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Summary:

The gentle giantess, Rowena, and her miniature boyfriend return in this fantasy adventure. Together, this mismatched couple plans the strangest wedding in the ancient world.


Categories: Fantasy, Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37 Read Count: 34690
[Report This] Published: September 18 2007 Updated: September 30 2007
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Tremendous. This is what I am talking about. The family fights were done just perfectly and your dialogues are exciting, fresh and funny. Absolutely amazing. I liked especially the sudden vicious carelessness that Rowena's sisters displayed. Another thing is the dialogues. I hate it when stories get too heavy on the feelings and devolve into a depression-quest, and your way to have the figures interact with each other prevents that perfectly. It never gets boring. I'm in awe.

“He has good soul,” she stated. “Is keeper, this one.” - I literally fell off the chair at that one. 10/10

Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08 2017 Title: Rowena II: In Love and War

Fantastic ending.

Summary:

Lindsey took a cruise to get away from stress and to find love.  She found herself stranded on a beautiful island with tiny inhabitants.  While struggling to coexist with the tiny inhabitants, Lindsey finds that love may be hard to find, but pleasure is for the taking.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13659 Read Count: 47938
[Report This] Published: March 09 2013 Updated: March 13 2013
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18 2018 Title: Chapter 1: The Voyage

This story is really good. Why? The grammar is crap for the most part, which somewhat sabotages the style. But the main character's reactions are SO BLOODY NATURAL, its a joy to read. It all makes sense from her persepctive, while the necessary explanations mostly do not turn out tedious.

Well done.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Ranavalona and her older sister Marinne define their relationship.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8015 Read Count: 16296
[Report This] Published: September 03 2013 Updated: September 03 2013
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed
Date: March 11 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

For the love of god, continue this please.

Summary:

In the world of Lilliputians, Gulliverians, and Brobdingnagians, a Brobdingnagian company offers its guests with a vacation package beyond the land of Brobdingnag. This is a story about a Gulliverian guiding a Brobdingnagian couple on one of the Lilliputian islands. Will the gigantic couple behave and mind their small tour guide? Will the microscopic Lilliputians be safe when the couple comes into town? If you read my other stories, you know where this is heading.

Please note the story tags before continuing.

 


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Couples , Crush, Feet, Giant, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FM/f, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30673 Read Count: 103293
[Report This] Published: October 14 2013 Updated: February 09 2014
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 13 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Another one of your master pieces. Love every bit of it.

Home Invasion by carnaj2 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
[Report This] Published: October 18 2013 Updated: October 28 2013
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 28 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Discovered

I was hoping for Jennifer going full scale revenge on the tiny people who tortured her but that's OK since she's really the 'sub' kind of person.

 

It's a shame though since that would have been material for at least 5 more chapters. Ah, well. Ending this story hopefully means you'll write a new one soon? Please do. I love your style of writing.

 

Ending a story in time is propably a better way than to drag it out without any real end sight as where I am stuck at the moment...

. by Dudemanguy, tinyguy Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
[Report This] Published: January 11 2014 Updated: June 06 2016
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed
Date: December 10 2014 Title: .

Incredibly good writing, patiently developing and interessting story line, realistic characters and frequent updates.

This would be the best story around right now if the chapters weren't so painfully tiny. I'm hanging onto this, although I am constantly disappointed by this fact.

The slow developement is a good thing, in my mind. It makes the good stuff all the better, once you get to it.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'll definately take your feedback into consideration, and beef up the length of each chapter, although that should happen natrually as the plot thickens

Summary:

A cruel and vicious giant girl takes a not-so-giant girl out for a date. A vicious, deadly, cruel and cutely romantic date.


Categories: Watersports, Giantess, Feet, Humiliation, Lesbians, New World Order, Odor, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16686 Read Count: 47079
[Report This] Published: February 14 2015 Updated: July 23 2016
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 16 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Arrangements

Fucking hell! Erika is an amazingly strong character. I love her uncompromising behavior and unapologetic nature. She is an inspiration.

I've picked up writing again, precisely because of her.

Thank you and best regards.



Author's Response:

This is exactly the sort of response I wanted to get when I started writing, so the same to you.

Summary:

Once upon a time, in a faraway world, there lived a Gulliverian girl with her mother and father. When her mother passed away, her father remarried a Brobdingnagian woman who had two daughters of herself. When her father died, her wicked stepmother reduced her into nothing more than a personal servant.

When the wicked stepmother prevents the Gulliverian from attending a ball held by the Prince of Brobdingnag, she gets a little unexpected help from her Lilliputian friends and Fairy Godmother.

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Don’t read this story if you don’t want your childhood fairy tale ruined by nonsensical giantess smut and violence. Oh, and there will be vore.


Categories: Crush, Destruction, Feet, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34243 Read Count: 40820
[Report This] Published: April 23 2015 Updated: May 25 2015
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 13 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Aschenputtel

This is just bloody brilliant. I must have read this story twenty times over all. Pardon, I only review now.



Author's Response:

Oh wow, you've reread it that many times? I'm weird I guess. Once I write a story, I seldom ever look it again. Thanks for the compliments! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Summary:

Naomi's hiding something from her girlfriend, Lorelei. She wants to surprise her, so she's doing something she never does- she's lying to Lorelei. The guilt is eating her up inside, but she hopes that Lorelei will forgive her. She's decided to go with the excuse of wanting a new car for why she's taken on a second job. It's tiring, and most of the time she's been leaving before Lorelei wakes and coming home to Lorelei having fallen asleep, but Naomi is persevering. She thinks it'll all be worth it in the end.

Lorelei is scared and furious. Naomi has a second job now, and she's given a bullshit excuse. Lorelei admits it's an adorable attempt at lying for the ultimate good girl who's never so much as omitted the truth in her life, but it was also a major red flag. So, Lorelei stalked her girlfriend and followed her to work- and she's meeting up with that damnable bimbo, Sammi, an ex-girlfriend of Naomi's that still flirts with her constantly. Problem for her is that Naomi is now dating LORELEI, and she's not keen on sharing.


Categories: Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: Silent Dance
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29155 Read Count: 37736
[Report This] Published: August 07 2015 Updated: August 13 2015
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Trust Your Instincts- Naomi

God mother of this fabulous story,

I bow down to kneal before thee. 

I shake and tremble in thy sight.

 

Marvellously done. I would communicate constructive criticism if I had any. I wish I could write like that. Continue this please!



Author's Response:

Heh, thanks. We do what we can. Having a skilled partner to write with is an excellent motivator, so the story will indeed continue.

Thanks for the review!

Summary:

Having been transferred in from several different high security prisons, nine extremely dangerous and notorius felons find themselves incarcerated in a privatized institution unaware they are the subject of a pilot project. 


Categories: Watersports, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24239 Read Count: 77042
[Report This] Published: December 10 2015 Updated: March 05 2016
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed
Date: March 03 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fucking Hell!

 

I love this story. Please continue!



Author's Response:

At least until I run out of guys

Summary:

How hard is it to get a job when you've shrunken? Very.

 

Set in Tiny-Mk's Altered Reality universe.


Categories: Crush, Feet, Footwear, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4082 Read Count: 10077
[Report This] Published: February 12 2016 Updated: February 12 2016
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Marvellous!

 

Is there more to come?

 

 

...please?

Men Deserve It by fuccboi Rated: R starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

In the future, modern feminism surely has left it's footprint in the face of men.


Categories: Unaware, Crush, Footwear, Humiliation, New World Order, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1764 Read Count: 12608
[Report This] Published: April 21 2016 Updated: April 21 2016
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starhalf-star
Date: April 23 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Beginning of the End

Great concept, terrible implementation.

 

Use past tense all the time, not just some of the time. And add details. This story hurries along like a robot in car plant. Take your time.

Shoebox by Duggernaut Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 164]
Summary:

A young woman keeps her playthings in a shoebox under her bed

 


Categories: Watersports, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 67654 Read Count: 334633
[Report This] Published: April 23 2016 Updated: November 25 2016
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 01 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Unfamiliar Places

Thank you.



Author's Response:

You're welcome, I'm planning for another full Julie chaprter in the next little bit.

Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 25 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Unfamiliar Places

Great story, though I wish the chapters were longer.

You have built great characters that stay true to their personality, which is hard to do. This way, it gets quite personal with all of them and that is simply an amazing achievement. I really like the way Julian acts, his boldness, practicality and cynicism never fail to make the corners of my mouth turn upward. I yearn to be able to write a character like him, kudos!

What you did with mother May was just perfect. Here you are, little slave, but instead of falling into depression or trying to save yourself, I'll just make you yearn for another giant captor instead of the one or two you already have. Brilliant!

You get around telling lot's of backstory like a pro. It never feels like it's needed at all, and that keeps the story the way it's supposed to be. You're just a really great author.

There's one think I hope for in the future though, and that is more Julie. Her insane, over-the-top cruelty is exciting. Perhaps you'll let us sneak a peak into her mind at some point? 

Consider me on the edge of my seat, begging for more.

Best regards.



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts. There have been a few reviews extolling Julian and he is super fun to write for. Funny you should mention julie because there is more of her in the next chapter or two. Again thanks for such praise I hope I am worthy of it as this tale moves along. Please enjoy!

Summary:

This story follows Allie as she enters the Tiny Adult Film industry. Along the way she is forced to make some diffcult moral decisions.

 

 


Categories: Scat, Giantess, Butt, Couples, Crush, Feet, Giant, Insertion, Legwear, Lesbians, Odor, Unaware, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14489 Read Count: 73952
[Report This] Published: July 10 2016 Updated: August 02 2018
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03 2018 Title: Chapter 7: A generous deal

Great stuff! So glad you picked up this story again.

Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11 2016 Title: Chapter 1: A star is born

Don't you dare not continue this.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and the kind words! I am very excited to continue, though my busy schedule may mean some delay between chapters.

Summary:

Four young college girls discover shrunken people and civilizations in their new shared student apartment, each of their very different personalities determines how they treat the situation.  

The decisons they make through violence, sadism, passion, caring, and friendship affect millions of lives, but their age, lack of maturity, and naivety might make life difficult for everyone invloved. 

This story takes place from multple perspectives and different charatcers both big and small, but will focus on the main cast of women.  


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Legwear, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 119175 Read Count: 261531
[Report This] Published: October 16 2016 Updated: July 05 2018
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Introduction- Early Morning

This is written really well. I like it.



Author's Response:

It means a lot, I've been reading Saturn Seven since it came out!  Thank you

Summary:

[This is in the same universe as The Parvian Perspective.  Unlike that story, this will be one continuing narrative.  Consider this as something of a "spin off," while still canonical.]

A plane carrying both Magnians and Parvians crashes on a deserted island.  Survivors need to work together in order to stay alive, but they are met with the challenges that come with both size differences and their own prejudices.

 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Gentle, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6288 Read Count: 5179
[Report This] Published: February 02 2017 Updated: February 04 2017
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 04 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loving this. Fantastically written. Love The Parvian Perspective as well. I know violence isn't your style, unfortunately, but with so many little people around, who knows what is going to happen, right?

I added you to my favourites because I would not want to miss an update. I wish it was here right now. To be fair, your chapters are relatively short. It's not that they have to be longer or anything, they're fine, but it can't take very long to write all that up, no? I'm literally on the edge of my seat, hoping for a quick update. Spledidly done. 10/10 will read again, now.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind review! Truly, I'm very humbled.  I wish I could write faster and longer, but truth be told, I don't have a lot of free time.  I tried my hand at epic saga, but got bogged down halfway through The Manor and got frustrated, then stopped writing for nearly a year.  Trying not to let that happen this time!  I've been sitting on these two chapters for several months,but I have an idea of chapter 3.  Hoping to get it written next week.  Thanks again! 

Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 04 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

[Spoilers] Thanks for your reply. I read this again, and most of your other stuff too. I can see why you run out of steam. You're an excellent writer but you're not willing to explore dark corners. Out in the light, there's only so little to do. Your characters are witty, self-less and almost always completely moral. I say almost because Susanna tricked Vincent into her mouth that one time, abusing her power to have a laugh at his expense. But afterwards she apologized so hard that she cried. That's a reoccuring thing too. The crying. Then there is (accidental) mouth play and some body exploration, which is precisely how The Castaways is going to continue. That's sad because it is predictable.

I would so love to see you experiment and explore new things with this story. There's so many things to build upon. But I don't think you will. There is not going to be a character with impure motivations. No one is going to die ever. There is not even going to be a real bull-in-a-china-shop situation, as you were going for in chapter 1, which was absolutely brilliant right before you took all the steam out of it by going back to a safe and proven theme from your other stories: Retrieval of object from mouth or stomach. The scenario basically plays out the same way every time. If that's your cup of tea, fine. I'm only being so critical of this because you are one of the greatest writers I have ever had the pleasure of discovering for myself on this or any website (style-wise) but you fail to produce intriguing plot-lines.

You are so unfathomably good at conveying emotions that I feel as your characters do while I am reading. Now imagine the emotional rollercoaster you'd be able to send your readers on if suddenly something bad was happening. Power was being abused ever so slightly. There is an injustice. In my stories, the characters devolve into evil shadows of themsevles and it is surprising when they do not act selfishly or evil, which I absolutely hate. You are gifted with the ability to write gentle. But it will only ever carry to it's full effect if there is something in the story as a contrast to help it stand out.

Otherwise this story is going to be just like your others, when it could be one of the greatest there ever were.

...sorry, I'm really upset about this.



Author's Response:

I appreciate the thorough response--as well as the constructive criticism.  I'll take this into consideration.  I mean that.  I'm currently writing chapter 3.  I'm going to sit on it for a while and see what I can do.