Reviewer: Trayx Signed
Date: October 15 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
..........Wow....That was....wow.... This story was awesome. Bravo dude. Bravo! The ending was so sad. It really got to me.
But I just got to ask just to make sure. Was the goddess somehow his daugther?
Anyway, top notch, awesome job. I usually like to read smut gts stories, but I'm really glad this caught my attention.This story is definatly a fav.
BTW I didn't see any errors. ^_^
YA-HA!!!
Author's Response: Finally someone responds...The story was in my humble opinion pretty good, unfortunatly the people of the website prefer perverted, fetish-related stories. About the ending, it was implied that she was his daughter...perhaps I could write a backstory on if, and how, that happened but like I said it probably wont be read much :(