Penname: Afroking [Contact] Real name: Jonny
Member Since: April 29 2012
Membership status: Member
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Been reading for a few months and ive read about almost every stoty LOL. God bless every writer. And I found out im in the top 10 Most Prolific Reviewers! cool beans


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The games are never over by Kickyou Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

About 8 years after being rescued, you return back to visit Sarah's family.  Everything is fine until an accident brings you face to face with your worst nightmare.

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Toilet, Violent, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29314 Read Count: 150006
[Report This] Published: August 12 2012 Updated: September 26 2012
Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 26 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

 

great addition keep it going. every addition builds to the characters except for Mike thats because we all know hes been through hell for yrs. That makes him a great character

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Date: August 30 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

 

1st attempt escape plans rarely work. u writers can be very sadistic lol

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Date: September 06 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

 

that sucks lol. don't worry it will be hard but this is well worth the wait. thanks for the headsup

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Date: September 26 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 

wht kind of kid picks up a spider to watch it battle, tht shit is scary lol. I would of found a pincher bug not a freaking spider. srry for the rant lol great to see the story back :)

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 26 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 

Is there more to come from the adventures of Mike? or is their more with Diana and Brenda? wht ever you do im sure it will be great!



Author's Response:

Sorry posted kind of late forgot to make it completed, and named Marissa Diana by accident

Shrinking Under Pressure by Sonicfan287 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Zack Austin, like many others never thrived under pressure, but when his entire world is turned upside down as a result of a crazy college party, he'll wish he hadn't pushed away those who may have been able to help ...

 

This story is part of a massive project I'm working on. I eagerly await feedback


Categories: Giantess, Gentle, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19729 Read Count: 54266
[Report This] Published: August 21 2012 Updated: July 02 2014
Reviewer: Afroking Signed
Date: August 28 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Making New Connections

 

Great story I love character development but is their any shrinking in the story lol? Not try to be rude or anything its just uncommon to be 3ch deep with out anything happening yet. I still like the way the stoy is going though. keep up the good work

Reviewer: Afroking Signed
Date: August 28 2012 Title: Chapter 1: No Direction

 

Damn I didnt read the story info. shit goes down at the party Da. well now im looking forward to the next ch4. srry about my first post I jumped the gun a bit.



Author's Response:

Lol its okay, and dont' worry, I'm too big of a fan of the shrinking aspect to not include it. This story will easily be among my deepest and well planned out ones, so that's why I may draw it a bit more than you're used to. It will be worth the wait though

Twin trouble by Kickyou Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

While waiting for your girlfriend to get ready, you shrink.  The only person that knows about you shrinking is her twin sister, but she doesn't like you very much.


Categories: Scat, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Incest, Insertion, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5589 Read Count: 58967
[Report This] Published: August 24 2012 Updated: August 30 2012
Reviewer: Afroking Signed
Date: August 28 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 

Another story! damn your head must be hudge coming up with all these great stories. I will wait till u get a few ch deep then I will read your story. I love how u get me to feel for your main charachter aka hero or victim.

Her Boyfriend's Pet by tinygirlvoyeur Rated: R starstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

She lives in his underwear drawer.


Categories: Butt, Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Giant, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1045 Read Count: 28314
[Report This] Published: August 27 2012 Updated: June 14 2019
Reviewer: Afroking Signed
Date: August 27 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I dont care much for male giants but im open to reading your story. I would like to learn more about wht the characters are like, more description about them. good luck on the story.

Friend or Foe by edexdexx Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

After being shrunken by a girl, Franky has to find a way to get his freedom. Will he be able to collaborate to get out of this mess or end up manipulated himself.


Categories: Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Friend or Foe
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27400 Read Count: 109698
[Report This] Published: August 29 2012 Updated: September 27 2012
Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Older Friend

 

I like this plan it could work. great work

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Date: September 27 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Humble Beginnings

 

wow thanks for the shout out :) Im just here to give authors encouragement to make great stories like this. Also I loved how the main title was about Liza I never thought it was about her lol but she was the real wild card her actions led to Franks sad Death :(. Im not mad at how he died, I like happy endings but they are harder to write. Drowning sucks but being digested is worse. I cant wait to read your next Story good luck! (FEED ME MORE!)

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Date: September 26 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Curtain Call

 

First time ever the small man in a story grows BALLS stupid but he spoke the Truth no he will pay. too bad



Author's Response:

Sometimes it's better to be a living sheep than a dead lion. I sure hope Franky saviors that moment though.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 25 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Desperate Struggle

 

I vote for Liza. Maddison is kind of a bitch lol

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Date: September 10 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Water Games

 

this girl has no remorse lol. 

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Date: September 25 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Morning Dilemma

I like this! I like this! Lets hope she smart enough to keep the shrink ray with her. All that time being small got to her head lol

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Game Time

 

ok im going to vegas till monday plz for me add like 4ch lol I LOVE THIS STORY! Its going to be a long weekend

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 29 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Meet and Greet

Well im fully involved in the story. I Like how u made it gentle and sadistic, I like both writing styles especially when combined. quick question can we find out wht happened to her other "friends"? love the story good luck



Author's Response:

All in good time, Franky will soon fully realize what a dangerous situation he's really in.

Adela by scrymgeour Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

At the beginning of the school year, a student named Martin finds himself shrunk and in the clutches of his old English teacher, Ms. Holly. He soon learns that she and her daughter, Adela, may have bigger plans in store for him--and the world.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Butt, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Holly's Library
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36380 Read Count: 297826
[Report This] Published: August 29 2012 Updated: December 02 2012
Reviewer: Afroking Signed
Date: November 06 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

 

srry about not having power. great ch by the way.



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

 

this shit is scary. Holly may not be sadistic but Adela sure is. I kind of want to know why Adela is so evil. martin is not a bad kid so why is he truly enslaved, I would like for martin to get some compassion from his new goddesses. I LOVE THE STORY KEEP IT UP!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review, and happy you like it so far. (I've been busy tonight, but I'll type out the next few chapters tomorrow and the day after. Got the outline of the action and dialogue worked out, and I just have to type it.)

I have answers for all those questions, but I can't promise they're the ones you're hoping for.

Re: 'scary' -- For some scenes in this story, I'm sort of living in the borderland between erotic fantasy fiction and pure horror. The vore scene from the last chapter has been repeated in dozens of different stories on this site, many times without a speck or hint of horror. In my view, a situation like that is as ripe for horror as it is for the usual 'Hot Steamy Vore' (I'm not really into vore as much as other subsets of the fantasy). I'm happy to hear that the 'scary' part of that is coming through.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

 

Fuck something else! plz excuse my language. I love these characters, u could write a sequel to this with Adela and Martin. srry this story was good and I feel like I could of got more from Adela and Martin's new interest in each other.



Author's Response:

Possibly I will. Or a prequel with Holly and her husband.

I have to be honest, the more I write the larger and more detailed this world seems to become. (It's fascinating, but also--at least for me--a little frustrating, because I really want to get started on other stories, too. And, at this point, I can really see this going on for twenty more chapters.)

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