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Summary:

An 18 year old sister finds herself shrinking and must live through the embarressing trauma of shrinking smaller then her 15 year old, 12 year old, 8 year old and finally two year old sisters. suddenly she isn't the dominate one in the house and her mother just doesn't care. Can she survive her sisters as they realize the upper hand they have?


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Feet, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49454 Read Count: 345653
[Report This] Published: December 31 2012 Updated: October 12 2016
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: September 12 2013 Title: Chapter 1: introducing the characters

Hey. I've enjoyed aspects of the story so far, and I'm really looking forward to seeing the micro-nano-(subnano?) parts! Excited! Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

thanks. i was getting tired with how slowly dhe was shrinking so i decided to just cut to the chase. in the next couple of chapters she should be a nicer size to write about.

Summary:

A look into the secret behind Transcorp's miracle sweat absorbing, massaging insoles.


Categories: Transformation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5731 Read Count: 69829
[Report This] Published: January 28 2013 Updated: September 01 2015
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - All for Her

Superb! I'm so hoping he ends up in those school shoes for some time!

Summary:

Michael Parker and his wife Amy have recently purchased their first home that they can truly call their own. They're about to throw a housewarming party and their friends will be attending. What will happen when Michael decides to entertain their guests by showing off to them the latest invention he's been toiling away on for the past few months?


Categories: Crush, Adventure, Feet, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59434 Read Count: 265035
[Report This] Published: May 21 2013 Updated: June 17 2014
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: January 23 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great work. I'd love to write out a massive wall of text giving encouragement, but I'll keep it brief. Excellent story, great chapter, unaware and micro/nano are two massive favourites of mine so maybe I'm biased, but great job. All the best!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and review, glad you enjoyed! 

Summary:

This will be an interactive story in which you, the reader can help influence what happens to Jake next! Simply leave a review with a general idea of what you'd like to see Jake put through next, don't forget to actually review though!

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Follow Jake, a half inch tall teenager as he adjusts to his new home life at his new shrunken size. In a world where a rare few are shrunk by a virus, and in which the shrinkees are typically abandoned or put out of their misery, Jake thought he was "lucky" to be going home with his family from the hospital, however, his three older siblings, a brother and two sisters, and their mother, might not have his best interests at heart as they each deal with their little brother in a variety of ways.


Categories: Scat, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), BBW, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18753 Read Count: 543328
[Report This] Published: June 25 2013 Updated: August 18 2013
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 10 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story so much, and am really excited to keep reading. I'm checking twice a day... Please please keep it up!

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 07 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

And it just gets better and better. I'm a great fan of micro stories, and wish there were more good ones around. I've enjoyed the aware parts of the story, and while I'm not into giant guys, I like that you've moved into unaware stuff too. It'd be great to see something like the brother realising where his tiny sibling is and getting revenge on his sisters with some more unawares stuff.

The proper-micro aspect is great too. I'd love to read about him getting trapped in the wrinkles of one of his sister's assholes, or glued with sweat to one of their underarms or in their groin (I'm not an armpit guy, but it's rarely done and it's kinda believable that he could end up there or be put there by his brother without the person knowning). It'd even be nice to see a return to the nasal stuff earlier,  with the protagonist now at his even smaller size. It'd be amazing if because of his tiny size the girls would pick him up with a saliva-coated finger much as we do for tiny bits of plastic and food and such. I'd love if they forgot about him while he was trapped somewhere on their body too.

I wrote so much about what 'I'd love' that I feel bad. I really just want to say keep up the fine work. I still check back for this all the time. It makes me want to take up writing, too!

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: October 23 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I hope to see this continued some day, it was the story I came back every day to check. If you need someone to bounce ideas off, drop me a mail.

Regret by Kouichi Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

A man becomes the toy of a saditic Asian teenager after making one simple mistake. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 975 Read Count: 8490
[Report This] Published: August 20 2013 Updated: August 20 2013
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: August 20 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A really good start, I'm looking forward to seeing this continue. It'd be great to get a little more description of the girl, too.

Summary:

Adam is a man despretly trying to express his love for Alissa. After much persitance Adam is finally able to break some ground and has been invited over her house. Adam goes over intending to express his true feelings, however chickens out. shortly after he passes out to find himself shrunk upon reawakening. Alissa is Adam's only hope of survival however she is totaly unaware of his predicament.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Butt, Entrapment, Insertion, Mouth Play, Toilet, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4952 Read Count: 64691
[Report This] Published: October 22 2013 Updated: January 11 2014
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: October 23 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Hi there! Wanted to say that I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this story. As you know, unaware stuff is something I love. ^^

I'll also offer a little constructive criticism: There are quite a few typos in chapter 1, and many in chapter 2. Run a spell-checker to catch most of them, and watch out for "he/her" getting confused.

Also I noticed that you switch between third person (he) and first (I) a lot, sometimes within a sentence. Try to stick to one to avoid confusion.

I don't want to sound negative - I've been enjoying reading so far and I'm looking forward to reading more. If you want any tips or proof-readings or such feel free to message me.

Good work, keep it up!



Author's Response:

at the moment i am trying to stamp out the switching between third person and first, in storys i have writen before joining i usualy use first so it's a force of habit that i am trying to get rid of. also thanks for pointing out the typos i will get around to correcting them. Anyway thank you for the compliments and criticism it is most helpful. Meantime if you would like to do proof readings by all means go for it as it would be much appreciated.

Summary:

And here's yet another story for the Penny Series.

The Magical penny which steals souls and transfers it's users souls into anything. What could possibly go wrong?

In chapter one we have the story of how the magical Penny was created, and what became of its masters. Interesting in a sense.

In the following chapters we have the main story.

The brazen teenager Cassie, and her friends abuse the power of the penny. In this high school story we will have quite a few scenario's. Cassie and her friends plots and plans will forever leave a mark on this high school's occupants. Look forward to it.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 


Categories: Vore, Teenager (13-19), Animal, Object, Unaware, Violent, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: The Penny
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12181 Read Count: 53075
[Report This] Published: October 31 2013 Updated: January 26 2014
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: November 01 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Penny & Origins

Good so far, really looking forward to seeing how this develops. I'd be interested to see any unaware content too, but it's so early on I want to see your ideas develop more than any requests from me. Do your best! I'll be reading.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the response. I was actually worried about the lack of views, since this story has bombed in that regard, at least compared to my other penny series stories. It's good to know I have readers looking forward to more.

Then again, views are just numbers and not really important, your review means much more to me.

Did you think the first chapter was to stale? There was unaware content in the second chapter, unless your referring to a POV of Janet?

Summary:

With a super secret and powerful weapon stolen from a government base the weapon quickly falls into the hands of stacy, a cruel and evil 13 year old. Overcome with power she decides to use the gun to get her way and to punish everyone who has ever "wronged" her.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Butt, Crush, Feet, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25365 Read Count: 172062
[Report This] Published: November 10 2013 Updated: June 20 2014
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Stacy + shrink ray =

When I read the ending of chapter two I just had to write. The ultra-micro shrink and the nose death... so good. I'd've loved to see some more detail on that, but the brevity works well. That kind of extreme shrinking, plus some unusual bodilu functions or unaware situations (placed by the main character, shrunk to almost nothing, and then an unaware encounter... so great. I'm really excited to see what comes next. I vote for some ultra-micro unaware asshole interaction, or failing that urethra or armpit would be interesting, if hard to set up. Keep it up!



Author's Response:

thankyou for your kind words and don't worry there will definitely be asshole interaction in an upcoming chapter as i really loved asshole and butt. Also, what exactly to you mean by urethra and armpit specifically. Is there anything you specifically want to see?

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: November 11 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Stacy + shrink ray =

I'd rather leave the details to you, but something like stacy puts a target on some toilet paper where they get pushed into some unaware giantesses urethra only to be washed out later in the day, or placed on a stick of deodorant or in clothes and is caught up stuck to an unaware girl's skin as she does sports or something.

But yeah, just thinking out loud. I wanna see where you take the story next. Looking firward to the next chapter!

Summary:

After perfecting his life's dream, an actual shrink ray, Jake can't wait to show it off! However he unknowingly makes the mistake of inviting his mother, sister, and aunt, and girlfriend to his private cabin in the hopes of surprising them with the device they all said could never be built. He arrives earlier than stated (hence the surprise),only to accidentally shrink himself. And his invited guests won't expect him for another week. Will he survive? 


Categories: Scat, Giantess, Adventure, BBW, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples , Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore, Watersports, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8834 Read Count: 121311
[Report This] Published: January 02 2014 Updated: May 22 2014
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: January 03 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi there. First of all I'm really sorry to hear about what happened. Sounds like you had a terrible stretch of bad luck. All I can say is don't let it get you down - you never know what's waiting in the future!

As for the story, you've set up well with that chapter and I look forward to seeing more. Your previous story was one of my favourites (as I recall I made an account to say so, and ended up writing a story of my own as a result. I have to to thank for the exciting experience that has turned out to be (I am still writing, just been on hiatus)) and if you ever feel like writing more for it I'm sure many people would be hugely appreciative. It is however, your choice. White what you wish to write, such is the fun of authoring. Do your best, and know that I will be looking forward to any and all updates. ^^

All the best - tokubetsu

Summary:

In a world where size determines what kind of person you are, what happens when an innocent person ends up the wrong size?


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54414 Read Count: 273038
[Report This] Published: March 15 2014 Updated: June 27 2014
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: May 14 2014 Title: Chapter 1: This is My Story

Great job so far! Loving every chapter, particularly now that unaware has been added. Would be great to get that kind of thing with Kari or Kristen(?). Looking forward to future updates.



Author's Response:

I'll keep it in mind ^^

Summary:

Many years into the future mankind has developed the ability to space travel to distant solar systems and collonize new worlds. The Aura solar system, the first system collonized by man, has been having some slight troubles with their sun which will soon be going nova, destroying their planets. However, the plan designed to save them goes very wrong and ends horribly for trillions of people.

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Crush, Feet, Instant Size Change, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4655 Read Count: 134399
[Report This] Published: April 17 2014 Updated: June 29 2022
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: April 26 2014 Title: Chapter 1: SOA (Save our Aura system)

Great so far! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Really really looking forward to it! The more orifices and creative uses of body parts the better. Already loved the small bit of in-ear stuff you snuck in, and the nose stuff too. Underarm and foot, preferably unaware, would make it perfect.

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: May 24 2014 Title: Chapter 1: SOA (Save our Aura system)

Continues to be amazing. The between toes part in particular was spectacular, but brief. I hope to see more planets dominated by her sweat alone. Hoping for some planets to last a bit longer during her play like the ones in earlier chapters, too. I'd love for more of the tiny inhabitants to end up as parasites on her body, too.

Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

"tiny inhabitants to end up as parasites on her body"  I never thought of that idea before...I might have to steal it. But yea, I guess the toe scene was rather short. If I write any more, I'll make the destruction stuff a little more detailed. Thanks for commenting. --Gadget91

Summary:

A young girl comes into posession of a jewelry case, entirely unremarkable sparing it's fascinating contents.

 

Been writing this one up for a while, so it will be the first story I will post in chapter format, seeing as it is yet to be finished. Also the first micro (as opposed to macro) story I've written, so do point out any incongruities or improvements I could make.

Would love to have comments, reviews, and critique. Thanks.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Lesbians, Odor, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20967 Read Count: 174994
[Report This] Published: June 16 2014 Updated: June 28 2016
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures

Absolutely perfect! My absolute favourite wnglish-language story. You have my unending gratitude, and I eagerly await future works. Fingers crossed for more cute, sweaty and perver schoolgirls and tiny insignificant toys.

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures

This is the story that keeps me coming back to the site. Hope to see further additions someday a308;3

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures

So glad you came back to this. Can't wait for the next chapter! Fingers crossed for more sweat and clumsiness! Would love to see some butt, foot, ear/nose stuff. Maybe in-shoe? It'd be cool for some of these minuscule 'copies' to live on, the girls not noticing or caring where they end up.

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 11 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures

This story has been so so perfect so far. I love the protagonist and the descriptions throughout. I loved the foot play right at the start, the surprise urethral insertion, and the unaware elements. If I was to make a request for a diferent story it would be along a similar line, with miniscule people becoming trapped and suffering at the whims or the unaware actions of a cute girl, with your wonderfully believable descriptions and behaviors of tinies. I'd love to see some underarm,belly button, nasal, ear, and above all anal action, especially with tinies getting caught up in tiny wrinkles and folds, clinging to sweat and the like. Anywhere you can get em, great. :d

My utmost thanks for a great story. Once of my all time favourites.

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 06 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures

Perfect in every way. I hope to read more of your stories after you finish this one. I'll be coming back to this for a long time. Thank you!