A girl finds herself under her mother and friend's feet constantly, in a world where people wear other people in their shoes.
I like this story a lot, especially the character of Anna and your descriptions of the foot action. I'm not really into the whole Mom thing but other than that it's perfect. Takes no wasted time to get into the good stuff, which is absolutely a good thing.
Misako, a goddess of competition and strength decides to visit a city and play a bit of a game with them, a short lived game. However she gets distracted by the less then competitive city's skyline and decides to play some games of her own.
Warning: This story does contain a Hermaphrodite Giantess, if you are...easily squicked by such things, please hit back.
I think this story has potential, and is pretty good so far. One thing I like is that you seem to have a lot of different ideas for interactions (for example, when her tear hits him. there are a million stories about feet or breasts, but tears are a liquid i've almost never seen used).
I wish you'd linger a little longer on things though. Like take just a few more sentences to describe some of the "scenes". It's important in a story like this.
Also, when you say you're doing a chapter for each day with a girl, does that mean Melony will be the subject for the next 5-6 chapters before another girl, who then takes 7 chapters? I don't want to say it's a bad idea, but you might want to think about bringing in the other girls faster. And then maybe having some kind of conflict between them based on their different feelings for the shrunken boy.
I don't wanna be too negative on it. The interactions between the characters are pretty cute and should get better as the story continues.
I mean, do whatever you want. Just my thoughts. I'm still starting out as a gts writer too so I wanted to say a few stray observations.
I like the new chapter. But one thing: you never describe how Miranda looks? She's a new character but you just describe her as the protagonist's crush. You describe the looks of the other two girls, but not her. Just a little nitpick you might have missed. Keep going, I think you're improving.
In a tumbleweed town in the Texas-Mexico border country, a vaquera (cowgirl) and an unnamed drifter meet in a bar. Some Spanish dialogue for color.
Really enjoyed this. Great concept.
A teenage girl starts to learn about magic...only to discover that she's entirely unsuitable for it. But if she drains away the vitality of others, things start to change...
Amazing story. I love the idea of a girl using magic and actually gaining power when she shrinks someone. Your writing in the erotic scenes is excellent and I can't wait to see this story continued.
Tomas Powell was a young and shy boy, living with his mom and sisters. He discovered that he have a foot and giantess fetish, but he is fighting against it, since he became to fantasize it with his family. One day he shrinks after an weird accident and all of his wishes become true, but it will make him really happy? He enteres into a new kind of life, and discovers what can be truly good and bad, as his mom and sisters didn`t see him as a person anymore.
A very good start to the story. I like the characters, especially Melanie (?) the tomboy sister. I have a weak spot for converse so even better. I can't wait until she makes good on her threat...
By chance, are you the same ace of spades that makes mmd giantess/shrink vids?
Thank you! I`m glad that you liked the characters.
And no, It`s another person.
Scott Stevens once again finds himself shrunken and in the hands of his sister Maggie, who brings her tiny sibling along for a week of soccer camp. When her teammates discover the miniature teen, he'll find himself in problems even deeper than giant shoes.
People seem to be forgetting that the stories on here are fiction.
Please continue to write about the themes that interest you without worry to the sensibilities of others, there are plenty of other things written/drawn/etc every day that will appeal to every taste.
Really great story as usual. I love how the sister acts at the end of chapter 2.
thanks for reviewing. i'm glad you got what i was going for. certainly, i'm aware that this is tricky ground i'm treading on here, so i try to make sure what i write won't offend anyone, but sometimes it can't be helped i guess.
Read the full version with pictures, but I figure I'll review here. This is a masterpiece. Perfectly paced and descriptive, with a mix of physical and psychological domination that just keeps ramping up in intensity until the climax. Can't heep enough praise on this story. The illustrations are great too (pogojo's competent enough, and his er, unique style isn't too distracting here).
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Mark has a problem. He likes to wear his sister's clothes, but what will happen if she catches him?
Good start. I hope she dresses him in doll clothes or something to humiliate him further. Hope you continue.
Amy is an 8th grade girl who lives her life in fear (and awe) of her 7th grade bully, Kelsey. Carrying the shrinking disease that will one day shrink her to less than a half-inch in height, like it has already done to the rest of her family, Amy tries to coast through day to day life. With no friends and no future, she quickly comes to accept her nature, and role in the relationship that she has with her bully.
Please continue it Survivor! Great concept and you're one of the best writers ever!
A collection of short stories that will usually have some sort of holiday theme or other significant event. If you enjoy my other works, these will be no different.
The most recent chapter is wonderful. A perfectly realized fantasy scenario. Getting shrunk down by the beautiful tall girl that knows so much more than she lets on and is always in control. Always love your stories especially the focus on big feet.
A college student learns there are worse things than missing class.
It's really a shame this has no reviews. It's one of the best stories I've read in a long while. You are very good at writing the "dream/nightmare" kind of story that I think is really effective and the source of so many shrinking fetishes. No wasted time with explanations or reasoning but just the pure excitement of shrinking, being around tall and uncaring women, knowing the situation is unfair but not being able to do anything about it. There are stories on this site with 100k words that aren't as good as this one!
Thank you so much! This was the first story I ever posted here, and it means a lot that someone finally reviewed it. I enjoy writing nightmare stories, since they let me include things that I can't in others. I have another stand-alone nightmare, Test Anxiety, and often include dream sequences in my longer stories - multiple chapters of them sometimes if you include alternate endings as dreams. Don't be shy about letting me know what you think of them if you check them out.
A novice catboy wizard teleports to a world previously unvisited by his kind; only to find his magic is unrestrained here, and the populace at his feet.
A short story by Dark Writer. Rachelle makes a quick stop at her old alma mater for a workout and a shower. Two freshmen repeatedly annoy her and she easily puts them in their places, permanently!
Incredible! You have a real talent. There are a lot of us out there who love the scent/sweat "niche".
Your review is greatly appreciated. I'm not sure of the general view of my story as feedback is very lite. I do believe you are correct, there are a lot of people who love the scent and sweat genre. How many have or shall read this submission I do not know. I fear that as more stories are posted, this one shall simply get lost at the bottom of the pile and my efforts will have been for so few of us.
If I get more enthusiatic reviews I may post another story. Maybe even another armpit one although my stories usually focus on the female posterior, especially her buttcrack's sweat and scent.
As to me having talent, your words are too kind and too exagerated; therefore I take them with a truly humble bow.
A college student tries to capitalize on a beautiful student he sees eating alone, but pays dearly when she turns out not to be the delicate, wounded flower he expects.
Really excellent work on this story!
After the first day of their senior year, two bullies are delighted when a freshman stumbles upon them alone, and they quickly spring the trap.
Tall girl bullies are simply the absolute best for stories.
Even when life is at its most hopeful, a single rotten day can ruin your whole outlook.
Great story! You've been on quite a roll lately. I really like stories where the giantess shrinks people by humiliating or beating them. I also enjoyed that she wasn't completely sadistic (not that I don't enjoy the sadistic girls in your other stories). Keep it up!
A boy's bizarre dream about his best friend sets off a series of events, and he becomes increasingly excited as his dreams start to come true.
I love the situation and the relationship between the characters. Looking forward to seeing where it goes.
I'm glad this is getting a lot of support, and after reading some of your stuff that means a lot from you. Please keep reading and reviewing, I don't think you'll be disappointed.
