Penname: HOZANGA [Contact] Real name: Pete
Member Since: September 13 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:
You like doc martens? Cause I do. A lot. Soooo if most of my stories involve them sorry bout that... have fun reading through them though! ^_^
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Summary: Katie has a good day, and so decides to crush all her little pets beneath her sneakers.
Categories: Crush
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2345 Read Count: 8891
[Report This] Published: April 17 2007 Updated: April 17 2007
Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed
Date: March 07 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Now that i read this story. i want it in a video so bad! D: it would be the best thing ever! put it in fav stories ;D

Summary:

[COMPLETE] All Thomas wanted was a date with a cute girl. What he gets is more than he bargained for as he enters a fight for his life. Can he make it out alive?


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: FutureTech Saga
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181765 Read Count: 390686
[Report This] Published: February 27 2008 Updated: August 18 2010
Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed
Date: April 29 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Epilogue

I really liked it very nice plot :D although Melissa only wore flip flops and sandals! If she wore more footwear like boots or sneakers to kill the tinys it would have been much better because you kinda get bored of the same thing :P but still awesome work!

Summary:

A young woman's home is invaded by a tribe of miniature religious fanatics. Individually they seem rather fragile and harmless, but as she will soon learn, they have a far more neferious purpose for her than she might've imagined...


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Insertion, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35408 Read Count: 100719
[Report This] Published: January 17 2015 Updated: May 02 2016
Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed
Date: May 03 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

Loved it! Although I was really hoping for some boot crush action.. But, like I said, awesome story, nevertheless!

Author's Response: well I'm not averse to boot crush, but it is alllll about strappy gladiator sandals. Just sayin :)

[Report This] Published: April 30 2016 Updated: September 02 2023
Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 14 2017 Title: Chapter 10: The Portrait

Awesome story! Love the cruelty of the giantess ;), also, are you planning on continuing your "interrogation methods" story?



Author's Response:

"Interrogations Methods" is on my to-do list of stories. I have the rest of the story mapped out, so I just need to write it.

Fall on Campus by Glazer Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

After a shrinking epidemic, a few tiny people find themeselves in a world of trouble while attempting to live their new lives on a college campus.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Odor, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5967 Read Count: 12625
[Report This] Published: January 17 2018 Updated: January 17 2018
Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed
Date: June 09 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like how she treats everything that's happening as an everyday event contrary to the tinies who regard getting stomped as well, a pretty big thing.. Also impressed with the way you integrated teenage/young adult habits into the story with snapchat! I'd love to see what she'd do to tinies when she's in a cruel mood, bet those boots would seem even meaner! and even more, i hope you plan on continuing this story for another couple chapters! ^_^

Summary:

A young college freshman runs a protest to demand equal rights for a select group of people.

 

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Categories: Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, New World Order, Slave, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: Pantheon of Goddesses Universe
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30240 Read Count: 64578
[Report This] Published: April 20 2019 Updated: June 10 2019
Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed
Date: April 27 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Privileged Protest

I love the whole concept of the story, and I'd also love to see a chapter possibly focused on Jenna as well? Given her cruel personality I'd love to read about some other encounters she's had with humans!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! :)

I would love to do a Jenna chapter, She is probably feeling a little inferior now shes surrounded by more powerful titans, maybe a powertrip to make her feel better would be good!

Its on the list :)

Smilers by Nigma Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

These two girls are the last people you want finding you shrunk, lost and confused.


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/f
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2821 Read Count: 6013
[Report This] Published: August 20 2019 Updated: August 20 2019
Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed
Date: August 21 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I do love me some docs action! and even though they weren't the main focus of the story, i thoroughly enjoyed reading the story! the way you can tell the giantesse won't show mercy from very early on, combined with the buildup of the orange haired confirming this with the corpse on her sole, acting as if its a completely natural thing to do won this one for me, cruelty at its finest!

Kudos!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review, I'm really glad you liked it. I enjoy Docs myself so use them in stories from time to time. 

 

Good point on casual cruelty, I think it is so much worse when these women don't even have to try to destroy their victims. I wrote one a while back called What You Gonna Do which you might like if you enjoy casual torment.

Summary: Past Featured Story

In the future, a controversial form of the death penalty involves shrinking convicts down to one-inch tall, and having them tortured and killed by executioners known as Chevaliers. One Chevalier finds herself in a difficult situation when a shrunken convict claims to be innocent, and she must decide whether to risk everything and help him escape, or crush him underfoot.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58984 Read Count: 110583
[Report This] Published: December 14 2020 Updated: January 09 2021
Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed
Date: January 07 2021 Title: Chapter 12: The Damage

Guess I'll keep reviewing till the story is over!

Hardly feels like it's about to be, if I'm being honest! 

I'm glad that Brian ended up being innocent after all (I thought about how the words might've triggered some psychological trauma) and I'm also really glad you decided to have Allie find out about things in this chapter

I can't bear the thought of Allison executing even one more tiny so I'm intrigued to see what she'll do with her job... hopefully it won't be her job for long...

With regards to the story ending there are so many things I can think of that can happen, and I'm interested to see what's going to end up happening since we only have 1 chapter left!

Allie could find out how to re-grow tinies and re-grow Brian, meaning they could get in a normal relationship

Brian's innocence could be proven, somehow clearing his name

Allie could quit her job (which I really hope she does... I get that the pay is good but it's just so obvious she's not fit for it.) to devote her entirety on Brian

Allie could also somehow prove that the SPAR is an unethical way to treat convicts and could get it banned all together, that would be an interesting plot twist!

As for Cathy, I'm a bit of the vengeful type so honestly, I would love it if she somehow got shrunk and confronted outside the confines of the SPAR space, maybe she gets confronted by Brian himself if they end up at the same size! 

The less vengeful option is for her to just somehow either feel guilt or find out Brian is innnocent... I do really want her life somehow ruined though xD

Oh I just love speculating! If I had to choose, my favorite scenario would definitely be Brian re-growing to his normal size and Allie quitting her job. Just opens up so much more room for intimacy between him and Allie as he would be able to interact in a different way, he would be able to embrace her for a change, and Allie quitting her job/banning the SPAR would redeem her in a huge way in my mind and give even more space and time for the aforementioned intimacy (which we've seen so little of thus far! I'd love to see their relationship finally properly develop.. they've only kissed once after all, and even that wasn't that mutual, Brian was shocked the entire way ;) )

Cathy can die for all I care xD (morgue, I know) but I'm honestly fed up with her and the SPAR.. I feel like this is a story of liberation, not a cruel giantess type of one

Anyway I've rambled on too much with my speculations! Great chapter as always, and again, loved how Allie found out about Brian's trauma in this chapter and you didn't keep it for another chapter!

Keep up the great work!

- HOZANGA



Author's Response:

Thank you for your continued reviews! I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the chapter, and that you'll continue to review until the story ends!

There are definitely a lot of things that could happen in regards to the ending. I'm happy that you enjoy speculating! You're absolutely right that this isn't meant to be a cruel story primarily.

I hope you enjoy what happens next! I look forward to hearing what you think.

-Pluto

Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed
Date: January 09 2021 Title: Chapter 13: The Path

Aaah, here I am reviewing this story for what is hopefully NOT the last time. You never know when an epilogue might occur.. ;) *This review will be pretty big.*

First off, I am so so so, SO fucking glad Allie is not a chevalier anymore. I absolutely loved the fact that she couldn't even handle one more session, she was just that much against her job as all us readers were.

Now. While Cathy didn't get the treatment I would have hoped, I'm actually not mad, I liked the way she understood everything and chose to respect Allie's choice, and i REALLY liked the way she replied when Allie asked her if she liked being a chevalier, or if it was for her own "pleasure", for me it was almost as if she said the words "I could care less about the chevalier bullshit, it just gets me off and it aint illegal". Which just somehow makes Allies point about the SPAR being BS that much prominent, even a chevalier who likes her job doesn't actually do it for justice.. (?) 

Since the story is over I would love to hear how close my Cathy thesis is to the truth.. for a bit of extra closure ;)

Now as for Brian, I've read the story partly imagining me in his shoes sometimes, and to be honest, even as a reader who knows this is a fictional story, I still get doubts about Allie. I absolutely love her and I'm 99.9999.....% sure that she would never do anything to hurt Brian but it's just, Not receiving help from anyone in your life only to be helped by your to be executioner must have some effect on your psychology, even if that person ends up being your wife..

Regardless I'm happy that their relationship ended- or rather, started (officialy) the way it did! you can clearly tell Allie is already in love with him and judging from his reply, Brian is too. While this gave me some closure for this story I would still love to see some development in a possible future spin off/continuation should you decide to make one.

One thing i "didn't like" (meaning I just expected it to go another way but eh, such is life, we don't always get what we expect!) Is how Brian never returned to his original size.. I know that in theory such tech doesn't exist, but I'm sure that since the tech to shrink people has been invented, the tech to enlarge people won't be that hard to invent either ;) I am now yearning for a future story where Brian's innocence is proven (or not.. although I'd love to see it happen) and he is reverted back to his original size. I just feel like the relationship between him and Allie would evolve beyond a different level and would allow for a "they lived happily ever after" ending 

As for the mentor, I didn't completely understand why she proposed Allie as a candidate to become a chevalier since she was against the SPAR, although I guess it was because she knew that eventually Allie would see how corrupt the system is and would choose to fight it, still a shame Allie had to kill people to end up realizing that.. even though she gave up her job I still feel she's a bit "stained"... Like a murderer who didn't commit murders because she liked it, but did it for the money, although I'm surely a bit biased because I hate the "did it for the money" people.. (Hence why I've started liking Cathy a bit more... seems like she enjoys being a chevalier and owns up to it for different reasons). Regardless I'd also like to see this mentor help prove Brian's innocence.

Finally (I think) I may have not paid enough attention at some point of the story but I didn't quite get what was the supposed body that Allie showed Cathy on her phone.. It was mentioned that they "both knew what it was" but I just couldn't put my finger on it..

 

So to sum it up!

1. Thank FUCK Allie ain't a chevalier anymore. Thanks for that

2. Is Cathy purely a chevalier for her own sexual pleasure? I would love it if you could answer this... it would make her that much better in my mind.. ;)

2.1 Tbh if I was a normal sized male in your universe chances are I'd go date Cathy, she has something mischevious about her, maybe we'd make our own games on account of some shrinkies' "fate" ;) after all I'm sure double shrinkie sessions are not a normal occurence but it'd make for a spicy relationship! So just chuck at her a pair of doc martens boots that have some shrinkie bodies stuck between the soles and some blood on them for fetish reasons, and she is my go to giantess gf ;P

3. After writing the review my doubts and worries go down, I don't really think Allie would hurt Brian in any way..

4/5. Oh I just squealed with excitement when the relationship started (mind you I'm a 21yo bearded male.) and would love to see how they treat their urges with their size difference, and would especially love to see how it would go if Brian returned to normal size

6.  I've come to hate the SPAR. I absolutely love stories on this site about cruel giantesses killing people for fun and pleasure but goddammit something about people making a job out of it and making money out of it just sickens me so fucking much. I stan this mentor, hopefully the SPAR gets thrown out the window and with it everyone involved. After all we all know that killing shrinkies for fun and not money is a much more fun way to live.. ;)

7. BRIAN IS INNOCENT and I want someone to pay for his false accusations... but i doubt that'll happen!

8. I'll go re-read the previous chapters but WHAT WAS ON THE FLOOR IN ALLIE'S PICTURE?!?

 

That's it.. my longest review yet! Hope it doesn't bore you to death lol. If you ever do decide to do a spinoff or "next book" as you put it, or even an epilogue that takes place in the distant future I'm sure we'd all love to see that, if not, I guess we'll have to be satisfied with what we've been given!

If it isn't too much to ask, as usual I would love your opinion on my comments/ideas/speculations (Yeah... I like my closure a lot xD )

 

All in all from me this story gets a solid 11/10! I really liked it and I'm glad I didn't find it earlier cause I would hate to wait for all the chapters to come out one by one..! although you did a brilliant job delivering them quickly one after the other!

Here's to hoping there's some sort of continuation!

- Peter AKA Hozanga.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! I really appreciate that you decided to keep reviewing until the end. I love your detailed thoughts. I'm happy to go through your points, I hope I answer everything!

1) I'm glad to hear that you enjoy how Allison quit being a Chevalier! That was definitely one of the main ways in which I wanted this story to end. It's kinda like the two end points I wanted each character to reach are: Allison quits her job, and Brian learns to open up regarding his trauma.

2) It's not necessarily one or the other, but I envisioned Cathy as addicted to the sadistic aspects of the job. Her belief in the SP is something she tells herself in order to justify her addiction. I thought this would be more interesting than her being fanatical about the SP. Also, this means that in a potential future where Allison and Brian are fighting against the SP, it's not entirely clear if Cathy would end up as an enemy or ally. I hope that answers your question!

3/4) I'm happy that you liked how Allison and Brian ended up together! Their relationship was what I wanted to focus on. So, if there ever is an epilogue or something, you can be sure that it will remain a focus!

5) I totally see your point about the permanent aspect of the SP. I'll keep that in mind if I decide to do that kind of ending! 

6) Yes, there definitely is something gross about turning misery and punishment into profit. This is kinda sorta maybe almost me making a statement about for-profit prisons (wink wink).

7) For sure, *if* the mentor is the one who got Allison the job, she's definitely not a completely moral character. Even if it was with the intent to ultimately take down the SP, it still means she was willing to put Allison through the mental wringer to do it. Regardless, I'm glad you stan her!

8) This is probably on me, I should have written it better. Obviously the picture was a fake of Brian's remains after being crushed, and what was on the floor was just meant to be convincing fake. Whether they did it with makeup, ketchup, computer effects, that was a moment where as the author I just wanted to lampshade how they actually did it a bit. The point is that they somehow managed to fake his remains. As a sidenote, when Cathy notes that the picture 'looks impressive,' that's actually her hinting that she knows that the picture is fake. She's not saying that Allison was impressive, she's saying that the picture was impressively faked! Good thing Allison didn't notice.

Thank you so much for the long review! I love them, so no worries. I'm overjoyed to see your rating!! It means a lot, and thank you for reading my story!!!

-Pluto

Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed
Date: January 05 2021 Title: Chapter 11: The Session

Brilliant chapter! really glad Allie didn't end up enjoying torturing Brian.

I have to admit, the part where Brian got really ticked off by them calling him a child murdered has me a bit anxious...! It's got me thinking that maybe he isn't innocent after all, which would really suck but that's the only reason I can think of that justifies his emotions since Allie knnows he's innocent therefore why should he care what Cathy thinks? :( unless of course if you somehow manage to make him guilty but also make him still end up with Allie... As you can tell I'm rooting for Brian to get the girl!

Excited to see how the story progresses! keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing again! I'm glad you liked the chapter, and the fact that Allison is not going down a sadistic route.

Yes, Brian's response to the torment is definitely odd. It will all be explained next chapter! I hope you like what happens.

-Pluto

Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed
Date: January 02 2021 Title: Chapter 10: The Discovery

I usually skip stories that don't contain any boot/boot crush content as I love reading about that, but for some reason your story seemed... different! I gave it a try and I have to say it got me hooked fairly quick! 


I love the development of the characters and the dynamic they bring to the story. 


Brian being full on against the SPAR and cathy being the devil's advocate while having Allie on the middle ground gives an incredible plot to the story!


While I usually love the cruelty factor and I deeply appreciate Cathy for her cold bloodedness, I have to admit I am heavily on Brian and Allie's side on this story, I love how Allie is slowly backing away from her job as she realizes the potential for fraud executions and how Brian has managed to change her, I feel as if if she continued to do her job normally that would be unfair towards Brian in so many ways.. I also love how you managed to incorpotate the erotic dynamic/tension in the mix without straight up having them hook up and fuck within the confines of one chapter.


I can safely say that I'm excited for the next chapter, and honestly I do hope nothing changes with Allie and her beliefs remain the same, on the contrary I would be interested to see whether or not Cathy somehow changes her beliefs, or if she ends up getting a taste of her own medicine, so to speak.. 


As you can tell I think this is a story where I'm rooting for the good guys! And I for sure didn't expect to like a non-boot story so much! Regardless, I'm really looking forward to see what's gonna happen next...!


Keep up the awesome work, and thanks for the frequent updates!


PS. this is purely out of curiosity as I don't really care for giant content, but are chevaliers exclusively female or are there male ones as well? 


-HOZANGA



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! Thank you so much for giving this story a shot, and I'm really glad that you're enjoying it. I'm happy you're enjoying the characters and the moral debate around the Shrink Penalty, with Brian and Cathy on the opposite ends of the spectrum.

I'm also glad to hear that you're on the side of the heroes! Yes, Allison's views on the SP were definitely challenged by her decision to save Brian. As explored in their argument, Brian certainly wouldn't have been able to rest easy if nothing changed. As for their relationship, I thought it would be fun to build it up relatively slowly. I hope you enjoy how it's developed from here!

This upcoming session can go a few different ways for sure. It will be a pretty crucial event in the story. For your question, if you remember from chapter 9 when Allison returns to the facility, she decides to walk down the hallway towards her SPAR and she takes note of the Chevaliers she sees. Some of them are male. The SP does not discriminate! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

-Pluto

Summary:

Ellie's weekend trip to London was already screwed up enough and that was before they decided to stop at a model village.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Warning: This material is intended for mature audiences only.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Footwear, Feet, Giant, Violent, Vore, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24237 Read Count: 59385
[Report This] Published: January 08 2021 Updated: February 26 2021
Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed
Date: January 15 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well, since my real name is Peter and I got a huge fetish for docs, I have to say I would absolutely hate it if Pete ended up not being immune, Ellie was immune and we end up seeing a bloodbath with her boyfriend... I'm gonna feel as if I'm hurt in real life! Unfortunately I think this was kind of hinted that he isn't immune by him being a bit "Under the weather" but I can still hope nevertheless. Regardless, maybe we get to see them both being immune and that's nothing to worry about, or Faith ends up being the only immune person and she gets to have a lot of fun! Also while I get the feeling Ellie is the more dominant person in the relationship I'd love to see Pete assuming command at some point (as well as callum, he does still have power since he isn't 1 inch tall) or at least him getting some kind of redemption and seeing how Ellie and him are when they aren't fighting.  I've set this story up in my mind as a "couples have fun with tinies" kind of story. Stories that start off and make us like both people in the couple only to end up having one of them (usually the male) shrink and the normal sized one suddenly lose all interest in them aren't my cup of tea... I just think if one is loved when they're normally sized, they can be loved while being tiny as well ^^

That being said I am interested to see how Faith and Callum end up! I actually quite liked the fact that when Faith learned Callum isn't immune instead of just laughing at him and going something cruel/mean, she had him eat her out, it satisfied me in a good way, I expected her to just suddenly lose all respect and love she has for him which would have ticked me off definitely..!

As you can tell I do definitely look forward to more Pete/Ellie focused chapters.. After all, I do love to sometime put myself in the shoes of a character in a story and in this one I have a reason to do so as well! That, combined with my obsession with docs and gore will surely provide some interesting reactions!

All in all I'm interested to see where this story is gonna go, I don't necessarily think it's a story that should be dragged out a lot, seems like a 5-10 chapter story to me but I don't know what you have planned! And while I'm hoping for the "couples love each other and have fun with tinies" type of story, I'll most probably read the story regardless of how it turns out, I'm just hoping for frequent updates, this is my favorite story at the moment! Then again, you can't rush perfection!

Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed
Date: January 22 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lmao nevermind I changed my mind I don't associate myself with Pete anymore, dick pics to another girl? Not cool, hope the docs fall down on him and then proceed to destroy much more!

Keep it up!

Summary:

The story of Allison Starr and Brian Bentley continues. Allison is no longer a Chevalier, and she is in a relationship with Brian. Now, with an uncertain future ahead of them, they must decide how to proceed if they want to clear Brian's name. Luckily, some help arrives in the form of Allison's college mentor.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Couples, Gentle, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84712 Read Count: 73038
[Report This] Published: February 23 2021 Updated: April 18 2021
Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed
Date: March 11 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Consequences

Oh you sneaky sausage! the continuation is even better than the original story! I expected elizabeths backstory and kind of expected allies reaction (and im sure once allie calms down theyll contact her again)

but boy oh boy! i absolutely LOVED the intensity and desire that got the better of Allie for a moment, that is of course while having the knowledge that she isn't going to hurt him, she just wanted to have fun like couples do ;) 

I cannot wait to see how Brian copes with the situation, especially if he ends up giving into desire as well.. and i definitely cannot wait till he becomes normal sized again, im expecting plenty of intimacy ^_^

Really looking forward to the next chapters!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'm really glad you're enjoying the sequel even more than the original.

I'm glad you liked Allison's brief lapse in restraint! Of course, she would never intend to hurt him, she just wanted to have a little fun. After everything that happened that day, her love for Brian was at 500% capacity. Only so much she can take, you know?

I hope you enjoy how she continues to deal with her urges, as well as how Brian reacts to them! Thanks for your continued reviews.

-Pluto

Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18 2021 Title: Chapter 20: The New World

WOOOOOOOOOO! SEX BABYYY! it was about time they got intimate! 

I don't have much to say, I've already mentioned most of the things I wanted to in my previous reviews!

Loved the story, loved how they ended up, and honestly, I kind of knew you were gonna make a third story as well! It was obvious you couldn't fit everything you wanted to in this story ;) regardless! I'm really excited to see what's coming next! 

I think Brian going public will be really good, he most certainly will get to meet with his sister I imagine. Maybe we'll see even more intimate scenes as allies and brian's relationship develops, and boy oh boy I sure expect some normal size action in the future as well! 

Now elizabeth I absolutely love, I really want her to keep being the motherly figure brian needs, his actual mom can go to hell for all I care. 

The SPAR like I've mentioned, I expect will be disbanded and I would really, REALLY be looking forward to that. Hell, I'd go so far as to say that I'd want the chevaliers to kind of "get what they deserve" in the sense that they're legitimate murderers if you think about it.. they're just dubbed as "executioners" so yeah.. they're no better than timmy's killer 

THEN AGAIN, That would conflict with our favorite girls allie and Cathy, but I dunno, I feel like allie was never really a pure chevalier. She sure was one but she never ever wanted to be one, if you get what I mean.. 

As for cathy, I've mentioned before that I'd love to see more of her, but not in a "profitable way". I feel as if money as an ulterior motive confines what she can do, whereas if we see her toying with tinies in her own time, it can be much more enjoyable. I'd love to somehow see her hate the SPAR for what it is, but still love toying with tinies. Who knows, maybe allie and her will actually end up becoming friends, and she could find a tiny man of herself that she'll end up falling for (although I somewhat doubt that). Regardless, id love to learn about her more. Maybe she isn't as bad as we think, maybe she's just plain horny, and hey, there's a pandemic going on, who can blame her? 

As you can tell, I've now started rooting for a cathy redemption arc! 

Regardless, once more congratulations, your story remains brilliant! Keep it up, and whenever you decide to make the third installment, I'm sure you'll do great, and you'll keep us frequently updated, as you always do! (One of my favorite things about your stories is after all your frequent updates!) 

Take your break! It's well deserved.

Best of luck! 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, there's no way I would have let this story end without giving them their first (and certainly not last) moment of intimacy.

Oh yeah, there's a lot of story left to be told. I'll do my best to properly flesh it out, and come up with a sastisfying true ending!

As always, I love hearing your thoughts! I'll keep your ideas regarding the SP and Chevaliers in mind. And you're right about Allison- she wasn't in it for the same reasons as everybody else. I'm glad you love Elizabeth, by the way, as I do too. She's the mom Brian needs.

Don't worry, Cathy will be in the final story! I hope you enjoy the direction I take with her. I'm glad you're hoping for a redemption arc!

Once again, thank you so much for your continued reviews, and kind words! I hope the final story doesn't disappoint. And absolutely, I'll try to keep up my habit of frequent updates. I get anxious if I let it sit too long, so it all works out. I hope I can look forward to more reviews from you in the future, and take care!!

-Pluto

Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed
Date: April 17 2021 Title: Chapter 19: Skip Ahead, Part 3

Can't help but to live another review! Still looking forward to the finale, I went back and read my initial finale review of the first story and to be honest I just changed my mind about my cathy fantasy.. still think the SP concept of making money off of murdering murderers majorly sucks! Who knows, maybe the SP will be disbanded but cathy will continue to find tinies for her own pleasure, and might run into timmy's murderer without having to be paid for killing him ;) 

Eh! I'm just making up scenarios in my mind for what might happen! Don't blame me ;) 

Again, looking forward to the finale! 



Author's Response:

No worries, I absolutely love hearing your ideas! As much as I may be opposed to the nature of the Shrink Penalty, I have to admit that it does create potential for some exciting stories. I hadn't thought of the idea where the real murderer gets sent to Cathy, and I kinda like it. I can see it now- it'll be called "The Cathy Chronicles," and each chapter will be one of her SPAR sessions. Then, the last chapter would be her session with the real murderer! Of course, I'm just kidding... obviously...

Anywho, glad you're still excited for the finale!!

-Pluto

Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed
Date: April 17 2021 Title: Chapter 19: Skip Ahead, Part 3

Like johnsmith mentioned, I'll make sure to make a detailed review after the last chapter, BUT

I'm really glad to see our couple back together! I know that there's only one chapter left which makes me a bit scared that one of two things will happen.

1. You might want to keep it short, and might decide to exclude a multitude of aspects that could really play well into the story

2. You'll make a large ass chapter that covers all bases

And while I do hope for the second option, I'm not the one writing the story! I have faith in you and your writing skills so I'm only looking forward to what you have to write!

That being said if I'm being honest I do have things that I hope we'll get to read about, such as..

..will brian be unshrunk?

will the SP keep on existing?

will we be seeing cathy? has she had a change of heart about the SP?

If the SP persists, will the real killer be sent there? and if they do get sent there, could it be that... cathy will be their chevalier? (i'd obviously love to see a chapter about a session with cathy (since i still get the feeling she heavily gets off sexually over the whole aspect of torturing someone and having the ultimate power to kill them with no reprecussions). Especially if she's wearing boots (boot fetishists unite!), but hey! this is a gentle story, maybe in the future you will decide to make a spin off of sorts, or not, that's up to you!)

How will elizabeth react if she meets brian's mother after all this? 

how will brians sister react?

and most of all

will Brian and Allie EVER MANAGE TO DO THE DEVIL'S TANGO? cause if they don't I'm calling off the community party (yes this is pure blackmail >:) )

It's a lot that's on my mind about this story, but I do hope that in the end most of these will be answered!

Looking forward to the finale of the story, It's been a great run!



Author's Response:

Hey, glad to see another review from you! I'm glad you're happy to see them back together, and that you're looking forward to the next chapter!

Don't worry, I'm definitely aware of all the potential questions and plot threads that are hanging in the air right now. I'll do my best to craft a satisfying finale, and I really hope it doesn't disappoint! It means a lot for you to say you have faith in my writing skills.

As for everything else, you'll find out soon! I'm actually working on the chapter right now, as of me writing this response. So, better head back to it! I'm looking forward to your thoughts.

-Pluto

Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed
Date: April 04 2021 Title: Chapter 15: Moving Forward

I WAS gonna "Bruh" you again for the break up (mostly because similar to Brian I consider it stupid and selfish) but im not gonna give you the treatment twice! 

Regardless, DANGIT ALLIE! as much as I understand the concept of them splitting up I still side with Brian 100%. Allie is the sole thing that's caused him to be happy in recent years, and instead of trying hard to work over their relationship issues (which by the way they've never actually done), Allie just straight up YEETS the relationship out the window because "BrIaN DoEsN't KnOw WhAt'S GoOd FoR HiM". Like, WHATAYAMEAN??! JESUS sometimes I get upset with this story. Mostly because I know that they're gonna end up together, but I DONT HAVE ANY MORE CHAPTERS TO READ RIGHT NOW, so for now they're split up. 

I get the feeling we might be encountering some characters we've seen before since allie took her car and went away, or we might be encountering brand new ones! 

I also liked the way Brian sort of scolded Elizabeth, in his own way. And let her know he's not stupid, and he knew she had something to do with his break up. (GOD I hate even writing about it) 

Regardless, I'm interested to see how they will react to each other when being in the same space, and I'm also interested to see how long this break up will last. 

 

Great writing as always I GUESS (I'm a firm believer that stories that make you upset and mad are stories well written)

Looking forward to the next chapter! Hopefully it'll be one of your quick updates ;) 

P.S. if for some reason you're thinking about not having Allie and Brian end up together, it's your story so you can do as you please, but I'm taking back the community party invitation >:(

 



Author's Response:

I know what you mean!! Don't worry, I'm with you on taking Brian's side for the most part. This kind of stuff isn't fun to write, and I'm sure it isn't fun to read, but it seemed like the natural flow of events to me. I gotta go where the story takes me. I don't make the rules! Or, wait...

I'm also really sorry to hear that this story upsets you sometimes! I know how it feels to be really annoyed and frustrated with a story, and I really really hope it isn't detracting from the story for you. I promise it won't stay bad for super long! And I appreciate you saying that you see it as a sign of good writing. That's very nice of you to say.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy what happens next! The next chapter will probably be pretty surprising, so I hope it goes well. I'll try not to delay too long in getting it out!

And don't worry, I have no intention of permanently keeping them apart. You'll have to take that invitation from my cold, dead hands!!!

-Pluto

Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed
Date: March 30 2021 Title: Chapter 14: Crisis Response, Part 2

Oh look at you, earning an full on invitation to the community party! You little goofball!

Very well written chapter! I was sort of heartbroken at first with Alllies initial decision given Brian's amnesia, but when the end of the chapter came I legit threw a large smile on. I can't wait to see how Allie behaves in following chapters, given the fact that now she'll have to actually think before doing something.. But, she got her scolding from Elizabeth so I'm back to loving Allie just as much as I love Brian! 

As for my previous review that talked about filler chapters, if im being honest I think that I was just kind of hoping that Brian would get his memoreis back relatively soon and that we wouldn't go on 5 chapters with a Brian who doesn't remember, but seeing as you ended this chapter the way you did, I had no reason to worry after all!

See you at the community party if that ever happens woop woop!

Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Excellent!! Thank you very much for the invite. Remember, no take-backsies!

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and I hope you enjoy how it affects their development moving forward!

I see now what you mean about filler chapters, and I'm glad that you're not worried about it anymore! Yeah, I'm not a huge fan of super drawn out amnesia events. I felt like it was a good event for this story, but only as a short-lived thing. My focus is on how this will change the characters moving forward.

Thanks again for reading!

-Pluto

Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed
Date: March 27 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Crisis Response, Part 1

Honestly? I love Allison but that scolding was JUST what the doctor ordered. I really hope the terrible decision isn't something stupid that will serve as the start of *gasps* FILLER CHAPTERS!!11! But regardless, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next

GOD I loved that all of us complaining about how stupid Allison behaves during intimate times got vindicated. Maybe now she'll understand her relationship dynamics a bit better, and might even want to get Brian back to normal. After, all, *as I like to say* A person should only be submissive towards someone, if they're willing to be submissive towards them. Therefore, Allie should think about letting Brian be the one in charge every now and then, regardless of their size differences.

As always, great work! 

Let's see what you have planned for later...

P.S. This chapter got you semi-invited to my community party because of the scolding Allie received. It's like you said, actions have consequences. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you felt like the scolding was appropriate, and that it vindicated your prior concerns! The plan was always for Allison's behavior to come across as problematic, so the concerns were all well deserved. 

I have to admit, I'm not quite sure what would qualify as a filler chapter for you (especially since I'm not trying to meet a certain number of chapters or anything), so I just hope you enjoy the direction I have planned!

Thank you very much for reading, and your continued reviews! I really appreciate them. And I'm glad to hear about the semi-invite! I'll be sure to aim for the full one.

-Pluto