Penname: smoki1020 [Contact] Real name: haroon
Member Since: August 15 2012
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Summary:

Edit (2/24/17): I'm sorry to say that I don't think I'll be updating the story here any longer.  I'm already updating it on another GTS website (I'm not sure if I'm allowed to say which, but I'm sure most folks reading this probably know of that one also), and with so many chapters, corrections and changes are a pain in the butt.  It seems silly to bother with both, so feel free to check it out in the future on the other major GTS site.  Thanks for reading.

Synopsis: You know the drill.  Pandemic story; men are (largely) untouched but women grow to 9-14' and have increased sexual appetites.  Where I've tried to set the story apart is in building a deep relationship between the two primary characters, Alex Gray and Elise Pierce.  My goal is a nuanced approach to revealing the impacts of the changing society on that relationship and others as the world shifts radically from male to female dominance.  Lots of detailed worldbuilding and a pretty heavy dose of romance.  Slow growth through much of the first half(ish) of the story.  This is primarily a New World Order story in the Mini GTS realm.  There is (limited) BE, multiple sexual situations with characters of various ages (none are minors), and most encounters are gentle.  There are some violent/slave encounters toward the latter part of the story, but if you're reading for these, best look elsewhere, as they're not going to be the primary focus.  Expected length is around 90-100k words. 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Giantess, Breast Enlargement, Gentle, Growing Woman, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83648 Read Count: 242486
[Report This] Published: February 24 2015 Updated: February 22 2017
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: May 28 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - New Life

Alex had anger's reaction. it means drug effect is gone?



Author's Response:

I don't want to say too much about the drug or it's effects at this point, because that could easily become a plot device in the future (wink, wink), but I believe I did reveal a bit about how the drug affects Alex with respect to thoughts and desires in a previous chapter. 

If I'm not mistaken it was ch 20 when he realizes that the drug isn't particularly effective when he's commanded to think or feel a certain way.  It's not specified as to why this is, but it's safe to assume that the women of the Matriarchy cannot control his thoughts or desires with their drug.

Summary:

A shrunken teen, newly on house arrest, finds himself underfoot when his mother decides to instruct his younger sister on how to lovingly yet firmly handle him.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Oversight
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6049 Read Count: 57699
[Report This] Published: March 01 2015 Updated: March 09 2015
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 01 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

nice start but it looks like TO stories. Becky seems more gentle than Maggie (before Nancy abused Scott) Joy as mother seems 'normal' but let's see next. PS: is it a short story (under 10 chapters)? 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. It is similar to TO in that it deals with a mother and her son and daughter, but the relationships are very different. It will be under 10 chapters.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 01 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh I forgot to ask you if you can explain this dialogue line (specially in bold) by Joy in simple word :

I don’t want to see anything like what happened with your classmate.  That was easily preventable, if he’d been holding his sister upright instead of upside down.”

 

Thanks.

 



Author's Response:

She's saying how a boy Becky knows was holding his shrunken sister upside down, so like her head was pointed toward the floor, and it led to some kind of accident.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 05 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

okkkk.... eh it seems that her mom is perfectionnist or something like that. Becky is not fan foot safety thing ... yet



Author's Response:

Joy is just being very thorough. Becky's not totally on board with it yet, though.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 09 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So Becky took Mark as  personal stylist. cute story! 



Author's Response:

Thanks! And that's an accurate title for Mark.

Spring Breakers by Wholia Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

3 giant girls go to a tiny beach and resort during Spring Break to have fun. 


Categories: New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Sizes and Countries
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36273 Read Count: 121491
[Report This] Published: March 11 2015 Updated: June 05 2015
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 11 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

good chapter, can't wait for the next one! Are you planning to continue other stories?



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you liked it. And yes, I do plan to continue other stories. As soon as the writer's block goes away. Meanwhile, I hope you enjoy this one.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 19 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Dealing with locals (Part 2)

I bet the 3rd girl will be less clement if attack!hehe



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment. I hope you like the next chapter.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 24 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

My guess was right Chloe is a "badass" hehe. good chap continue!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. And yeah, she is, hehe.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 28 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Wet T-shirt contest (Part 1)

great chapter. can't wait next the one. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: April 02 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

good chapter!even if Bianca should have won the contest because she's more skilled but hey it's gts story ! Can't wait for the next chap!!!



Author's Response:

Oh, I agree. Bianca is more skilled and deserved the win. But wet T-shirt contests usually are for fun and to please the crowds, so it makes sense they picked Linda, I think. Still, I appreciate your comment and I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: April 08 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

good chapter with chloe on top of bitchness lol anyways there no need of report of tiny guard to expel 2 troublemakers from the hotel. If people that they took as stone complaint all together, they are gone. Can't for the next Linda vs Bianca!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. Glad you liked the chapter.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: April 15 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: The Date

Oh i hope thye dirty n gangster couple otherwise it wont look very good for Pablo n Freckle.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and for your comment. And we'll see how good or bad it looks for them in the next chapter.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: April 20 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: The Room

good chapter, poor Pablo lol Donna is lucky he didn't run away. Donna would kill Chloe ! Freckle, watch out american are crazy lol. PS: Will police invovle after chloe & J.J. actions on mangrove? It will weird if tourists who was victims don't complain. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. Unfortunately, I can't reveal what will happen next, but stay tuned to find out.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: April 28 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Legal Issues

When I read the title chapter, I thought chloe was gonna what she deserve but you let her go with just a warning pfffffff. unfair.Or chloe will faces complaints about her action on mangrove? 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. I'm sorry if it wasn't enough punishment for her, but being deported or the like would have make the story a bit hard to continue, wouldn't it? Anyway, I hope you still like the story.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: April 28 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Legal Issues

I knew deportation is excluded but I meant, you could've made her pay financially or make her apologies. Letting her actions on mangrove be unpunished is not credible sorry to say that. However, i like the story, just hope for more justice!



Author's Response:

The story itself is not credible. Like people have pointed out before, this whole thing about countries with such different sizes would never work in real life as I'm putting it in the story. It's supposed to be fun in a silly way. I'm sorry if you don't like that, but I'd have to fix much more things if I was aiming for credibility. That said, thanks for taking the time to comment and I'm glad you at least like the story.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: April 30 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Legal Issues

I did only voiced my view i didn't stop reading you I only expected a harder punishement for chloe. Looking forward for next (specialy Bianca vs Linda).



Author's Response:

I'm not complaining, but usually when people want something to happen and it doesn't, they start losing interest. Good to know it's not your case. Thanks again for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: May 06 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Secrets

Sorry for Donna, hope she'll find a good guy!



Author's Response:

Sorry. I actually feel bad about her too. But hey, she still has Freckle. :)

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: May 16 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: The Bonfire

I expected Bianca to counterattack but good chap.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. And don't worry, Bianca is definitely going to counterattack. ;)

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: June 05 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

good ending with everyone happy, can't wait your next story and update. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you liked the ending.

Summary:

A young witch and her adopted brother find themselves with a weekend alone, which gets far more interesting for both when the powerful girl decides she prefers her human sibling on the shorter side.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Size & Sorcery
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23650 Read Count: 136829
[Report This] Published: March 13 2015 Updated: May 15 2015
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 13 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Homecoming

Good start. Unlike Snack for Grace, Allen took "punishement" like he's used to, with fatality. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. Allen definitely doesn't have it as bad as Jay did.