Well uhm yeah sorry if that sounded a bit rude, didnt mean to offend you. The story is still very nice to read and i look forward to read more about it :)

A good shrinking over time story, only the reason why that insect did infect him from all the people in the city and nobody else isnt mentioned. But i think you dont really care that because of the fact that you ignored all the other possible sources of the shrinking curse (radiation and stuff).

However his daughter isnt really very smart, after all, her father is the only one who gives her the money to get all the stuff she seems to need so much (the house, clothings, food, school, car) but she doesnt care if he gets fired cause of her grounding him. Not to mention that she will end on the street after he looses his ability to be a real person in law.

Not really very well thought to the end.

Great Story, i like it when giantess are more than only rampage mashines of destruction :)

I really do hope you continue this even if only in another story.

Wow, so far a really great story just as evolution of mice a really big project. Only two things i really found disturbing yet everything else was just brilliant.

First that souther arab girl in that viking city, you tell her background origin over almost a whole chapter and then "slurp" and she is gone. I really thought she would have some more impact and apear more often like Dari so so but .. no the whole of her whereabout didnt matter in the least. Basicly following that logic you would have to write a least a line for every single person those two girls did crush since ariving on saturn seven and that would mean to almost write a story of its own XD

And second well even though its probably part of the general story setting "two giga sized girls arrive on tiny world" I something just hope that they get teleported to some pocket dimension to one of the twelve deities shrunken to an inch and tortured in the same way they torture everybody around them only because they can do it. It kind of becoming dull, no? Like they can do whatever they want and reallly having no consquences to fear. Did they forget that they almost starved to death and only didnt because general lee started a whole food caravan only for them?

If they would keep eating everybody on that world they would at some point be alone nobody farming or hunting food for them no allies only victims nobdody who would help them. I had the impression they both are some kind of scientists in that spaceship on a science mission but at this point they only apear like two blond it girl super models with hay in their head only eating, sleeping and fapping. Its ok when thats intended but i often really wished they would hit a wall somehow, encountering somebody who gives them a real challenge, a risk for death.

Wow i almost forget what a chore it is to read through your story chapters, squashed123 ^^ but very rewarding. Another good chapter and i hope not another absence of yours is incoming, its torture to wait for stories like this to continue :)

Well not more to say that i didnt already say in past comments, no friend of repeating myself but as comment for this chapter, i do hope the prince makes it out of there alive to report about Jenna´s misstep, that she didnt even take the time to look under her shoe and took her assume of the prince fate as fact and there for killed everybody.... And Laura taking a nap in the wilderness leaving her allies alone besieged and sending the rescuced one alone to the besieged castle.. that will be a bad surprise for her.

I so much hope they both are finaly punished with some consequences. They are nothing but the purest evil.. they only think with their stomach or their pussy.. eating or smashing for fun even their given word is worthless.. some really pointy ballista bolt tipped with poison.. would serve them well i think or simply... pure pain in some way to begin with to show them they are not invincible and cannot get away with everything.

I am almost so far to say that it bores me that they really can do what ever they want.. be the bitches from hell who can turn against every ally because of an itch in their pussies and nobody can ever make them pay.

How about some ancient burried gozilla like tarasque monster returns to the surface.. sended by the twelve gods to bunish them.. i think it would be almost fun.. if Laura or Janna or both would suffer some permanent body damage.. like loosing an eye or limb or even only a really deep permanent scar..

Wow now i feel mean myself for wishing something bad to happen to fictional charackters... ^^

Nice described and detailed footcrush scenes, sadly the only buttcrush scene is a joke compaired to that.

Nearly a full chapter only about the deathes a single step caused, and ..about 3 lines about the death that the girl sat down caused...and nobody seemed to be on the couch below sissy.

I am dissapointed

This could have been very, very nice story from the ideas and all, the butt action which i am a great fan of and the unaware used Imogen but...its way to short for the action done, some spoken lines would be nice, also some parts of the story written from the two girls point of view.

The whole story started right at the event of Jesscia shrinking her husband. So we dont really know how she behaved before. She could have abused others but her husband for quite a while already behave she shrank him.

A nice start indeed, probably she finds someone who submits to her and stays with her accepting her "bad" behavor :)

Keep writing

Ok this story is really special....i mean in every other story, no matter how much it is focused on gentle, the giantess would become angry when addressed like Carl did to this one.

Hm even if you the humans describe her beautifull, for some reason i cant imagine her like this.

But its a great idea for a story.