Writer, computer programmer, pencil sketch artist and machinist, I've done a fair bit over the years, mostly vore or scifi related (Thought less of that with machining ;) I can't quite build a flying saucer on a CNC yet... still trying)
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I'm not much into shrinking or domination tales, but this was very well done. Powers there, but not over used. Characters consistent and well portrayed. The erotic scenes were nicely laid out (pardon the pun) and didn't feel rushed either. The tale over all had a good feel of pace to it and rounded out nicely.
At the size of shrinkage in this story I could get used to such shrinking tales. To me, much smaller seems pointless as you wouldn't feel much from the shrinkee. But I guess that's just my preferences.
Gimlet
