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Summary:

Micro Cities made their debut by building a 1:6 scale city and successfully shrinking it's occupants to live in the community. Since then they've build multiple cities--each with a smaller scale than the last. The newest city, Micropolis, is 1:200 scale.

Justin, a brilliant engineer, has been hired to improve the lives of the people of Micropolis. The only catch to his contract is that he has to live in the city for the next 5 years. He'll leave his old life behind to live at only 9mm tall.

What challenges and adventures await the residents of Micropolis?


Categories: Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Legwear, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70827 Read Count: 90340
[Report This] Published: December 30 2022 Updated: November 10 2023
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 23 2023 Title: Chapter 3: Moving to the Small City

Thanks for the chapter!

Guess we’ll see how the city looks so far and what the company wants out of it. And other plans. And maybe some rules orientation too. 

(check out Not Just Bikes for a start on some city design videos, the thing also about why cars are overused could be used later too)


Oh Jazmin is definitely being recoded by someone for theses very much HR-problem comments and potential actions. Even if supposedly her dad owns almost half the company, theres a lot of black mail material from just this. Or if its just to hang it over her head for something else. 

Eagerly await the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed, and I'll definitely check out the Not Just Bikes videos. I can tell based on the titles it's already similar to what I had imagined for Micropolis. I'm definitely leaning more toward bus/tram/trains and the like for transportation over cars. Thank you for sharing!


Jazmin is pretty good about covering her tracks. None of the residents have cell phones since they're difficult to shrink, and only a few have computer access and even less have a camera attached. It'd be difficult to report for your average resident...


However, Justin isn't your average resident and just so happens to have a computer and internet access too. I wonder how Jazmin would react if Justin reported her?


Thank you again for the feedback!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 01 2023 Title: Chapter 4: Life in the Tiny City

Great to see this again!

Justin is definitely recommending cameras be put in, could be excused as crowd behaviour analysis, too small for normal people to see. Secret of course, and record a couple of instances of this. 

And if this city has been undergoing this for a while, thats more then enough witnesses. And thats is sexual, that gets several other chapters of the law involved. Could see Jazmine being force to be shrunk as a part of the settlement or end of court case. 

And might mean the adjustment is to have the city on a table with everything delivered from underneath, and under some keyed dome/container to prevent mishandling. 

Eventually. 

So great chapter! Hope the Not Just Bikes helped! 

Can’t wait for the next one! 



Author's Response:

The videos definitely helped! I had to balance the ideas I liked against what I wanted to happen story-wise. In any case I really enjoyed them for my own purpose.

Having an underground delivery system would be the safest choice! I suspect there's some corruption higher-up that chooses "what is cheaper" over "what is safer".

I hope to get the next chapter out faster than the last two, so here's to hoping!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking into a New Job

Of course, story com first, ‘safety’ and ‘cost’ and video can come latter. 

I most certainly will be eager to see what comes next!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 05 2023 Title: Chapter 5: In a World of Giants

Well, I guess once this is all over, company policy could be to give shares of the company to any shrunk employees and residents, would certainly encourage people to come live in the 1:2000th city, should be a good enough sorry to the existing victims (on top of anything else) and way to prevent someone like Jazmine and her dad from coming in and doing anything. 
But lets see what happens before then, since that Is the point if the story. 
Hope its good!

Author's Response: I've got about 4 more chapters planned--stay tuned!

Summary:

The war between Lilliputia and Brobdingnag rages on with no end in sight. Decades of bloodshed have made violence a part of life. Perhaps the two races will never be able to coexist? When a ceasefire is called, both nations are given the first and last chance to discuss peace. This is a story told from both of their perspectives.


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Adult 30-39, Destruction, Fantasy, Humiliation, Sci-Fi, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7520 Read Count: 12638
[Report This] Published: January 02 2023 Updated: January 23 2023
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Its pretty good. 


And the only smart thing to have done would be to have some container of the virus on the jet, or on himself, so if she was foolish enough to smash him it would have just infected her and the entire palace and then city. Simple deadman switch if negotiations simply failed. 

I don’t think she has considered that option. 



Author's Response:

She thinks so little of Lillis that she probably didn't. Who knows what the President has up his little sleeve? 

Summary:

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.

Set 5 years before the events of 'A Rushed Marriage', is a small tale on a powerful councilwoman's experiences in an ever changing queendom. Where the rights of humans are only ever growing, and the new authorities in charge are compensating for the losses felt by humanity. It's a new era, a change in societal norms. A change not everyone is pleased with. That including our main character, Lisa Stonehall. Who's cruelty and corruption are tied in to her in her ever lasting desire to remain in power, and to keep the giantesses in charge.

This story is set in the World of Celessa, and explores Lisa from 'A Rushed Marriage' in a little more detail. Hence I would strongly advise reading up till chapter 6 of 'A Rushed Marriage' before giving this story a chance. It is set 5 years prior, and shows how the dynamics of Ranate society was different, and how cruelty in general was more widespread.

Fetish scenes include: Odor and farts too. A lot more cruelty present compared to the main story. 

FINISHED STORY


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Humiliation, Lesbians, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: World of Celessa
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21198 Read Count: 3839
[Report This] Published: January 04 2023 Updated: January 05 2023
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 05 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Decent, unfortunate that the sex scene didn’t continue more, but still an interesting story. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! 

Summary:

See the Summary for the Series.

https://giantessworld.net/viewseries.php?seriesid=9444

This story contains multiple independent ChatGPT chats regarding a particular scenario that I provide the chatbot.

Each chapter is a different chat, but the scenario to start the chat is the same for each chat.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: The ChatGPT Oeuvre
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9289 Read Count: 5697
[Report This] Published: January 10 2023 Updated: January 10 2023
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10 2023 Title: Chapter 2: Chat Title: Dominance Over Feral Man

Pretty decent, even with the restrictions. 


Summary:

Trying to date is hard enough as it is, without the possibility that you might just get shrunk down by some sadistic blonde brat and end up enslaved to her whims. Until she finds a new toy, at least.

And no matter how much her victims beg or bargain, no matter how much they submit to her sweaty vices, there's nothing they can do to change her mind. But who knows? There's a first time for everything...


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13640 Read Count: 15170
[Report This] Published: January 10 2023 Updated: February 15 2023
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Looks great!

Can’t wait for the FF F/f and FF/f parts!

And since shoes seems to be on the table from the tags, recommend wedges for maximum underfoot area and easier to walk in for a high heel. Plus there always having a compartment in them for stories shrunken people if wanted. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

It might be a little while before any FF/f content, however, if all goes to plan there should be a bit of F/f in the next chapter, so keep an eye out!

Definitely some good ideas there, so I'll have to make a note of that. Not sure how much this story will get into the idea of heavily customised shoes used to imprison or contain shrunken people like in a wedge or boot heel, but you never know I suppose...

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wedge heels like seem like a good high heel for giantesses or who take on tinies. Allow high heel and a sexy look with the issue of the space in-between the sole and heel, so a full foot crush/step could be done in them. 
And even if there are no custom heels (which is more then fine your the wordsmith), I think some close toe espadrille at the beach may be good. Making sure theres a tiny for each foot. 
And even, different rang of tinies, theres Aimée, then the high heel tall girl, and then the even tinier guy. 
Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Yeah, wedge heels are definitely cute and do give a nice amount of space for a giantess to keep some tinies compressed. Espadrille are nice too, thought would probably need quite a specific situation to work in. Something to keep in mind though!

And there will definitely be some size-play featuring different sizes of tinies, whether Aimée's playing with them or if someone else is.

Next chapter should be up now, so I hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01 2023 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Something A Little More Deliberate

Thanks for another chapter!


With Espadrille wedges, a lot of the fashion material is either summer show, indoor or office, or Mediterranean setting. Aimée could (depending on just how small she can make people, or even objects if she can) smuggle some people on a vacation, play the ancient greek goddess on a Mediterranean beach. Or as new house shoes. 

Theres even DIY kids for those heels, so she could make smuggling/storage specific shoes for herself. Even enlisting the aid of a tiny to make the work even higher quality. 


Besides all the other kind of wedges out there. Even recently found the Moab Wedge Boot Merrell has, that could be if she ever goes hiking, plus all the training shed need to get up to that point, so wedges for months even with exercise. Should get stinky too since that seems to be a major thing.  

Even really terrible thing of leaving a bunch of people out in some part of some woods, or when ‘disposing’ of someone, and then coming back to crush the settlement/camp they made in the intervening time or hunting them. 



Author's Response:

No worries at all, mate! And thanks for another review!

I can certainly say your knowledge of wedges far surpasses my own, so I'll have to try and makes some notes on the ideas you're throwing around there. I'm sure there'll be the right scenario to draw something from eventually!

And I wouldn't worry - when it comes to doing terrible things to tiny people or making her feet reek, Aimée's certainly more than capable of that. Which I'm sure will only become clearer as the story progresses...

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 09 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Im glad I can give ideas!

I recomend even just googling and looking through Pinterest (some throwaway account should work) for the kinds of shoes/boots/booties you/Amiée would want to use. The algorithms should help the rest.

Plus, if Amiée doesn’t know how to walk in heals well enough yet, or such, there are Reddit snd forum posts on how to train up, good for long time wearing of heels to have tinies in. 

And the reason I said train up for hiking, is that hiking does need some training for better fitness and stamina. And, braking in the shoes. So again even before some serious hiking/vacation, thats some rank boots for your and her after the months of it. Besides also wearing the heels on exercise machines, or otherwise intense exercising, and could use heeled sneakers. Thos exist. Not advised IRL but proper training seems to be possible for them. 


And Us readers will have it see if Amiée can shrink non living things or how far. Crushing cars are a popular one, going to a scrapyard for cars no one cares about, and again wedges allow crushing with the whole footprint. 

Or inserting and crushing a whole bus or train car full of people for her direct pleasure. 

Is shrinking and aria/space possible, that will have to be seen. 


We will have to find out if shes tried directly eating people, she shrink and kills them regularly enough. And there always mixing them with normal food. Especially depending on how small she can make them. 


And if she does get board, she can go online and ask enthusiasts like us for more ideas and there practicalities, theres no real shortage. 


So I hope theses help some more, and can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Always love to hear other people's ideas, so of course you can, mate!

Oh, I wouldn't worry about that. Aimée's pretty used to walking on tinies in almost any type of shoe, especially heels. Plus, she's got getting hot and sweaty down to an art form as well. I mean, she plays football/soccer for a reason!

As for the extent of her powers, suppose we'll have to dive into more of that as the story progresses. Though she's not really one for killing the people she targets, after all, that'd be a very real crime she could be viably charged with. Whereas just shrinking and torturing people for a couple nights, at least with the way she does it, isn't really something she worries about biting her in the ass. Especially not when she can just shrink people for even longer if they want to try and hassle her lol.

Thanks man, and hope you like the newest chapter!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17 2023 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - What's The Worst That Could Happen?

Now I wonder if she can play soccer/football in high heels (or of course wedge :), stilettos would dig in to much). 

While shue she could just shrink them for harassment afterwards, and they’ll probably be pretty mentally broken and not do anything, shrinking people (depending on how small too) kinda makes it hard to find anything of them if they suddenly disappear, especially if no one knows they sent with her (thought unseen so far is the shrinking is permanent of if Amiée needs to maintain it, will have to be found out).  And it has to have happened at least once before by accident. 

And there is also always visiting the bad side of town with the ‘wrong’ look to entice people who also will not be missed and not just in the “no one cases about them” way. Thos types would probsbly be even less likely to enjoy her work then, and she could go notably farther. Or some annoying bigots that might be fun to truly break mentally, . 

And also her enjoying crushing cars, or the inserted bus/truck, if shes tried. 


Do winder if shes considered more permanent pet people. Like Blaire deciding to live with her in a doll house next to her shoes, or a terrarium (classic one). Or maybe finding and actual house to shrink for Blair to live in within a terrarium to really small, then step in when collecting her and Blaire climes onto/onto her shoes/feet. 

Or maybe making person jewellery, shrink and tie people up and wear for a date. 

Last one actually made me think of ow effective alcohol or drugs are on shrunken, or if they need food. Its something to find out, should make som more energetic, and it would need much. Or Amiée would have at least thought about it. 


Well, good chapter, pretty interesting so far, and lets see what’s different about Blaire compared to the others. 

And I hope you check in more, then you can respond more quickly and this can more more of a conversation. Or visit the discord server and we can talk there, but others would probably enjoy your story too!

Oak Haven by Samius Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: A young billionaire discovers he is about to shrink down. He decides to use his wealth to book himself into an exclusive institution designed to host the wealthiest members of the size-altered population. However, once inside, he realizes it is a far cry from what was advertised. 
Categories: Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Lesbians, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9337 Read Count: 6071
[Report This] Published: January 12 2023 Updated: May 13 2023
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Welcome to the Rest of Your Life!

And interesting start. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Summary:

In her late teenage years, a girl named Cait grows to skyscraper scale. She is detained by the US military, where she is abused in scientific experiments and used for pornos. 

Her first growth accident left her with the ability to grow more later, and after a few years she has size change ability up to Tera Scale and she quickly conquers the United States. She conquers and rules with as few casualties as possible, but begins to realize her subjects aren't grateful for the mercy of their beautiful young Queen. 

This story follows her and her turmoil as she is very tempted to show her subjects her god-like power to wipe out millions of them.


Categories: Couples, Destruction, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5483 Read Count: 14667
[Report This] Published: January 14 2023 Updated: February 07 2023
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Intro

This is pretty interesting. 

Summary:

J'kabi is an Aizu, the newest species to join interstellar civilization. Looking to prove herself and show the other species what the Aizu can bring to the table, she joins the crew of the independent shipping contractor Horizon's Promise. But when disaster strikes, the ship is left spinning through space a million miles from help. With most of the crew presumed dead except for her and the ship's engineer Cygnus, they must utilize each other's strengths to survive, repair the ship, and get back home. To do so though will require some unorthodox and creative approaches.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Gentle, Lesbians, Sci-Fi, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18465 Read Count: 2144
[Report This] Published: January 22 2023 Updated: January 25 2023
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Per Amicitia Ad Astra

This is top tier writing. Period. 

I eagerly await the next parts. 


Summary:

Welcome to Mammotham, a coastal trading hub where nothing exciting ever happens... Or so it would appear on the surface. Those who have their ear to the ground will hear crazy rumors about the city and what lurks within it. Giants hiding in plain sight; Otherworldly creatures wandering the streets in disguise; Monsters that look like humans and humans that look like monsters; The list goes on. But these are surely just tall tales and the ramblings of madmen. It's ludicrous to think that a woman the size of a building would go unnoticed in such a busy city, and a man-eating sorceress who shrinks her victims would be all over the news. There's no chance any of these stories are true, let alone all of them. Right?

A series of one-shots in a loosely shared setting, each featuring a not-quite-human being living among hundreds of thousands of people who remain none the wiser about their presence. Some have a symbiotic or even benevolent relation with humans, others more of a predatory one. Dare you find out which is which?

Tags will be added as needed. It's my first time writing a story like this, so feedback is appreciated!

Latest chapter: Colossal Statue. A lone statue stands by the harbor, looking out to sea. None alive today know how it got there... None except the 'statue' herself, that is.

Tags this chapter: Giantess, Titan (100 ft. to 500 ft.), Adventure, Gentle, Feet


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22080 Read Count: 7228
[Report This] Published: January 24 2023 Updated: April 14 2023
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24 2023 Title: Chapter 1: I: Sewer Creature

Its a good star. Solid. 

Considering the number of posile combos or other stores around, bet someone uses tinies in there cloths, jewelry, or heels. Or keeps them as pets in a tararium or such. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Keeping tinies as pets is a classic setup, I'll consider it. I'll need to come up with a new spin on that idea first, though, so it might be a while before I get to that.

Cutting Costs by Asterisk Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

An android tasked with overseeing thousands of microbial worlds is given a most cruel new task.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Footwear, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Tales From the U.A.P.
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8279 Read Count: 5051
[Report This] Published: March 04 2023 Updated: March 04 2023
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Cutting Costs

Very good. 




Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you like it.

Summary:

Reincarnated into an Otome game?

Boring. 

Reincarnated into a yuri game?

Better.

Reincarnated into a yuri game as a tiny fairy? 
YES!

Follow the link to see some references of what characters look like: https://twitter.com/MaryIsTasty/status/1634582360120492034?s=20


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Middle Age (50+), Butt, Couples, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Muscle, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15920 Read Count: 11603
[Report This] Published: March 10 2023 Updated: March 13 2023
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: How It Begins

Finally! Someone is trying the other tropes other webnovels are based on! So this should be good! Only thing missing os someone doing a serious attempt at a LitRPG/System one. Or even just the hero summoning. 

Obvious recommend it Overly Sarcastic Productions Trope Talk to get some good ideas, and how to use the tropes to the best degree. Plus, as someone from Earth with earth knowledge in top of the game’s meta knowledge, that should make her magic extra powerful or interesting on top of what the lore normal said. So lots of experiments to run and see just how much she can break the magic too. Other obvious is some counter spells or antimagic field to counter the shrinking, spells, potions, levitation, and wing illusions, and ensuring there a lot of stuff recording it or with good witness.  That reveal of Felicia could mean  a good size scene at that moment, IF it happens. 
Maybe also, even if mean to Gremoria, ask the king to have more controls available on her to prevent such rash decisions, being far more mature in asking it should go a long way 


Sorry for a bit of review bloat, bit this should be interesting. 

Author's Response:

Thanks! I thought it was a fun trend to try and jump in on with a sizey take. 


Not to give away spoilers, but Katie definitely has ways of altering the storyline using what she knows. She has no intentions of letting herself die like that XD

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: How It Begins

Obviously she isn’t!!

Its just going to be interesting to see just how far she bend things, not just in story beats, but magic and in world stuff. Cause I cauls make a university semester essay on all the experiments and questions on the magic system that would need to be considered and what various answers might lead do and could be used for practical purposes. Let alone the good size stuff. 

Then theres of course my own hopes for what to see in it, but that would be long. 


Would recommend Tori Transmigrated for a real interesting take on this Otom game genre, and how in game/story beats are more complicated when becoming a real wold. 

Whatever truly things was going in with Felicia in the end or being chosen as the spy is probably way more complicated I bet.  


P.S. Wonder it its one of those fantasy worlds with boob/bikini plate armour and even serious high heels in battle, and what the in universe explanation and practicalities (since they are very impractical to fight in) of them/how they make them work? So something to answer eventually. Use readers will have to see. 



Author's Response:

I have plans in mind on how she's gonna be changing the world she's in. Will definitely take some time, but being able to understand how physical elements work and being able to directly influence it with magic. 

And there will be plenty of size play stuff still between then~


Felicia does have a complicated backstory, but we'll get to that later!


(Also, there are indeed bikini armors! Though they are not often used, since they are highly impractical. There's a handful of artisans that apply powerful warding magic to the armor to make it work, but most women avoid exposing themselves like that. Especially since they can just get those enchantments on regular armor.) 

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: How It Begins

I shall eagerly watch those experiments with magic! And if you want, I and can DM you some of thous food for thought. Your the wordsmith and this is your story. 

Fair enough on bikini-plate, its even more ridiculous then the heels (I can guess some balancing or ‘sure-footedness’/friction/stickiness enchantment applies would solve that). And with what magic might be able to do, nothing stop people from wearing skintight armour as cloths, making metal as light, flexible and comfy (or even more then) silk, let alone just how far the magic can truly go. Im sure you can fit this into just passive world building as they get mentioned or relevant. 

And wonder if there are other fantasy races then just the fairies, cause some cat-girls or a dragon/lizard girl(full anthro and not just a girl with horns, slit eyes, wings, and gradin scaled hands) doesn’t sound too bad. You have to say anything, us reader shall have to see. 


Thanks for the rapid responses! I eagerly await the next chapter!