Penname: smoki1020 [Contact] Real name: haroon
Member Since: August 15 2012
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Julia by Jacksmith Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 450]
Summary:

Five shrunken strangers become playthings in the twisted fantasies of a psychotic teenage girl and must work together if they ever hope to get out of her clutches alive.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134130 Read Count: 1102989
[Report This] Published: November 05 2011 Updated: July 20 2015
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: July 17 2015 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75: Have a Little Faith

coming from  a-month break, i just read the 3 last chaps, it's epic !!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: July 20 2015 Title: Chapter 76: Epilogue: Good Night

I agree with Carycomic it's great achivement to finished a 76 chapiters long story no matter fantastic a story is (and it's great one) over 2 years old. It demands will and passion! Bravo.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Pariah by little mikey Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

Nick Avery -- tall, handsome, and well-liked-- is paired with a short, unpopular know-it-all named Michelle for a chemistry project.  The experiment goes awry; Nick begins to shrink as Michelle grows taller and more beautiful.  But he soon learns that Michelle had actually planned this all along, and he now must come to terms with his new position at the bottom rung of the social ladder.  Only Michelle can help him now, but she is determined to make the most of her newfound power over her once-mighty lab partner.


Categories: Growing Woman, Humiliation, Slave, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206702 Read Count: 407807
[Report This] Published: May 14 2012 Updated: October 15 2013
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: September 05 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Lab Partner

Great story, but I can't catch Michelle personality: evil, gentle or just a psycho.



Author's Response:

That's pretty much what I intended, yes.

Well, originally in my head Michelle was just pure evil, but in later drafts things became a little more interesting/muddy.  I like it better that way, I think.

Summary:

The London Olympic Games 2012...with a size-changing twist.


Categories: Growing Woman
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11878 Read Count: 63848
[Report This] Published: August 14 2012 Updated: September 08 2012
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: August 15 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Ceremony

As sport fan, I love this story. I deeply hope you'll update it as soon as possible!

Summary:

After a shrinking epidemic affected the entire male population of the future, many feared for the safety of the now vulnerable males. The two genders were seperated for protection, with no interaction occuring between them for two years. Finally, one boarding school decided it was time for change.


Categories: Humiliation, Butt, Body Exploration, Giantess, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8584 Read Count: 53337
[Report This] Published: May 16 2013 Updated: December 29 2015
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: December 30 2015 Title: Chapter 1: First Day Stress

For a 1st story written, you rock from the start! Good to see Dan to face Lexi's attitude.Hoping to see some more background (what happen about relationship like husband-wife, brother-sister, etc...). please continue your work.

Summary:

The beginning of the After Shrink High series. A "What-if" scenario where Chijunda lost to the Director on top of the tower. Despite his best efforts, he runs out of time and all living things are shrunk to 1/100th their size.

The story focuses on one of the newly rebuilt, in a sense, cities, Atlanta, GA, and one of its many Ranger squads. Ranger Squad 5 will find itself thrown right into the middle of the war between the Society and the Resistance. Only to uncover a mystery that may bring to light truths they never meant to find...

Much like Shrink High itself, the story and characters are the bigger focus rather than sex. There will be sex scenes, however. Also, not played/gotten the cliffnotes for Shrink High will not make the story unreadable. I made sure to limit things that you would have to have played Shrink High to get as simple shout-outs/gags. The story assumes you have not played the game and brings you up to speed/explains everything.

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Crush, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: After Shrink High
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142018 Read Count: 221259
[Report This] Published: August 04 2013 Updated: January 30 2014
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: January 25 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Things Change

No way Sanders is not finished yet. I think he'll be back in part 2. Nice ending by the way.

GH-X2 by imagin8 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 345]
Summary:

Jack, a 'regular'-sized 17-year-old in a world now populated predominantly by humans twice that height, struggles to cope with life in a school and society built for people far larger than he will ever be.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Giantess, Adventure, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Muscle, New World Order, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: GH-X2 Universe & Spin-Offs
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 138078 Read Count: 783651
[Report This] Published: September 12 2013 Updated: March 23 2024
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: June 01 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Dissipation

I'm with gadget, no sympathy for this monster direct to jail ! great chapter: PS: make her pay imagin8 please! 

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 30 2018 Title: Chapter 37: Respiration

Ok ok Maybe I misjudged Alex. So Caitlin the monster has a weakness that she keep secret. But Unlike Nostory, I don't think Jack will blackmail Caitlin because he hasn't the guts for and that endanger Alex. 



Author's Response:

He has to weigh up the pros and cons of endangering himself and his friends via some kind of dedicated blackmail attempt VERSUS the risks of being captured / living a life of unrelenting unease and fear. It's not necessarily about guts, it's more that if the blackmail backfires, it won't just be him who could suffer, Penny and also, let's not forget, Delon (who is very vulnerable too) could be targeted.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 04 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Tense  and amazing Chapter! Like the last reviewer, I'm confused about Alex Did she trick or try to help Jack by taking a big gamble? I am always doubfful about her.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 02 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Conspiration or not, Better for Jack to Hannah than Caitlin or Amber! Glad to see another update so soon anyway!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 01 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Eruption

Another Great Chapter. It's normal Jack exploded that he kissed a (alpha) girl and he's happy and confused at same time. This parental teasing did not help. I hope to see Caitlin soon.



Author's Response:

He kissed a girl, and he liked it.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: January 30 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Finally Jack is connected with Penny good chapter!



Author's Response:

Cheers!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: January 28 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Glad to see this story updated, It's nice to Penny to get close with Jack. Delon support as well. But I'm not so sure about Alex. I hope to see few more chapters soon.  



Author's Response:

Your wish... granted! (34 will be the last update for a bit)

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: May 10 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Reintegration

Another good chapter. thanks for 3 quick chapter updates.

 

About Alex, I'm sorry for my messy post where I did forget words. What I was trying to say was that Alex was like "ok, I gonna help you to make Jack escape but after that I don't want nothing to do with you".

You said yourself: just because she found out that abusing/torture wasn't her thing doesn't mind she's "beta-friendly" now. but if she got a change of heart, 'I'm fine with it. 



Author's Response:

I think, at the risk of straight up telling you how she feels, it's essentially that she's had her preconceptions challenged, at least in Jack's case, so whilst she might be pretty much as indifferent to Betas as before, she's very aware of his suffering in particular. She's not going to go around being nice in public, especially as she has to maintain things with Caitlin, but privately she will look out for him in her own way, even it's a little gruff, like 'get going out of this classroom so I can help you' rather than 'take all the time you need'.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: May 09 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Great chapter and I almost believed Caitlin's comeback TomSpeedy. But I dont get why Alex agree to protect Jack!Didn't she say she wanted to do with that after helping Jack escape???!  



Author's Response:

All that was mentioned was that Alex should not be contacted, to avoid implicating her. It's obvious that she's already trying to help Jack, from the moment she realised how bad things were at the pool, to helping stage the rescue by ringing Caitlin, and presumably playing along with everything behind the scenes in an ongoing inside job.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: May 08 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

cute moment in cute chapter. Hope to see more soon ! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! Another chapter will be dropping very very soon.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: April 20 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Good chap! a part of me want to believe that Penny came to abandoned area to remember souvenirs and memories. But I can't shake off the feeling about Jack going to trapped... 

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: September 24 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

a another good chapiter.

Can't wait for next one bcz If Caitlin comeback to "finish things off" with Jack like Nostory said there're no courtroom drama saga probably. 



Author's Response:

You'll have to wait and see!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: September 22 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

poor Jack gets friendzoned direct but after he went through he can't think straight!

Great chapiters, but I don't get your decision to have "...tion" in each chapiter title. Can you keep this to the end.



Author's Response:

You'd be majorly overwhelmed with how many words end in -tion. Some of them are pretty pretentious, but I'm that kinda guy!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: June 01 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

By the wait, how does Jack see being inside in the teddybear?



Author's Response:

The bear is made of quite a chunky knit material, which you can sort of see through. Imagine putting a woolly jumper over your head - you can see through the little holes between the wool surprisingly clearly, without being seen.