Penname: dood07 [Contact] Real name: Adrien
Member Since: January 11 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Salut !


Comme vous l'aurez deviné, je suis Français. Ca fait assez longtemps que je lis des histoires sur giantessworld, et j'ai décidé de me mettre à traduire des histoires anglophones afin que ceux qui ne parlent que le Français puissent y accéder :) Il y a tellement de belles histoires que j'ai toujours des tonnes de projets à réaliser, mais hélas on ne traduit pas aussi vite que l'on aimerait ! ^^ 


Aussi, il m'arrive de traduire des images ou encore des vidéos, voici le lien vers mon compte DeviantArt, là où vous aurez des chances de trouver quelques unes de mes traductions : http://dood07.deviantart.com/


Ou bien, vous pouvez aussi jeter un coup d'oeil à mon site, monté en collaboration avec un ami cher ! -> rubydood.wordpress.com/


Par raison pratique, et car mes premiers contacts avec le giantess se sont fait sur ce site, je poste l'intégralité de mon travail sur eGiantess.com, que je vous conseille vraiment de visiter. C'est là où se regroupe la plupart de la communauté macrophile française, n'hésitez pas à y jeter un coup d'oeil et, pourquoi pas, vous inscrire ! C'est avec plaisir qu'on vous y accueillera.


Enfin, je suis aussi l'auteur de quelques histoires qe vous trouverez plus bas. Généralement je préfère le feet, gentle et maternal, mais je me surprends à avoir envie de découvrir plus de facettes de la macrophilie.. C'est pourquoi vous trouverez aussi du sadique dans certaines de mes histoires, du vore, du muscle, etc...


Bonne découverte ! :D


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Homunculus by Cayce Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 57]
Summary: A tiny teenager is forced to live with his normal-sized family. Ignored by his father, he finds himself at the mercy of his sadistic stepmother and her friends, who delight in teasing and torturing him. His only allies are his bratty stepsister and the gentle housekeeper/babysitter with whom he becomes enamored.
Categories: Violent, Instant Size Change, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Adventure, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139916 Read Count: 844003
[Report This] Published: December 10 2006 Updated: October 21 2008
Reviewer: dood07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 29 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Hello Cayce.

Please excuse if i write grammatical faults but I'm not English. Yet it doesn't stop me to read this exceptional story ! Maybe I'll repeat what has already been said, but this story brought me in a real world where I lived all the adventures that Ray experienced (hey, you even success to make me cry one time..). It was pure emotional and realistic story. I think I'm gonna read also your other stories. 

I'm sorry that our different languages prevents me to compliment you properly, but i tell you : You are an artist.

Thank you so much !!



Author's Response: Thanks, Doood! Compliment received, and I really appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed the story!

Summary: An unsuspecting man is shrunken by a beautiful witch who intends to train him to be an obedient pet.
Categories: Insertion, Mouth Play, Feet, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20368 Read Count: 8951
[Report This] Published: October 29 2008 Updated: October 29 2008
Reviewer: dood07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 10 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Lovely Orchid

Yeah, Aaron is right ! It really is a masterpiece, I so enjoyed this wonderful story !

The feet stuff was perfect, and your way to write it is extraordinary ! Also liked the scene with little Rose, too bad nothing more happened ! And I loved the gentle part, even if he's her pet she's gentle and protective with him.

Really, it was delicious !!

Thank you very much !!

Summary: Sandra and James just wanted to spend a quite evening together. But then their roommate just HAD to introduce them to her latest invention....
Categories: Giantess, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Gentle, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11789 Read Count: 23878
[Report This] Published: November 12 2009 Updated: November 12 2009
Reviewer: dood07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 07 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent. Just like another story of yours That I've read earlier That day, I was amazed by your sense of description.. Really, the words you use seem always to be at the perfect place and, when we believe that the pleasure is at the highest level, you make us dream more and more.. The last orgasm with the three of them is only perfect, Just magnificient.
I Just want to add That using the pov of the now giantess girl is really really interesting, you are very strong man.
Thank you

Summary: A guy, a girl, a magic potion, and plenty of surprises.
Categories: Giantess, Breast Enlargement, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14180 Read Count: 46432
[Report This] Published: November 15 2009 Updated: November 15 2009
Reviewer: dood07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 07 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Act 1

Your five stars are well deserved, This story is Just wonderful.. The way she's acting when he gets affraid is Just adorably cute, and your descriptions... This Is only the second time I read This story, but it seems to me That I'm discovering it again x)

I Just hope one thing, it Is That they don't have enough money to buy the antidote... She's perfect like This, an all powerfull caring woman.. :3

If I'd have to criticize one thing, I'd say that in the end of the story you stopped talking about her muscular features... Maybe it would have been interesting continuing it since you seemed to be taking care of This in the beginning :)

Anyway, your story was really really good, thank you very Much :)

Summary:

Danny is a tiny on the run. He has no family, no friends, no anything. When he is at his lowest point he will come across a safe haven and find himself a caring, sweet, and a bit over protective giantess willing to help him.


 


Categories: New World Order, Body Exploration, Teenager (13-19), Feet, Gentle, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7760 Read Count: 23351
[Report This] Published: April 07 2013 Updated: April 07 2013
Reviewer: dood07 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 07 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6(Danny): Nightmares

Yep, it really is a great story ! 

Sadly it seems it hasn't been updated for a long time, I'm afraid you maybe lost insterest ? So if you read this please continue what you've begun ! You've have a nice plot and interesting charachters, I wanna see what's going to happen when Danny finds out what Elena did in the past !! ..hopefully he won't be so mad, maybe a little afraid, but apparently we can't blame her from what you've written..

Summary:

Un garçon tsundere commence étrangement a rétrécir,et sa grande soeur finit par le découvrir...


Categories: Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8296 Read Count: 8565
[Report This] Published: June 30 2013 Updated: March 14 2014
Reviewer: dood07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1, Le Rétrécissement de Simon

Je laisse encore une review, mais je viens juste de relire ton histoire, et j'en suis encore tout ransporté ! Il faudrait que tu la continues, je t'en supplie... Ou alors peut-être as-tu posté la suite ailleurs, sur un autre site..? J'en sais rien, mais j'aimerai tellement que tu poursuives, je trouve le scénario de cette histoire super intéréssant (quoique pas forcément très recherché, dans le sens où ce n'est pas quelque chose de nouveau), et quand je lis ton commentaire qui dit que la blonde va revenir, être plus importante que Mana et tout ça, je ne peux pas attendre !!

En tout cas, encore félicitations pour ce que tu as déjà partagé, c'est de très grande qualité.. Merci. :)

Et pour répondre à ta question, je pense que oui, la romance a largement sa place dans le monde du giantess, je dirai même qu'elle ne fait qu'embellir l'univers ! :)

Reviewer: dood07 Signed
Date: August 09 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1, Le Rétrécissement de Simon

Ce n'est pas courant les histoires en français ! Honnêtement, j'ai vraiment aimé cette histoire, j'espère qu'elle sera continuée ! Cela correspond réellement au genre de choses que j'aime dans le giantess, je t'encourage à poursuivre ! 

Merci pour ces chapitres en tout cas :)

Summary:

Alex vivait une vie normale, d'adolescent moyen jusqu'à ce qu'il rétrécisse . Cette histoire se concentre fondamentalement sur l'évolution des personnages et leurs interactions avec le protagoniste qui perd toute puissance. Pourquoi cela est ce arrivé ? Que va t'il devenir ? Et surtout Comment va réagir son entourage ?


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27420 Read Count: 25978
[Report This] Published: April 13 2014 Updated: August 07 2014
Reviewer: dood07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Babysitter pt2 (modif)

Salut italykeke. Ça faisait quelques temps que je voulais lire tes histoires afin de voir un peu ce que tu faisais. En fait j'avais déjà essayé plusieurs fois de lire, mais je m'arrêtais à chaque fois car... J'arrivais pas à continuer.
Je viens aujourd'hui en tant qu'écrivain gts français, quoi de plus normal qu'on se soutienne en étant si peu ^^
Du point de vue artistique, ce que tu fais est un chef d'oeuvre. D'une car tu arrives à adapter ton histoire aux demandes des lecteurs, et de deux car... Et bah l'évolution du perso est excellente. Je ne vais pas m'étaler sur le sujet, tu vois ce que je veux dire : Le fait qu'il ait une rivale à taille normale, qu'il rétrécisse par l'humiliation de sa soeur, que sa mère le considère de plus en plus comme un véritable bébé, la puissance et la crédibilité qu'il perd face à tout le monde... Ça, je te dis chapeau. C'est vraiment très très bon. :)
D'un point de vue perso maintenant, j'accroche à l'intrigue, et cette histoire de pieds qui réduisent la résistance pour faire rétrécir... J'adore l'idée, sincèrement *-* Cependant, je m'excuse par avance, mais j'ai un petit coeur tout mou. Chaque paragraphe que je lis m'oppresse, et sur la fin dès que je m'arrêtais de lire je me sentais mal, j'arrivais pas arrêter d'y penser... C'est pourquoi je n'ai pas lu la fin du chapitre, je trouve cette histoire bien trop triste... Alex joue de malchance, et ses punitions incessantes me brisent le coeur.... J'avais espoir que sa baby sitter puisse sauver le truc, du style sa "grande" cousine, qu'elle soit douce avec lui.. Mais je ne pense pas que ça ait sa place dans ce genre d'histoire. :)
Quoiqu'il en soit, ce n'est qu'une question de goût, car ce que tu as fait est vraiment génial. Je te remercie de faire progresser la communauté macrophile française, et j'espère te relire un de ces quatre ;)

Summary:

Sam, a 17 year old cocky student, finds himself shrunk down in school one day through a bizzare turn of events. He soon finds himself at the mercy of his friends and schoolmates, and has to make difficult decisions for his every crucial move as old friendships rekindle and new adversities unfold.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Butt, Adventure, Body Exploration, Couples , Feet, Gentle, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 94004 Read Count: 183760
[Report This] Published: June 09 2014 Updated: May 08 2017
Reviewer: dood07 Signed
Date: August 19 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Ride of Your Life

Wow ! I really really like this story !! It includes all the things I love in the giantess : she's gentle, and there's love and feet ! I hope you'll continue to write, it's very good ! 

Congratulations !!

Summary:

What happens when a young Englisman on vacation finds him washed up on an island? An island containing a sexy sassy giantess to boot? Fun and adventures of likes of which Jack Erikson has never experienced before!

This is a re-write of The Escape, I'm redoing it to address plotholes and the quality of the writing, it could do with an improvement. 

Credit given to fellow user vgiv, who gave me advice on character development, fact checking, someone to bounce ideas off and to critique my writing when needed! 


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: The Escape
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54558 Read Count: 61519
[Report This] Published: July 18 2014 Updated: July 14 2015
Reviewer: dood07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17 2015 Title: Chapter 21: A Very Rude Welcome

Hey Nostory, it's me again.. I'm sorry to stalk you like this, but considering how I liked Downtrodden, I couldn't let some of your hours of work go to waste... I had to read this story :D


I'm a bit glad that I've read it all at once, cause this way I can review your complete work.

Ok, let's begin with the universe (you'll understand that I'm not a reviewer at all, so don't expect a wonderful criticism from me ^^), the story speaking about a giantess locked on an isolated island, a man who discovers her when his boat is unfortunately threw off by a storm, he lands there, etc.. And then all this thing about her being used as a weapon... It wasn't that original, but with this comes the strength of your tale. It's true, you made a masterpiece with something that isn't that much out of ordinary !! It's with this kind of demonstration thar we trully see what you're able to do, your genius is there.

To be honnest, I didn't like The Escape Redux as much as liked Downtrodden (maybe because there isn't this dimension of a rude past for your characters). Though I must admit that it was a really pretty story. Sure thing is also that I'm fond of love relationships, or very friendly at least, and there wasn't that much of it around here, so this is only a question of taste :) Once again, I see this fact as a strength in itself : the giantess you "built" wasn't meant to be there because you wanted people to interact with her, but she had a real meaning in this story, she's even a key element of your scenario. I'm not sure if my point is clear, but let me explain briefly : your giantess isn't really out of nowhere, all the story gravitate around her, and this is a good thing. Surely, this hazard causing Jack to meet her is a bit hard to believe, but in reality... Who cares ? The important thing is that they met, and then a strange relationship begins.. To be honest once again, this kind of relationship wasn't my cup of tea, but I believe it was well done, logical at least : A rich dumbass way too sure about his capacities and an endearing person like Jessica had nothing to do together, and this is obvious that they couldn't go well together. But I hoped that Jack was going to change, seeing how she treated him and all.. But the personality of your charachter would have been awfully less interesting (yeah if he had been more docile, then in what would have he been worthwhile ?). So yes, I would have liked a more friendly relationship between the two of them, and I've got to admit that when Jack tried to run away at night, I was hurt for Jessica. Her reaction was trully right from what I saw, some may have wanted her to be more cruel, but then would it have been logical coming from a woman as nice as her ? I don't think so. The scene when she's fighting against the jets was really really cool, but I was a bit disappointed when she arrived at Miami.. Sure you expressed the people fear and all, but I thought it would have more details, would have taken longer.. But as I've seen you were a bit in a rush with your other stories, and this is something I can perfectly understand :) 

I just have two things left, the first being the fact that I didn't see at all Lauren's plan coming, and it was something really well thought :) The part about her using Jessica as a diversion was a good one, maybe she shouldn't have underestimated her big ennemy :3

Also, I always search stories thought about the little guy in the relationship not being totally useless, because when he is given an important role once in the story, it is a proof for me that the story has been well thought, this isn't that simple to do so (I don't know if your see my point, I'm really sorry once again). Just to tell that appart the fact that Jack is rich and he can offer her a "life" in the end, this character has no heroic characteristic. Maybe it would have been better if this guy boring and unnerving in the beginning turned out to be someone brave and courageous :) but again your story is realistic this way, I am probably overestimating the power of love haha xD

Although with the end you proposed I am hoping he'll become someone better, and the way you showed him to us is really promising.

A special thanks for the scene with the wild dogs : It's true I am fond of feet (and I would like to draw your attention on the fact that this didn't stop me from reading your stories without that much foot interaction) and usually not really liking the crush scenes, but this one... Maybe it's a bit because she does it to save him, but it was pure bliss... :3

You'll understand that I had things to say on this story and I'm not that strong to explain them, plus they weren't that much positive, but trust me if I did this then it was because I thought for a long time about The Escape Redux. Even if my words aren't always kind and I might seem rude, be sure to know that I liked very much the story. Your stars are very well deserved, because the time it took you to work on something this good is clearly visible.

Frankly, great job man. Nice done :)

Hope to read more of it later, trully :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing and I don't call this stalking, its just reading haha.

The idea was generic and I don't hide the fact that the idea behind this is not creative in itself, I just wanted a giantess on a deserted island meeting a shipwrecked guy and he'd have adventures with her. I'm glad you liked how I  did it. 

 

A lot of people tell me that, that they like Downtrodden more than this one and its fine ,I guess Downtrodden is easier to relate to. There wasn't any element of a romance because this story didn't need one, I didn't want to have that part. Maybe in the sequel, due to be released in 2016 will have it?

I agree that if Jack were too nice and well behaved, the story would be a lot less interesting and even boring, glad you liked the scene where fought jets. I apologise for the Miami portion , was rushing and it showed. I'll try to avoid that but just wanted to clear my stories. Lauren's plan was good, simple but very effective as only Zoltan and Jessica noticed.

 

Jack offering her a place is at least some respite from the fact that Jessica is now homeless, its a step in the right direction for him.

Oh you liked the fight in the jungle? Great, I'm not a person fond of feet but it was never meant to reach out to foot fetishes out there. I like it when a giantess kills to save her friend :)

 

I'm not offended, glad you liked it and thankful you took the time to type out this review to point out my mistakes.

Hope you'll enjoy the sequel! 

Summary:

Alvin Summers, seventeen going on eighteen has enough on his plate. Bullies at home and in school, a social life as alive as a fossil and under immense pressure to get to a good college, these don't even come close to the biggest one of all.

 Maybe things will get better, maybe he'll rise up. If it does, the path ahead is fraught with danger and he'll need to be at his best to fend off whatever threats may come his way. 

A story set in the Interiszables Universe created by vgiv. 


Categories: Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, New World Order, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: Intersizable Universe
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86192 Read Count: 118223
[Report This] Published: September 11 2014 Updated: March 04 2016
Reviewer: dood07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 10 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Just The Beginning

Ok, so this is it ? I bet this feels good to achieve this story ^^


Anyway, I've already told you what I thought of the story, and this didn't change at all ^^ Even though these last chapters had less action in them, and by action I mean more violent interactions between Titans, Amazons and Humans, the relations between the charachters were really well developped, it was nice.


My favorite part stays when Alvin and Wendy became friendly at new, and since this evenment I enjoyed every time they acted kindly towards the other one. As for the last chapter I was delighted when Alvin gave a hug to his little sister, and her words afterwards, it seemed just so true and realistic.. It was really great :3


I thought we'd see more of Patricia in these last two chapters, and how the recomposed family did cope with the fact that they were reunited once again, but it didn't happen.. But then it would have mean you'd write other chapters to develop the thing, and I think this wasn't your goal in the beginning :) Let's just say things went good for Wendy and her mother, I honestly hope the amazon girl succeded in achieving her last year of school :) I am glad that someone aked her out, even if we don't know him very much. I hope he'll respect her and won't make her sad, although I doubt she can't defend herself against an average human male x) Maybe this could make a sequel, don't you think ?


Nah I'm joking, I know you already have sooo much work to do ! I'm looking forward the sequel to Escape Redux in the first place :P


As many others already told you, this story really was a piece of art, it was wonderfully written and I enjoyed every bit of it. You've definitely found a reader right here man ! ;) 


Great job and thank you, again, for sharing your work with the giantess community, I'm glad we count writters as good as you around here :D


See you in another story ;)



Author's Response:

  Thank you, its really nice to hear you say that!

Yeah it was awesome to see Alvin and Wendy come together again and I deliberately left Patricia and the kid's relationship unresolved for now, I might get back to it, who knows? The characters here may make future appearances in stories, probably not as leads but in some capacity for sure. 

 

I will work on Escape Redux's sequel for now, along with one BFG story. 

Reviewer: dood07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 27 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Two Timer

Here is a really nice chapter, clearly building the suspens or should I say the wait for the next part ! It was really fun to read, I liked so much how Wendy did her best to help both her big brother and her huge new friend, it was cute somehow :3

I think I get more and more fond of this Amazon as time passes by, and even though I know she's not the hero, this is this girl that I love the most :3

This is really nice stuff you share here, thank you very very much Nostory, you're a wonderful author !

I don't think I need to say it, but I'll tell it anyway : I'm waiting for the next part !! :D

Author's Response:

Thanks dood, comments very much appreciated! 

Next chapter will be the penultimate chapter and then it'll be over. Hopefully before my semester starts, I feel so lazy right now :(

Its awesome to hear that someone likes Wendy right now, I always believed she was not a very popular character in the story. I understand why of course.

 

Reviewer: dood07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Spilling The Beans

Hello Nostory :3

 

First thing : You've got to know that I am very honored to review one of your stories, since the job you make.. Is simply awesome.

 

Before beginning, just know that I am French (I think you're already aware of this : I don't know if you remember but I'm the one you met once or twice on eGiantess' chat) and, considering this, I may not be able to really descript all my thoughts, feelings, etc... So excuse me in advance.

 

That being said, I'll tell you what I have thought of Dowtrodden so far : It really is an awesome piece of art ! The major characters have been really well thought, it is obvious, and you have taken the time to develop and explain their stories, which is really the best thing in your story. Though, I also find this is what the thing that bothered me the most in the same time, paradoxal isn't it ?

 

Let me explain, it is really simple : While I was enjoying the story at the best, at two or three times, you made flashbacks to explain or demonstrate the past of your charachters (I am thinking of Alvin and Cassie), and I've seen it more as decelerators than things making your story more alive. I am sorry if I seem a bit rude (and I don't want to be !), but each time it happened I felt like I was being stopped in the middle of something so wonderful ! Strange enough, because the true genius about your story is in itself the past of each of your characters ! But it felt like I didn't want to discover more about themselves and I just wanted to enjoy their interactions in the present. That is a reason why I prefered very much Wendy's story, because it wasn't presented in flashbacks but straight to Cassie, all the more interesting to me.

 

However, even if it "hurts" to admit it, these choices you made were the right ones. Their wondrous stories were the fuel of the fire I felt when reading each of your sentences.

 

Maybe, one of the reason I love so much Alvin's story, it's because I've succeded to see myself a bit through him. And the fact that it was so realistic is really a proof of the beauty of your work, I don't know if you lived what one of them lived, but really it seems like you've been experiencing what they did.

 

Cassie is really an awesome character, nearly as perfect as you try to let her seem. In the beginning when she told about her "hiddens demons", I was expecting her tormentor to be her father, but not at all... You reserved this scenario for Wendy.

 

And this leads me to my most prefered character, who is indeed Wendy. As most of your other readers I think, I really hated this girl, not understanding why she was doing all of this shit on Alvin's back, and I believe I hated her more than her stepbrother himself. But then, when her story has been revealed, it was like... All of Alvin's life seemed suddenly way more easier than Wendy's... I was hurt to discover her childhood, and... Yeah, if I had to wish good luck to one member of the trio it would definitly be to Wendy. Seems a bit like she's alone against her demons, and even if Cassie is trying her best to help her, this will never be the same help she can give to Alvin, first because they are nearly a couple. Anyway, just to say that I find Wendy very strong to stand by herself, she's really courageous.. :3 Plus I think I prefer

Amazons sizes than Titans ones, maybe does this matter to my point of vue ? x)

 

There is just one thing I "regret" in this story, it comes from the very beginning of your story, when Alvin is "followed" by Wendy's gang and then he eventually get caughy against a wall, you said he was aroused and he was trying his best to hide that. Obviously, the girls used that fact to humiliate him all the more, but a sad thing is that you didn't played with that later.. It would have been, to my point of vue, a really interesting fact to develop..

 

Anyway, I'm hopping you perfectly understand than the few "critiques" I'm giving you don't alter the message I want to send, this being that your story is only a pure piece of art, a masterpiece man. I just can't believe we are already nearing the end of Downtrodden, and I'm dreading to discover what you've planned for us..

 

Honestly, your story was amazing on many many details, and if you remember when we talked about happiest_in_shaddows being a true artist, then let me tell you that I consider you as one of them from now on. Really, maybe your writting might seem less scientific (considering that what he does is scientific, with all the data he uses and everything, about materials and others, it really seems "scientific"), but your work is way more realistic, I mean it is much less fictive and then I think it is as hard to make something look as realistic as possible as building a whole universe where you are the ruler of everything. Anyway, just know that you are a very talentful author, and I'll make sure to enjoy all of your other stories.

 

It was a really wonderful experience for me, thank you very very much Nostory :)

 

PS: Being an athlete in an athletic club from Toulouse, I particularly enjoyed your work on the lactic acid and everything else, it was pure delight. Seems like there are some knowings in sciences there, it really is great. Thanks again.

 



Author's Response:

Hi Dood and yes I certainly remembered our meetings on egiantess and I enjoyed those chats, I never knew there was even a french community here until meeting you so thank you for introducing me to that part of this fetish. You may have set the record for longest review I've received but I'll reply to every point raised. 

I get that a lot and thank you, vgiv and I really planned these characters really well. It having a smaller cast, none of the action of my previous stories so I guess it made dig deep and improve myself in order to deliver. 

Hmmm, what you said about the flashbacks tells me those were a mixed bag, some loved it others didn't and I kind of experimented with Wendy simply telling Cassie and Cassie reliving it for us, glad you liked it in the end!

I guess I could have but Alvin was caught up with Cassie so may it would have been hard to bring it up without distracting from the main story? I'll consider all of this for future stories. Hey, don't feel so bad its the end. Consider it a bridge to something more, I will come back to this universe ,vgiv and I have plenty planned fo it. 

I am really honoured by that as you know how much I admire happiest_in_shadows as an author, one of my inspirations. Oh I consider myself pretty scientific especially during the world building I did with vgiv but I know readers don't like big chunks of science or exposition at one go so I try to keep it to a minimum,only releasing it when necessary. I appreciate you like the lactic acid part, glad it went down with somene who has a background in athletics. 

You're welcome and if you want to do a french translation, just email vgiv and me to notify us. I am open to it, just need to get vgiv's response. 

 

Watch Over by Jacksmith Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Ellie and Aaron have an unusual arrangement with a shrink ray that allows them to live out secret desires and, ultimately, brings them closer in ways neither could’ve anticipated.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Gentle, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12232 Read Count: 40084
[Report This] Published: October 29 2014 Updated: December 10 2014
Reviewer: dood07 Signed
Date: November 25 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wouhou ! Another chapter ! :D To be honest, I'm not so much into micro, so I less enjoyed this one.. But despite my lack of taste toward micro stuff, your way to make us live the story is all the more interesting and it succeeds to make me love this chapter, even if it wasn't a turn on for me ! Congratulation for you talent, waiting for the afterpart ! ;)



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it even if micro isn't your thing. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: dood07 Signed
Date: November 22 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow ! First of all, I'm enjoying this story so far ! Given that I like the gentle and playful stuff, it is perfectly in agreement with these chapters. I've read it all yesterday, so captivating ! Your way of describing actions and feelings are hard to understand for me, but I feel like it only enhances what you're sharing ! 

Regarding the construction of the story, I'm delighted each time your charachters are sort of like timid to ask questions, questions they know the other is also dying to ask (I hope you understand what I mean) ! Plus the behavior of Ellie is intoxicating, she plays the girl who has no attention to give him, like she sort of owns him, and on the other part she knows all of his feelings and thoughts, and she's so cute, gentle, intelligent, and everything ! Also the moment when he says that he likes her protection and her likes the feeling of safety and protection was overwhelming, I reread it.

To finish, I didn't expect at all the fifth chapter's end, it surprised me so much ! I was hopping he would at last ask her what she was feeling for him or if she loved him, but no ! I think yo can keep it go relatively far, and I hope you will !

Finally, if I would have to criticize one thing, it would be the narrator's point of vue. It's quite uncommon to read this style of story, maybe destabilizing at some point.. But don't change that (and I know you won't), it's now part of the story !

I've got a single question : Will this story have feet stuff ? I know you like it (I've read your bio), so I was hopping... >.< X)

Anyway, thank's for these chapters, hope you'll continue it !



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you're enjoying. I see what you're saying about the point of view; second person perspective can be jarring. I really just wanted to put the reader in the main character's place as much as possible. There won't be feet stuff in this story, though I plan to bring them back in a later one, so that may happen there.

Karla by megafan Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

A husband and wife, and their shrinking machine.


Categories: Violent, Couples , Crush, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1213 Read Count: 7458
[Report This] Published: October 30 2014 Updated: October 30 2014
Reviewer: dood07 Signed
Date: November 19 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Like Laura, I'm not used of these kind of stories, but I've enjoyed so much you two stories.

I'll make sure to come back later and read what else you've wrote !



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it.

Jennifer by megafan Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

A nice woman finds her world view has changed. She does some not so nice things.


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet, Growing Woman, Insertion, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1252 Read Count: 10632
[Report This] Published: November 02 2014 Updated: November 02 2014
Reviewer: dood07 Signed
Date: September 10 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting concept, really ! I was amazed by her sheer size, and how she decided to use it for her pleasure, it was Just... Surreal !

And, indeed, it was !! The end is really really good, makes me think of a french song's clip, where the children pay to play one hour in artificial grass with a tree, because there isn't any like these on earth..

Anyway, thank You ! Really well done man !

S Class by faintsmile Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 65]
Summary:

In a world where there is a strong correlation between wealth and size, two people come together, despite their obvious differences.


Categories: Body Exploration, Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Gentle, Giant, New World Order, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FM/f, M/f
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26080 Read Count: 30700
[Report This] Published: November 12 2014 Updated: January 12 2015
Reviewer: dood07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

@tinyguy, yeap, it could also go on like this ! :D It would only be so sad for the girl who's in love with the other girl, if the other girl hasn't got any romantic feeling towards her... :S

A very great chapter ! It's a little hard for me to read, I found your vocabular a little bit..sophisticated maybe ? Anyway, I think you get the idea.. ^^ It's only to tell you to keep on writting like this, all the expressions, feelings, actions.. of the characters are pretty explained and it gives us a good picture of the story and what's happening at every moment. We see into the characters like we were here, and it gives a very living dimension at your story :)

Like I've already said, Eva's hate towards herself is so...amazing !! Usually, with a plot like this one, it should be the mini who would be sad and angry with the current situation, but no ! It's the giant one who hates herself and not Headley, she hates the society, the human nature and everything that composes her world... Yeap, anyhing more to say, it's very beautiful... 

I'll tell you, the wait is worth it ! So please, please, please, keep on like this ! I'm already waiting for the next chapter, good luck like always ! :D



Author's Response:

I forget sometimes that your first language is not English. You do write rather well!

I am glad you are enjoying Eva's character. I feel like she is human - that romantasized notion we have of what it means to be human. 

I am glad the wait did not kill anyone, lol!

Reviewer: dood07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you for this chapter ! 

Firt of all, I would like to let you know that your response to my last review really pleased me ! It's you who's taking your time to share this beautiful story, and you're thanking me for reviewing ^^

Anyway, it was cool to come back in the school, hope there'll be more interactions with other students ! ;) Also, the idea of Eva's fear (giving her power) is a good one, very interesting ! She must control herself ant it explains her deameanor since the beginning of the story. 

For my part, I so would like to see a love relation between Headley and Evangeline... *.* I was sensing it when Eva was playing basketball and she was giving more attention to Headley than the play..

Again, thanks for the chapter ! Good luck for the suit ! :D



Author's Response:

:D

I am glad you enjoyed the chapter! And I always enjoy your reviews!

Eva is certainly allowing herself to be defined by her fear. I find it sad, but I believe that Hadley balances her nicely :}

It would seem a number of people are pushing for this sort of thing, lol. Perhaps with enough encouragement, I will see 'reason' ;)

Reviewer: dood07 Signed
Date: November 19 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Such a good story !! I so love what you're writting, and I hope you'll keep us enjoying this ! The evil part of the story is important for me, because it's thanks to this that we have such great feelings towards the characters. I'm fond of gentle stories when there are mean moments, and meanwhile the hero has someone who looks for him/her (I don't know if I'm understandable because I'm French, it's hard to express my thoughts :S).  

Anyway, please continue what you're doing, I'm gonna watch for the afterpart !!



Author's Response: Thank you so very much for reviewing! I understand what you are saying, so not to worry :) I have a little more than half of the next chapter written, so I hope to have it out today, at some point!