Penname: smoki1020 [Contact] Real name: haroon
Member Since: August 15 2012
Membership status: Member
Bio:

just a reader!


[Report This]
Reviews by smoki1020
The Freshman by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 506]
Summary:

An adventurous teen who just happens to be five inches tall has been stuck in homeschool all his life.  When he finally enters public high school and a new world of friends, bullies, and cliques, he quickly discovers challenges even bigger than he could've imagined.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Couples, Giant, Legwear, Odor, Unaware, Adventure, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 82 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 179462 Read Count: 1058316
[Report This] Published: September 01 2011 Updated: May 26 2019
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: November 20 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Sweating It

Ok as everyone made a suspect list, here's mine:

1  Mandy because she's unstable.

2  Kim from evil trio because she is lacking of knowlodgement from her leader sharon.

3  Ms Watson because of her suggested foot massage demand. she agreed also very quicky to keep this incident between Peter and her. A unprofessional move.

 



Author's Response:

Fair considerations. I won't spoil, though.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: November 14 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

cute chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: October 26 2015 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: Little Guardian

Well I thought Peter would have be more disturrbed psychologilly by the incident but it turned out that this  is rest of family who are. And Will his mom allow him to go to School after after! 



Author's Response:

Peter's been through enough rough encounters in his life that he can recover relatively quickly.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: September 20 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Double Dare

Ok ... even i am happy to see Peter rescued  I didn't get how. Stella lifted her foot to  see Peter trapped & mocked him. Peter called Jessica and Stella lowered her foot & touched ground. Then Jessica screamed and pushed Stella to save Peter??? 



Author's Response:

Yeah it sounds like you understood it.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: September 17 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: Desperation Reek

Things are not going well for me, Even stella won't keep Peter as prisoner for 1 whole week, she would keep him for the night! Ps: I find Suzanne very sloppy here for not supervise teenagers especially with here 5-inch loved son. About backlash I bet on Erica & her mom as Jessica too "weak"mentally & physically. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, it would be hard for Stella to get away with keeping him for a week. Suzanne may seem sloppy, but for years she's been letting her daughters' friends be around Peter and there haven't been major issues that necessitate her supervising them at all times.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: September 08 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: Sleepover Pals

I guess Stella dont believe in the proverb saying 'friends of my friends are my friends' hehe but I guess peter will be more friend with Stella's tongue :P



Author's Response:

Ha. That's definitely a possibility.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: September 04 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: Tongue Held

really cute chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: August 21 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Date Night

good chapter, but can someone explain in simple words what happened between Peter and the cashier when Peter pays for popcorn please?



Author's Response:

Peter had the money wrapped around his leg because his pockets are too small to carry it, so he had to pull it out of his pants to pay the cashier.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: August 25 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Cinematic Sightseeing

Mandy O Oh. Action comung up...



Author's Response:

Yes indeed

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: January 26 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Voilà. U have the young version of TO's Nancy: Sharon lol



Author's Response:

Interesting thought, though as Sharon appears more, it'll start to become clear that she's after something other than seduction like Nancy.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 01 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Unsportsmanlike Assault

Fine chap! Amy is Sharon is Sharon's henchwoman but Kimmy seems more naive than bully gang-type. Good to see friendship grow btw Peter n Lisa!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! You're on the right track the roles of Amy and Kimmy.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 05 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Bus Interrogation

Cute chap! Oh Peter you'll be so in deep trouble when Erica find out the truth!



Author's Response:

He may be even deeper trouble if he doesn't tell her, though!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 09 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Second Practice

a cute chap! love in air!!!! 



Author's Response:

It is indeed in the air

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 13 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Extracurricular Activity

Can't wait to see his mom's reaction. "What!? you wanna play Tom Thumb?, ERICA you know that your brother is taking drug?"haha



Author's Response:

Well, given Peter's mother's level of paranoia, that may not even be a joke!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 17 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Guess peter must be aware some teachers can be dangerous for him as students are!!



Author's Response:

Peter is becoming aware that just about everything can be dangerous for him.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 17 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Tightly Wound

very good one lol Jimbob

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 18 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

I wonder if you know homunculus by Cayce (3rd most read). This contains your favourite subgenre (feet).The storyline is interesting. Maybe you can go for a sequel of that story!?



Author's Response:

I have indeed read it and love it like most probably do. I'm fairly certain I'd be burned at the stake for trying to write a sequel to it, though.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 18 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

you can write a sequel whenever you want to avoid the burning-out. I just suggested that bcz you're a talented writer and there're ideas for sequel (Noami's revenge per example). Homunculus has similairies to The Freshman n TO series too. well you better know your limits though!

PS: as non english and somewhat lazy reader, I need to help to understand two points on homunculus. Did Cayce mention Nicole's hair color (brunette or blonde like her mom)? And Was the judge really brided? 



Author's Response:

I actually just meant that because the story belongs to another writer, I wouldn't be right for me to do a sequel to it.

It has been a while since I read it. I don't think Cayce mentions Nicole's hair (I always imagined it blonde like Naomi's). It's been too long for me to remember the answer to the 2nd thing.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 19 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Sorry I misuunderstood. well, I'm sure Cayce will not be mad at you if you write it. He said he'd plan making a sequel bu he never did it. You may ask him if you're interesting but he seems to have left gtsworld as his last review dated in 2010. Looking forward for your new stories.

 

PS: i doubt nicole is blonde bcz she has brown eyes, remember. I view as brunette. For the judge, I was talking about the one for the hearing for Ray's custody.  



Author's Response:

Still, it wouldn't be right, since it's his original content. Plus I have plenty of my own things I'm going to be posting soon.

That's fair, though a person can still have brown eyes and blonde hair, it's just uncommon. It's however you want to picture her.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: June 13 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Popped Question

Ok then so I guess it's A Little Blackmail 5 :p we're waiting for it a looong time!!!



Author's Response:

:)

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.