Penname: lancealot501 [Contact] Real name: lance
Member Since: September 25 2012
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I've been an author for the past few years and a lurker before that. I'm okay with the majority of sizes, but my favorite size would be amazon and minigiantess. I enjoy a wide variety of stories, but gentle is my favorite category. I'll be blunt and say that I hate most vore, crush, and anything excessively cruel. I'm not into feet, but I enjoy reading any story that I feel is really well written.

My goal is to one day have people see me and my stories the same way that I see people like Merritstone, Stewy, Spitfire, and some of the other great writers out there.
It may seem a little selfish of me but I write mainly for reviews. The reason that I do this is because having someone say good job to a full page review let's me know that someone out there loves to read my stories and wants me to continue them. Typically if I write a couple of chapters in a story and don't get any feedback then I'll simply stop writing it and move onto something else because it feels like no one is interested in that story. I urge everyone to support the authors on this site by telling them what you think about their work.
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Summary: A man shrinks due to a virus, and there is no way to turn him back to normal size.

Luckily, he has a loving wife who will take care of him. Or so he hopes.
Categories: New World Order, Giantess, Couples , Body Exploration, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Instant Size Change, Gentle, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: 2121
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 732 Read Count: 6510
[Report This] Published: August 07 2015 Updated: August 07 2015
Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed
Date: August 10 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You have a really nice set up here. Now I'm interested in how much he will shrink and how his wife will react.

Author's Response:

Well, I'm still working out the second chapter of this story and attempting to work on WHITE SMITE at the same time.

 

Never knew that updating multiple stories could be so hard.

 

It also doesn't help that I've got writer's block. D:

Summary:

Blue RibbonRed Ribbon

The titanic woman known as Eris has proclaimed herself Goddess and wages war against humanity, with her band of so-called Angels, from her base somewhere in the constellation of Sagittarius. But what do big, faceless, companies have to do with this? Follow Sidney, an ace naval pilot, as he seeks to uncover the ugly truth behind various rumours.

I believe there is acceptable balance of gentle and sadistic in this story.

P.S. A thanks to Nostory for applying vinegar, so to speak, to my rusty writing.


Categories: Destruction, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Sci-Fi, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60519 Read Count: 111708
[Report This] Published: August 23 2015 Updated: April 28 2016
Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 06 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One

Only on chapter 2 right now and I'm trying to avoid the reviews in case of spoilers. I'm really enjoying this story right now, it kinda reminds me of Macross Frontier. I'll keep reading and reviewing until I'm caught up with this.

Lastly I'd like to make a comparison about your story. I'm starting to believe that you based both the Captain and partially Sidney on Dr. John Hammond from Jurassic Park. Just replace 'state of the art' with 'we spared no expense'

Author's Response:

Never watched Jurrasic Park. Nor have I read Marcross Frontier. So I don't know. But do tell of Marcross Frontier. A link to it?

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 06 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three

Finally glad that we are getting a sense of how big these ladies are. Some things seemed off about their entire situation but I'm sure the next bunch of chapters will sort everything out. I can already see that this is going to be a very vast and complex story and I'm liking every bit of it. Kinda reminds me of Nova Force.

Lastly I'd like to give some professional advice on'radio communication'.

Over-you have finished speaking and are waiting a response.
Out- you have finished a transmission and are not expecting a reply. Think of hanging up a phone.
Over and out- never used because it's redundant. Hollywood is to blame for this. Basically you are saying I want a response but I'm done talking to you.
And lastly every individual would have a unique call sign that wouldn't be their name(for security reasons) typically if your just talking with one person then you would only identify yourself and the other person for the first time. After that you would just say over at the end until you are done with the transmission.

Author's Response:

It's rare that I find reviews this helpful. Now I know I'll have to rewrite parts of the chapter. But that's a good thing. Maybe I'll do a render of one of your stories as a thanks over the weekend. I'm liking your reviews.

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 06 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four

Alright so Nyx is a whole lot bigger than what I imagined her to be. I guess we'll see I'm future chapters if there is a size difference between the angels. I thought originally that they were between 50-70feet tall but I was way off. I don't know why but I deeply enjoy when a women ends up being a lot bigger than what we thought. It was excellent how you had her feet come down from the ceiling. I'll continue to review this as I read it.

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five

I'm not into feet at all and through all of the giantess stories I have read very few have every interested me. I gotta say that this one chapter has been added to the select few. It was amazing how you described how the huge chamber was only big enough to fit the angels feet.
It's nice to know that Wayne isn't a total jerk. Grumpy at times sure but his true feeling towards Nyx seem odd.
Lastly I'm glad to finally get more interaction with Persephone, but I just got the feeling that Nyx is going to do a d@$k move and destroy the perfectly good airplane.

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven

So we find out that Wayne was in a similar position as Sidney and could have been what Sidney would eventually turn into if the angels didn't find him so important.
After saying that I don't think that I'm going to miss Wayne all that much. He seemed to be a 'information' character at best.

I was expecting to see more of Persephone and I wasn't disappointed in the least. You put the right amount of detail that just made the character 'pop' out to the reader. It was also nice to know that not all angels are monsters, sort of.
Now I want to know more about the angels. Are they a different species or are they actually humans that were specifically chosen by the goddess and transformed somehow into the giantessthey are now. I was also expecting her daughters to bigger slightly bigger than average if angels are artificially made.

Lastly I find it really ironic that the one Angel we know to have died was Nike the Greek goddess of victory herself.

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Eight

Just some quick grammar things I saw. I think you forgot 'than' when talking about Woah's flood. Also the last sentence is missing a'him' so it would become keeping him alive.

this seems to be a great chapter as always. Really enjoyed the Persephone interactions and some background information. The thing that was weird for me was the fact that her daughter, who is human, also eats human meat. I can understand angels doing it because they aren't completely human anymore but a fellow human leaves me a bit uneasy.

From the last part of this chapter it leads me to believe that even the angels don't know how they were made except maybe the goddess herself. It also seems that Sydney's human government wasn't the ones to create the angels or they would have made some to combat that goddess. I'm sure that we'll learn the truth in due time, but having more Persephone is always a good thing.

. Macross Frontier is an anime about pilots fighting giant bugs in space with an awesome sound track. One pilot is Klan Klang who is a loli while in shrunken human form but turns into a busty giantess in her regular form. One of the best anime I've ever watched.

Author's Response:

But what if Althea, as a result of being pampered by Persephone, doesn't consider herself human? There will be more of both her and Persephone in the future chapters, that you can be sure of. I will find those mistakes and correct them.

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 08 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve

Alright, so I'm completely wrong about Wayne. If he did create the angels you would think that the goddess would want him dead. If I was in her shoes I wouldEliminate the guy would could potentially find a weakness.

Now it seems that either Persephone's daughter wants Sidney to be happy or she wants to know more about her mother.

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 09 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Fifteen

Wow, there is a lot of things that I want to say about this chapter and some other things that have been on my mind. This might get a little confusing but try to hear me out.

The first thing that have been on my mind is that the Angels just don't feel as powerful or intelligent as you would think. The only thing the angels have going for them is their size. I can understand that they are really big, but that seems to be it. Most battles occur in space which means that technology is doing all the hard work. We had then shown as intelligent because they hacked a state of the art ship, but now we know that is was done prematurely by code. The angels also seem gullible to a fault. I would just use their pride against them to lure them into a trap. All in all the angels are intimidating but we aren't seeing what they are capable of that a normal girl could do if they were the same size.

I'm still onnn the border with the whole diamonds thing. Other than drill bits, diamonds have no real value. We can actually make things artificially harder than diamonds. Unless the future has some sort of special use for them then it would have been better if the planet was made up of some unknown element that has some actual use.

I'm not trying to sound harsh but I just haven't seen anything special about the angels except for being really big. Other than that this is still a great story.

Author's Response:

I added this to a private message to you at Giantess City and I'm posting it here with some minor alterations so people can see my response to the points raised. You can ignore this if you wish, Lancealot501.

This is a long response so bear with me for a few minutes. And I hope you respond and clarify yourself. The essence of my reply is that I think you're not putting yourself in the humans' 'shoes' as it were and seeing the story with the 'reader's bias' as it were. And, just so you know, I plan to release some visual aids to help the reader visualize the main characters.

You're not seeing it from the human perspective. You know things, being a reader, that 99% or more humans in the story don't know. They weren't aware the Angels had help. What the humans see is a power hungry, and seemingly unstoppable, giantess.

They do know the Angels have pride, and maybe you are right that they are gullible. However, maybe they (or their flagships) have design flaws built in purposefully to keep them in check. Like a fail safe.

Moving onto the diamonds, I have two things to say. Firstly, I know that diamonds are nothing special (so I buying diamond jewellery is stupid to me), but most people don't know that prices are kept artificially high. Secondly, what if the Angels were created to manufacture wars as well?

What if the arms manufacturers were in on them too? Which they must be because his else could they get such big ships. What if this is also part of a plan to drive up sales of military hardware too?

Even today people talk about how the billionaire class rule the world, secretly. Some people don't care how many people suffer in their pursuit to be richer. The Angels make perfect sense from sales perspective. They seem somewhat alien yet they manage to be sufficiently human.

I don't like I unknown elements. I want this story to be science fiction not science fantasy. I'm trying to make it believable, and within the scope of possibility.

When you say: "we aren't seeing what they are capable of that a normal girl could do if they were the same size."

You're seeing things as the reader. Eris took the credit for hacking the ship. As far as the humans on that ship were concerned, the Angels can do things humans can't do. Yes, it's all an elaborate façade, but the humans fighting them don't know that.

In summary: I don't think you're bring harsh. Instead, I think you're being short-sighted. You forgot to remember a that you know things the typical human does not know. The average human will buy into that fear, like how more people die because in motor vehicle accidents than terrorism but we must be scared of terrorists. Keeping diamond prices artificially high may be a side effect or a sideshow.

Billionaires like to hang out with each other at exclusive clubs, be members of exclusive organizations and attend secret meetings. It's conceivable that several individual billionaires decided to start working together for a common goal after having discussions at a secret meeting. That common goal being to increase their wealth.

So what you might have is a closely guarded meeting of C.E.O.s of different companies plotting create entities that achieve their common purpose. Since you've finally reached the newest chapter, it might be worth you going to read the reviews now as there has been extensive discussion about the story already, as well as with user NoStory, in private, via e-mail before posting chapters.

There is still room to expand the reasons the Angels were created. The mining companies don't have be mining for just diamonds after all. Platinum would be even better than gold I suspect.

In terms of special powers, I want them all to be something theoretically possible in biology so that's quit restrictive. Maybe Eris secrets poison; I don't know? Perhaps Nike could have had the ability withstand the vacuum of space (like those tardigrades that were taken into space and put on the outside of the I.S.S. and survived), allowing her to get up close and personal with the humans, but her arrogance ultimately cost her. In my discussions with NoStory, we agreed that whoever kills Eris will need to get up close somehow because she has an 'Achilles heel' if you will. My understanding is you don't want spoilers so unless you ask I won't say more.

Summary:

Tom, a normal guy, gains the ability to change reality in whatever fashion he pleases. And whatever changes he makes becomes the norm with everyone acting as if the changes were always present. Even though many changes are possible the only changes Tom will be creating is size related


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing Woman, Odor, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26780 Read Count: 218483
[Report This] Published: November 25 2015 Updated: July 02 2021
Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed
Date: October 11 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction with vore

I've really enjoyed the story so far, especially the role reversals. The only thing that I can say is that the main character must be disillusional as all get out. It seems that no matter what he does he believes that he is making the world a better place.

Author's Response:

Thanks. Well, he does have ultimate power, that's bound to make anyway a little dilusional. Of course, the idea of making the world a better place is highly subjective. I, for one, am totally in favor of his changes, if you know what I mean =)

Summary:

A marriage spices up their sex life


Categories: Couples, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1208 Read Count: 38972
[Report This] Published: December 29 2015 Updated: June 09 2016
Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think that this was a really good story, but the second chapter needs a lot of editing. The first chapter felt professionally written with a good pacing. The second chapter seemed rushed and kept changing perspectives while leaving out a few details. If you go back to writing like you did the first chapter then this story will quickly rise to the top given the great foundation that it is written on.

Summary:

A land exists parallel to our own that is full of fantastic races and kingdoms that vie for control of the lands.  A lone corpsman is flung into this land with no memories of how he'd gotten there.  What adventure awaits?


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Gentle, Insertion, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 866 Read Count: 4233
[Report This] Published: April 03 2016 Updated: April 03 2016
Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

First off I would like to say that I'm enjoying this story so far and I'm really hoping that this continues. Now that I've told you how good of a job you have done it is now time to give you some critiques.

The biggest problem I have is with the first aid portion of this story. The first thing you should do for a head injury is apply a tourniquet around the neck to stop the bleeding...sorry that was a joke that always comes up in any cls class. The real problem I had was with how the elf was positioned. I imagined her sitting against a tree unconscious. If so then the MC would have to climb up her body, and depending on where her head is, stand on her neck. I don't imagine that it'd be easy to stand on an unstable surface and apply pressure for 15 minutes. If she was laying down on her back or side I would be fine with it. Now comes the second part. If she was sitting then the guy would have to be on her. When she would try to get up then he would definitely fall off. If she was on the ground then this wouldn't be a problem at all.

Again I would like to say good job and hope that you continue this.

Summary:

As his sister slowly grows, Kyle finds himself losing control of their relationship...and of himself.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breast Enlargement, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Incest, Maternal, Odor, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14660 Read Count: 225448
[Report This] Published: May 25 2016 Updated: June 29 2016
Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed
Date: June 10 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This story is really shaping up to be a nice one. I'm a little biase when it comes to sizes but this is turning out wonderfully. Hopefully she keeps getting bigger but not too big.

Author's Response:

If by that you mean you want her to stay less than 15ft, then yes.  The only growth tag I used is "amazon" and that is in fact accurate.  Glad you're enjoying.

Summary:

Ok, so my other story wasn't working out as well as I hoped. It seemed people weren't as interested in it, and that's fine. I'll eventually get around to finishing it but for now I thought I'd go for something with a little more giantess content. This is my superhero-eque story line that I had been hinting at for so long. This one wont' be as well written and characters won't be quite so in depth but whatever, I just want it to be fun. Anyway, it focuses on an ancient race of giant women who are now returning after centuries of slumber to conquer the world. One of the oldest, a giantess named Lys, has had a change of heart and comes to warn everyone of the encroaching doom. Anyway she has some trouble adjusting to modern society, has to find a way to beat out all the other giantesses, blah blah blah, you'll see. This will hopefully have more action and a lot more "interesting" content. Hope you enjoy!


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing Woman, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12893 Read Count: 15937
[Report This] Published: June 05 2016 Updated: August 04 2016
Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10 2016 Title: Chapter 2: A Long Time Since

This is a really good story, with some really great ideas. There are a few questions that still need answered but I'm sure you'll answer them in due time.

One thing that i do want to comment on is the writing style. Most people like stories that have a good idea, events, size range, etc. The one part that they skip out on is the writing style.

You are easily one of the best writers that I've read and that means a lot considering the numerous stories that I've read. It kinda makes me jealous of how good you are. I'll definitely be checking out your other stories once i get some time.

Author's Response:

Thanks man! Glad you like it so far. If you like my style in this you'll definitely enjoy The Masks of Gods.

Summary: A story about a giantess size game of Pokémon go.
Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1774 Read Count: 8615
[Report This] Published: August 03 2016 Updated: August 03 2016
Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed
Date: August 05 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm glad that you enjoyed it

Summary:

A place to to put any commissions or requests written.

Details in the first chapter.


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46065 Read Count: 31333
[Report This] Published: September 04 2016 Updated: February 20 2017
Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 05 2016 Title: Chapter 2: It's A Date, Then

This story turned out a lot better than i could have imagined. Really nice details and interactions on this story. I sent you an email for you to check out.

Author's Response: Always a pleasure, Lancealot. I had a whole lot of fun doing this and would be happy to do another commission for you anytime- either a continuation of this or one from your idea bank. Thanks again!

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Undefeatable

I certainly enjoyed this story. My favorite part is where she tells Brittany that just one of her own was bigger than both of the other girl's. The only part I'm confused about is how exactly was Brittany knocked down the first two times.

Anyway once commissions are open again(and I can think of a proper sequel) then I might commission a second chapter.

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Undefeatable

I certainly enjoyed this story. My favorite part is where she tells Brittany that just one of her own was bigger than both of the other girl's. The only part I'm confused about is how exactly was Brittany knocked down the first two times.

Anyway once commissions are open again(and I can think of a proper sequel) then I might commission a second chapter.

Author's Response: Sounds good to me! I'll Let you know when I am able.

Summary:

We've all made mistakes in our lives, some more serious than others. What if that mistake endangers an entire village? Can you ever come back from that?

For Sery,she find she herself in that exact situation. She's done some awful things, asking herself those exact questions and wondering if coming back from it is a Sisyphean task. 

 


Categories: Fantasy, Giantess, Adventure
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2649 Read Count: 4516
[Report This] Published: November 04 2016 Updated: November 04 2016
Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed
Date: November 04 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Part 1

Interesting concept so far, but it leaves a lot of questions opened. Hopefully they are answered in the next chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! This is just a prologue so yeah its not going to answer a lot of questions, more like lay down questions to be answered. 

Summary:

As a short man, having a tall girlfriend can be interesting.  When she can shrink you, you might need to reconsider just how much that height difference bothered you.

 

Edit: When I had this idea it was going to be a one-off with the protagonist getting crushed right after he shrinks, I never expected this to grow to a novel-length story!  Thanks to everyone for the support as I continue writing this.


Categories: Feet, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Footwear, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Mouth Play, Muscle, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92513 Read Count: 283130
[Report This] Published: May 15 2017 Updated: November 27 2017
Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 22 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Fooling Around

I'm more of a gentle fan myself, but this story has been amazing so far. It'll be interesting to see how Fulda's sisters begin to learn and use their power. The fact that they enjoy being so tall could play into it.

I imagine them being in the girl's locker room taking a shower with Anni one day when she makes a comment about how short they are comparatively. The sisters not liking this shrink Anni down while she washes her hair. The seven and a half amazon finds herself cut down to size as the sisters pick on her for her new height.

Anyways that's enough blabbing from me. I can't wait to read your next chapter