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Homunculus by Cayce Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 71]
Summary: A tiny teenager is forced to live with his normal-sized family. Ignored by his father, he finds himself at the mercy of his sadistic stepmother and her friends, who delight in teasing and torturing him. His only allies are his bratty stepsister and the gentle housekeeper/babysitter with whom he becomes enamored.
Categories: Violent, Instant Size Change, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Adventure, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139916 Read Count: 1329454
[Report This] Published: December 10 2006 Updated: October 21 2008
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: October 23 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey I thought you did leave gts communtiy! Are you back in writing? 



Author's Response: I just lurk occasionally. Haven't written any GTS stuff in years...

Summary:

A mother and daughter find themselves in a uniquely beneficial situation when their snobby and selfish extended family shrinks down to a few inches tall.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Family Reunion
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67655 Read Count: 269335
[Report This] Published: June 30 2011 Updated: August 14 2011
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 09 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Financial Woes

waiting TO 6 update. I started reading this great story. As non english reader, I struggled to read in details but got the most part n whole script. I feel about sad the loss of humanity of Anna n her daughter and the Ashley's fate n tony's. I agree sadly there no room for a sequel as the pursuit of goal is achieved : justice.  



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. I'd say Anna still has a shred of humanity somewhere, since she's mainly doing all this for her daughter, though she's definitely been corrupted by all of the nastiness.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 09 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Financial Woes

Yeah, Anna  she's so doing all this for her daughter that she lost all humanity and got selfish like Kevin family almost. her revenge n anger become her insane



Author's Response:

I do agree with you there that Anna's anger took over. I would guess not all readers would agree with her actions at the end of the story, but I hope what came before can explain why she did it.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 10 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Financial Woes

right, you have to be the only to be ok & happy with your stories. Plus your not a happy ending type writer lol. your realitic type n that is good thing! this is 1 of best i ever read stories bcz it's disturbing to see good person becoming a evil. However, I was wondering what  happened if at last moment Kevin kill his wife n himself to avoid giving the money n living pet life! hehe Looking for TO 6 Updates



Author's Response:

I promise I do sometimes give my characters happy endings; this one just had to end the way it did because of what came before. That's a pretty dark thought about Kevin! There will be more TO6 very soon.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 12 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Financial Woes

yeah, it's dark thought but its fit Kevin's character + he saw how mad n insane Anna was when he saw his daughter got paralysed. and he dont want pet life for him n probably for his family.So he had only 1 way where he won over Anna. Write happy ending if you wants nobody can't force u! 

Summary:

An adventurous teen who just happens to be five inches tall has been stuck in homeschool all his life.  When he finally enters public high school and a new world of friends, bullies, and cliques, he quickly discovers challenges even bigger than he could've imagined.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Couples, Giant, Legwear, Odor, Unaware, Adventure, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 82 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 179462 Read Count: 1054874
[Report This] Published: September 01 2011 Updated: May 26 2019
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: September 04 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: Tongue Held

really cute chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: December 08 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Even being at school since several week, Peter's still lacking assurance in himself to talk back fimly to Sharon & co. 



Author's Response:

Assurance is hard to come by at his size

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: September 08 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: Sleepover Pals

I guess Stella dont believe in the proverb saying 'friends of my friends are my friends' hehe but I guess peter will be more friend with Stella's tongue :P



Author's Response:

Ha. That's definitely a possibility.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: September 17 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: Desperation Reek

Things are not going well for me, Even stella won't keep Peter as prisoner for 1 whole week, she would keep him for the night! Ps: I find Suzanne very sloppy here for not supervise teenagers especially with here 5-inch loved son. About backlash I bet on Erica & her mom as Jessica too "weak"mentally & physically. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, it would be hard for Stella to get away with keeping him for a week. Suzanne may seem sloppy, but for years she's been letting her daughters' friends be around Peter and there haven't been major issues that necessitate her supervising them at all times.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: September 20 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Double Dare

Ok ... even i am happy to see Peter rescued  I didn't get how. Stella lifted her foot to  see Peter trapped & mocked him. Peter called Jessica and Stella lowered her foot & touched ground. Then Jessica screamed and pushed Stella to save Peter??? 



Author's Response:

Yeah it sounds like you understood it.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: October 26 2015 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: Little Guardian

Well I thought Peter would have be more disturrbed psychologilly by the incident but it turned out that this  is rest of family who are. And Will his mom allow him to go to School after after! 



Author's Response:

Peter's been through enough rough encounters in his life that he can recover relatively quickly.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: November 14 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

cute chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: November 20 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Sweating It

Ok as everyone made a suspect list, here's mine:

1  Mandy because she's unstable.

2  Kim from evil trio because she is lacking of knowlodgement from her leader sharon.

3  Ms Watson because of her suggested foot massage demand. she agreed also very quicky to keep this incident between Peter and her. A unprofessional move.

 



Author's Response:

Fair considerations. I won't spoil, though.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: May 24 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

I agree with Carycomic,  Amy stepped on Kimmy's foot. Now let's see what will happen with paranoid Suzanne.



Author's Response:

She won't react very positively, for sure.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: May 28 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Happy to see Suzanne opened her eyes on her son reality. Now it'd be better if Peter tell her about Sharon's truth. But it won't happen , right? lol



Author's Response:

Peter has too much to lose if Suzanne becomes nervous about Sharon too.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: November 17 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Finally you're back ! Good Chap! I guess Jessica is still a bit traumazied due Stella part. I hope I gonna see Scott meeting his dad in timeout 7.



Author's Response:

Yeah Jessica hasn't forgotten easily. Scott will indeed meet his dad in TO7.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: January 23 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Welcome back... as jacksmith the author I mean. Peter as fairy It would been funny if he's not in such bad situation. Good chapter!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: August 26 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Let's bet on Peter's chances for reaching the phone and call for help... I'm kidding we all know he will caught by Mandy before that haha



Author's Response:

Hey, who knows, surprises happen sometimes... ;)

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: September 29 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

that's more evil and twister than Mandy's phone trap: making him beg to take him back ! good chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

She always has something new

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: August 14 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

No doubt, jacksmith is gifted to write disburbed character ! Good chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!