Penname: TFWNoGiantGF [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: September 13 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Former greentexter! Current gts writer/renderer! My things are obscure hipster anime, comedy-focused stories, and ocasionally ridiculous sizes.


"I say chase your dreams! Even the wet ones. Especially the wet ones." - Kei, Dubs From Heck


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Reviews by TFWNoGiantGF
Apologies by AnonWriter Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

A request from /d:

Giant gloomy girl forces herself on a tiny guy.

So yep, that pretty much sums it up.


Categories: Humiliation, Teenager (13-19), Entrapment, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: The Shrinking Sequence
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1364 Read Count: 14302
[Report This] Published: June 13 2014 Updated: June 13 2014
Reviewer: Trap Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 13 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm a bit jealous that a new person has entered my turf, honestly- but this is the best way to do that.

 

The girl's attitude seems pretty compelling. The inspiration can be seen- the pacing's a little awkward, but that's pointed out.

 

One thing I didn't get was the end. The rest of it seemed a little comic, and it suddenly ends with tragedy? It's not that I dislike tone shifts- in fact, I think the community needs some more FEELS- but it seems pretty sudden. Was that intentional?

I also usually don't like lots of dialogue, but that's more personal. Your characters' tones are pretty much fine; their dynamics are entertaining, moreso than a lot of stories like this.

Lastly- IS there any resolution behind the mystery of disappearing people? Or is it just that... A MYSTERY?



Author's Response:

Bitch pls. I'm so in your turf it's insane.

Well, you know, I like to keep it sort of realistic (well, what do you think would happen) and I don't plan to develop these characters any further, so might as well pop one. Problem is, both my insertion stories ended like this, while my crush stories have characters which are stupidly invulnerable :P

Anyhow, I'd actually been doing something on the lines of this for a bit. I once asked for a picture for 'inspiration' which led to "Nothing Left," and I then did a Christmas present (which I never got around to posting.) "Networking" was for a friend, etc.

Anyways, yea, I dunno about the 'explanation.' I never really liked the whole 'government experiment' shtick but might as well say SOMETHING on the matter. I like the idea of sudden, complete, shrinking - talking someone and boom all you can see is their feet. That incredibly fast power shift is great, so I'll need an explanation for that.

 

Summary:

A young girl comes into posession of a jewelry case, entirely unremarkable sparing it's fascinating contents.

 

Been writing this one up for a while, so it will be the first story I will post in chapter format, seeing as it is yet to be finished. Also the first micro (as opposed to macro) story I've written, so do point out any incongruities or improvements I could make.

Would love to have comments, reviews, and critique. Thanks.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Lesbians, Odor, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20967 Read Count: 175012
[Report This] Published: June 16 2014 Updated: June 28 2016
Reviewer: Trap Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 17 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures

A simple premise handled it very well.

The problem a lot of authors here have is pacing; their lines are too short, too long, or have choppy transitions from paragraph to paragraph. But your story has a definite flow to it; a logically progressing sequence with a buildup of tension, every event escalating before they reach a climax. And you leave enough up to the reader while providing sufficient details and a wide enough vocabulary without being overly verbose. It's got variety, even if it's just describing a few simple events.

You definitely know how to use the medium. Honestly, my only complaint is that it seems so self-contained and complete in itself, I can't see how you'll keep the audience hooked next chapter.

But I'm sure I will soon~

Summary:

A girl loses a bet.


Categories: Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 899 Read Count: 18444
[Report This] Published: March 17 2015 Updated: March 17 2015
Reviewer: Trap Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 17 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Lauren's Sock

Simple story, but pretty sweet - just how I like it. This really revolves around one of my biggest kinks, so forgive me if I'm really squee-ish over it.

The beginning is absolutely perfect. Just leaps right into the action, and goes through the senses without feeling like a checklist. You definitely know the right elements of a foot/sock to focus on to get people's attention, and the right way to present relations and interactions between characters. Loved Lauren's casualness about the whole business - as the size threads are willing to tell us, math is always sexy. Really emphasized Ashley's position, and contributed to the narrative. The progression between scenes felt very natural, and it was a lot easier to follow than many stories on the same subject, I find. Perfectly encapsulated the fear and claustrophobia of being stuck in a shoe without the confusion.

Still, some bits here and there feel just a tad... Blocky, maybe? "She felt" occurs 3 times in the first 2 paragraphs, and a few other phrases repeat. Similarly, a lot of sentences close together begin with "Ashley" or "Lauren", which isn't bad at all, but just a bit more variety in sentence structure would be nice.

Also - this is not a valid criticism at all, and simply represents personal bias from my own trapped-in-shoe-based kinks - but I wish we could see what happened between the library and home, and a few more notes on the night. But that might've gotten in the way of the short, simple nature of the story - and I'm in no position to complain about story length. This story does the job well.

So, yeah - pretty much spot-on for what it is.



Author's Response:

Yea, I'm fixing it up as I go. I should've edited this a little more thoroughly.

And really, nothing of value happened between the library and the house. I could have gone into more detail but I wanted this to be quality over quantity, you know?

Satsuki by TheWoobis Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A two-part story about your life with Satsuki Kiryuin. The second part will be more intimate.


Categories: Giantess, Destruction, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4415 Read Count: 13978
[Report This] Published: March 20 2015 Updated: January 21 2016
Reviewer: Trap Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 21 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Autumn

First off - welcome to the site! The threads lead me here, so forgive me if some of their abraisiveness has rubbed off on me.

I lean more towards retro animu than newer ones (more Project A-ko than Kill La Kill), so I'm probably not part of the target audience here. But I can follow it pretty well, still (and know enough to say that you spelled "Ryuko" incorrectly).

As it begins, I can't help but feel like it's just a little cliched, and the writing feels kinda confusing - but you quickly come into your own by the time Satsuki starts growing. Watching the interaction between the sisters was pretty fun; you definitely know how to express Satsuki's huegness. There's a good amount of variety in their one-sided fight, too - that's really nice. Every bit of prose going into detail about her body is perfection, more-or-less.

A few tiny gripes: paragraphing needs improvement. It's an issue I had when I first did stuff on this site, too. I personally feel it might flow better if each line of dialogue were in a separate paragraph, but that's just my perception. And more of a personal thing, but I don't really get Satsuki and the POV characters' train of thought during the end - it always confuses me when a giantess spares the main character for no reason and the main character is completely submissive.

Still, a really good story! Don't want to boss you around or anything, but if you want to keep writing, you might consider doing a shrinking story for your next piece. Growth is amazing, but from what I've seen here, you seem to be much more adept at writing personal, one-on-one interactions between characters than scenes of wide-scale destruction.

Summary:

A group of students are shunk down on a petri dish and exposed to germs.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Entrapment, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1412 Read Count: 12694
[Report This] Published: August 10 2015 Updated: August 10 2015
Reviewer: Trap Signed
Date: August 22 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Shrunk and killed

I'm a big micro fan - and a snot fan - so this was pretty good. Just the right amount of buildup, perfect reaction from the young ladies in the classroom, and a pretty soft, squishy science level all contributed to it.

Granted, since it was short, I can see places where you could add some more details - it seems to shift to the teacher's point of view partway through, without describing what kind of bacteria the shrunken students see. And this may just be a knee-jerk reaction, but I almost feel like the gender thing was kinda tacked-on, and could easily be replaced with something else that could give the same effect. Still, I enjoyed reading it, and I hope you enjoyed writing it!

Rawr :3 by AnonWriter Rated: G starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

A cute girl does stuffs with her pet(s) :3


Categories: Humiliation, Teenager (13-19), Feet, Mouth Play, Vore, Entrapment, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2689 Read Count: 29450
[Report This] Published: January 15 2016 Updated: June 18 2016
Reviewer: Trap Signed
Date: January 16 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Lessgo!

All these adorbs

Nice style going on here, in terms of the different type of girl and writing. The narration feels a bit more conversational and personal with this tone. Interested in seeing where it goes.



Author's Response:

Literally everything I do is conversational, right?



Author's Response:

Literally everything I do is conversational, right?

Summary:

Whether against elves or demons or slimes or even fairies, humanity is such a small and insignificant race that no matter what they encounter, their scattered kingdoms are doomed. These are the stories of humanity, one of the most inferior species in the Shared Realm, and their interactions with the superior, more significant species around them.


Categories: Giantess, Fantasy
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11914 Read Count: 40571
[Report This] Published: August 20 2017 Updated: July 17 2020
Reviewer: Trap Signed
Date: July 18 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Slime

Oh gosh, it returns!

I'm amazed at the pace it builds up, with the consciousness and scale both becoming less connected to the humans with time. The sheer scope you led up to while keeping everything in perspective was great. Looks like humanity doesn't have much chance against anything here!

Omnipotent Mom by DankMip Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

The story of what happens when your typical suburban mom obtains unlimited power to do whatever she likes to the entire world~


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Destruction, Humiliation, Incest, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5213 Read Count: 91268
[Report This] Published: December 28 2017 Updated: April 19 2020
Reviewer: Trap Signed
Date: August 05 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Discovery

This is a pretty fun little romp! The characterization is absolutely engaging, and lead to some nice action. The sense that the title character doesn't exactly understand the scope of what she's causing only further enhances the power disparsity. The chapter "Momdom and Chocolate" is probably my favorite, because it draws the most attention to that fundamental disconnect - and I love the descriptions of her accidental actions, and nonchalant reactions afterwards. It's also nice how not every aspect of reality control entirely revolves around worshipping her; you get across a great sense of her personality from how replays of her favorite shows and insistence on health and hygiene float around her idle commands. The whimsical tone, lack of destruction, and mind-controlled happiness everyone's in make you really cheer along, it's like a comfortable visit.

Now, for the constructive criticism: the word "mom" appears 98 times so far in the story, not counting variations like "mommy". This isn't incredibly jarring when the kids are in focus, but it gets a little odd when they're more minor characters: more specifically, upon the founding of Mommyland. If Jenny had found the amulet, would she name the planet "Daughterland", or "Sisterland"? Granted, now that her children are getting an expanded role, I feel like this'll be less apparent.

As well, I think the story could really benefit from a few more juicy, delicious peaks at life in Mommyland. I like what I've seen of that, and you've brought some nice world-shaking changes; and while I love the pacing, taking a moment to pause the action, and really soak in just how much this woman has changed everyday life, how her immense curves look to the world, could really round out the story even fuller.

Overall, top-notch stuff. Very excited to see how the dynamics change with time, both with the extra players involved and the mother getting more used to her role. I love it when the power scales shift, and someone who was below a set of feet is now towering in the clouds!



Author's Response:

I really appreciate the review! As someone who's super ammeture and doesn't write very often, I'm really thankful for the big feedback 

Right now I'm actually considering taking back the newest chapter, and steering the story in a different direction. Having the next newest chapter be from the perspective of a normal person as they succumb to the whims of their new maternal deity; as well as having the story primarily focus on her. Though I'm definitely going to go through and do a quick edit at some point and replace some of the "mom"'s now that you pointed it out :P

hope you're having an awesome day!

Summary:

Hello everyone!

This is my first real story on Giantessworld. Naturally, its just going to be high-quality smut (at least I hope it ends up being high quality). This is going to be a sizefic in the context of Shrink High. If you haven't played it already, I suggest you do. It would help your enjoyment of this immensely, though you should still like it either way.

Please feel free to comment and review this and give honest feedback, I want to improve and make the best Shrink High content (and size content in general) as I can!


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Legwear, Mouth Play, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15072 Read Count: 42905
[Report This] Published: February 03 2018 Updated: August 04 2020
Reviewer: Trap Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04 2020 Title: Chapter 5: A Sole-Crushing experience, featuring V-D and Erika!

It's not often I see such a great balance between Mia's confident attitude and the little dere-dere breaks in it; Erika's ditzy, carefree demeanor and her genuinely terrifying skills; the interplay between the two; genuine attempts for a "shrinkee" to escape, offset by their powerlessness; and a description of feet that feels erotic without exaggerating their shape or smell.

If anything, I feel like it could use a little more of that dialogue - just because you've nailed down the character relations so much, it feels like a shame to have some of their discussion described so generally.

But in all, it makes me flash back to being a teen and first discovering the fetish. Great work.



Author's Response:

Wow, I got a great review from a fellow writer! (though calling myself a writer is a bit much since I've only done a few short stories in private for people lmao)
Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad I was able to bring back a shadow of those nice memories you had, and I'll take your advice and feelings on the dialogue into account for any future chapters.
I'm also ecstatic that you thought I captured their personalities well with it. I feel like that's pretty difficult to do when handling characters one didn't create on their own; I feel like I've really accomplished something when you say as much about it.

 

I was a little worried about how I did on the dialogue but I suppose it was misplaced! Thanks once again for the review, its ones like these that encourage me to continue writing at all.

Oasis by Aphrodite Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A poor speck forced to witness a pair of giga giantesses enjoying each other at the world's expense


Categories: Lesbians, Giantess, Crush, Breasts, Destruction
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2698 Read Count: 10259
[Report This] Published: May 28 2018 Updated: May 28 2018
Reviewer: Trap Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You wrote a situation that's incomprehensible, chaotic, and confusing to the city. And still, you made it easy for readers to understand every action going on, and focus in on them. Each movement has weight to it, and gets enough attention; and yet, it leaves enough to the imagination, and doesn't have any padding. I'm surprised at how invested I got in these nameless characters, with bodies and thoughts only visible in small glimpses.

Great work!

Summary:

A list of Giantess-focused manga that I have read, for anyone who wants suggestions. Feel free to leave a review with any series that I missed.

I'm planning on combining all of the chapters into one list at some point, but first I have to reformat/rewrite the first chapter


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Manga
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1864 Read Count: 147502
[Report This] Published: September 19 2018 Updated: December 21 2020
Reviewer: Trap Signed
Date: August 24 2020 Title: Chapter 1: List

Some suggestions:

- I'm seconding Jim on Oversized Sextet (Ishuzoku Kyoushoujo Sextet!) - fantasy harem aventure manga with lots of minigts - https://www.mangaupdates.com/series.html?id=154803
- Gokudo Parasites - comedy-mystery about a shrunken yakuza and a female detective - https://www.mangaupdates.com/series.html?id=156005
- Little Nozomi and Big Yume (Chiisai Nozomi To Ooki Na Yume) - slice-of-life about a tiny girl and a shut-in girl sharing an apartment - https://www.mangaupdates.com/series.html?id=153844
- Farewell Peter Pan (Sayonara Peter Pan) - post-apocalyptic horror about a world where children are shrunken down at birth; has both male giants and giantess with violent crush scenes - https://www.mangaupdates.com/series.html?id=140804
- Girls That Have Their Reasons (Wake Ari na Kanojo-tachi) - yuri romance in a world with monster girls. One main character is a "titan" - usually normal-size, but periodically grows into a giantess. - https://www.mangaupdates.com/series.html?id=168540
- My Hero Academia (Boku no Hero Academia) - shounen action about superheroes. One secondary character, Mount Lady, has the power to transform into a giantess. - https://www.mangaupdates.com/series.html?id=112459



Author's Response:

I'm actually already reading a couple of those, I'll check out the rest. After that, I'll probably have enough new recommendations to justify adding another chapter

Summary:

This is kind of a collection of any random one-off stories that I've made, stuff that isn't part of an ongoing series, or just random chapters that wouldn't fit anywhere else. Expect lots of focus on the rear end and related smells, but things might also go off in other directions, who knows?

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 57531 Read Count: 170120
[Report This] Published: April 05 2019 Updated: July 30 2023
Reviewer: Trap Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 01 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Voyeur Filmmaker

Still amazed at how well the Sodachi/Matsudo dynamic is kept true to the text, and elaborated on.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. Your chapters laid the groundwork exceedingly well, I assure you.

Summary:

What would happen if the entire planet earth were trapped inside the cell phone of an ordinary motherly housewife? Being like a god over billions of people as she goes through her normal daily routine~


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1681 Read Count: 17642
[Report This] Published: July 11 2019 Updated: July 15 2019
Reviewer: Trap Signed
Date: August 02 2019 Title: Chapter 1: The beginning

Great seeing stuff from you again! The themes are familiar, but the new format puts a pretty sweet twist on it. I definitely second ChompChomp's question - in chapter 2, who is our motherly giantess speaking with? Someone in her pocketed planet, or someone off it?

And if she didn't want people in her smartphone spying on her in the night, she shoulda bought a VPN.

I'm curious about her reaction to everyone seeing her; and also, excited to see if the app has any extra functionality. Rewind/fast-forward buttons? A pedometer to keep her moving? Globe-wide filters? That's not even getting into how her other apps for browsing, chatting, or gaming might affect her~



Author's Response:

This story is pretty similar to my other ones! But I think this setting is my favorite. I absolutely adore the idea of a normal woman with all her flaws and personality, being an all powerful deity to millions in the palm of her hand

 

Glad you enjoy it! I'll definitely be putting out another chapter soon c:

It Never Ends by Spotters Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: A startling discovery about the nature of reality.
Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2664 Read Count: 6709
[Report This] Published: August 21 2019 Updated: August 21 2019
Reviewer: Trap Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just got sent this by a friend - it's a really awesome glimpse into infinity from below. Makes me wonder about all the universes Susan and Micah are just idling close to!

The jumps into fantasy were nice, too - I usually expect sci-fi aliens with this, which is fine, but it's interesting thinking about princesses and fairies existing at super scale. Maybe some of our art was inspired, subconsciously, by movements and people in the worlds far outside our universe...

Summary:

Follow the adventures of a millimeter-sized planet earth as it floats in the air of an ordinary girl's bedroom. Re-appearing like nothing ever happened, no matter how hard it's destroyed


Categories: Destruction, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1362 Read Count: 4999
[Report This] Published: June 29 2020 Updated: June 29 2020
Reviewer: Trap Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 30 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Strange Blue Ball

Ahah, they don't even get the chance to see their goddess showering!

Unaware feels unique here. The setup establishes a good balance between people being so tiny they vanish instantly, and giving readers time to empathize with and understand them.

Really curious about what this gal's like - feels like we've only seen teensy peeks, and that's exciting

Summary:

Eda from Owl House unawarely destroys some planets.

Knowing about the show is not necessary. 


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Feet, New World Order, Nose, Odor, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Omniworld
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4688 Read Count: 4984
[Report This] Published: August 09 2020 Updated: August 09 2020
Reviewer: Trap Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 11 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

As someone who know little about the show, and who isn't the hugest fan of Eda's design, this does a nice job within the constraints. There's enough creativity and individual sights within each world, balanced out by the giant gal's kinda sweet innocence. Feels really accessible, and even interactions I'm personally not excited by seem so offhand in the bigger narrative that it doesn't distract from the rest of it. And for the interactions I like - all the better, it makes the planets' fates feel that much more hopeless.

Nice overall!



Author's Response:

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Summary:

A woman is given tremendous power. Not written by me. 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1897 Read Count: 2513
[Report This] Published: August 21 2020 Updated: August 21 2020
Reviewer: Trap Signed
Date: August 23 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Frankly, this could use some revision.

The format makes it hard to read in mobile, the words go off the page unless I read it in a special mode.

The voice is passive, making it hard for me to wrap my head around parts of it. (For example, "the door was opened by the guards" instead of "the guards opened the door".)

The prose is redundant: it uses too many adjectives, and repeats words a lot. ("perfectly just like ants" instead of "just like ants"; "reddish rusty dust" instead of "rusty dust"; using the words "smile", "dust", and "woman" multiple times in nearby sentences).

It uses the wrong words at places. ("theft—or thefts" instead of "thief- or thieves"; "pollute-producer" instead of "pollution-producing"; "Else than that" instead of "Other than that"; and I don't even know what "gravy consequences" is supposed to mean. Gravy sounds delicous).

The tense changes in the middle of paragraphs. ("a dust storm was waiting for her" is in past tense, "It was a small storm" is in present tense. "Three years had passed" is in past tense, and "Mae has no interest" is in present tense.)

The dialogue back-and-forth isn't too bad, and I love how creative the planet-painting is; but I feel like there isn't much that gives it an strong sense of scale.

You probably know this all already, not being the writer; but it really feels like the first draft of a good story more than something complete. I only really noticed this because my own stories make the same mistakes a lot. Best of luck to the writer, hope they continue exploring this world and their prose style.

Summary:

Harley Quinn goes to a planet where she finds a race of miniture people. Written by www.fiverr.com/danirangelnieto


Categories: Giantess, Couples, Crush, Feet, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2447 Read Count: 18343
[Report This] Published: August 21 2020 Updated: May 12 2022
Reviewer: Trap Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 23 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Harley's Arrival

It's a pretty nice strarter! Had no idea you were into these characters. I love the buildup towards Ivy coming with her, and the sheer variety in Harley's modes of ruling! The writer captures the tone of voice and the villainesses' chaotic motives really well.

That said, I feel like Ivy's a bit underused. While I guess the base for this Harley is the recent cartoon version, I found myself having trouble picturing some scenes without descriptions of her general attire and appearance. (Doesn't help that Harley's look changes so often.) And to add to that, there aren't many descriptions of the tiny people or their way of life, pre- or post- Harley. I know it'd be clunky to implement these details with so many interactions, though.

So yeah, all that to say: the sequel should keep up with the good pacing and characterization, and also have a long sequence describing the tiny people's proudest cultural monuments, before Queen Ivy wraps them in her vines and stuffs them into Queen Harley's clothes. :P

Summary:

My own take on a different cruel and graphic story.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Couples, Crush, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1009 Read Count: 6184
[Report This] Published: August 21 2020 Updated: August 21 2020
Reviewer: Trap Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 26 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

For the limitations surrounding it, pretty good. It felt like it kept mostly consistent with the brutal tone and second-by-second planning of the original story, while maintaining a way more narrow focus on a smaller set of characters. It would've been neat to see a bit of the other protagonists, but I know how it is. It does feel like Grace's change in focus, Katie's health, and Oliver's plans change a bit abruptly from the previous bit; but withinthe narrative, their actions all feel consistent and logical.

(And I partly agree that "Realistic" is a little unfitting, considering characters jumping into danger and/or being excessively unobservant; but that's a lingering problem with the original, not yours. Realism's overrated, anyway.)

Summary:

Story featuring Marina and Pearl from Splatoon 2 acting as ambassadors to a community of tiny humans.


Categories: Sci-Fi, Young Adult 20-29, Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Feet, Gentle, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3997 Read Count: 2603
[Report This] Published: March 08 2021 Updated: March 08 2021
Reviewer: Trap Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Again, thank you so much for doing this story for me! The uncertainty mixed with a gentle demeanor makes for a really great narrative.