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Summary:

(Be warned! This story has been suspended indefinately. Read the End notes of chapter 5 for more details)

In a not too distant future, a dystopian mega city is home to one 'Axcelia Axer'. A slightly pschotic computer geek who plans to exploit a modded data downlink module to create the true Macrophile experience and record every second of it for later viewing and publishing for financial gain. Brainwashing and drugging her tiny workers into craving sensual Macrophillic contact, what could possibly go wrong? And what crazy customers could these tiny girls come into contact with? Read on and find out.

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Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10831 Read Count: 42098
[Report This] Published: August 22 2013 Updated: September 05 2013
Reviewer: Choreographer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02 2013 Title: Chapter 1: You can download that?!

This is a very interesting concept and allows for a lot of mobility and flexibility with scenarios and situations, which, in my opinion, is what might bog down a lot of writers. I really enjoy where this one is going. The main character's eagerness, as well as her own macrophilia, is a nice touch as well as her responding to the darker sides of other peoples' psyches. I would love to see her use her toys for selfish reasons. I think it may be interesting if Axcelia could code a mega scenario for either herself or a customer. But that is left to you; I will merely watch and observe.

5 Stars.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! :D
I wanted to come up with something really open that I had'nt seen before so I could explore as many possibilities as possible and hopefully improve on my story telling.
I do have a lot of plans in store for Axcelia, dont worry :) 

Reviewer: Choreographer Signed
Date: September 06 2013 Title: Chapter 1: You can download that?!

Woah. Nice violent side. More please.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, there's plenty more to come :D