Penname: Cameron99 [Contact] Real name: Cameron
Member Since: February 05 2007
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just recently discovered giantess dtuff

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The Girl Next Door by kbDArt Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

A young man decides to take a break from his work field to rejuvenate his mind. His decision to move into a low-income housing complex has severe consequences when he attracts the attention of a teenage girl who lives with her single mother in the apartment across the sidewalk from him.

This story is inspired by the many great stories of VortexFoodsTM. While this story doesn't fit within the parameters of that world-build, it was in reading those stories that this story came to mind.


Categories: Crush, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Entrapment, Feet, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Instant Size Change, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7308 Read Count: 7882
[Report This] Published: April 20 2024 Updated: April 22 2024
Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed
Date: April 23 2024 Title: Chapter 1: The Girl

I enjoyed the story. However, I would have liked to see the time with her teasing him after shrinking last a little longer. In particular more actual mouth play rather than the immediate swallow. 


Still enjoyed it, but I think that's my biggest criticism of your stories in general. The actual vore parts frequently seem a bit fast and rushed. 

But still enjoyed it 



Author's Response:

Thanks Cameron. Glad you enjoyed it.

Your critique is valid - many of the vorings in my stories are often rushed or quick, which is purposeful in many cases. It's supposed to lend to the casual nature and callousness of the act from the viewpoint of the giantess as well as the suddeness of the act from the viewpoint of the victim. Having said that, there are instances where the voring is more elaborate and discriptive (BJ's voring in Nibs Adventures as an example).

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