Penname: midnightwriter85 [Contact] Real name: Jay
Member Since: September 14 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

  Like so many that come here to escape, I enjoy reading these tales too.  I'm trying to write some of my own, but I'm finding that it's a lot harder than it appears...


  Hopefully, some of this amazing talent will rub off on me!  I am trying to get better at fantasy writing, and I really appreciate getting reviews from everyone who reads.


 


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Summary: Ben Miller, an employee at Amazcorp, is chosen at random to test out a new drug for the company. This news sends him on a journey of discovery, where he learns about the intimate ties that big buisness has with the government. Can he muster the courage to warn people about Madam Executive plan's before it's too late?
 
This slow-shrink novel is being written as a commission for a user named IronWaffle (you may find him at Giantesss City). It is being released two chapters in arrears - that is to say that I will always have two completed chapters in storage when I release a new chapter here. If you would like to commission a story of your own, please visit this link:
https://www.deviantart.com/stubbornstain/art/Stubbornstain-s-Commission-Document-And-FAQ-809392188
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Breast Enlargement, Butt, Couples, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Lesbians, Muscle, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Slave, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6268 Read Count: 11969
[Report This] Published: September 09 2019 Updated: September 14 2019
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed
Date: September 14 2019 Title: Chapter 2: 2: Bad Influences

Makes no sence. A man would not subject his wife and daughter to some unknown serum.. And, allow himself to get shrunken down, just to keep a job... I can't get into it because I would never 'Knowingly' allow this to happen. So I've nothing in common with the protaginist.

  Just my 2-cents, but, would be much better if he was 'Unknowingly' tricked, or forced into this situation. No choice, but to become trapped into it... I just can't 'Believe it, Sorry.



Author's Response:

I am just paid to write this. I had my reservations but I didn't want this to become "my story". though the commissioner agress with your sentiments. I have had discussions with the person commissioning this story in regards your review and will continue to have further such discussions. It is clear some details will have to be changed. Let me be clear: if this was my own story idea I would have done things a lot differently. He is currently trying to rectify his idea and will make changes accordingly. As I said, I have been having discussions with the person commissioning this story in regards your review and will continue to have further such discussions.

Summary:

Story I wrote years ago – but never posted – based on a comic I made using Daz3D years ago. The premise is fairly simple and I tided the story up a bit before posting. It seems I am known for quality literature and I'd like to keep up that appearance.

As the title suggests, a king is abducted by a massive alien, perhaps 200ft/30m tall (who the people think is either a demoness or a Goddess). Then we are introduced to the alien's friend and they do some lewd stuff. The story could be part of a larger series - we'll see.


Categories: Couples, Fantasy, Humiliation, Insertion, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3641 Read Count: 3331
[Report This] Published: September 24 2019 Updated: September 24 2019
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed
Date: September 25 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey Stub, Nice job on the render. The story is pretty good, I liked it. It seems like you're fishing for some type of response from the readers here... I think your a Hell-of-a-writer, you've put together some very attractive works over the years, but, I think your in a rut... searching for that eye-catching tribute to GTS World.

I got it! You just need a 'REAL GOOD IDEA' Right? Right. So here it is..

  A very wealthy middle-aged actress that has two teen-aged daughters (from two different men) is starting to realize that her Movie careeer is nearly all washed up, so she goes on vacation to clear her mind.

 Her DAughters decide to go with her ~ to the Bahamas. They are all three wwell introduced into the story (Nearly a full chapter or 2 playing out each one) So we really get to know each of them.

 Then, along comes some dude... the main char, as far as that goes. A full chap on him and his life, too. So the reader really gets to him ~ even before they all meet.

Then, somehow, they are in the same Hotel and The Actress is recognized by our Dude and he is 'LOve-struck' (Could be the Title- Hint)

 He buys some potion from a little old woman and - not thinking anything of it... he drinks it down. Then, he tries to get close to the 'Actress' but ends up getting found by one of her daughters...

  She captures him, thinking that he is the most wonderful thing she's ever seen and before he knows it,,, he becomes their pet.

  I've never cpmmisioned anything, and I don't plan on it...

  Just thought you might need a little inspiration..

  Take it for whatever you think it's worth. :)



Author's Response:

I am stuck in a rut. I have plenty of ideas but I'm too indecisive; I hope to make a visual novel sometime too. I would encourage you to join the 'Macro Authors' Repository' server on Discord (link to it on my profile page); we often discuss ideas on there. There are many well-known names on there, including myself, who started the server. At the moment, I am focusing on my commission piece and was only able to upload this piece due to it being already written. Maybe I will upload my other stories again in the future.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed
Date: September 26 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

  I've tried to collaborate w/ other writers before and I found it very distracting. Maybe, you just need to block everything else out and create some space in your head. It's good to get fresh ideas, but you also need to allow yourself the time and space to let your own imagination take over ~ yeah, you'll have to edit the hell out of it, but still, your best work comes from YOU! Lots of ideas just muck up the wheels....

  I'll have to check out that discord though, sounds fun! Thanks Stub. ;)

Summary:

A bully shrinks her victim, and the long-term results shock them both


Categories: Nose, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Mouth Play, Violent, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28763 Read Count: 65820
[Report This] Published: September 27 2019 Updated: October 03 2019
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Consummating

  So sweet.. That Meredith, now everybody will know that she's Really NOT a 'Mean' Girl. how will she ever face everone back at school? ;)

Nice work. you we're really walking a tight-rope there in the first few chapters, I was hoping that you could hold on to it... and, you did an excellent prolong of the fascination between the two. Even with the secret coming out - she still didn't eat him! Lol!

Nice Work at blending their opposite personalities and bringing everything togehter so nicely!

 I will have to check out the rest of your stories!



Author's Response:

She'll figure something out, she's a smart girl.  There might be people who have something to say about it though ;)

Thank you!  I've written enough stories where the shrunken person gets killed in some way at the end, I figured I could let them win one for a change.

As usual, I encourage everyone, but especially my new readers, to check out and review my other stuff when they can.