Sam and her childhood friend Nick are trapped in a world where there are small people who are treated as bugs for the amusement of others.
Since you have little kids in this story you think you can use babys/toddlers?
This will be an interactive story in which you, the reader can help influence what happens to Jake next! Simply leave a review with a general idea of what you'd like to see Jake put through next, don't forget to actually review though!
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Follow Jake, a half inch tall teenager as he adjusts to his new home life at his new shrunken size. In a world where a rare few are shrunk by a virus, and in which the shrinkees are typically abandoned or put out of their misery, Jake thought he was "lucky" to be going home with his family from the hospital, however, his three older siblings, a brother and two sisters, and their mother, might not have his best interests at heart as they each deal with their little brother in a variety of ways.
I would love his death to be butt related, specially his mother´s >w< I see some really interesting suggestions here and there, including one really interesting with hal´s butt. Anything with butts would be amazing >w<
I see a lot of feet/stocking/socks suggestions and thats really fine and all, but there is a lot of feet storys out there, try to be creative!I would love to see some interaction with the mom, like if she keeps him in the back of her underwear and smush him in her ass, or sits on him, or makes him massages the inside of her ass too!There isnt a lot of butt related storys out there, specially with overweight girls. And there could be some interaction with the brother too, maybe him getting on his underwear or something?I see toilet tag on the story so, a little of that, maybe with the mom would be nice too. So far its getting really good, just try to make the descriptions of how he feels more elaborate since that is the part that allows the reader to imagine what it would be like to be on his place. Keep doing it this good, its a really goos sotry so far.
A young Alyssa Wilson works at a local daycare centre when she mysteriously shrinks to 3 inches. She is then heavily abused and mistreated by the children there in her fruitless quest to find help.
Oh my god. You just made my day. I honestly never thinked that anyone was going to make the challenge, and its even better than its you. I love tales of a shrinking sister, so, its just perfect.
So far I love it. It do feels s little rushed, but its really good. The little toddlers are adorable, and I love the descriptions you make, and your writing style. I have no complains, please go on. Im loving it. And as a little side note, im a she not a he xD
I'm glad you enjoy my story. I haven't been writing in a little while so I decided to kill two birds with one stone by writing my first challenge while simultaneously sharpening my pen. I'm also happy to here that you have enjoyed previous stories of mine, so thankyou. Sorry for miswriting your gender, it has been corrected. Don't forget, if you want anything to happen in this story then just ask me. It is your sory after all =)
Awwww you are such a sweetie u3u
I would love if when the baby is going to be changed, she is almost rescued, but then the baby remembers her, and takes her out, for maybe to play and/or share with his friends maybe? Just an idea x3
So an almost rescue dashed by the baby retrieving her before she is noticed? Then mistreated (played) with again by him and his friends. I'll see what i can do.
Nick and Sam go to visit Jasmine, but something is wrong… things seem different.
I´ll be happy as a clam if there is any action with the toddlers. For what I saw in the last chapter maybe they are going to eat the buggys for snack?it would be cool to have them being played as toys, tossedin the diapers or child´s underwear or something.
Based on the life of three space travelers that were pulled into another planets atmosphere and thrust into this strange new world. Upon realizing that himself, and his other crew members can't ever get back home. They're forced to overcome some of the worst, and best happenings that could ever be imagined... However, this planet is very much like their own, only one thing is actually different....
This needs more butt action >w<
Cool. We'll see... ;`)
A young woman, prosecuted for a crime she didn’t commit, is placed in the hands of her titanic best friend to learn a few lessons she didn’t earn but most certainly will never forget.
Excellent; this was the plan all along.
@Nostory no one is inmune to verbal agression. I would be happy just with that. I know Bridget has her reasons, and she can help but believe what its at sight, but she should think that her best friend, her adopted sister, wouldnt lie, at least after that much damage. When people dont break at so much pressure and torture, they usually are innocent or dont know anything.
Right-on with the verbal aggression. You're correct that Bridget is going to have to confront things soon based on the fact that Lexi still hasn't caved despite all the torment. The story is starting to build to a head here.
@NightEye no, no, nooo where did you got that?at the end she says that she thinked on doing so, but that no one can take her trut away. She wont lie.
This was chilling to the bone. Im going to be very distresed until I can read next chapter.Wicked side of me wants Lexie to get back at Bridget when everything is solved.
You're right, she's not going to lie. Glad I could cause some distress. And I guess we'll just have to wait and see on Lexi getting back, won't we?
This story reminds meof a short video I watched once "A man in the woods" a child in a school starts to say that there is a man in the woods in which proximity the kidsplay in the school. Starts to describe the man as a killer, and all the kids start to talk about it,and to say they watched the man too. Soon the parents know, and the principalstart being harassed. He know the kid is lying, but no one would believe that a "sweet innocent child"would lie. That the principal is neglecting to do something about the killer,and they get him fired and ruin his life. The principal then goes to the woods, deciding to play along with the lie forced upon him,and kills the lying child.
I dont think its a thing of omegas being abusive; its about when someone we perceive as a victim, a child, a woman, someone we see as innocent and unable to lie, acuses someone of abuse, what can you do? teenager girls have accused teachers of molestation, just for being grounded or their cellphones taken. It happends. Now, think on this universe. A beta, a small, helpless creature that had been abused as a race over the years. One calls on an alpha abuser, and no one ever thinksit can be lying or being confused. They are seen as victims for the omega. They instantly believe.
I picture a story with an alfa falsely acused that breaks and starts murdering betas, to take upon the label forced on them. It could happend, anytime, because the omegas cant just believe. They got to be sure. It happends with anyone, in any society.
You bring up some interesting points. Certainly, a conflict I'm trying to shed light on here is the one of Alphas and Betas, albeit from a different angle than has been shown before, and how their past involving Beta subjugation has made it easier for this situation to arise. The Omegas are indeed not being abusive, and do their best to give fair treatment to everyone, but in certain cases like this one, it's hard not to side with the Betas.
==Sherman is just your average, straight male. When approached by his two gay friends to take a risk in his life and experiment with his sexuality, he gains a homophobic exterior to protect his gay tendacies... How much will he regret saying no when he loses the opportunity to avoid giant sized testicals and assholes?
Contains: Giants-Giantesses-Shrunken male and female-Anal vore-Cock vore- Scat-Watersport-Farting-tongue play-Ball Smother-Butt crush-Insertion-Man on Man sex- Man on Female sex-micro inside vagina-snot-Hair fetish-Futanari(dickgirls)
Ihighly encourage you to continue this.There arent a lot of male giant storys, even less that include butt and anal vore.Its not everyone´s cup of tea,but who cares!go ahead. Just try to fix the formatum. Lines look a bit weird to me.
Thank you so much for your review c: I agree with that, it's very hard to come by and as much as I have always loved to read the giant male content here, I just figured it was a better time than ever to try my hand at writting my first story. Thanks for that support though on the line portion, did you mean the ----'s I used to section off the text?
A young, overweight, girl with self esteem issues take a job at an office. One day she's an office assistant, the next day she has the world at her feet.
Is there going to be any butt action?Since you described her ass so much ne start to wonder...if not please do!Not just feet, but also butt and vore >w<
Oh yeah definitely. She is an extremely fat girl with an incredibly large ass. Definitely ass insertion and worship. As for vore...a girls gotta right?
The whole cheerleading squad was shrunken down and placed in the men's locker room where the football team was about to come in and change.
Honestly, I wouldnt go with guys shrinking in a cheerleaders locker room. Why?I would love that yeah, but it has been done so many times, and this site needs more male giants. I know its a giantess place, but diversity should be encouraged no repressed.
That said, you might like to elaborate more. Everything happened too fast, and not enough exposure for any of the deaths/interactions. Try to take your time, to pause, and describe sensations and scenarios a little more. To put on the thoughts of the victim and unaware tormentor. Slow it, at least for your next one.
I like reading diverse stories and noticed the same thing you wrote(about the lack of M/f). I will probably sway more towards the F/m genre in the future, but thought i'd try my hand at the other side. I appreciate the feedback because it's really the only way I know how the readers want the story to be paced.
5 years later Tim and Rebecca have returned, and they are back to their old shenanigans. Or maybe this is a prequel. I don't know. I haven't decided yet. Either way, old characters are back in an all new spin-off adventure, which now makes them a franchise of sorts.
Anyway, I'd say more but Rule 3 of the Submission rules states: "Titles and summaries must be kid friendly. No exceptions."
This makes it impossible for me to give an accurate honest summary of the story and what its about, and I can't leave this field blank, so I guess that leaves me no other choice but to ramble on for a bit like I'm doing and hope that makes the problem go away.
Uh, we had a slight weapons malfunction, but uh... everything's perfectly all right now. We're fine. We're all fine here now, thank you. How are you?
Im a fan of your storys!a lot of them are my of my favorites on the site; its really good to see you again.
Im loving this, and hoping for some more. If I can suggest something is a little bit more of male butt, since Im not really for things too much focused on the penis. Kinda personal preferences and you dont have to change anything, but I would apreciate just a little more butt. Female as well >w<
Hmm, yeah you can't go wrong with more butt. :o) Macro-erotic fiction could definitely stand to have more butt, and really just more of anything in general (except feet). That's just my opinion anyway. I think most people on here disagree.
Thank you for being a fan and for commenting.
A woman becomes engaged to her three-inch-tall beloved, but her staunchly conservative family may be prepared to go to extreme measures to prevent this union.
After Inheritance I thought everything was over. The site lost some of its char as I didnt really waited for anything with as much expectance as I did with it, but I feeled in peace. Just having a good time. But then, checking the most recent, I saw something. I saw your name alongside a new omega story, and then everything changed. I was naive, I thought I could take it. That I was fully ready for this. But I started reading, getting lost in your wonderful prose, in the marvelous emotions you are able to cast with a simple touch, with a story that holds such magic to brought tears and anguish to me.
Now im trapped again. Slave of my passions and uncontrollable desires,I now scroll every single day waiting for an update, holding my breath, getting ready for the worst, rooting for the characters, hating, loving, hoping for them, having one more reason to hate all the britneys in the world. So much. I just hope I can handle this before you destroy me.
Hehe. Glad I could ensnare you into more emotional trauma. I hope you manage to stick with it!
A tiny woman tries to escape from a psychopathic owner.
Please, you have to tell me that this story is marked as finished for some mistake on your part or on the site. Thus cannot be finished, I need MORE. I love the descriptions,characters,everything. Is Paige truly free?is Gideon going to find her?I must know. The only thing I would ask is for Gideon to shove tiny women on the back of his underwear more, instead of the front, but thats a silly request based on personal preferences so pay me no mind~
Several tiny people are captured by a ruthless exterminator.
I have been missing your writing hon!!I really like it,hope to see more of it in the future.
Thank you! :D I've been busy with real life, so I haven't been able to write as much. I'm hoping to finish this story (and several other stories that I have in mind).
A prince trades his freedom to become a giantess' pet in order to avoid an arranged marraige.
Now here comes the characters I wanted to see so much!!While Eric hasn´t interacted much with them, I trust he will in the future ;)
I like Mick the most, even if he is a wuss. I hope he gets to redeem himself in the future, because he do cares for Tor, and that´s nice. I actually kinda liked either Thomas or Brad, im not sure, the one who said that she got a pretty mare and a nice stallion?maybe because he actually seemed to at least appreciate the horses?those two are still a mistery. And Jason. Fuck Jason, even if it was pretty stupid of Tor to do that, since she has Eric to look over for. She should try to have some kind of tense cordiality at least instead of open warfare. Not that I can blame her for hating them but its still the wiser thing to do.
Yeah, anger tends to cloud the judgement. It's one of Tor's faults; her temper. Not the brightest, but she let Idiot have a bit of revenge. ;) lol Thank you so much for your review! I hope the reveal of her brothers was worth the wait. There is definitely more to come in the future.
It is too bad of me that I want Tor´s brothers to interact with Eric and not exactly in a gentle way?Idk why, but I just really want to xD it should put some things in perspective for him... not to mention I REALLY like giant male content and is lacking in this site. The reason is obvious, is a giantess site, but none the less I enjoy every bit I can have of male interaction.
I still love Tor btw. She is not entirely good, but she isnt evil either, and that makes her realistic. People want her to either be a gentle and perfect giantess or to see as some nasty person that eats humans, but honestly, just let her be something in between. Someone that has rage moments, that makes mistakes, that takes bad choices, but that tries to do her best, and that doesnt regret anything she has ever done and that´s just awesome. Let her be real. Not good, not bad, just real.
And kudos for mick not being a total asshole ;)
Thank you so much for loving Tor! Someone has to. haha She is a very "real" character. Just hang on for the next swing of her character arc. I'm about to add some stuff to it. ;)
As for Mick, he's not an asshle. Very much the opposite. He's a pansy. Thanks for the review!
