Penname: smoki1020 [Contact] Real name: haroon
Member Since: August 15 2012
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The Freshman by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 506]
Summary:

An adventurous teen who just happens to be five inches tall has been stuck in homeschool all his life.  When he finally enters public high school and a new world of friends, bullies, and cliques, he quickly discovers challenges even bigger than he could've imagined.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Couples, Giant, Legwear, Odor, Unaware, Adventure, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 82 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 179462 Read Count: 1058315
[Report This] Published: September 01 2011 Updated: May 26 2019
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 18 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

you can write a sequel whenever you want to avoid the burning-out. I just suggested that bcz you're a talented writer and there're ideas for sequel (Noami's revenge per example). Homunculus has similairies to The Freshman n TO series too. well you better know your limits though!

PS: as non english and somewhat lazy reader, I need to help to understand two points on homunculus. Did Cayce mention Nicole's hair color (brunette or blonde like her mom)? And Was the judge really brided? 



Author's Response:

I actually just meant that because the story belongs to another writer, I wouldn't be right for me to do a sequel to it.

It has been a while since I read it. I don't think Cayce mentions Nicole's hair (I always imagined it blonde like Naomi's). It's been too long for me to remember the answer to the 2nd thing.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 18 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

I wonder if you know homunculus by Cayce (3rd most read). This contains your favourite subgenre (feet).The storyline is interesting. Maybe you can go for a sequel of that story!?



Author's Response:

I have indeed read it and love it like most probably do. I'm fairly certain I'd be burned at the stake for trying to write a sequel to it, though.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 17 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Tightly Wound

very good one lol Jimbob

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 17 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Guess peter must be aware some teachers can be dangerous for him as students are!!



Author's Response:

Peter is becoming aware that just about everything can be dangerous for him.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 13 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Extracurricular Activity

Can't wait to see his mom's reaction. "What!? you wanna play Tom Thumb?, ERICA you know that your brother is taking drug?"haha



Author's Response:

Well, given Peter's mother's level of paranoia, that may not even be a joke!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 09 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Second Practice

a cute chap! love in air!!!! 



Author's Response:

It is indeed in the air

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 05 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Bus Interrogation

Cute chap! Oh Peter you'll be so in deep trouble when Erica find out the truth!



Author's Response:

He may be even deeper trouble if he doesn't tell her, though!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 01 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Unsportsmanlike Assault

Fine chap! Amy is Sharon is Sharon's henchwoman but Kimmy seems more naive than bully gang-type. Good to see friendship grow btw Peter n Lisa!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! You're on the right track the roles of Amy and Kimmy.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: January 26 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Voilà. U have the young version of TO's Nancy: Sharon lol



Author's Response:

Interesting thought, though as Sharon appears more, it'll start to become clear that she's after something other than seduction like Nancy.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: August 25 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Cinematic Sightseeing

Mandy O Oh. Action comung up...



Author's Response:

Yes indeed

Julia by Jacksmith Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 450]
Summary:

Five shrunken strangers become playthings in the twisted fantasies of a psychotic teenage girl and must work together if they ever hope to get out of her clutches alive.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134130 Read Count: 1102993
[Report This] Published: November 05 2011 Updated: July 20 2015
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 11 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

Holy moly, Goodwin trapped 3 years at julia's ! I read Shrink files act not littled blackmail  (incest is no-go zone for me). I hope that next chapter explain the conspiracy plot!



Author's Response:

Shrink Act Files will be more helpful to have read than Blackmail anyway, so that'll be fine. There will be some answers to all this coming up soon.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: July 20 2015 Title: Chapter 76: Epilogue: Good Night

I agree with Carycomic it's great achivement to finished a 76 chapiters long story no matter fantastic a story is (and it's great one) over 2 years old. It demands will and passion! Bravo.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: July 17 2015 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75: Have a Little Faith

coming from  a-month break, i just read the 3 last chaps, it's epic !!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: June 05 2015 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72: Jack and Julia Went Up the Hill

good as unsual! good description,  Julia's buying it.



Author's Response:

Thanks! And they better hope she's buying it...

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: May 21 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

Great chapter. So Jack is a distraction to let others to do execute the rest of plan which is still unclear lol. But the goal is bring their normal height back globally.



Author's Response:

You're partially right; Jack actually has a goal here besides keeping Julia in the room. Their plan will be shown in the next chapters.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 28 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

Well, I don't know what their new plan will be i admit. But I know they expect Julia to use the PRMD ...  



Author's Response:

You're on the right track!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 03 2015 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65: Front Lines

"little pet' are save but still living dangerously... nice chap



Author's Response:

Thanks. Safety is only ever slight in this story.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 19 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

If you plan to bring back Family Reunion's characters in PMRD universe, it's probably an sort of presquel.    



Author's Response:

Family Reunion takes place before this story, so that would probably make sense.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 27 2015 Title: Chapter 64: Act IV: Warrior, Chapter 64: Out of Her Hands

I know this story i'm glad it's update but as non english reader, i want to get it right: are they climbing down vertically or they're sliding down?



Author's Response:

Climbing down vertically.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 15 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

if I get it right : Techilogic had already a shrinking formula so they hired Goodwin to make PMRD. After that, Goodwin discouvered Carly (truth which is not fully reveled) and they tried to kill him. Seeking revenge Goodwin decided to jailbreak PMRDs then sell them in black hoping a new bigger scandale. but he Ended up shrunk by julia. Am I right? 



Author's Response:

You're basically right, yes. Techilogic did not actually have a working formula, but they did know about what made Jack shrink, and they had Goodwin design the PMRD. They tried to kill Goodwin because he knows something about Carly but also about the people in Techilogic.

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