Your style of writing is great to read. It's a great blend of details and being straight forward. The idea you implemented was an interesting one. I was skeptical when I read Giant Men and Feet in the categories. I don't mind reading about giant men, but men's feet turn me off. However, the feet aspect wasn't overbearing or disgusting to read. Overall a very great short story.

If I can give a suggestion, you started an interesting universe. I would add in a couple of more short stories even if the surviving characters aren't used again. You can really dive into the moral, and maybe political, aspect of the law that was stated. Again just a suggestion.

Author's Response:

Hm. Not a bad idea. I may flesh that out, could be pretty fun.