Reviewer: Aouqess Signed
Date: April 15 2014
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Plight of the Common Man Part 1
I just recently started reading this story. So far it's quite good. I do like that in several cases the characters have good underlying reasons for their behaviour. For example Sheila terrorizing Tyler because she thinks it's in his own best interest. Also doing it not out of malice, but more of trying to protect him when she's not around and also she's doing the teenage equivalent of a boy pulling on a girl's pig tails. What I'm saying is it's very interesting to see a multi-faceted character that's motivation is more than self-gratification.
I'm also interested to see how the Dave/Barbara/Amanda triangle plays out, especially as it's likely two of those three might see the third as a cold and cruel character whom only came back now that Amanda might be worth having as a daughter. (I'm assuming Barabra didn't see her daughter much between her elevation, and her daughter's, if at all.) Makes you wonder what Barbara's been up to in that time.
Author's Response:
It's always nice to have new readers and hey! You even decided to comment so that's double nice. Dave/Amanda/Barbara is a very complicated relationship but I can say it doesn't end here.