Reviewer: fizzle Signed
Date: June 21 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I am really glad that there are still stories like this one out there that also actually try to tell a story, have a sense of worldbuilding and are not just blindly catering to the fetish.
Overall the whole concept is rather fascinating, though some elements like the trait transfer thing feel a bit clunky.
It would be interesting to explore how their culture would be influenced if they made contact to a world with humans. Would childrens with wingless men result in more wingless male children? Would they have a higher birthrate then winged males?
You could spin this very far, cultural splits for the giantess and a few generations down the line racism between those descended from wingless and winged males, with some groups probably going so far as wanting to cut contact with any 'tiny' world.
Author's Response: Thanks. I tend to like a good bit of story and relationship building before moving onto any actual sex. To have it go this far just after three days is a bit fast for me. That and finding ways to strengthen the lady is a big part of the story for me. Even if she's seemingly invulnerable i still want to find ways to increase her power for some reason.
For the trait copying was important for the story as it serves as a reason for why the women don't just rape the men and allows for the women to be strengthened beyond what they already are. It also leaves the question of what things were like when they were smaller and what they may be growing towards.
Now the odds of them going to another world are rather slim. As the story showed they're a lot of issues with that including ethical and practical ones. As for the type of children that these women would have with wingless men if the story is ever continued we should get an idea of that when Ariel has a child with Vincent.
I don't really see that happening. I believe the story at least hinted at that this world, or at least this city, is very dedicated to the idea of advancement. The only way interaction with another world would be seen as a bad thing is if somehow it left the women weaker. If it speeds up their development then it's a good thing.