Reviewer: Seething recidivist Signed
Date: May 12 2019
Title: Chapter 1: Trust falls with predators
Really love the concept, a new world order of coexistence between normal people and tinies and resort to vore whether for fun or accidental. I like your writing, though it's not criticism but just my preference, the M/f and the more sex vs vore is kind of a turn off for me. Still looking forward to more though, hope to see more F/m or F/f stuff in this universe without giant dicks lol...
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I'm really glad you liked it <3
I really love this setting too, where vore is still taboo, but sometimes things happen, whether by accident or "accident." I really love the idea of Elly going about her life in the next few days normally while Amy's still inside. Studying, shopping, sleeping, all while Amy is digesting.
As for the sex vs vore haha yeah I ended up with far more sexual content than I intended, especially in chapter 2. It'd been intended to be more prey humiliation, but Amy didn't really get mentioned as much as I planned. Chapter 3 has some F/M as Elly tricks a tiny man into meeting up with Amy "up close." Let me know if you have any thoughts on where I might go with it in chapter 4. I'm not sure what to do with Amy's tiny friends Elly traps, or whether to focus more on Amy's digestion.