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To Break in a Pet by WriteofPassage Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 261]
Summary:

The lone survivor of a horrific Shrinkee massacre is left dealing with the four giantesses responsible for the bloodbath as they compete to become her sole owner. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, BBW, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 411107 Read Count: 247209
[Report This] Published: September 01 2020 Updated: February 18 2024
Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06 2022 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

That was a really interesting interlude!Seeing how the resistance lives and what happened to Anabelle's sister was really cool. Also, totally called that the commander was Anabelle's twin hahahaha Is she going to help Anabelle or will she abandon her as not to risk the future of her people?I dont think is as binary as that considering Anabelle has been hinted as being important for shrinkies and more than just a normal type 0 so her survival and not being used by the organization, but we'll see. Still rooting for an imprinting ending, and for Zoey to get her just desserts hahaha

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Hi Naoru!

I'm glad you liked seeing the resistance's HQ. I wanted to show how they're able to pull off so many of their missions against the BSA. And good on you for guessing Beth's identity. 

We'll see about that imprinting ending, and Zoey is most certainly returning.


Thanks for the comment Naoru!

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Okay omg this story is the gift that keeps on giving, it gets better and better, and I have to say, the contrast between Naomi and Nell and her parents who are the first to openly say they would kill and dissect her, makes for a really good narrative. I love that even Naomi's parents have noticed her change and I truly believe that Naomi's feelings for Anabelle are honest. I just love her so much, I feel like she is getting higher in my steem hahaha

Also, I liked Camilla, and I really hope Anabelle can save her somehow. Now about Nell, there is a say in my country that goes "better the bad you know than the unknown good" or smth like that, roughly translated from spanish, and that may just be the case with Nell. Maybe Naomi knows something about Nell that we dont. Maybe the bug eating jokes means she eats shrinkies, though Naomi does that as well, or maybe she is the kind of shy loner with more problems than it meets the eye or wanting to control someone...?or maybe she is perfectly fine and I'm biased, Idk. 

Now about Naomi's dad and that implicit threat of getting her pregnant...oh dear that would be some nightmare fuel.

Waiting for a new chapter soon!



Author's Response:

Hi Naoru!


Yeah, I think Naomi's change is really obvious to people who know her and closely watch over her (i.e her parents). Glad to see you like Naomi, she's going to have some solid moments to shine in the upcoming chapters. 


And very intriguing thread you're pulling at with Nell. I won't say too much about that, but at the end of chapter 35, I think we see a glimpse of another side of Nell. 


And yup, Annabelle being impregnated would not be fun for her or the victim--I mean baby.


Thanks for commenting Naoru! I love your insights!

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15 2022 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I made a little something for you!I wasnt sure how to send it to you since I dont know your social media or email or anything but I made the formidable four for sims 4!I uploaded all of the screenshots to my twitter, I really hope you like how I did them!

https://twitter.com/NaoruReimarch/status/1592361933243809797



Author's Response:

This is soooooo cool!  I love seeing how you guys view the FF. These are really good, and I've never even considered the Sims as an outlet for character creation. Thanks Naoru, this made my, like, year.


Also I appreciate Harper's abs. 


Thanks again

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 03 2023 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

This may sound weird but I'm starting to really dislike Nel. She is so nice and considerate and naive, she is just...boring hahaha it would be one of the worse endings if Anabelle imprinted on her, she is just so bland and boring. Also she is cutting into Naomi's time and we cant have that!I hope next chapter gives us more Naomi, the true Sano goddess.

As for the parents is fine. They are the least interesting ones of the parent group so is okay. I'm saying uninteresting a lot and it sounds like I'm hating, but I love it as always!I just have my favorites hahaha

Happy new year and thanks for the chapter!



Author's Response:

Hahaha, yeah I get it. But rest assured, Naomi will get her time to shine. Also, I'd keep watching Nell if I were you. She might end up surprising you...


Happy Belated New Year Naoru! Hope you're still enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 07 2022 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

So you were right. This was amazing, truly amazing, really, I loved every second of it, I'm SO happy that my girl Harper got time to shine!!I'm so excited about this I could cry lol


Anabelle having an imprinting episode that wasn't an imprinting episode was amazing. Like, all the other times it was because Poppy possessed her, but this time it was Anabelle, being herself and utterly adoring Harper. It was a pity that the revelation took off from the fact that Harper was trying on her own way to build Anabelle's self esteem up. Harper has the capacity to being a loving woman, caring, thoughtful. She clearly cares about Anabelle and even enjoys talking to her more than she enjoys having sex with her! She also has insecurities, fears, she is a human being.

Anabelle is clearly struggling. She keeps reminding herself of the shrinkees Harper has killed, how she treats those she considers lower than herself, she is constantly reminding herself of those facts, because if she doesn't all she will be able to see are Harper's good traits and that would be terrible for her because then she would fall for Harper and her own values make her feel that is a bad thing to do, not to mention her not feeling deserving of love. Is a constant struggle and it was wonderfully represented.

My scales changed indeed. Now Anabelle and Leah are tight for spot 1, like, side to side. I do legit think Harper is the one Poppy would be the happiest with considering not only her but also her parents and home environment. But then again Goddess Leah is still strong in my heart.

I think next will be...Molly, probably. Step up the difficulty on emotional problems and whatnot I guess?I don't think it will be Leah because she is supreme and will most likely be last to have the last word as she usually likes to do. Naomi would be nicee too, though I'm not a Nell enthusiast like most others. She is nice and cute but not particularly unique to me.

Keep up the good work, I love it!!



Author's Response:

Ha! I'm glad you liked it Naoru.

I'm glad you commented on the "self-help game" Harper put together. I mean, I thought it was cute ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 

I'm happy you appreciate the little characterizations I gave Harper, and I like that you're noticing Annabelle's mental state (you should keep track of that...it may be important :) )

I'm excited to see what you think of the most recent chapter. It's basically a direct contrast to this chapter, so I'm very intrigued as to what your thoughts could be. 

Thanks for commenting again Naoru!

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 10 2022 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

After reading Ragar's reviews I do have to add some more on Harper's parents. I still think they are the best of the lot even if they are not my favorites. They are horny motherfuckers, who love their daughter and have teached her to be strong which is like, really good, considering the others are abusive towards their own daughters so yeah, they probably treated Anabelle sort of good by the parent's standards...in a sense. Also again, that scene was really hot.



Author's Response:

I mean the Abbots, especially compared to some other parents (you'll see), definitely are more willing to display affection. Which I really like, because they are the most physically formidable. I really like that contrast.  

Thanks again for commenting, Naoru!

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 10 2022 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I have to say, I never commented about it for some reason or the other but I always thought that from the parents there were two possibilities for parents using Anabelle as a sex toy: Leah's father as a way to somehow have a pissing match with his own daughter and Harper's parents because they are horny motherfuckers. And there you go! The sex scene was actually kind of hot but also kind of horrible. I feel like Poppy probably feels that Anabelle should be with the girls and not their parents. Is interesting that Poppy didn't appeared at all. No mentions of worshipping her betters or whatever. There is a criteria here, and not everyone meets it, just saying.

Is good that next chapter will be focused on bonding because while the Abbots are my second favorite parents with Warren on number one and the other ones being a meh on my book, I'm looking forward to tons of Harper. Harper's backstory, and a deeper look on who she is. I can only hope for Anabelle to appreciate her more but alas I will happy with whatever I get.



Author's Response:

Ugh, I can't wait for you to read Leah's chapter Naoru. I'm interested to see what you'll think.


And without spoiling too much, I'm very happy that you're paying attention to when Poppy shows up and what the surrounding circumstances are. 

Also, I hope you like the Harper chapter. I think there are some moments that you'll really appreciate.

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30 2022 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wow that was...AMAZING!!I haven't seen anyone's reviews just yet as I'm writing this but kudos to you for having the most interesting and engaging story on this website, easily!

The plot thickens!

Okay, I'm going to say it because this is obvious to me and probably everyone else but I bet the commander is Annabelle's twin that is not actually dead. Like, is the only reason Byte would confuse them so thoroughly. To think that Anabelle's twin is out there leading a revolution is amazing so I hope I'm on the right track. Byte seems like a cool kid and brought us the twist that tiny borrower like people exist on the world, living on people's homes and I'm all for it!Also that the governor belongs to a secret, rich people organization set against shrinkies was not that surprising but I still liked it.

I think is fascinating how Harper's dad was so soft and careful and dare I say kind?to Anabelle. The contrast between how they treat her and how they treat anyone else was strong this chapter. I want to look at the reaction of the parents of the other girls to all that happened, I don't know if is too much to ask?

So now they can't go back to college and they will go to their houses. I guess that's how we get backstories, with Anabelle spending time with them individually on their home. Looking forward to Leah and Harper the most not only because they are my favorites but their parents are also my favorites. I'm looking forward to see flaws on the girls, vulnerability, for them to evolve their relationship to Anabelle. I do want an imprinting ending after all!hahahaha 


Thanks for the good work, looking forward to the next!!



Author's Response:

Naoru, you flatter me :) 

I'm glad you're still enjoying the story, even with the sudden twist (though this is not the last or biggest twist in the story). I'm glad you caught General Abbot's reaction to Annabelle. You'll see how each parent treats her in further chapters. There will also be little slivers of insight into how the giantesses reacted to Annabelle's disappearance. 

Ha! And you definitely are not the only reader rooting for an imprinting ending. 


Thanks again for your comment!

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12 2021 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

I have to say that this is all very moving and it hit close to home to me. Anabelle's journey through her trauma, all the abuse she has gone through, and all the coping mechanisms she has to deal with that pain and trauma are what truly sets this apart from other GTS stories out there and I'm happy to have a chapter dedicated to it. It opens a way to heal for her, and possible endings for this. Maybe one where she doesn't imprints buts ends up staying with one of the girls?I mean, Leah would love this since she has shown signs she likes Anabelle more when she is either unwilling or just...challenging perhaps?then again, I think instead of "choose one and imprint" the better advice should have been "Pretend to imprint" which would make things easier for Anabelle indeed.

I like the relationship Steven has with Riley. Of course Anabelle doesn't, but just like Steven can't understand her situation, she can't understand his. He hasn't been abused and Riley doesn't uses him to pleasure herself, she seems legit nice, so I'm okay with them being wholesome.

I think this chapter gave us a lot of insight on Anabelle too, like, she is scared of being close to people because she is scared of losing them probably after her sister and mother's deaths, she has trust issues, and she doesn't think she deserves love, which I think is VERY important as to why even when the FF clearly do love and care for her, she still thinks of every excuse as to why they don't love her and just want to use her, other than the having her kidnapped and stuff.

As a last bit I think Steven lied to her about hearing a voice. He is a good actor, clearly, so is no surprise he deceived Anabelle. I think Poppy is like...the voice of her...species??Like in elfen lied, where Lucy had the voice of her instincts to kill humanity. Idk I may be wrong on this one, but I think Poppy is not a normal shrinkie thing like Anabelle thinks. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter but this was great

Thanks for the birthday wishes!



Author's Response:

No problem Naoru, I hope you had a great birthday!


I will say that there will be a chapter where Annabelle's backstory is revealed (I hope that's not a spoiler--I wouldn't just foreshadow it and then never address it lol) and it is pretty heavy, so I'll try to put a disclaimer in the author's notes.

Steven and Annabelle's conversations are so cool to write. I like Annabelle having an actual person to bounce her thoughts off of. 

I also loved all of the things you picked up on Annabelle's characterization. The contrast between Annabelle's refusal to believe she is worthy of love vs. the FF's love bombing is always interesting to write.

I can't speak to your predictions without spoiling anything, but I like hearing your thoughts.

I look forward to seeing what you think of the upcoming chapters.

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 26 2021 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

My birthday is this sunday 28 so if you don't mind i'll take this new chapter as my birthday present thank you very much!!


Not gonna lie I ended up frustrated that Anabelle hasn't spilled the beans about her past yet. I just really want the FF to know!Like, they want to help her and are concerned but they can't do much of anything if they don't know about the horrible things Zoey did to her. If this story has a climax where the FF avenge Anabelle I'll be a very happy woman. Seriously, I'm really looking forward to a lot of those revelations.


I'm starting to be annoyed at Oliver and Anabelle's crush for him. I hope she gets over it soon. Sorry, he is just kind of annoying to me.


I don't know what to think of the new type 0, or why are they there at all, maybe to make Anabelle confess about her past somehow...?I don't know, I may be thinking too much about it. It will be interesting for sure!


As for my ranking it has changed somewhat from when I started but not that much, My favorites are now Leah and Harper, followed by Naomi and then Molly in that exact order. Zoey now...I have mixed feelings about her, because I truly believe that what she did to Anabelle was worse than what anything the FF have done so far, like making her life miserable, bullying her and making her a target of bullying, beating her and so on. Even then I have to recognize that sick possessiveness is kind of appealing in it is own sick way...but nah. She can pound sand. Harper and Leah ftw, and if I had to choose between them, I would pick Leah.



Author's Response:

Happy (belated) Birthday!!!

Lol I understand the frustration with Annabelle keeping her past close to her chest, but you'll start to understand why pretty soon. I have to say, I think it's hilarious that the general assessment of Oliver is that he's trash. I wanna hear from my Oliver-stans! But seriously, we'll just have to see what's in store for Oliver in the upcoming chapters. 

I love how everyone's rankings are so different. I think Leah is such a favorite because she appears so strategic in her domination of Annabelle. It truly is impressive in a sick way.  

Zoey is probably one of the most fun characters I've ever written. She has done some truly heinous things and is responsible for a lot of Annabelle's trauma, but they have an interesting dynamic that is really fun to write.  The next few chapters will be about the FF, but I can't wait for Zoey's return. 

Anyway, thanks for your comment Naoru! I always like seeing what you think. And Happy (Belated) Birthday again! 

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 12 2021 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Yes, yes, yes!!!!This is all I have been wanting for, wishing for, ever since Anabelle's backstory was revealed, for her to tell the fantastic four about the abuse she went through, and their reactions are just what I hoped for, sadness over how much Zoey broke and abused her, setting the hypocrisy of that statement aside ofc. What matters is they are truly remorseful, they are truly sad, they truly care about her, no matter if Anabelle realizes or not. 

Now I can't wait for them to fuck high and mighty Zoey. I want them to ruin her life, and show her that Anabelle will be forever out of her reach. Fuck her. Fuck her good.

Nell is a good girl, and Naomi a horrible sister. Is easy to see her as the girl that is trying really hard to be studious to please her parents, that keep more attention on the rebellious sister because really that's how it usually goes. Maybe I'm reading too much into it?

As for Anabelle's true nature, Mr in a suit covered all I wanted to say and some more, I only disagree on its effects on non shrunk humans. I think Poppy is a goddess to other shrinkies, but not to regular people if that makes any sense?I do admit it would be interesting if the girls are "imprinting" on her and if maybe that was what made Zoey so obsessed with Anabelle if she was able to influence people before shrinking. I'm so fascinated by this story, I truly am. I check on it every day and all.

I honestly really would love an imprinting ending when she imprints to Leah or Harper. I don't even feel guilty about it, it would be amazing. 


Looking forward to next chapter!



Author's Response:

Ha! I love your analysis Naoru. The giantesses truly are saddened by Annabelle's experiences. There's not too much that they aren't in control of, so the fact that something they love so much was hurt, really bothers them to an extent they maybe didn't expect. I won't say anymore, but I did laugh out loud at your last line. 

I'd reckon that most readers are #TeamImprintOnSomeone rather than #TeamIndependentAnnabelle

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 21 2021 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

I can't really reply to people or edit my comments on this website which is weird, but I wanted to add that Adamx's comment made me realize the readers are probably divided between wanting Zoey to punish the Formidable Four and wanting the Formidable Four to punish Zoey.


 


I'm on the formidable four's side because to be honest I think Zoey is a lot more fucked up than they are, probably because her bullying feels more real than shrinking related stuff, but also because she went above and beyond to make Anabelle suffer, and she just seems to me like the one that should be punished. I don't know is probably my favoritism talking, because at the end of the day they are both making Anabelle suffer because they "love" her. At the end of the day I wouldn't say either is the good side, they are all equally selfish.


 


 


 


With that said, team Leah or Harper ftw



Author's Response:

Yeah, I mean personally I love them all, but I understand that everyone has their favorites. You raised some interesting and astute points about everyone's "love' for Annabelle. I honestly cannot wait to for you guys to see the story progress!

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18 2021 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

I'm a long time lurker. I have posted like, one or two reviews I think?but nothing as in depth as this wonderful story deserves, so I thought I wanted to give it a shot so you won't think no one is reading you. This is truly one of the best stories on this website. As in, is currently the only one I keep tabs on, and I try to recommend it to as many people as possible. I check on this a lot for new updates and get so excited when there is a new one!

So the parents appeared, finally. Molly's parents are stern, and strict so is not a wonder that Molly is actually deeply insecure. Naomi's are very formal and probably traditional, which probably is related to her being so punk, as a way to stablish her identity as an independent person. Leah's are just what I expected, specially her dad, who is a very hard case of like father like daughter. Ngl he ended up being my favorite of the parents, so if you don't mind I'm going to imagine he is hot, for my own personal enjoyment. Is a surprise that Harper seems to have the best relationship with her parents. They both seem to love her, her dad teached her self defense, and I don't see as much conflict with them as I see with the other girls and their parents. Harper has gone up on my favorite list so hard she is now very close to Leah as my favorite. 

 

At this point I kind of want for the girls to know Anabelle's past, so they can bond, probably?and be on the lookout for Zoey if that is even included in the information they have. But hey, I'm a firm vocal supporter of an ending where Anabelle stays a pet and imprints on one of the girls, so there you go xDDDD I would be so happy with a harem ending or where Anabelle ends up with Leah or Harper like so, so much.

I'll be looking forward to the next update!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Naoru! Your kind words mean a lot.


I love how you pegged all of the characters down cold. The parents are a lot of fun to write, and we'll be seeing some more of them since the FF have lost their bet to go away for the holidays (and ofc Warren is hot). I'm glad you like the characters so much! Based on the reviews I get, Leah and Harper tend to be at the top of the rankings. 

I wonder if their popularity will only get stronger or weaker when the future chapters come out...who can say :)

Thanks again Naoru, for the review.


Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21 2021 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Is it fucked up if I want one of the formidable four to fuck Zoey up?Be it best girl Leah or Naomi or Harper. Ruin her chances to recover Anabelle to torture her. Is it weird that I like the ff more than Zoey?Zoey creeps the fuck out of me xD 



Author's Response:

The devils you know, you know. Or in Annabelle's case—better the devils you know rather than the insane sadist you really know. 

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Definitely Naomi or Leah. Harper is a maybe, and Molly is too dumb for me to root for her. It would be cool to have several alternate endings where she ends up with a different girl to explore all posibilities but for me is definitely Leah or Naomi.

 

Also I think Leah was upset because Anabelle was being all excited with the other girls during her episode and she felt jealous maybe?



Author's Response:

I'm definitely open to a "What-If" series if people are interested. Both the story's outline and ending are already solidified, but I'm always imagining other endings in my head for fun.


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.