I'm a storyteller, who knows what it is he wants.
Luke is in his early twenties yet he has not had a girlfriend. One day though something happens to reveal his real love, but is it?
Golf???? Luke, you're getting old.
And now, I like it.
Author's Response: Oh, he still has his deadly "edge" in more than one thing(hint hint wink wink). Thanks for the support.
Ok, I'm starting to like it...
Author's Response: I know, wow I see you listed to my update date!
Author's Response: I know, wow I see you listed to my update date!
Author's Response: I know, wow I see you listed to my update date!
Hmm, a change in the plotline...
I don't know if I like it or not...
Author's Response: You will like it!
Just reviewing to say, I LOVE this story!
Hope you don't end for a looooooong time!
After she touched him, hmm. Curious
Another great chapter.
A little short, but who am I to complain. Getting better and better!
It would make more sense just to continue it. Let the views build up man! I'm all for this story and I have it favorited all over the place!
Now if only we could allow some other couple to have access to the shrinking drug (hint Liz hint, hint.)
What? I can have my own fantasies too! Now if only I could give 300 stars.
No criticism from me here. It seems they made up quite nicely. I chuckled much when I heard Liz's threat. Up and in for the rest of the day. Glorious.
Yeah, I know she had to find a way to snap him out of it though.
Good job man. I really like the direction you're taking this. I'm frankly amazed Luke can even backsass a giantess after what he'd been through over the past few months.
I see your improvement growing ever so much. I am definitely going to follow your sequel.
Thanks that means a lot to me. Luke had kinda snapped there without thinking.
Oh ho! I like the twist this just went through. Some may not, but I say so. I expect Luke to hate Sophie now. Just an expectation. If they meet again I should think it to be interesting.
A great chapter and a better improvement in spelling and grammar. You're improving Defright.
Not to be TOO criticising but you know what I think you need to add a bit more of? Commas. I found a lot of places where a comma could make a whole lot of difference in your stories. It's a good story, it's just that some parts seem to mix with each other which jumbles it up and a comma could help a lot.
But still, it's a good story.
It's done already? Just realized that you put completed. Come on man, with a plot twist like that at the end of the third chapter, you need to extend it!
At least you said you had a sequel in mind.
Things escalated kind of quickly. Maybe a bit too fast. Not that I'm complaining.
A much better chapter Defright.
I like plot twist, and this is close. But I like your story so far.
As always, I will say fix spelling, and a good short read.
Good story man.
Good chapter. I like it. Work on your spelling, but it was much better than your first .
I really like it.
I hope shes a Gentle Giantess.
But I dont know your style so I just have to wait.
yes, Yes, YES! Finally! This is one of the few stories I actually CARE much about! As always, I loved the chapter and Sophie's playfulness! Only getting better Defright!
Good chapter... I hope Hope is a gentle giantess...
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Wow, really Julian? Into her foot.
I think Eternity's reaction was a bit over dramatic. Drama queen. Oh well, looks like Julian has a new family who loves him(?)
Ok, well I have to say, why did you grab onto the helicopter? Just... why. Stupid move Julian. But I can't wait to see where this goes.