Penname: midnightwriter85 [Contact] Real name: Jay
Member Since: September 14 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

  Like so many that come here to escape, I enjoy reading these tales too.  I'm trying to write some of my own, but I'm finding that it's a lot harder than it appears...


  Hopefully, some of this amazing talent will rub off on me!  I am trying to get better at fantasy writing, and I really appreciate getting reviews from everyone who reads.


 


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Reviews by midnightwriter85
Summary:

In an all new story, I shrink myself to spy on cheerleaders in the shower, but what'll happen when I stay shrunk?


Categories: Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18419 Read Count: 61001
[Report This] Published: November 15 2010 Updated: August 26 2014
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The beginning

Amazing story!  Your perspective is quite impressive.  Nicely detailed, and very involving as the progression developes.  Playfully flagitous giantess' are realistic and natural...

The suspence continues in every chapter... I hope Mom captures him, maybe she'll have some place to keep him safe from the dog?

Summary:

Two friends, Danielle and Matt, reunite. Danielle has a secret that she's kept quiet for many years. This is one little visit that Matthew Collins surely won't forget soon.

*Now including the actual story! Hooray!*


Categories: Butt, Body Exploration, Gentle, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14101 Read Count: 29333
[Report This] Published: December 08 2011 Updated: January 21 2014
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Awesome tale!  This was so easy to fall into, a very natural and realistic interaction between the two of them.  Matt's fear of her, being very much a part of the whole thing in the begining, along with her actually telling him about that lil' boy on the playground...

Danielle's girlish innocents, and her over excitment, really drew me into the story!

This was fricking Awesome!  I'd have to say this is one of the best storys that I've read in a long, Long, (emphasis on the second Long) Time!

Loved it!  ;) 

World of Silver by geeman Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 77]
Summary:

In a world where giants rule and humans are left to scrounge for scraps, a man named Tommy finds himself in the possesion of a mysterious silver-haired giantess.

 

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*Hey guys, I added drawing-less chapters for those that prefer to go: full imagination with their reading or those who don't like cartoony drawings or something. It's just an option!

Someone let me know if doing two versions of chapter's is breaking a rule and I'll take the extra ones down, thanks!


Categories: Adventure, Butt, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Maternal, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74011 Read Count: 123140
[Report This] Published: July 04 2013 Updated: July 30 2014
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Tommy better behave himself!  Kimmy might mistake him for a 'Funsize' snack!  The size difference between them is so great that... well, it just seems that Kimmy would just slurp him right up! Ha!

Very realistically told though, I found myself seeing what Tom was... the discriptions work nicely...

Great Bio's too!

The artwork is formidable to the story.  I'd like to see more of that aspect.  It really brings the tale to life. 



Author's Response:

Yeah the size difference is MASSIVE, like I've said before, Kim is a special case, most Lyrians would have trouble not killing Humans when they interact to this level!

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

When I said the drawings were 'formidable' to the story,  what I meant was just that whenever there is no pictures in a story, the reader is left to imagine what the characters actually look like.

Which might be very different from what the author is trying to portray, and each individual reader will proably have a slightly different image inside their mind!

However, when you add pictures, or drawings, that instantly forces the viewer to procieve that exact image, hence- Very 'Formidable' to the story...

Also, with the extreme size difference you've got here, that really helps out the story!

More drawings could save a lot of repetitive discriptions and a hell of a lot of excessive writing trying to discribe the enormous landscape that spreads out around this minature little dude...

Lastly, your drawings are really good!  I wish I could draw like that!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Im glad you like them! Maybe I'll do a drawing every couple of chapters for scenes I like... 

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

This is a fasinating woman.  Her beautiful body would be so gigantic for a 1/2 inch guy. I really enjoyed that little tour of her soft landscape...

I'll have to admit though, that I've only read this latest chapter, but, I'll be starting at the begining now, and reading it straight through...

realistic dialog too! 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I hope you like the rest of the story!

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed
Date: February 08 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Gruesome...   "*.*"



Author's Response:

Hey, you know what she is, it makes sence that she's killed people!

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 14 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

Wow, what a turn of events!  I so glad that little Ron didn't get it! whew...

Nice chapter Gadget!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Ron's a little warrior, it'd be a shame if he was killed...

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

Nice update Gadget.  It's been a while though, I had to go back and re-read a couple chaps'

This was good. Kim's milk is powerful stuff. She's like a goddess... or maybe she is?

Great work!

P.S. Did ya get my email a while back?  I been really busy myself too. 



Author's Response:

It has been a while no? I didn't get your email, if you want you can send it again. Thanks for the comments!

Summary:

18 year-old Liz is a British Princess who just happens to be 300 feet tall. Slender, young and beautiful, she moves to America, and becomes a celebrity after she accidentally knocks over the Statue of Liberty. But don't get in her way, or you could end up underfoot...

 

Celebrity Crush is a broad satire of celebrity culture and the folly of ignoring wealth inequality, wrapped up in a rollicking giantess adventure that's bloody-good fun. Liz stomps on her fans and employees like the insects they are, and one-ups Godzilla when she takes a shortcut through a busy highway. With a special guest appearance by Christina Hendricks.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, New World Order, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36589 Read Count: 95697
[Report This] Published: November 02 2013 Updated: October 04 2014
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02 2014 Title: Chapter 10: uvwxyz Guest Chapter 4: Liz vs LA pt 3

Liz could use some more tinies. Why not head for China and become there Giant Goddess, 'let the people eat cake' and such as it twas said among the elite?  Lol  ;D

Summary:

College quarterback and all-American weenie Joss Friedman bites off more than he can chew when he meets an aspiring journalist looking for a new story.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11113 Read Count: 5111
[Report This] Published: November 20 2013 Updated: December 17 2013
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 17 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is so funny, Rip Zamboni?  Josh Friedman? Alpha Dogs, and Wild Squirrels? 

Tori 'Butt',  Hilarious!   I love this!   ;)

Summary:

In trouble with the law, Scott Stevens avoids jail time by being indefinitely shrunk and placed under the supervision of his household. Now at the 24/7 mercy of his gigantic family, Scott may have been better off going behind bars.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31556 Read Count: 103344
[Report This] Published: December 05 2013 Updated: January 21 2014
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: On the Tip of Her Tongue

Whoo-hoo!   Magnificent dream sequence... 

Vivid discriptions  =   _ '*.*'_



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Summary: Anna continues her vengeance fueled killing spree. Unfortunately, when she gets caught in the act of disposing another victim she must take the life of an unwitting witness. Not that she minds.
Categories: Toilet, Giantess, Feet, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12349 Read Count: 26678
[Report This] Published: January 02 2014 Updated: July 03 2014
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Whoa, every nerve in my body has been frazzled after reading all 5 chapters...

So much debauchery and wickedness, the exquisite details are poured out like a steaming bucket of blood and guts.  It was nice of you to apologize before hand for the little rape scene, but I cannot figure out why?    It was fantastic!

Very realistically discribed, I love the way you write, although I don't care for the large blocks of squished-up text... (Kind of, hard on the eyes)

But, I'm not complaining, this is GREAT!

 

Shrinkuccino by Benton Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

I am asked to sample a new espresso called "Shrinkuccino" at work, which is measured to shrink me down to half my normal height for four hours. How will I manage myself at that height, especially with so many curious girls around, both customers and co-workers?

UPDATE: Due to popular demand, as well as my overactive imagination, a second and third chapter have been written!


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Gentle, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26602 Read Count: 21763
[Report This] Published: January 04 2014 Updated: January 26 2014
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 25 2014 Title: Chapter 2: That Night

The detail was simply surreal! Literally! This was told so realistically, that it seemed to retreve memory from my first time... (it only lacked the profound 'smell' of sex)

Jackie reminds me alot of my first girlfriend. (You have NO idea!) She was the best to me... even though she was three years older at the time, she let me down so easily when she was through with me...  I'll never forget her, but this somehow brought back all those memorys? 

Benton, you've definitely got a real knack for this type of writing, and you've got a Masterpiece going with this one...  the only thing that could be better would be if he was even smaller, but still , you hit all the right notes!

Great stuff Benton!



Author's Response:

Wow, that's really cool that Jackie reminds you of someone! Your girlfriend must have been really awesome. Jackie wasn't based on any specific person for me, but bits and pieces of many people as well as my own imagination. I strive to write realistic characters especially in these kinds of works. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Shrinkuccino

I found this both exciting and interestingly discriptive. The different reactions from the giantess's as their personalitys' were delivered without restraint.. Being as they were observing this tiny miniature male as if he were still a man, but- they had suddenly doubled in size, twice their normal size!

35" tall and he was still attempting to casually go out among the 'thankfully' mostly all female customers, and 'serve' them the free samples...Thrilling!  To think of actually doing that?  Wow... I don't know if I could?  I found this written very eloquently, a few minor errors, that could be easily ignored, as your continually changing situation set up, more than kept it interesting, it was very exciting!

I would like to see him much smaller, but not the 'Micro-sized', but, maybe just a half-foot tall, 6-inches.  I would like to see what would happen if he would drink another cup, and lost half his size once again...  17" Tall !  yeah, that's about right!

I think your writing is excellent, and your tale was very suspenceful.  I would love to see another Chapter  Great Stuff!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am actually working on a second chapter as we speak.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29 2014 Title: Chapter 3: The Next Morning

Just caught up with this final chapter... great way to tie-it-up, though, I kept expecting him to have a cup of coffee at breakfast, and well... you know! ;)

Your spin-off sounds very interesting.  You could have all sorts of people coming in, (even through the drive thru) ordering coffee and swiftly exiting into the unknown...

Short, quick,  little clips, that just give enough to raise the pressure! 

Ex:  Joe handed the coffee to his wife to hold while he parked the car in front of the beauty salon, she handed it back to him after he parked and she went inside to get her hair done...

Upon returning, she thinks that he has left the car, as she opens the door and see's his clothe's lying there on the seat?  

She would somehow discover her tiny naked husband and....

___can't wait for the spin-offs!

 




Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! I am working on the spinnoff now, and I have to say one of the chapters I'm working on is very similar to the scenario you described!

Ths spinoff is going to be fun because it is a bit of a change for me--I am used to writing longer stories, and this will give me a chance to do short stories based around a common concept but with a wide variety of possibilities.

Summary:

A Hispanic California college student named Maria acquires an entire shrunken prison complete with all the inmates and guards. 

 

This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events and incidents are either the products of the author’s imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Insertion, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28212 Read Count: 47376
[Report This] Published: January 04 2014 Updated: March 01 2015
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24 2014 Title: Chapter 7: The Brutal Art of Blackmail Pt.2

The discriptions were very clearly, well thought out; intensified, and extremely vile.   In this scene, an entrapped group of victims are eaten alive... one at a time!

Damn... I'll bet the 'vore-lovers' are sweating for this one...

Great work, but, I had to speed read through this... I'm not into the 'Vore' stuff. 

-I think you've been studying Tinyone's work too much... ;`)



Author's Response:

I'm not studing tinyone's work *closes link to tinyones profile*

I tried to add a little bit for everyone, but your right this was a vore intense chapter. As time goes on I'll probably get a little more diverse in my methods.

 

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 11 2014 Title: Chapter 6: The Brutal Art of Blackmail Pt. 1

Just read all 6 ch.'s,  straight through.  This is extremely good!  I like the desciptions you come up with, and the shifting scenes as you switch around between them.  The way that you've set this up, makes the possiblitys limitless...

Fantastic work Man!  Love it!



Author's Response:

This review made my day. Nobody has ever admitted to reading one of my stories straight through, and I wanted to let you know that your review meant a lot.

I'm extremely pleased that you enjoyed it and I look foward to hearing from you in future chapters.

Erica's House by realRS Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

When every member of her family is shrunk to doll size 16 year old Erica becomes head of the house. 

Will the Rockwell family adapt to the once shy Erica being in charge?  Will Erica let the power go to her head?  


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, New World Order, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28672 Read Count: 54042
[Report This] Published: January 16 2014 Updated: September 29 2016
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection

Shifting back in time to see how it all began,... Nice set up!  The next chapter will then explain more about what happened, and allow for some character development great idea....

Erica seems to be enjoying that idea of becoming an enormous giantess,  Hmm, with her family members; refering to them as pets?  Already?  strange?

I'd like to see chapter two first, before making any suggestions about what I'd like to see happen within the story, but it looks to be quite intriging...

I'll be following along,  can't wait to see how she treats her parents!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it, hope you enjoy where it goes.

Summary:

Ben gets in trouble and serves his punishment with his teacher.


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10068 Read Count: 115196
[Report This] Published: January 30 2014 Updated: April 06 2014
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 06 2014 Title: Chapter 7: After School Tutoring.

Hole-ly Crap!  I hope he gets outta there before it's too late!  Ha!  Naw, just kiddding!  She should just keep him in there for the rest of the day...

Nice work ! 

-one bit of critique though.  Stop repeating 'Miss Silva's' name, everytime you begin a sentence.  You could just say 'Her', or 'She' instead.  The reader already knows who you're reffering to, and you don't need to keep repeating 'Miss Silva' all the time...

Other than that,  Great Chapter Tom! 



Author's Response: Thanks Midnight! You make a very valid point. I used Miss Silva's name 71 times in this chapter! I fixed it and replaced a few of them with some pronouns. Now there are only 45 'Miss Silvas' in it.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 05 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Shopping

I don't want to sound like I'm trying to take over your story, so I'll just keep it short.

Try lenghtening your sentences, add some more detailed words...

Smells, textures, sounds and feelings, discribe what Ben is seeing... Everything!



Author's Response: Hmm. I thought I did a pretty decent job with detail. I know I dont have all the senses down but I believe I had a good amount of detail, especially in the beginning. As for length, I think the length is fine for now; I probably will increase it as I write more. I think I got the details in alright. If we were comparing stories, yes, you would have the most descriptive story, but I think mine has more action within one chapter. I cant deny we have different writing styles so I understand how you want my story to be seen by your format. As for the senses: True, I dont have about anything for smells, texture, but I think I got the feelings part. Sounds? I guess I could add some, like the car ignition, but I dont think it is that necessary to add, "Ben heard the car engine roar, he knew he was in for a ride". I mean I could add it, but I think it should relate directly to Ben's experience, like the sound of Miss Silva's panties snap or something. Anyway, thanks for the review midnightwriter!