Penname: Lady Prey [Contact] Real name: Jonathan Logan
Member Since: February 28 2006
Membership status: Member
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Summary:

The vore lesson continues for Brooke in the School of Civil Service.

 


Categories: New World Order, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1822 Read Count: 6033
[Report This] Published: July 17 2011 Updated: July 17 2011
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed
Date: November 25 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice job Doorknob, please continue.

Summary:

Three long-time friends get the experience of a lifetime when they discover that a shrinking pill has been invented.  Now, all three of them will get to experience their vore fantasies firsthand.  What adventures will they have together as they explore the depths of their friendship and love of vore?  Tune in for the next exciting episode!


Categories: Gentle, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5473 Read Count: 19333
[Report This] Published: December 02 2011 Updated: December 02 2011
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed
Date: December 02 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Meet the Players

Nice job and very good detail. I usually prefer unwilling bt this was a nice twist.

The Sisterhood by adeline Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

A woman recounts the first time she realized she was a predator.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Instant Size Change, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1410 Read Count: 7946
[Report This] Published: June 27 2013 Updated: June 27 2013
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed
Date: March 17 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi Adeline, happy to see you writing again. Just as one of my stories inspired you to your predatory ways, your story is inspiring me to write again.

Summary:

An exchange student in France gets shrunk by a girl that turns out to be his stalker and who will do anything in her power to make him love her back. Anything!


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6856 Read Count: 12710
[Report This] Published: March 15 2016 Updated: March 21 2016
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed
Date: March 18 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue and First Part - Chapter 1 and 2.

Holy grumpy green monsters, I'm seriously jealous...you speak 6 languages?

I tried to learn French and Polynesian and gave up on anything but English.

You should give some serious thought to writing beacause you definitely have an

apptitude for it; you certainly seem to have a way with English so by all means

continue this story and keep the action coming. Keeps  your readers interested.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

I loved that "Holy grumpy green monsters"; I might use it sometime if you're ok with that. I really speak 6 languages, I studied opera for several years so I had many language classes (German, French, and Italian), as a Mexican I speak both Spanish and English and I've lived in other countries where I improved my French and learnt Russian. Polynesian sounds hard but I'd bet it is a very interesting language. If you like litterature, I recommend learning French, it is very beautiful to read the great French writers in their native language like Beaudelaire, Dumas, Camus, and Victor Hugo. It's a fun hobby. I'm glad you liked how I write, I enjoyed writing for you as well. Also, I've been reading your stories as well, I really liked The Clone! and I appreciate that you encourage me to write. It means a lot to me.

I just posted Chapters 2 and 3 to my story if you feel like reading my again. I hope you like it.

The Coven by high5s4ever Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Clair is introduced to a new world, where beautiful witches are real, and they have secret powers that may come in Clair's favor. Follow Clair as she dives into the witching world, making friends and enemys along the way.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Couples, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Mouth Play, Insertion, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22976 Read Count: 15317
[Report This] Published: September 29 2018 Updated: November 01 2018
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed
Date: September 30 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Two Become One

Good job. Nice discriptive writing and nice to see someome explore different senarios.

Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed
Date: November 04 2018 Title: Chapter 4: The First Test

Again, nice descriptive writing. 

At least as far as I'm concerned, you've nailed the high points of this fantasy.

You might find this interesting; a while ago I did some research and discovered a study was done back in the sixties where they took a large number of 'normal' male/female couples and had them role-play the vore concept. One for one. it nearly blew their heads off and it was decided it was a universal phenomena but not awakened in most people.

So don't go thinking you're perculiar, you're just more aware than just about everyone.

By the way, thank you for your belated review of The Clone.

Summary:

A writer is surprised when his girlfriend reveals she's read his secret stories. Emily has read far too many of them for her own good, and takes his deepest fantasy into her own hands. 

 


Categories: Giantess, Couples, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7038 Read Count: 45780
[Report This] Published: November 30 2018 Updated: November 28 2019
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed
Date: December 02 2018 Title: Chapter 1: The Stories Are to Blame

Nice approach and I like your writing style.

You might not know this but with a little research I've discovered thet vore is actually universal.

A while back, a study in the UK proved that with the right stimulation (verbal) everyone is aroused by vore, more so than by any other means.

Apparently, it's unconscious in the majority of people and has to be triggered.

I've moved on to the next stage of research; what's behind it. A little more difficult because so far I havn't found any studies done on that aspect.