Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: May 16 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Great chapter again! Well, Jack become a totally toy, slave. The fact that he dissociated himself emotionally from what is happening is maybe a defense mechanicism. Penny will return but I don't bet on justice system. However, I bet on bad karma style justice like Cayce's Summer Job.
PS: you are a great writer as beginner!
Author's Response: I think his weariness is reaching the point that he's not himself any more, he hasn't got the energy or the mental faculty to fend her off or plan as he did when she first got a hold of him. It's now an endless sequence of one-sided experiences that he has to withstand. She does appear be trying to keep him weak, hungry and on edge because she's aware of how crafty he can be, but perhaps that's just the author speculating...!
Cayce's 'Homunculus' is my all time favourite GTS read, and it wasn't even because I found it erotic (feet and being inches tall is not my preference at all) - it was because the story was incredible, and twisted and toyed with my emotions so much I could Not. Stop. Reading. I will deffo have to make time to read Summer Job, I may have tried to read it before but not got into it as much, or something. 'Homunculus' especially convinced me that I should try and write a 'proper' story, something that gave the characters motivations and made the experiences that much more meaningful than just 'giant sexpot touches your dick'. I like to think GH-X2 is my paltry attempt at repurposing that kind of approach to meet my own interests in macrophilia.