Penname: midnightwriter85 [Contact] Real name: Jay
Member Since: September 14 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

  Like so many that come here to escape, I enjoy reading these tales too.  I'm trying to write some of my own, but I'm finding that it's a lot harder than it appears...


  Hopefully, some of this amazing talent will rub off on me!  I am trying to get better at fantasy writing, and I really appreciate getting reviews from everyone who reads.


 


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Inversion by littless Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 158]
Summary:

Sam's life undergoes some BIG changes when he gets back together with his high school sweetheart.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breast Enlargement, Couples, Gentle, Growing Woman, Incest, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 102 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 518393 Read Count: 692328
[Report This] Published: May 16 2017 Updated: April 29 2019
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 16 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

  Nice introduction chapter. I already feel like I'm getting to know, Sam. And, doing that, in a single chapter is extremely hard to do! (and, ...I know it isn't an easy task, either) The paragraphs are just a bit cramped-up, if you could add just a bit more white space it would be an easier read - not too bad though, just a bit.  

...other than that, I can't wait to see what happens next! I'm already hooked on this one, and I'm on the edge of my seat, waiting to see if his 'ex-girlfriend' has something really devious planned...  I hope she does, but that's just me!  ;`)

 ~Jay

 



Author's Response:

Jay,

I'm struggling with the formatting. This is my first post and I'm still becoming familiar with the post system. I'll try get more spacing in. I'll figure it out some day. I just hope that day is soon.

Thanks for the kind words. I appreciate the feedback. Whether Julie has something devious planned or not, you'll just have to wait and see. Don't worry, lots more to come soon. I am nearly finished with this story and wanted to wait unil I'm completely done. But I got impatient. That's ok, gives me a chance to learn the system here. I'm planning on posting new chapters on Tuesday and Fridays. What do you think?

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 18 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Kicked Out

Excellent character building. Damn, Julie sounds like a real jewel! It's hard to image her with big feet though, ...ha!  I'll bet that she has great legs though, huh? ;`)

The way that you slowly reveal, and casually move from day to day, it works very well - perfectly paced. I felt good reading this and it really flows well, even with the constant subliminal messages -'Flashing a cool picture of Julie's smooth Legs!' ;~)

 Shawn must be a real Dick!  Who would do that to her, ...seems like women fall for those types though, and don't realize what they've gotten themselves into until it's too late.

  Nice work Man, I can't wait for the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

Thanks, midnightwriter85.

This chapter is longer and I felt it might be dragging along. I'm really happy you felt good reading it. I'll give you a little spoiler: Shawn shows up again, but it's much later.

BTW, I can't wait to put up the next chapter either. I might do this sooner than later. It does pick up.

 

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Realization

 Aw Man!  Three chapters of slow torture... Naw, jus' kidding! ;) Subtlety, Right?

 Reading this chapter, I could sense a writing style compatible to 'Thomthumb's. Have you read any of his stories? He's one of my favorites. Don't get me wrong, I'm not comparing - it's just that, this chapter just seemed to have that 'Feel' 

 It's a great set-up, the next chapter is going to be a real eye-opener, I assume. And, at the rate she's growing - she'll soon be able to slowly start taking control - that laughter of hers as she realized that she's becoming taller than him, ...oh yeah!  ;`)

  Great Stuff! 



Author's Response:

midnight,

Sorry man. It's slow but there's a good long way with some twists thrown in. Currently, 20 chapters have been written but it's almost done. I know where I'm taking this.

No, I never heard of Thomthumb as an author. Sorry. I'll have to look him up.

Eye opener? You'll just have to wait and see. I will say it gets more intimate. I hope you like it.

Thanks!

 

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Truth Laid Bare

Yep, so it's all out in the open now, ...that elephant in the room, and all that, yep, I said it was going to be a real, 'eye-opener' - and, there it is... She's slowly getting bigger!

...and, the sloo ow torture continues... oh yeah! I love it! I think that you've' mastered' the fine art of Subtlety  And there definitely is an art to it, you know, and you've got it down, Man!  ;`)



Author's Response:

mignight,

Thanks, man. I just discovered DaiOnna and am making my way through it. I had no idea that was you. I kept seeing it pop up in "resents" but the size isn't my thing, so, I hadn't read it. You're really good with description. This is great feedback from an accomplished writer here. I'm honored.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed
Date: May 21 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Truth Laid Bare

  Thank's Man! I don't really have any formal writing experience, as you've probably noticed by now, but I do like the way that this site works.  Allowing anyone to just get their thoughts down, and have a permanent place to record their work - who knows, my random free-writing might get better, and I could have it professionally edited later on after it's finished.  I've read multitudes of stories from hundreds of different authors on this particular type of fantasy/fetish and I've dutifully selected everything that I thought was outstanding about those certain ones, and kept note of it.

  I try and incorporate certain scenes into my own and blend them all together, sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't, ...I just keep on free writing and moving ahead with new ideas.

  That's what it's all about, for me, I guess...  It is what it is!  ;`)



Author's Response:

Sounds good to me.

Keep it up.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 22 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Acceptance

Awesome Man, Loved it!  

*the only tag I noticed that stood out as a little bazaar was the incest tag, did you mistakenly put that in there...?

 



Author's Response:

Things to come

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

  Another great episode. I can definitely appreciate the way, that you can so meticulously maintain the slow growth. This beautiful babe just keeps on getting bigger!  So gradually working away at it; without becoming 'carried away' and drastically changing the rate and jumping her up to fifty feet tall (Over-night)!

  The last chapter, I failed to comment on the musical addition to our protagonist's talents,(and now) finding out that he has actually written his own music as well, ...that's pretty awesome, it definitely adds to the story - character development - and allowing us to really get into his head; (personality) his nervousness, about performing in front of an audience was very relatable.  Then, when he thanked Julie for setting him up, (so to speak) and so suddenly, and "mischievously" forcing him into it. 

  That was just, ...really good!  I really liked that part.  Kinda pulled at the heart strings...

  Nicely done.



Author's Response:

midnight,

I really appreciate your feedback. I'm not sure how much to say here in response to this without giving things away. I just hope I don't disappoint. I will say, she does get bigger.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Erin

Ah Ha Ha, I love Erin! She sounds so funny when she's drunk!  And, Zhoolee too!  Damn Sam!  Retiring to the bedroom with your little sister staying over...

Hm, I don't know 'bout this...  sounds a bit 'Kinky', to say the least! But, it's definitely HOT!  ;`)



Author's Response:

midnight,

Thanks again. Yes, HOT is one of the things I'm going for. Just one; there are several more that will work it's way out as the story goes on.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Revelation

  The length of this chapter seemed to be just long enough.  I had started to imagine Sam actually shrinking - even faster - and dwindling down below their knees. I think it was the 'standing on the chair' that caused me to do that, ...I had to stop, and go back and re-read it again.  Your dialogue is very realistic, It draws you right into the scene. The incest didn't seem to be much of a factor - since you, (conveniently) left those particular details out - but, even knowing that something might have taken place during the night - it didn't really have a degrading feel to it...  Erin comes off as just a 'fun-loving' sister. Yet, her child-like curiosity drives her overbearing personality.  Being physically larger than her older brother and teasing him about it, (including the fact that Julie is even bigger,) really adds steam to the fetishistic aspect of the situation.

  If Sammy were to suddenly find himself shrinking faster and he was actually forced to become their little toy, even though he was completely miserable about it, this could fall into a whole new category!  ;`)

   Sister-lunking?



Author's Response:

midnight,

Sister-lunking? I literally laughed out loud. Thanks again for the feedback, and the humor. :-D

As for length: the original version was over 4000 words. I rewrote this several times. Glad you thought the length was just right.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 23 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Borgford What?

  Hey, Man.  Just popped in to let you know that I'm still with you here! :)  Very nice chapter. The medical jargon and the doctor's office visit was very interesting; a superb and realistic performance, to say the least!  The doctor, portraying such a strange phenomenon within the bounds of his medical expertise and lack of particular understanding on the combination of the virus, and the weakened Pituitary gland: while not allowing Sam to fully appreciate the full ramifications of what could possibly go wrong... Very realistic!!!  Doctors are always holding back, but this one was really holding back!

  ...and Sam's, Mother?  Wait a minute, ...did she really just say that, right in front of him?  Damn, made me think of the old adage,  'ignorance is bliss' couldn't even talk to her at all...  that's for sure.

   Nice episode! Looking forward to the rest of this one.  ;`)

 



Author's Response:

midnightwriter,

Thanks again. This started out being a very long chapter. It's about half the size I began with. I did lots of research -- I think it shows. It's funny, I came up with the name Borgford and thought there would be no such name but when I googled it, sure enough, it's a name. Fortunately, it's not a syndrome. If that ever changes, I guess I'll just have to change the story. But remember, you saw it here first. LOL.

It's far from over with mom and everyone else. You're going to hear more about this syndrome. I'm mostly done with the character building and back story, which means more action. There will be other actors introduced, one in particular that I think everyone will like, and a few more twists to come. 

I'm trying to get through DaiOnna but man, you have a lot of chapters. LOL. I'll be commenting there soon. I just have very little free time, especially since I started actually writing.

Alyssa's Wonderful Day by ImprintedBug Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: An elitist high school girl stumbles across an odd occurrence in her school's bathroom whilst skipping class. Being the control freak that she is, horribleness occurs.
Categories: Butt, Violent, Giantess, Crush, Teenager (13-19), Unaware, Scat
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3987 Read Count: 44149
[Report This] Published: May 18 2017 Updated: May 23 2017
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 19 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Alyssa's Discovery

  I really liked the detailed discription of her - so easy to picture her - switching perspectives and detailing the event  from different angles, I was hoping that there was more shrinkees trapped in there and she would discover several of her friends to rescue, while at the same time, getting the revenge that she so badly wanted.

  Yeah, continue this, or start another one. Nice work!

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed
Date: May 20 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Shit Bitch

Ho, HO! That was a Slam-Dunk!  If I were Alyssa, I'd be beginning to wonder how these girls were so amazingly 'shrunk', ...she had better figure that out before she becomes just a tiny speck on the floor herself!!!  

What if a male teacher was in there too?  Somehow getting trapped in there because he heard one of the girls scream...  And, upon entering the girl's room he was suddenly miniaturized as well.  I wonder how Alyssa would react to him, especially, if he was the only teacher that she actually liked, ...maybe, she has a crush on him?  Oh No! ;`)

 

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Wet Hump

  ...oh wow, ...jus Wow!

   That was, ...like, I don't know, Man -  "Just" Wow! 

  She didn't want to touch his old wrinkly ass, but after, she simply devours what's left of him...  Wow, he never saw her coming! That's for sure!  ;`)

 

Michelle's Daughter by Haile Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Michelle has a secret fantasy she had been hiding for so long, and when her daughter begins to grow into what she considered the perfect girl, the desire to act out her fantasy with her beautiful daughter grew and grew. It all remained a fantasy until she met a Generational by the name of Haile, and everything would soon change.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9969 Read Count: 11186
[Report This] Published: May 31 2017 Updated: May 31 2017
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Michelle's Daughter

  Well, that was the most detailed depiction of this wonderful fantasy! I noticed that you've already posted 10 chapters of 'Legacy' and I was intrigued by this single chapter story. So I dove into it, head-first, with only a slight bit of apprehension- (I'm not really drawn into Vore) but, I do appreciate a well delivered shrinking story... and, or a Giantess tale.  Your descriptions are so unique - well placed - and vividly detailed.

  I especially enjoyed the way that Michelle explored her daughter's gigantic body.  Secretly admiring her tremendous attributes as the giant teen-girl obliviously sat reading her book.  Unaware of the thoughts that were overflowing inside her tiny mother's head.

  Extremely well written.  I'll be heading over to 'Legacy' next!  Great Stuff! ;`)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I thoroughly enjoyed writing this story. Even though it is a first for me, having any sort of familial elements (the mother and daughter trope etc) I hope I did well for a first run. I've been writing for almost 15 years or so and there's always more firsts to be had. ^.^

In actuality, the Legacy you refer to is actually the old, retired novels on my old retired pen-name, ralf_wolfs. I wrote the word Legacy in front of all of my old retired novels so that there is some difference between them and the new revisions I'll be posting under this new pen-name,

I am the author of The Realm of Melanie, The Realm of Kendra, The Realm of Angela, and The Realm of Haile, or more commonly refered to as The Realm of 'X'. Uuuunfortunately they're all vore novels and go a whole lot more in depth than this one did. Michelle's Daughter was just a short story, while the other 4 are full fledged novels approaching 120k-140k words each! Although I've had people who aren't into that kind of thing love my writing so I'd let you be the judge of that.

Be sure to expect even more short stories as I write them, in case my main works aren't your cup of tea. Thanks for the review and the well written comment! ^.^

Titaness Dawn & Lyrazilla by Nothingness Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

A tpyical Pokemon giantess rampaging story I wrote back when I was still in high school.

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I do not own Pokemon or any of the franchises.


Categories: Violent, Crush, Giantess, Destruction, Vore, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4657 Read Count: 8026
[Report This] Published: June 25 2017 Updated: June 25 2017
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

  Wow, that was terrific, Man.  Your discriptions are pretty good, with the causual display of horrific terror playing out by these two mega-sized girls.  I like the way that, they just stroll along through this miniature city and help themselves to the fleeing masses - their little juicy bodies, become a tasty treat for them.

 Their screaming reactions, and frantic escape attempts, causing them to run like scattering little ants - running for their lives, ...only to be so easily captured and then swiftly devoured, alive!

  Nicely done for a 16 year old, very nice!  ;`)



Author's Response:

Thanks dude! I appreciate your review and keep up the awesome work on your story. ;)

Cold Case by Duggernaut Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

Straight out of Quantico, special agent Abel Stafford is assigned to the mundane world of cold case missing persons. His new partner, a much older and decidedly eclectic agent believes a series of seemingly random unsolved disappearances are related to a single perpetrator. When his partner vanishes from a busy crowded street, Abel gets drawn into a cat and mouse game with the woman his partner was pursuing.

  

 


Categories: Vore, Adventure, Insertion, Entrapment, Butt, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13198 Read Count: 54793
[Report This] Published: June 29 2017 Updated: August 23 2017
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Second Contact

  Just discovered this and I must say, I had to drop a review! ;`) I'm really enjoying the suspense that you've got going here, I too, was kinda waiting for 'Mo's Story' but hell, man. This is some excellent writing, Dugger.  My imagination is going crazy trying to figure out what this 'Lily' suspect' is all about, ...assuming that "it" is, a 'she' - and, she is 'somehow' shrinking her victims down and, ...well, there's that 'imagination' stirring again!

  I really like the longer chapters and the characters, too. It feels like you're really building up to something incredibly special with this one. Looking forward to the next update!



Author's Response:

Thanks a bunch for taking the time to share a review midnight, much appreciated. My intent is to return to Mo once I wrap Tom's Story up.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Dream Weaver

  Whoa, what a nice dream scene. I think that the mysterious Ms.Lily must've left a little somthun'-somthun'  inside his apartment, with that fragrantly scented perfume,... some kind of little 'hint', as to what's going to be his future - if he continues to track her - the way that he is... Go for it, Joe! ;`)

 Very nicely done, Dugger. So easy to picture her in that alley, I could almost feel the heat coming off of her tremendous body! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the props midnight, glad you approve!

Spring Breaks by Itty-Bitty-Mini-Committee Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Rebecca Sullivan all but owns her classmates already, but she wants to push the envelope that much farther over spring break . . .

I'd like the community to get involved, further instructions in the End Notes! 


Categories: Entrapment, Breasts, Butt, Feet, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8586 Read Count: 40638
[Report This] Published: June 30 2017 Updated: August 03 2017
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 30 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Spring Breaks

Okay, I'll give Ms. Sullivan a shot. Sound's intriguing :`)

Name is - Jay Smith, 36

-Male, 6'0 tall 160 lbs. Light brown hair, Blue eyes, medium build

Wednesday - Vial - 3

Personality - Strong silent type. Divorced 2 years, OTR Trucker - 'Owner/Operator', I set my own schedule most of the time. 

I have a serious problem with beautiful women, I wish they were all giantess! ;)

 

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed
Date: June 30 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Spring Breaks

  Oh, I almost forgot! I'll leave it up to her, if I should live or die, ...but, I hope not to get killed, at least not too quickly...

 BTW, you could make me the 'Cool Bus Driver' that everybody like's to hang with, ...always has a buzz going - and looks like an younger version of Steven Tyler from Arrowsmith. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your addition, I'll get on that! Hopefully, people go for Monday and Tuesday so I don't have to fill those with my own characters. That'd kill the fun! 

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 03 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Monday, March 23

  Awesome intro, ...loved it! Shows Rebecca's Nonchalant attitude toward her puny victims. And, revealing that she has obviously done this before, too.  I don't know what Cameron's gonna think, but, ...I thought it was simply awesome!

 So, if I'm on Wednesday then, I'm gonna be five inches tall? COOL!

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  ~@Lily - Found your personal description to be very attractive. You sound like someone that I'd be very interested in, ...when you said that you get embarrassed whenever someone compliments your 'cuteness' - I found that very attractive,  just saying... 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.