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GH-X2 by imagin8 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 345]
Summary:

Jack, a 'regular'-sized 17-year-old in a world now populated predominantly by humans twice that height, struggles to cope with life in a school and society built for people far larger than he will ever be.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Giantess, Adventure, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Muscle, New World Order, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: GH-X2 Universe & Spin-Offs
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 138078 Read Count: 783651
[Report This] Published: September 12 2013 Updated: March 23 2024
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: May 20 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Revelation

I didn't saw the chiildhood backstory, it's well done. Thanks for these latest chapters. Enjoy your well deserved break. I hope to read u again soon.



Author's Response:

I take it you're saying you didn't see the childhood backstory coming? I hope that made it all the more interesting, anyway. Thank you, I will try and recharge my batteries now!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: September 25 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Your poser images or poser video are not bad quality-wise and I don't think most of your readers/fans are very picky regarding this as your poserwork is brillant.Anyways I respect your decision.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: May 25 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Glad to know this story continues.However, odds are not vwith Jack about escaping !!!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: September 24 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Great Story!Besides, I'd like to know if you will illustrate as I know you're a great poser maker.



Author's Response:

I've been using my 3D modelling skillz to help flesh out the story - to get comparative sizes and things as accurate as possible - but I won't be able to make the renders looks as good as I can imagine it when writing, so I probably won't try to. I may release a couple of test images to show the basic 'look' of the characters, but I'd rather that people let their own preferences shape how they envisage it.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: June 01 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

By the wait, how does Jack see being inside in the teddybear?



Author's Response:

The bear is made of quite a chunky knit material, which you can sort of see through. Imagine putting a woolly jumper over your head - you can see through the little holes between the wool surprisingly clearly, without being seen.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: August 11 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Great chapter poor Jack! Is alex the girl who crushed Jack's pen ? I hope you'll update soon again.



Author's Response:

Yes she is - she also carried him to the bathroom the first time he encountered Caitlin.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: August 12 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Inundation

well maybe there's some hope for Jack when you see alex's attitude but it'll much better if jack's friends show up!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: August 12 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Inundation

well maybe there's some hope for Jack when you see alex's attitude but it'll much better if jack's friends show up!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: May 12 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Good Chapter! I starting to doubt about any rescue for Jack.

Are you going to post another one quickly or not?



Author's Response:

I am going to try and work on one swiftly, but if I'm not happy with it, I will not put it out, unfortunately. I have to be stringent, as there were a couple of chapters I rushed out earlier, and I'm not 100% happy with them because of it.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: May 16 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Great chapter again! Well, Jack become a totally toy, slave. The fact that he dissociated himself emotionally from what is happening is maybe a defense mechanicism. Penny will return but I don't bet on justice system. However, I bet on bad karma style justice like Cayce's Summer Job.

PS: you are a great writer as beginner!



Author's Response:

I think his weariness is reaching the point that he's not himself any more, he hasn't got the energy or the mental faculty to fend her off or plan as he did when she first got a hold of him. It's now an endless sequence of one-sided experiences that he has to withstand. She does appear be trying to keep him weak, hungry and on edge because she's aware of how crafty he can be, but perhaps that's just the author speculating...!

Cayce's 'Homunculus' is my all time favourite GTS read, and it wasn't even because I found it erotic (feet and being inches tall is not my preference at all) - it was because the story was incredible, and twisted and toyed with my emotions so much I could Not. Stop. Reading. I will deffo have to make time to read Summer Job, I may have tried to read it before but not got into it as much, or something. 'Homunculus' especially convinced me that I should try and write a 'proper' story, something that gave the characters motivations and made the experiences that much more meaningful than just 'giant sexpot touches your dick'. I like to think GH-X2 is my paltry attempt at repurposing that kind of approach to meet my own interests in macrophilia.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: August 12 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Inundation

well maybe there's some hope for Jack when you see alex's attitude but it'll much better if jack's friends show up!

Summary:

John has a disease that has caused him to shrink. Around half of the world's pop shares this problem. Living with his shrunk mom and dumped by his normal sized gf. John meets a normal sized girl named Kim, and the two learn that true love comes in all sizes.


Categories: Couples , Gentle, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18493 Read Count: 60489
[Report This] Published: September 23 2013 Updated: January 31 2018
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 01 2018 Title: Special Someone

I totally forgot this story. So  I did re-read from the start. Your writing skills gets better. Nice chapter. 



Author's Response: Thank you, I do feel I have improved since I started writing this a couple years ago.

Summary:

Three girls must face the consequences of their actions after they assault a member of a smaller race.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94864 Read Count: 291724
[Report This] Published: January 10 2014 Updated: July 03 2015
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: June 15 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Imprisonment

Melody lying for Corey is not a big thing as she's her girlfriend, I wonder what Stephanie said to claire! Jenna seems to have real emotinal issues! 



Author's Response:

We'll have to find out later :3. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 22 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Imprisonment

Great story! Just a little confirmation : Is Marion really dead?



Author's Response:

Thank you.

 

And no, as was mentioned by another commenter, she was regugitated after 2 hours.

Erica's House by realRS Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

When every member of her family is shrunk to doll size 16 year old Erica becomes head of the house. 

Will the Rockwell family adapt to the once shy Erica being in charge?  Will Erica let the power go to her head?  


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, New World Order, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28671 Read Count: 97578
[Report This] Published: January 16 2014 Updated: September 29 2016
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 29 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection

Glad to see that this story continue too. Can somebody just refresh my memory & tell if the unshrunken enhanced people has been mentionned in previous chapters?



Author's Response: Rich folks benefitting from nanotechnology enhancements was mentioned in chapter 2, but when I do a full overhaul of the series I plan to seed that idea a bit more in multiple sections.

Summary:

The story of After Shrink High continues. Hope seems to have been all but lost with the ending of Act 1.

 

But there are still those who fight the Society's corruption. Outside Atlanta, men and women struggle to survive in the new shrunken world all while fighting against the titanic giantesses of the Society. The shrunken world is a harsh place, but such a cruel world may just temper the only hope of stopping the Society.

 

Act 2 assumes you have read Act 1 so make sure to read it first.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Growing Woman, Insertion, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: After Shrink High
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 277997 Read Count: 207888
[Report This] Published: February 26 2014 Updated: December 29 2014
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: December 07 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

 don't get why Sanders wanted pyarr to go to pick up Jimmy and co before coming back to save soldiers hidden in the rubble. those were closer to pyarr. can someone help if i misread due my basic english, please?



Author's Response:

Because they had the computer with Manchent's plan on it. Without that, the plan the group made after learning the truth would fall apart. Put simply, they were more important and needed to be saved ASAP lest it fall into Aviel's hands

Omega: Family by Ackbar Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

An anthology of shorts detailing the life of a mixed-size family.


Categories: Couples , Gentle, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9130 Read Count: 40341
[Report This] Published: April 27 2014 Updated: February 14 2015
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: December 09 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Separation

Due my basic english, I need to clarify this: Did howard come in claire bedroom via beta sized walkway above her bed and he then jumped?

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 15 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Separation

yup so cute, but this story needs some drama. bring elena back!!!! lol



Author's Response:

Drama will honestly be a little scattered, as this is mostly for light fun stuff. Though I do have some more drama-y stuff in mind! Thanks for commenting.

Summary:

An honest employee of the Techilogic Corporation sets out to investigate the new widespread use of the shrink ray, only to uncover darker revelations about the business he’ll soon wish had stayed buried.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Oversight
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45082 Read Count: 114353
[Report This] Published: May 27 2014 Updated: July 10 2014
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: July 06 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Report 1: Preliminary Findings

Great story, Do you know when you'll post next chapter???



Author's Response:

Very soon.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: July 10 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Report 1: Preliminary Findings

For me too, this unexpected ending, I thought that Howard was going toi get killed or captured by his former employer. I hope that there'll be a sequel of that. Also looking for your debut omega universe!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much for reading. Glad I could surprise with the ending.