  Ha!  ;)

  Nice short, I want to see more! 

* midnightwriter85

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed
Date: September 14 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Hey Bogus, 

Still with ya' here.  This is getting progressively better.  S L O W L Y.

  I do hope that Emma lasts.  Maybe, Alice could pretend that she lost her, and try to hide her somewhere from Lou, Or, talk Lou into allowing her to keep tiny Emma for a while longer, somehow maybe, just, ....I don't know?  I like Emma!  I don't want to see anything happen to her...

  Please, don't squash her!  She'll be a very obedient little pet, you just wait and see, just don't do anything rash, Okay?

   Well, Emma, I tried...?  

:/

 

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Well, it seems that Lou is becoming quite the complicated character, her hatred, and despicable personality doesn't seem to be a problem for Alice, just everyone else that happens to fall into her sights. I wonder what her plan is?  This Mark guy, ...is just another victim that she has so 'seemingly'  at random, just selected?  Although, for what reason?  To put him with Emma? Or ...for Alice to become more involved with so that she will become less interested in Emma?

...h'm?   I wonder how Alice has survived for so long without getting "smallified " by Lous empowering 'special ability' ?  Maybe, she's immune to her stuff?  

Next chapter, Emma, Mark, and Alice are sitting inside of Lou's night table drawer, waiting for her to wake up, and let them out...    LoL!    ;.)

 

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Whoa, what was that?  What happened to Lou? She just squashed Mark, and allowed herself to become Lou's little pet, ...and, restored Emma to her regular size???

  How, Why, What...   I don't get it?  

  Next chapter, Alice wakes up alone in her bed.  She wonders what became of her little Lou?  She thinks back to the dream that she just had, (She was eating a large Meatball Sub with a lot of ketchup) and, ...she looks down at her pillow to find a tiny pair of Lou's pajama's crumpled up next to where her mouth was...

 Oh Noooo!  LoL ! :`) 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I definitely think I may have messed up the pacing slightly there. It's a culmination of events I was trying to hint at for a while, but the execution is just a bit clumsy.

I'll definitely revisit that section once it's complete and I'm able review the story as a while.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I still think that it was a great chapter, ...although, you may have tried to jam too much action into it.  Also, the idea of Lou actually shrinking herself willingly  was a bit over the top...

  ...if she had never before restored anyone then, maybe upon doing it for the first time, she would have 'unexpectedly' shrunk herself in the act of doing so?  You Know?  Something like that would have been a bit more comprehensible...

Lou just doesn't seem to be the type to bend so easily, but if she always had the desire to be Alice's toy, then it doe's 'However' make a lot of sense!

  So, don't get me wrong, I still think it's very good!  



Author's Response:

I agree entirely - it's not quite believable enough to be workable. I'm happy with the series of events and progression, but even as I was reading it, I could sense the poor pacing and how "squished" everything was. I think the solution would be to stretch the action out into two chapters so it doesn't feel quite so rushed.

Thank you very much for your criticism. I think I know exactly I need to do when I go back over this, but I'll move forwards to completion before I attempt any rewriting.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 23 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

  Simply Awesome descriptions from the miniaturized perspective!  Loved it!  I felt so enraptured, as I slowly fell into Lou's world, down on the floor of their apartment, ...simply awesome, so realistic...

   Even her overwhelming fear, consuming her, and compelling her to run away, only she was too petrified to even move a single muscle; your portrayal of her maiden experience couldn't be too far off.  Makes me second guess the ideas that linger within my own fantasies.

   Your writing style and your perfectly selected vocabulary intricately well versed for this type of fantasy.  

   ...if you keep this up, I'm going to put you on my favorites list! 

 

 

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

   Woah, ...Bogus, when you get in the "moment" and really focus, and everything around you fades into nothingness; your writing takes off like a bat out of hell!

  Damn, I wish that I could have stayed down there on Alice's bedroom floor, and just wondered around in that enormous, gigantic, environment; your description's -  I wanted that to just go on forever...

  I strive for that same thing, but it doesn't come as easily as you make it appear!

 

Summary:

A shrinking story told from the perspective of Billy Little. An odd character, that happens to stumble into something that will dramatically change his life forever. It's an extremely detailed depiction of his nightmarish episodes. This is just the beginnings of something so much bigger than Mr. Little. Because, before he realizes what's actually happening, the entire world has already changed into a completely different humanity.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Humiliation, Legwear, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 154994 Read Count: 648627
[Report This] Published: September 25 2016 Updated: July 24 2017
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed
Date: December 24 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Merry Christmas everybody!  Hope you'll all have a wonderful holiday season and a happy New Year too.  I'll be back sometime after the madness is over.  ;`)

Summary:

A boy shrinks, and his sisters document the experience on YouTube.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Gentle, Humiliation, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 93512 Read Count: 238249
[Report This] Published: October 03 2016 Updated: July 07 2017
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Alright!  I like this setup, Spooky.  It's nicely done, as usual.  I'll bet that you were thinking about that 'Downsized' motion picture, coming up, (2017) with Reese Witherspoon and Matt Damon?  The movie is supposed to have an area where people are shrunk down and they can live so much cheaper, and everything's all guarded and well prepared and cared for, it's a comedy but, sounds like it might be worth checking out...

  Glad to see you back, Dude!  ;`)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the first review, midnight!

Can't wait to see Downsized. Sounds amazing. As for the community of shrunken people, I may have subconsciously borrowed a bit from that movie, but it's a fairly common trope in the giantess genre. Erica's House, Titan, and Omega series are a few examples that come to mind. Depending on how many people it needs to support, and how long the community has existed, I think it could be more expensive than normal-sized living. Especially when you consider construction of buildings to scale, infrastructure, medicine, visitation, commerce, education and, most important, protection (from humans, bugs, animals, etc).