Penname: Lady Prey [Contact] Real name: Jonathan Logan
Member Since: February 28 2006
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Girls Night Out by adeline Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

In a session of girl talk, two women discuss there dirty deeds that they have done to the men in their lives.


Categories: Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Lesbians, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3917 Read Count: 15768
[Report This] Published: February 26 2006 Updated: February 26 2006
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 25 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story really tickles my vore fantasy and is a perfect set-up for a sequel or two. Adeline, you have a definite talent.

Summary:

A woman discusses her life and how she has swallowed men most of her life upon the realization of her powers.


Categories: Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Crush, Instant Size Change, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3534 Read Count: 24039
[Report This] Published: February 26 2006 Updated: February 26 2006
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed
Date: October 24 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi Adeline, I have to say this is one of my all time favorite vore stories and a classic in its own right. Do you still write?    ladyprey

The Bot by Cookie man Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: ????
Categories: Vore, Humiliation, Body Exploration
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5340 Read Count: 4384
[Report This] Published: December 10 2006 Updated: December 10 2006
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This has to be in the top 3 of my favorite vore stories and I thank you for it. This story inspired "The Clone" and if you read it I'd like to know what you thought.

A Most Unusual Date by DT_ Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary: ???
Categories: Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4463 Read Count: 13041
[Report This] Published: December 10 2006 Updated: December 10 2006
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed
Date: December 11 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've read this story 2 0r 3 times now and really enjoy it . Well written and good pacing, CXan I find your work anywhere else?

Naomi by Scrumptious Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

The following story contains themes that deal with vore, humiliation and other extreme content. It is not suitable for minors.


Categories: Gentle, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3566 Read Count: 8605
[Report This] Published: February 05 2007 Updated: February 05 2007
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can't believe this story got no reviews. This is a worthy story; I thought so the first time I read it a while back, and I still think so. Bravo and please point me to more of your vore writings.  ladyprey

Summary: A young man plagued with self-doubts has a girlfriend he thinks is too good for him. She purchases a magic wand...
Categories: Mouth Play, Transformation, Object, Giantess, Body Exploration, Insertion, Vore, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5706 Read Count: 21272
[Report This] Published: March 07 2007 Updated: March 07 2007
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good story and nicely written. Definitely could be expanded.   ladyprey

Summary:

the end of the world, at the hands of beautiful giantesses. Need I say more?


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Insertion, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58558 Read Count: 99547
[Report This] Published: July 05 2007 Updated: September 05 2009
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What can I say that hasn't been said; great story and of course what makes it all worth while, great vore descriptions. Let's face it, we love the vore.

Author's Response: I'm real glad you enjoy this one, ladyprey! Vore on a planetary scale is bliss, isn't it? :-)

Summary: The log of a sailor is found by two prisoners.
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Crush, Entrapment, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8584 Read Count: 22856
[Report This] Published: September 29 2007 Updated: October 12 2007
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Hunting

Nice job girlfood. I like where this is going. Certainly hope you continue.   ladyprey



Author's Response: thank you ladyprey! i was very excited to recieve a review from you as i have enjoyed your stories quite a bit. yes i will be working on additions for this narrative although i am not sure what will eventually become of our hero:)

Summary: A tiny man is a meal for a woman. Will it stay that way?
Categories: Instant Size Change, Adventure, Mouth Play, New World Order, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16127 Read Count: 36618
[Report This] Published: January 03 2008 Updated: August 03 2008
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 23 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Lunch with Kimberly

I'm enjoying this story and it's an imagiative premise. A story with a belly-full of potential I'd say.   ladyprey

Author's Response: How does one know if one has written a good story? When one gets a review from Lady Prey! Thanks man, I hope you enjoy the chapters to come.

My first snack by girlfood Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: A woman describes her first experience with vore and swallowing a man.
Categories: Vore, Giantess, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4024 Read Count: 16204
[Report This] Published: March 09 2008 Updated: March 09 2008
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good story, Girlfood. There's something really appealing in the idea of the predator being a trusted friend of the unsuspecting prey until the moment of thruth.

Author's Response: I agree completely. As long as it's not a family member I am into the unsuspecting person being eaten by a trusted friend.

Summary: A man, finding himself in a world suddenly too big for him, calls on a friend. Eventually, she comes to appreciate his predicament.

Author's note: This is a long, developing story. However, I am writing each chapter in order to be a worthwhile (hopefully, you be the judge) episode, each in its own right. So please, read and comment as the story (slowly) develops.


Categories: Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20028 Read Count: 188445
[Report This] Published: April 06 2008 Updated: March 19 2014
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed
Date: June 10 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help

I like where this is going. Very nice job of writing.

Summary: A man speaks with magical woman who just might make his dreams a reality.
Categories: Instant Size Change, Giantess, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4441 Read Count: 7745
[Report This] Published: April 18 2008 Updated: April 18 2008
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 19 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nicely done. Always enjoy your stories Girlfood.

Author's Response: Thanks bro! Back at you.

Summary: A man is in for the run of his life when his two friends become giantesses and develop a taste for humans.
Categories: Giantess, Entrapment, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14000 Read Count: 77534
[Report This] Published: June 21 2008 Updated: July 28 2008
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed starstarstar
Date: June 22 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start  Girlfood. I have high hopes for this story having read your earlier stories on this site. BTW, what happened to your collaberation on 'The Realm of Malanie'?   ladyprey

Author's Response:

Thanks Lady Prey. That means a lot. I have a good idea of where I want to take this story, now it just remains to put it down.

As to Realm of Melanie; Ralf and I are still collaborating on it. My last chapters were both 20 and 21 (small trouble, i think). He has been good enough to allow me some time before my next submission which is good because i hadn't a clue as to what to write until recently. I really have to get cracking. Thanks for the review. I hope to post again soon so if you have suggestions on this or Melanie then dont be shy.

Repo Man by Star Sage Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

A man broke up with a sweetheart recenetly, but left in her possession, a special ring. Not wanting to tell her just how special it was, he decides to steal it back, shrinking down and sneaking into her home. Things only go downhill from there.

A trade with a user on another site. Enjoy.


Categories: Instant Size Change, Body Exploration, Couples , Mouth Play, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2259 Read Count: 6787
[Report This] Published: August 26 2008 Updated: August 26 2008
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 28 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it. Kind of a different twist to a subject that desperately needs some different twists.

Author's Response: Would have liked a higher score, but what the hey, I'll take what I can get in the venue of responses to my work. And thanks. I tried to include a theme or two that's not as common, including a little in a kiss, which, while it happens, is still quite rare.

Summary: **Chapter 3 completely re-written, July 19** A young woman becomes an unwitting (if not unwilling) hero when it comes to a certain young man who is more boy than man it seems. Stuck together with but a wild mustang stallion for company, the two must work together to find her family before winter rolls onto the range.
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9484 Read Count: 54347
[Report This] Published: September 20 2008 Updated: September 03 2009
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed
Date: October 10 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting. If you are writing this tongue-in-cheek then I have to give you credit for a good job. I hope you do continue and I'll reserve judgement on a rating till I see more!

Author's Response:

ya, i do prefer to write tongue-in-cheek, at least when it comes to their dialogue.  when it's the narrative, i use more proper english. ;D after all, that's what my degree says i'm supposed to do! lol  thank you for your review. i have a good bit of story planned out but i'm not sure how long it's going to take me to get to some of the more juicier scenes that are flitting around in my head. lol.  i will perservere, though, and keep writing if not for the reviews then simply for the sake of writing.

 

~ARWAD

The Huntress by adeline Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Jennifer Demott was introduced in my first story "A Wish COme True." She has discovered that swallowing a man whole greatly enhances her sexual arousal and orgasms and has continued to shrink men to take home for her sexual gratification. Complications ensue when her missing boyfriend Mark's sister tracks her down demanding an answer as to what happened to her brother.


Categories: Crush, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7067 Read Count: 11131
[Report This] Published: November 02 2008 Updated: November 02 2008
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: November 03 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Huntress

Where have you been Adeline? I've missed your stories and thoroughly enjoyed reading this one again. ladyprey

Summary:

After disappearing for months, a man finds himself back in his home city but being only an inch and a half tall. He finds refuge at his friend Jennifer's place. She takes him in but soon their friendship starts developing along a totally unexpected road.


Categories: Humiliation, Body Exploration, Crush, Gentle, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21912 Read Count: 91871
[Report This] Published: December 26 2008 Updated: February 05 2009
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed
Date: December 27 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Giantess Jen and I

Nice descriptive writing and a very real take on the emotional POV under the circumstances. Thank you.

Summary: A man meets the girl of his dreams. Even better, she takes an interest in him and wants to have him for dinner.
Categories: Instant Size Change, Vore, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6319 Read Count: 12636
[Report This] Published: January 10 2009 Updated: January 10 2009
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 13 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nicely done. I like the way you built up to the fateful day, all-consuming for Jon.

Author's Response: thank you Lady Prey. I was very happy to read your review.

Summary:

A story about a womans inner feelings.


Categories: Scat, Entrapment, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15750 Read Count: 40492
[Report This] Published: August 02 2009 Updated: August 02 2009
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed
Date: August 20 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey there,  very erotic writing but yes, a little repetative.

Personally I would have liked a little more teasing in the vore passages whwere the helpless victims have a chance to anticipate their terrible trip and their eventual destination and the horror of being swallowed alive.

I've devoted a whole chapter to the victims terror of looking into her throat and realizing its sole purpose

and the erotic emotions of both victim and predator

as the action takes place as if in slow motion. Just a suggestion.

Anyway, I really enjoyed your story and hope you continue to write, It's refreshing to get the female angle on this.  ladyprey



Author's Response:

Thank you ladyprey ı wrıte wıth my emotions and that was how ı felt durıng that period ı am so glad you enjoyed my story dıd you masturbate whılst readıng it ıf so then ı was successfull x.

Amanda.  

Summary:

A depressed young man seeks psychological treatment, but ends up getting more than he bargained for when he shrinks in the office of Dr. Sandra Adams, who has a very unusual appetite.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8117 Read Count: 33261
[Report This] Published: June 21 2011 Updated: June 23 2011
Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed
Date: December 02 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Consultation

That's what I like; a vore story with a little conscience and a fresh perspective on what amounts to a really weird fantasy.

Did you know that everyone has a primal leaning towards vore but it just hasn't been

triggered in very many of us. You can prove it but I don't recommend trying.

Very well done on the story.