Penname: Neon [Contact] Real name:
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Summary:

A hosptial filled with shrunken visitors and staff. One maniac on the loose, hunting down said shrunken people for her own reasons and pleasure. Mostly pleasure. 


Notice! After consideration on my end I decided to redo a scene in chapter 4. The choice was entirely my own as, after thinking on the subject, decided what was originally there is a path better left untraveled. 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Alpha-Beta
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19105 Read Count: 29352
[Report This] Published: August 13 2021 Updated: August 20 2021
Reviewer: Neon Signed
Date: August 14 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: There's A Maniac Within These Halls

You've created a wonderful sadist in Maya. I hope we'll learn more about her and her motivations as she continues her rampage. Terrific start! Keep it up.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so! Was a rather big decision going through with this story so I'm glad you enjoyed it! 

Summary:

A college student spends her evening relieving her stress with a box full of tiny humans

Currently mainly foot content, will have more than that as the story gains more chapters.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Vore, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Footwear, Feet, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 983 Read Count: 5013
[Report This] Published: August 14 2021 Updated: August 14 2021
Reviewer: Neon Signed
Date: August 14 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chloe Returns

Off to a great start! I look forward to seeing where you go from here. If I could make a suggestion, even though the focus is on Chloe, devoting a bit more of the story to the nano perspective could add a lot to the dynamic. In any case, I like it and I hope you continue!