Reviewer: Neurotic Signed 
Date: July 21 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Removed
I don't mind a story trying to take sufficient time in order to build up shrinking segments as long as the development is interesting. The dialogue and descriptions are all spot on.
My only real complaint or suggestion I hope the gts interaction is more engaging when a more prominent character shrinks. For example if Alisha were to get her hands on a shrunken Thorton I hope there is more substance than her just wanting to make him a sex slave. I'd love to see more of the humiliation factor touched on, which can be acheived through means other than just shoving a captive in a vagina, inbetween breasts, etc.
Overall though the characters are very interesting and all have interesting motives/personalities that I hope carry on or change depending on who shrinks who or whatever route you decide to go.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, Neurotic.
I'm aware that this story might not be the pacing or the style that you're used to, but thank you for the points you raised.
Only thing that I'll say is that the giantess that you've seen so far, Alisha, is more suited to barbaric forms of humiliation and selfish sexual needs. I contribute that to her upbringing and how she feels society treats her. She has cravings of what she'd like to do to a tiny Thornton, and she's simply venting those needs on a figure of authority to make herself feel superior? Who knows.
My point is, that other giantesses in the story will have different motivations when encountering tiny people. A girl with low self esteem, will likely want to make someone worship her. Potentially her tiny will be a proud and popular individual that she will want to break piece by piece, without anyone being any the wiser.
Thornton.
