Penname: smoki1020 [Contact] Real name: haroon
Member Since: August 15 2012
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Summary:

An honest employee of the Techilogic Corporation sets out to investigate the new widespread use of the shrink ray, only to uncover darker revelations about the business he’ll soon wish had stayed buried.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Oversight
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45082 Read Count: 114580
[Report This] Published: May 27 2014 Updated: July 10 2014
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: July 10 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Report 1: Preliminary Findings

For me too, this unexpected ending, I thought that Howard was going toi get killed or captured by his former employer. I hope that there'll be a sequel of that. Also looking for your debut omega universe!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much for reading. Glad I could surprise with the ending.

Summary:

After the success of Season One, the mysterious studio that runs the Shrinking Show commissions a new season with eight new contestants! One again, eight contestants arrive at the set of this secretive reality show, only learning upon arrival that they will be shrunk down bit by bit, taking part in various competitions along the way. When a contestant shrinks to 1/16th of their normal size they are eliminated--usually. Things are a bit more complicated this time around.

Season Two is longer, raunchier, and all-around better than Season One. As it is a new cast of contestants, it is its own story and you do not need to read Season One to understand what is going on, but it wouldn't hurt.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 250434 Read Count: 358179
[Report This] Published: July 06 2014 Updated: April 25 2015
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 24 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Giantess fantasy apart, I want Jerry to be the winner even if Betty keep at 4 inches! 



Author's Response:

Betty likes to be large and in charge, so I dowbt she would let herself willingly be shrunk for any reason. However, I do like SW as well as GTS, and it is entirely possible that he may win, and if he does, there are several shrunken women with which he could potentially have a good time!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 25 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

@ Benton, I forgot a word in my last post. so i meant to say that I want Jerry to be the winner even if Betty keep HIM at 4 inches.



Author's Response:

AH, I see.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: March 30 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Great chapter, Maria & Dale will be like Tom & Paul in Lamptower!  I deeply tht Paul will have revenge on Carla (like Bill got revenge on Sandra in the end of season 1) I started to hate her! 



Author's Response:

Revenge is always possible, but we are nearing the end now!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: April 03 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

GO Jerry, go jerry, im gender equality a woman won last season let a cool guy like jerry this!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Could happen!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: April 09 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh come on Benton, jerry should've won this plus Marie is sweet girl and deserved immunity, great scenes tough. just hope the next shows will al least a male (good hearted) winner! 

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: April 09 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I gotta say, Jerry not winning is a definite upset here.

 

See! I'm not alone !

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: April 21 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ANDY, congratz you're doomed for rest of your life !!!!!!!!!!!! storyline wise it could be interesting bcz that open several scenariis like what if andy is found by an unknown. it could be an scandal for betty.  

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: April 25 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 - Epilogue

I wonder what Sherri will do with Tv crew. Help them to escape I doubt, play with them it's possible. maybe  Sherri will convaince Betty to let them see their relatives.

Summary:

A young woman, prosecuted for a crime she didn’t commit, is placed in the hands of her titanic best friend to learn a few lessons she didn’t earn but most certainly will never forget.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44494 Read Count: 127588
[Report This] Published: July 12 2014 Updated: October 24 2014
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: October 20 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Disorientation

I was a bit sad to not see the double chapter Ending but it's still awesome chaps! My guess for alpha mystery woman is Alexandra's mom too. let's see!



Author's Response:

The last chapter will be here soon!

Summary:

Scott Stevens, shrunken and incarcerated in his own home, faces dire consequences for his crimes in the hands (and shoes) of his giant family and acquaintances.  All the while, his mother Judy is hard at work on her senatorial campaign, and as usual has some conniving tricks in store.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Couples , Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70647 Read Count: 348428
[Report This] Published: July 15 2014 Updated: February 15 2015
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 13 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: MVP

Indeed NOBODY can't from Judy from doing  her mission lol , Wonder what happens if scott start to call judy by firstname or surname!



Author's Response:

Judy would definitely have a problem with Scott addressing her like that. She already spends enough time insisting he call her Mommy.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 04 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Maggie's Actions

i admit that when i saw title of your latast chap "Maggie's actions", i thought Maggie was gonna confront Nancy and the things would've nasty! for Scott 1 of new goal could be protect to his siblings from Judy's sick mind. Maybe Ella could be a ally as grilfriend or not!



Author's Response:

Especially after his encounter with Maggie, Scott is realizing how damaged all Judy's children are, not just him, and that he can't just give up yet without trying to do something about it.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 05 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Maggie's Actions

good to knw that scott gonna do something abt current situation but he need from 'nice' people like Maggie (even if she's conflicted), Libby, Ella, Carolyn and Kyle!  



Author's Response:

You're right that he won't be able to do much on his own. Scott's got his work cut out for him making things right.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 07 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Ella's Words

good to see Ella backing Scott. I am wrong maybe but for me it's possible Judy or Maggie (the old one) would frame Scott abt accident event. just a theory. Can't wait the two final chapters!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Anything is possible here; Judy certainly wants to keep Scott in her house.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 08 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Ella's Words

I think judy lost already her status as mom n parent for his son. Can't wait to see the talk with scott!



Author's Response:

Scott might very well feel the same way.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 11 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: For the Good

Grea chap to show judy still determinated, confiandent (easy with techlogic lobby) and pervert. will Maggie or Kyle in final chap? 



Author's Response:

I'd say all of those adjectives fit Judy to an extent. Maggie and Kyle will be absent in the last chapter, though there will be one other person appearing in some fashion.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 12 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: MVP

I think Scott needs Allies rather tools. Funny some people find  hard to believe that Judy is all but a mother! See how cool and emotionaless Judy reacted about Scott's rape. And Maggie as caring sister is not planned (i think). but from now she will be a bit more 'normal' one.



Author's Response:

You're right that Scott needs allies now. Luckily for him, he's on his way to having a few after this story, though that still may not be enough to stop his mother. Your prediction about Maggie is a good one - she's not going to magically turn into a sweet angel, but her relationship with Scott is definitely changed after what Nancy did to him.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 16 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Time-In

Oh man I need to refresh my memory! What Maggie's blackmail are you talking about?



Author's Response:

"Blackmail" was probably not the right term, but he's talking about when she put him in her mouth in exchange for calling Ella.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 16 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: MVP

So basicly, Scott eats what they give him  ? 

 

PS: Is your new upcoming PRMD story a sequel to Shrink act files ?



Author's Response:

Basically yes, whatever they give him.

It is not a sequel to Shrink Act Files, though it takes place around the same time.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 15 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Time-In

GREAT END ! I agree with jimbob about Judy's hanging threat to let Nancy abuse of scott is very sick n twisted. i bet that his dad is framed by techlogic too Looking foward the part 7 n yours new stories!

Ps: I missed the part where judy ban scott from eating normal meats! Can you tell what scott eat then? Table scraps? Which part of TO this ban is implanted? 



Author's Response:

Thanks man; I've appreciated all your feedback on this story.

Judy never actually "banned" Scott from eating normal meals, and he sometimes does, like with the pancakes in an early chapter. Most of the time he doesn't get to eat at the table though or have the same food as them.