Been a GTS lover from when I was a Child. :)
Now I use my passion for 3D graphic in order to produce GTS Comics on my DeviantArt page and no GiantessLove.
The destruction of a civilization at the hands of a goddess. A sci-fi fantasy tale.
Okay, I have to tell you, your story kept me awake for a whole night! O.O
I was incapable of stop reading it's.. it's wonderful!
One of the best fantasy GTS stories I ever read!
C'mon, don't be desperate! You're doing an AMAZING job.
The plot is nice and consistent and the sexual/slaughtering/dominant parts are simply wonderful!
I really love the "inner struggle" of the goddess and of the main charachters that are around her. It's something I always loved so much in a deadly giantess story that I used it even in my own stories.
Please don't stop writing this masterpiece, I promise that I will write a new comment every time you will release a new chapter. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for this wonderful review Tiny-Mk! As I've already responded on giantesscity, it's truly appreciated!
Two students are stranded on a different planet where everything seems quite earthly, except it is totally small. This is a classic crush and vore story in a dark-fantasy setting with an overarching storyline.
With some 900 pages by now, I think we might as well call this one a book.
All characters appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.
Reading this chapter has been awesome! ..just like the whle story.
I have to say that I was afraid that you abandoned this story due to the long time that passed from the last update.. But in these days, I was re-reading it and you can imagine my surprise when I realized that there was a new chapter!
I was so happy that I decided to find my old password to log here in order to tell you that your story is by far the best Fantasy GTS Story I ever read.. and one of the best stories I ever read in general.
Your titanic ladies are beautiful and impressive, scary, mischievous and mostly merciless.. just like goddesses.
The world you created for this story is incrediby well done. I can't help but notice some similarities with "Games of Thrones" in it.. for example, I learned to not grow too fond to any tiny character, since it seems that they die quite easily XD Anyway, at the moment I really like Dari.
I'm very happy that you continued this masterpiece and I hope you will not make me wait another couple of years for the next chapter.. ^^;
My best compliments!
Oh wow!
That was a long but definitely entertaining read!
Many things happened and most of them were unexpected as much as cool.
Now it seems that Janna is maturating while Laura, seems just a little freakish child unaware of what she's doing.
Having someone to care of, changes a lot the way in which Janna sees the world, not to mention that the close death experience for sure made her feel less goddess and more fragile than what she thought.
Now, Furio's loss of powers is clearly related to what happened to Xardas and Vengyr rather than the effect of the Demon's worshipper. If it's really the end of the era of magic, the power of the 2 huge ladies is going to be even more great.
Thanks a lot for your amazing job.
Keep going on and don't give'up, this story is AMAZING!
You published this on my birthday!
Thank you so much for this lovely gift. :D
This was a very interesting chapter, I'm learning new things about social dynamics thanks to you! :)
It's nice to see the two "sexy weapons of mass destruction" acting gently for once.. even if it's pretty clear that this is just a game for them and that sooner or later the new "toy" will broke.
It's interesting to notice that Janna and Laura don't think about Lauraville and their tiny friends for a single second.. it shows quite clearly that by now they consider them like every other tiny person in the world.
As always, thank you so much for your amazng work.
If you have a DeviantArt account, please send me a note so we can chat from time to time.
..by the way, have you considered to publish your story on multiple sites like DA and GiantessLove? ;)
Happy Birthday! :P
Didn't have any success on Deviant Art, though it's great to publish PDFs. For PDFS I'm using Patreon now though. I reviewed and fixed Prologue and Chapter 1 and put it on there. Hopefully, something sticks. I have a couple of WIP short stories (a few pages each) that I want to finish up and put on there as a reward. I never heard of Giantess Love, but I'm going to look into it.
This chapter was kind of weird. I did it while studying for a test, so I combined what I had to study with what I was writing. Corporate Ethics, I realize, may be tedious reading to some, but it helped a lot with the test. Anyway, next chapter is packed with action again.
Thank you so much. You're great!
Thanks for your replies. :)
Don't worry, I'll keep support and motivating you. ;)
PS: You're right, it seems there are no PMs here.. so, I guess that the message I wrote was sent to the mail address you used to register here. ^^;
No message was received.
Woohoo!! You're really doing things seriousluy! :)
First of all, I really loved this chapter.
Xardas was a cool character and I'm a little sad that he died. Though, as always, your way to "dispose" of the characters unfolding more questions and a deeper plot at the same time, is simply is great!
I thought that for this whole story you had a plan from the begin, instead, as far as I understood, you are building the plot in real time.. That's simply amazing! :D
As for my last comment, I agree with everything you said and I wouldn't change a single word in your story so far. (except for the very few typos like "son" instead of "soon" ;) )
Now the "fighters" are back to Lauraville, but it's quite clear that something bigger has happened and that we are still far from the conclusion of this epic novel.
Please don't stop going on with this story.. and read your PMs. XD
Thanks again, really, but...where the fuck do I read PMs??? Are there PMs on this website? That would be news to me. Do I use a skin that doesn't support them perhaps? Please help me, I need to find those damn things.
Also, quick update, I'm skipping continents again so it migh be a while before I upload anything. New chapter is comming great though, having loads of fun writing this stuff.
Thanks again. Your reviews make writing worthwhile.
Wow! I can't believe it. Another update. :D
Okay, I'm happy.. very happy to see that Dari, Steve and Christina are still alive.. for now.. XD
I really didn't expected to see Lauraville conquered and Nagash dead without "seeing" it happen. Now it seems it's time for the two mighty giantesses to come back home, but I guess there are still some more things that have to happen before that.
I'm not sure that revealing the truth about Steve and Christina to such a weak man was a good idea.. I have the feeling that when the two ladies will come back, it will end with the Andergastian trying to use them as human-shields.
Finally, I am really curious so see which role Hafthor and Lèon will have in the forthcoming chapters.
PS: Thank you so much for this masterpiece. :)
Thank you so much for your reviews, they're always wonderful. :) It means a lot, it really does.
The whole conquest thing happened to spice things up and make it easier. Think about what might have happened if they hadn't come. Then Dari would have had to leave Lauraville and hike through the forest without any idea where to look. Not good reading. Perhaps if Nagash hadn't abused her and they would have killed Stonetree and Bruin together, but then Dari would still have to take Vengyrs body and leave Lauraville far enough so that Xardas could appear according to plan. Boring. You can't finalize a plotline by having everything play out exactly as you were hinting it would in the story. To do that would be to be predictable and being predictable is dull, a thing creators of comics might do well to remember as well ;)
As for Nagash's death, well, it would have been quite mundane. Village is attacked, men scream, she curses and crushes people, they feather her with arrows but it's not enough and they finally slay her from up close. Exactly what you would expect. By keeping her death a secret, I tried to build more on what Dari felt like as she slowly discovers how the village has changed over night. It doesn't come out as much as I wanted it too because I do not have enough time to write those 30k words chapters anymore, but that was the way I intended it.
I'm currently a little conflicted over how much to explain and how much to leave open to interpretation. The reviews tell me that people can follow the plots fine and get subtle hints and all that, but sometimes while I'm writing I'm thinking there should be shed a little more light on the background here or there. On the other hand, a story that doesn't make people think and explains every detail easily becomes literature for children. Not good.
What will happen to Lauraville, Léon and Thorsten before Janna and Laura return I have no idea what so ever. We will see. I noticed I made a mistake though, I wrote Thorgun instead of Thorsten while I was still feverish from the last chapter. You should point those things out to me, any errors, please!
Thanks again for your great reviewing routine!
This was a great action-packed chapter! (^o^)/
Even if there was little giantess-action, it was really a pleasure to read it.
Furio is really a smart (and lucky) ass.. and now showed clearly how much helpful he could be for the 2 giant ladies.
Also, it seems that the massive girls finally saw how much powerful gods demons and mages can be.. Crap, I'm really eager to see what is going to happen now. :D
I can only imagine how much hard and time consuming must be to write a story like this, so thank you so much for not giving up in telling us this amazing Fantasy-GTS Novel.
Oh goodness, what a great surprise! 2 updates in 2 days!! (^o^)/
These 2 new chapters are awesome!
First we saw what's going on with Laura and now this terrific chapter with Janna.
Thanks a lot man!
Back in Laura's Chapter, I was really glad to see one of the "deities" of this world coming to fight against her.. even if it wasn't an actual god, it makes me think that gods are still around and that there are strong powers that the girls should not underestimate.
Though, the fact that she killed (quite easily) the demi-god, makes even more clear the magnitude of her power.
Yes, these collossal, beautiful, murderous ladies relies a lot in their physical crushing superiority.. but a little more brain would be better if they want to live longer.
For example, if instead of a narcotic, there was a strong poison in her drinks, Laura would be dead by now.. this should make her think that having trustworth allies could be a good thing.
As for Janna, she's really a living rollercoaster.. she goes from killing-machine to sadic-bitch and back to sensitive woman in no time.. ;)
Rondria.. :(. ...I have to say that, by knowing your style, I knew that a death among the "nice" people was behind the corner. XP
Crap, the moment in which Rondria dies is so unexpected and quick, that it hits the reader like a punch in the stomach. Great job in full "game of thrones" style.
Finally, even I'm very curious to know what's going on in Laurasville, but I can't wait to see what will happen when Janna and Laura will meet again.
Thanks for your huge awesome work.
PS: I know it's off topic.. but.. have you seen this: http://fav.me/daujqi4 ? :3
Thanks, you've given me lots to consider! I'll look into your challenge as well, though I can't promise anything. Time is so limited and writing eats time like nothing else. It's like being on drugs. You start and all of a sudden it's the next day, you have work to do and haven't even slept. It's killing me. I've actually gotten really sick over writing these chapters. It takes more of a physical toll than I think most people would expect.
You're right about that scene with Laura. I don't think Swafnir expected anything like that happening either.
You're right about Janna too. She reminds me of Joan from Mad Men in a vague way. There's very few people she holds dear and those she protects. The others she is very indifferent to, distant, even cruel.
If you ever want to do any artwork based on this please feel free to do so. I'm a great fan of your work.
Lately I'm coming here quite often waiting for an update to this epic story.. and I'm glad to be the first to comment on it. :)
Furio and Rondria seems to have accepted Janna's temper quite easily and I can see her having a lot of fun is helping them in their "mission".
It's a win win for them.. at least until Laura and Janna will be back together. ^^;
PS: I really love this story, Thank you so much for your amazing work. :)
Laura is really moody.. but also smart and playful. She's definitely one of the best GTS I ever read of. XD
Anyway, this story is one of the best (if not the best) GTS story I ever read.
Thanks a lot for your hard work, for the tons of details, for the amazing GTS action and for the devotion that you put in continuing it. :)
I'm sorry to not have commented or reviewd it anymore.
Crap, I never imagined that you already written 2 more awesome chapters from the last time i passed by. ^^;
Anyway, I'm glad you did it and I'm glad you're having fun in writing this, cause I swear you that I'm having even more fun in reading it. :)
Now, with both the titanic ladies out of sight, it was time that someone came out in search of Vengyr. Though.. it seems to me that they are taking a little too much time.. and that's not healthy at all. ^^;
Thanks a lot for your amazing work, it's simply awesome! *thumbsup*
The more I read this story and the more the things gets interesting.
Now we can see some pieces of the puzzle coming into place. For example I liked how you managed the encounter between Dari, Thorsten and Leon, and I liked a lot the way in which you made them prove that they were not lying.
Anyway, the more the story proceeds and the more I have the feeling that it is a wonderful giantess-version of the "game of thrones".
Perhaps did you got inspired by it? ;)
Anyway, now the chapter is over and I'm here again, waiting for the next and wondering how long will be the wait. >.<
Awesome job, as always! *clap hands*
Wow, thanks a bunch. Yes, GoT inspired me quite a bit. I'm already heavily into the next chapter. Shouldn't take too long (so only a few months maybe, lol). I could post more, smaller chapters. That way I'd certainly get more views and reviews but I feel that it could hurt the overarching storyline. In a long chapter, I often back to the end and alter things to make the whole thing more round.
Thanks for the review, it means a lot to me.
A Fragment of Haile Theory.
Haile definitely isn't your average girl; nor is her head down to earth. But she is certainly not afraid to get dirty, doesn't know a thing about cooking, prefers raw food, and hates fish. Long walks on the beach and a stroll through the big city are two of her favourite past-times.
I love how casually and carelessly Haile disposed of the people, cars and houses.
Personally I'm not really into vore but when it comes to it I love when she chewed them.
Finally the way she casually steps on crowds with those deadly sneakers is super cool.
You descrived everything incredibly well and clearly making me feel like if I could actually see it as if it was a movie. :)
Even if you didn't mentioned it, judging by dhe descriptions I'd say that Haile is around 250 feet tall (80 meters), am I right?
The start was very cool, how she explained them their new lives and ho she made a sample out of the smaller girl.
Alli seems cute and if I was a tiny in Haille's home, I'd like to be in her place rather than with the others. As far as I saw, Haile treats tiny people more or less like we treat our livestock. It's not impossible for Alli to get the status of pet instead of food if she can please Haile properly... at least that's what I think I would do in her place.
Unfortunately it seems that Haile is not fond to guys.. ;P
Anyway, the last part is totally vore centric and despite it's not my cup of tea I wish there would be one day a story writer that could write something so wonderful and sensually about giantess-foot interaction. o3o
At first I had the feeling that what Haile did to the electric plant in the tiny world had had a consequence in the real world.. if that's the case, it would be really awesome.
It means that there is some kind of interconnection between universes, something that ties them in a mutual unpredictable relationship. :)
Alli is very cute and rather brave considering the situation, not many people would act as sh does but I can relate to her, because for her it's basically a fantasy that became reality.
The glowing stomach is a conveninent way to explain how you can take shots insiede it, but I can't imagine anyone offer himself for cameraman work and doing it decently, knowing that by doing so, they're going to die after a slow and terrible agony.
The barefoot crushing scene was my favourite by the way, It was well explained and full of details.
Considering your skills when it comes to vore, I think you could do better.. but anyhow I really appreciate your effort. I totally understand the difficulties you're facing in doing that. I guess It's like when I have to deal with vore scenes in my works. I try to do my best, but I know I will never be as good as someone that has a deep passion for it.
Now, this was the apotheosis of the vore fantasy. There was evrerything, literally!
Once again I can't help but be amazed by the amount of details and passion you put into it.. I also noticed that just like me, you tend to be repetitive in certain moments but I know that you do it because you deeply enjoy those things. ;)
The teeth cleaning part is a classic and I'm glad that unlike many other writers, Halie didn't swallowed them all, I'm learning a lot about her by reading this. :)
Finally Alli.. she's smart and I like her cause she does exactly what I would do XD.
Still.. I don't understand the fact that basically only Halie knows how to "eat" and digest.. not to mention that judging by the frequency and the amount of people she eat she must have another kind of modification in her body that prevents her to get fat reguardless of the amount of food that she eats. ^^;
Now.. this was what I call a slaughter.. literally. Even Allison had her amount of nightmare and by now she looks quite broken.. I'm curious to see if she will "crawl out" of it and which will be the mental-health toll to pay for it.
Haile is ready to move and I guess she will do it soon.. and with it she'll have to go to a new series of rampages in order to populate her new house.
She's a monster indeed.. but a terribly sexy one. o///o
What is really amazing, exciting and utterly terrifying is the total carelessness for the people smaller than her and the awareness that no one is safe around her.
It's hard to describe this chapter, I mean.. it’s perfect!
I won't change a single word in it.. it's an exemplary piece of art that explains a devastating rampage in deep details.
I rarely read things like this, capable of summoning so strong images in my mind and for sure I’ll come back to read the improved version once you will have published it. :)
If I really have to find an issue in this chapter, then here it is, but first a preamble: In the end, I realized that Jasmin is 1/3 of Alli. That means that to her, Haile is between 750 and 800 feet tall.
I didn't realized it until the end. I don’t know if it’s my fault, but I thought Haile was still 250 feet tall for the tiny people.. and for this reason some aspects seemed a little inaccurate.
In the end though I realized my mistake.
Maybe you should add more size comparison in the first part that makes the reader fully aware that we are in a different sized world, where Haile is much bigger and powerful than usual.
As for the rest.. AWESOME WORK! **claps**
This first chapter started with a terrifying gruesome game but it was terrific as always.
Anyway, since from the begin there are a couple of things I needed to point out.
First of all, it’s clear that Haile is hungry due to the low amount of food she had to eat in the last weeks, and in fact you say she’s very hungry.. Isn’t it a shame to waste part of her food by just killing them and leve them into the box?
The second thing is personal, so feel free to ignore what I’m going to say.
The tiny people into the first box stares helplessly at their “friends” dying horribly one by one. That’s something terrifying to say the least, so I expected to see you deeper exploring this situation, pointing out the anguish they feel and the extreme contrast with the careless emotions of Haile.
Though, I have to say that what you did later with the 2 twins was so cool and well done that made me wonder if you read my thoughts. :D