Just a daydreamer who likes to tell storys.
A female explorer gets stranded on an alien planet. With no recollection of how she got there, she must find a way to coexist with the miniature civilization.
Like IT! Hell yea! Superb work, Dudeman! Jonathan Swift would say that your quite the satirical poet.....
Definately, keep this going, I can't wait to see what happens next...
You got a 'Knack' for this I believe, the style of writing seems natural for you? Maybe?
I think so! Anyway good job!
This definitely has seemed easier for me than other works. Glad you like this Cat!
The tallest lady in Actipol. " It seemed she could feel my fear, and smiled softly..."
I like that. "She looked at me and I flinched in fear." Just adds enough, to give the reader a sense of the impression of her incredable appearance, without too-much discription to be concidered 'Over-Kill'.
Malaki will have his hands full with this "Student", Ha! Great Job, DUDE!
Thanks Cat! I knew you would like it!
Execute, a 400 foot tall woman......yeah-right....
Glad your continuing this, really great plot-building, and discriptions too.
Can't wait for next chapter, DUDE!
Tiny men have devious ideas... Amanda doesn't know it yet, but she might actually be in trouble... Or is she?
Whoa, wait a minute.... not quite, finished reading yet... Um, just give me a minute... , , (still reading)
Take your time, take your time...
By the way Cat, where's that new email of yours?
Nice foundation. Idea is interesting, and easy to build on. I am very interested to see what you do with it....
One complant though, If you could double-space, and spread it out a litttle, it reads much easier on a screen......
I like it!
A couple enjoys a pleasant dinner together.
I must say that after reading this, I had to read some more of your exsquisite writing! Your discriptions make it so effortless to visualize the story. I've only been on the site a few months, and I just now discovered 'you', (Ha)..
'Crucified', made me cringe! (but, it was so well written!) Like a horror film, when I was in grade school, it really 'Spooked' me,...
I am going to read all of your uploads, and I'll review then. If I can actually finish without freaking out!(Ha,ha,,) You really know how to torture, with discription, and comparison.......
I was simply Amazed!
I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! I hope you have fun reading the rest of my works, that is after all why I write them.
Allan was a habitual cheater who believed he could get away with anything.His girlfriend was the dumb blonde waitress who would buy anything he told her.He never could imagine what she knew and what she was capable of.
I like it. I would like to see Allen put through his paces...
Maybe, a pajama party, or a sleep-over with the girls? Would his girlfriend keep him a secret, or show him to all her friends? Your good at discribing the view from the tinies perspective, and I would like to see you do more of that...
Keep Going!
Im not so certain if Desiree is going to be a cruel aware driver of his pain-train.You can rest assured that Allan will not enjoy his new life however.
Allan's in DEEP, real-deep! Desiree could just 'Clinch', and no more Allan!
A high school senior with no future is shrunken will he find an opportunity for a new life or a quick route to death.
Good discriptions, and slow build-up to the realization.......
I don't know where your going with this, but I like it so far.....
Very passionate... keep going, it can only get better!
Thank you for commenting I'm glad that my use of descriptive language was pleasing I can only hope that my sanity remains intact as writting this can sometimes become mentally straining
Damn! Keep Going DUDE!
Oh trust me I will
Hey Wordsmith, just realized I haven't reviewed since (2), so I Thought I'd chime in! :')
How BIG was that flippin' needle? My god! No wonder Kevin was freakin' out!
"What the hell is wrong with you" Screamed Paige at him,..... That would kind of blast his tiny ear drums out , I would think? If she was holding him inside the palm of her hand.....
The discription a little out of place, (maybe if she had"excitedly", or "Alarmingly" yelled out at him, ) Ya know? Just sayin", That's the only thing I really noticed though, just thought I'd give ya my 2 cents.....
Thanks for checking in wildcatman I hope the story is to your liking.
As for the needle its part of a device designed to extract blood from a tiny person for reasons I will explain later.
you are right about the screaming thing, I'll go back and re-read it and see how I could change it. and thank you for the two cents I will spend them wisely
Ah, yes... "she lectured down to him in a disappointed tone", that's much better, and feels better too. (Her being a GIANTESS, she wouldn't have to ever, 'Scream.')
You didn't have to go back and change it on my account though, I hope that I didn't effect the outcome, or the direction, of your work. Don't ever let anyone 'Change', your original 'Idea', or ideas.
It's a great story, and I really like it!
Normally I don't go back and change things but I felt that screaming was really unlike Paige's character, and don't worry although I consider the opinions expressed in every comment I don't allow them to guide my writing
Thank you for commenting again wildcatman I have really enjoyed your support
A look into the journal of a madwoman.
Stirs up deep emotions, and arrousal......the entrapment within her constricting fist, as she decides her victims fate......
Tantilizing!!!
I'm waiting for a 'miniman', to become her victim, will she show any less remorse?
Lovin' it!
Aww, poor little villager, he didn't like that smell? He should have licked those sticky fingers clean! Maybe, he could have been saved for later.....;) Ha...
Very tantilizing discriptions. Great stuff! Looking forward to next encounter.
Also, I like the size you chose(six inch man), perfectly fits my fasination, and hopefully (NO) 'giant' men, on this Island( That really ruins it for me)
Lindsey sounds incredable, her attitude toward men, and the realization that she has come to, about becoming a GIANTESS....
Love it!
Good Evening Wildcatman,
First, I am glad you are reading the story and truly enjoy that you are obeying that 1st command by not displeasing me with your comments.
Second, I’m sure that the last thing on that small villager’s mind was licking her sticky fingers clean.;-)
Also, six inch little men are perfect, so versatile and resilient….anything smaller is really just a snack.
Lastly, Lindsay is truly incredible. I have to admit, there is a little bit of my story mixed with hers. (sigh) I’ll never forget the first night I truly saw myself as a “Giant-tess”.
Wiggling Toes,
Mistress Anez
Well, like you, I just wait and the senerio just kind-of comes to me.....
I'm sure that whatever occurs to you, First, will be the Idea that sets those fingers to typing..... Ether way, keep pumpin' em' out, Dude!
Well, you have to continue this story. In a sequel, or a spin-off of some type! All the preperation is done, you can just continue the daily episodes, and interactions of the villagers and thier mighty Goddess! They still have that enemy tribe to deal with, and those damn bears! Also, where there's one Jungle Cat, there's always another one...
The language barrier being broken, and a friendship forming,.....Come -on, you just have to,....Mistress Anez wants you to, don't you?
Wildcatman,
I think I tell Dee I want him to continue almost every story he's ever written. He makes me fall in love or completely dispise all his characters!! For now, we will let our imaginations and fantasies run away when we think about Lindsey. If we start again now, he won't have time to write those other sequels you've requested....a little man can only write so much annnd he does have a Giantess to please on a regular. =)
I will allow him to write between smooshings...if it ever seems he's gone away a bit too long, that just means I got too mad and smooshed him a bit harder than I should have. Give him time to recover...he'll always come back to tell you another chilling tale (that was based on actual events) ;-)
Squishes & Kisses!
Mistress Anez
(MMmmm,Graaaa,brummuummmble) (Grumble,Grumble) (Mummble, Mummble) (mummuble) (HELP!) (Mummble) Wooooo_Hoooooooooo.........
I told you to run. (Not being able to look at the violence, I walk away). You're on your own. ;)
Dee
The interpratation by the 'Tiny Voyeur', a nice added bonus. (Kind of like a P.O.V. from the villagers perspective) Nice touch, you could use that at the begining, (of Chapter) or, at the end,...( Or, as a Narriative) If the story was told from him..)
I like the way it's slowly unfolding, and the giantess pondering her thoughts as she sits alone thinking....
Realizing that she has a whole population of humans, at her beautiful feet.....
Ah, the possibilitys, hmmm.....
P.S. Tell 'The Mistress", to calm herself, I would never displease her by not allowing her to capture me, if she so seeks?
But, tell her to allow you to at least finish the story before she distroys you!
That's a good idea Wildcatman! I wish I would've thought of that. I'd like to write a story someday like that.
As for Mistress Anez, I informed her of what you said. She just simply stated that she'd made up her mind and Wildcatman must pay for his insolence. I don't know what that means but you better run.
Since the story is complete, my life is forfeit. Although she mentioned something about letting me live long enough to write the sequel to "That Should Be Me".
Dee
Mistress Anez, is that short for 'Anezka', of the Czeh. origin? (Or) from the 'Witcher' 2, Assassins of Kings ?
I think that I could easily fit into your pocket! (@ 6" tall) but what would you do to me?
P.S. sorry Dee, I just had to ask her, after her last response to my review.....
Oh, Wildcatman! You make me smile, its an evil smile but a smile nonetheless.
My name is not of Czch origin nor is it from a video game. My name is all my own and is mighty in origins as my foot is when stomping on Dee.
You have quite a mouth on you, a bit insolent if you ask me. A pocket for your 6" inch form just will not do. I think your time would be better spent under my foot or in a dark damp place as to muffle the sound of your voice.
Mistress Anez
Ah, the nectar of the gods rained down on him/ Oop's I better watch my insolent mouth, don't tell Anez,......but, then again, maybe I'll get 'punished'? Hmmm, yea, go ahead an tell er', she's just a Giantess-Mistress right? I don't think that she would actually squish me......
Another great chapter! I hope the king does't get squished by Anez, or, Lindsey I mean....
>Looking disheveled and battered from getting smooshed< I'm here to tell you first hand that she will indeed punish you and squish you. Don't tempt her or ask for anything you might get. I told her what you said. She told me to tell you that she's looking for you.
As for the king...read on. :)
Dee
